Seek Not My Heart by Kit McCallum

#10 Seek Not My Heart

This poem is simply a mournful cry to the heavens, in search of the remnants of a broken heart.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Sad Love Poems

Seek Not My Heart

by Kit McCallum

Oh gentle winds 'neath moonlit skies,
Do not you hear my heartfelt cries?

Below the branches, here about,
Do not you sense my fear and doubt?
Side glistening rivers, sparkling streams,
Do not you hear my woeful screams?

Upon the meadows, touched with dew,
Do not you see my hearts a'skew?
Beneath the thousand twinkling stars,
Do not you feel my jagged scars?

Seek not my mournful heart kind breeze,
For you'll not find it 'mongst these trees.

It's scattered 'cross the moonlit skies,
Accompanied by heartfelt sighs.
It's drifting o're the gentle rain,
A symbol of my silent pain.

It's buried 'neath the meadow fair,
Conjoined with all the sorrow there.
It's lost among the stars this night,
Too far to ease my quiet fright.

No gentle winds, seek not my heart,
For simply ... it has torn apart.

647 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Mauricio

I really like the flow this piece follows, its perfectly structured and very sincere. Nice work.
Ruth

A wonderful poem. I love it.
Aisha

This peom is superb! It bears the emotions of the poet and you are able to empathize - identify with her. The rhyme is also fantastique
Jordon

Wow. This poem really touched me. I just got through a really bad break up, and this poem tells exacally how I feel. again Wow.
adele

the poem really touched my heart, because i recently felt that way the past year but slowly getting over the pain
Jasmine

I loved that poem because my heart has been broken
sarah

good poem
Mira

This poem really touched me the words was put together perfect. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank You
Michelle

I really loved the poem. It really expressed the emotion of a broken heart in a way that you don't normally hear. I definately can relate.
Caroline

simply amazing
Tabytha

You know i really like this poem because me and the guy i lost my virginity to just broke up and we were together for 6 months that might not be that long but i miss and love him so much and if someone knows how u feel it would be me! love always Tabytha
Kari

Oh my god, you are a great writer, and this poem has really touched me. I've been hurt alot and it seems as if you were writing about my life. Thanks.
avi

words of a true broken soul! excellent!
zainab

u get my vote that poem realy tched me x
adarayan

i wrote poems too and i have felt immensely the pain in this poem.
lacey

This is exactly how I feel having just been dumped by a guy I was so in love with. Heart is shattered in a million pieces and will from this day forward be.
Jennifer

this poem speaks to me because it is basically about the way i feel about life. I LOVE THIS POEM!
Sharon

Such a beautiful and touching poem! I really love your way with words. Thank you for posting it, and sharing. Sharon
christine

the poem was beautiful i loved it, it really seems as you put your whole heart in it you write beautiful poetry!
kayla

This is such a touching poem. It had me feeling like i was in the authors position the whole way through. It seems as if it wre written by a famous poet.
Kevin

man even though i haven't had a broken heart in a long time, this poem gives me the icey feeling in my chest from those days :( this is truelly a poem
Joanne

Oh, this is awesome. Beautiful and flowing.
Darveyea

this poem was really real it was verying touch it reminded me of things going on right now in my life just keep it up writing these good poem sbecause they are good
Heather

it was good
kara

this a good poem it has sadness that comes from thee heart its good poem
Jason

beautiful,heart touching
marci

beautiful poem flowing with imagery and passion. Really enjoyed this rea and the little bit ifferent style of the wording. Thanks for a tuly pleasuable read
cherry

it really brought emotions with the land its heartfelt and understandable the chose of words were a spark of interest and it just brought out the beauty of the land along with the sadness of a welted heart
Darrien

I think this was beautifully written. The language and metaphors were interesting. It actually hit home as I know that pain of a broken heart and you did an excellent job of capturing that. The fragments of a heart, mortally wounded by love, now lost amids the earth, winds and heavens. Great stuff.
Rhianon

this poem speaks to me because i am definantly one who knows alot about silent pain i hope someone can hear your silent pain everyone deserves something in life. i know that if i cant have something i want someone too and that someone should be you.
karla

i love this poem and it really touch my heart. i feel this way inside as my relationship crumble beneath my feet. i give you a 10 for being my inside twin. karla
Nikki

i can really relate to this. i thought it was very good.
Renee

IT TOUCHED ME INDEED. I AM A POET TOO AND I KNOW EXACTLY WHAT TO LOOK FOR IN WORKS SUCH AS THESE. I LOVE IT AND I WILL PASS IT ON TO MY FRIENDS. I LIKE THE WAY THE EMOTIONS WERE COMPAIRED WITH NATURE.
sarah

i vote for this poem because it really touched me and i can relate to it.
Ashlyn

This poem really touched me cause i am in 5th grade and one of my freinds got mad at me and i dont know why and she is doing all these bad things to me i am just trying to stay calm and not take revenge. The poem describes how i would talk to her and how i feel inside. i even sent her an email with the poem on it to tell her how i feel. And i hope that we can be freinds agin.
Glen

This is a wonderful poem. I actually wrote music to it that I'm using for a music theory project in my school. Again, touching stuff (as if you haven't heard that before).
shaneequa

this poem almost made me cry it was one of da best poems i ever read
lindsay

this was a very good poem it mind me cry and i showed my mom and she cryed to by lindsay shields
Melissa

This is a sad yet beautiful poem & tell all that my heart feels and things I have gone through. Thanks
Sabrina

this poem made me feel like i was sharing the exact moment as the writer, in other words, i felt like i was actually there.
Eileene

This says it so well
Kumori

This is so lovely. this is how i feel right now. [. simply awesome poem
sherry

this poems is so sad it made me cry i loved it!
latia

this poem was really really touching i felt the words move though me
Tawnya

You sound so heartfelt and real. Not all poets these days can sound a great as you do.
Jayleigh

i loved this poem
angel

awwww.
june star

i realy liked this one because it reminds me of me, keep up the good work. i have injoyed it.
Pablo

I want to give this poem 8 out of 10. Mr. McCallum has brought out the pain in beautiful style.
KIMBERLY

i like it
sherry

this poems is so kool
the random

this almost made me cry. i've felt the same way before.
sierra

this poem is amazing. one of the best i have ever read. It really touches the heart.
Bossy

hey i love this poems
aubree

i like this poem alot
Tabitha

Sometimes it is hard to find the words, this poem has.
Jennifer

I read this poem and it touched my own broken heart.
vera lyn

for me, its a very inspirational poem.
Desiree

that was a really nice poem, i could feel and understand every word you wrote. i can tell it came from the heart. i really like writing poems to and my thing is i write whats deep in my heart and what i feel so i can relate to your poem.
hannah

I LOVE this poem so much.
paula

this poem was so sad . it was purely genius though i loved it ~!~ ;)
cortney

i realy liked this
shawnee

WOW. kit I am a writer of poems 2. but all I can say is wow that is a realy deep touching poem I dont know wat to say that poem has just grabbed my heart and made it melt this poem is brilliant and you could go far with your poetry. keep up the good work. remember no one is allowed to tell you how or wat u should wright your poems about they are your own unique feelings and thoughts so just keep doing wat your doing and u'll go far. xxx :)
amber

its very good and touched me!and 1 off the best poems ive read
S

Excellent One, a true classic by itself.
nicole

hey this poem is real good. it kinda relates to how i feel have the time. wish you luck.
Dio Marie

. so sure it came from the heart, a heart that can feel, a heart that can love and can be hurt.
christen

this poem expresses how you feel when you know you're heart isn't whole and you seek to express it to the one you lost.
Yalonda

Great Poem
Alexis

I lvoe this poem, gosh it's like exactly how my love life is. I really like the last line, it's so bold and amazing and I love it :)
nura

i loved it
Kimiko

it seemed like it was written for me.
jess

this poem is great! 10 out of 10. im only 15 and it says exaclty what i feel over my boyfriend Ben.
Ronnie

I really like this poem. It was very good.
becky

it really touches the heart
beverly

I lost my 3 year old daughter to a bad accident this is how i feel at times. thanks for writting this
Destiny

One word B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!
lil miss vixen

this is a very sad poem. and it is so totally true. i can feel it . thank you
rachael

i think that this poem has a great meaning and that the author has a wonderful talent and should persue more poems and i loved this poem it almost put tears to my eyes
Marie

the poem is really good and not so positive but so what? you impress me
sheila

this poem express just how I feel at the moment . someone I care very deeply for is tearing my heart to shredds . it is a heartfelt poem
Rosemary

Oh. My. God. This poem is amazing. I just had someone I love break my heart so I could really connect to this poem. It's really moving and I love the words that you use. Please write more poems like this!
Steve

i couldn't have written it out better, since the beginning of this season of mourning. i've tried to capture my feelings and thought s through verse, i've always been so inclined , but i havn't been able to come close to as pure and true this poem is. God is good , and i'm glad he lead me here to read this piece of somebodie's heart.
stephanie

a great poem it makes me cry cause it goes with my situation right now u should be proud right now 4 making this poem its really great u should make a nother poem about when your boy friend leaves u 4 a nother girl after he tells u that he'll never let u go please write it Think!
raluca

it is just . beautifull
randy

really appreciated your poem,because it expresses how I trully feel at this point in my life after a love of over 10years due to sudden death an my heart torn apart there's nothing left to give to any other woman keep up the saddness.
KATE

I HAVE LIVED AND LOVED I HAVE ALSO LOST. IV WRITTEN HUNDREDS OF 'BROKEN HEART'POEMS AND YOURS TOUCHED ME. ISNT IT AMAZING HOW PEOPLE COME INTO OUR LIVES BUT WHEN THEY LEAVE THEY TAKE OUR SOULS. ITS GOOD TO SEE YOU STILL HAVE YOURS. IT SHOWS N YOUR WORK
caroline

i really like this poem. sitting her in computer class and my teacher even said she liked it. well this poem is super good and i guess thats all i have to say.
mercy

Top top marks!You have just put in words how I feel about the loss of my mother. Thank you
Katy

This poem dug into my soul. It was very touching and very beautiful. It reminded me of someone that I am truely in love with that had to go away. It ripped my heart out. I do not believe that I will ever love anyone again. It is hard to express that to anyone and make them understand. That poem is a great way to help someone understand exactly how you feel. Thank you. It was wonderful!
adrian

i have just gone through a very emotional divorce. this poem has summed up my feelings, exactly!
SeXii

WOW. this poem was so touching :( well done
Rebecca

Thank you. Your words were the most beutiful things i heard myself reading. They touched me deeply, whoever you are, you are truly beutiful, with heart and soul. And whoever had hurt you, are so blind to not see who you are and what you stand for, you are truly amazing. Thank you for opening your world to me.
nikkie

I know I can write a sad poem because I am presently torn-apart and feelings of loneliness is overflowing out of my heart but wow! this poem is exactly what and where I am right now. It touches me so much it's content is so deep. I agree with them this poem is extraordinary so perfectly done by its master. I know there is soul in this poem that touches our heart. Great!
Dana

This poem is so raw and great I give it highest praise!
Diego

This poem really touched me i could so relate to it it really made me picture something anyways great poem
vanessa

love it! ur awsome! keep writing
Shartia

i love this poem!
Gregory

I loved this poem. It really reaches into the soul. It flows so nicely and is worded perfectly. It was amazing.
Tina

this is deep and i love it :] keep up the good work! this poem touched me!
Danielle

i loved your poem " Seek Not My Heart" it is really deep wirte some mor like this.
johanna

This poem expressed how i am feeling right now. I reallllly liked it!
DENA

wow, your poem really got me to cry and think about love and relationships, and i am 12.
kaneshia

i love your poem i really do.
Natasha

i think this poem is wicked awesome and it makes me feel like im not the only one that has a broken heart and feels like they cant fix it. it makes me feel like i still have a purpose in life
mark

a very good lament/hope you have more to come
tenia

very nice and descriptive.
kerri

seek not my heart has stirred up some unforgotton memories. our hearts do not break alone. you told my story greatly
Ibbz

this poem touched me in ways no others has. i am in middle skool and i write poems tat relate to sad things but my poems are no where near as good as this and someday i hope they will be.
nicole

that was just a lovely poem you must have been crushed
joan

this is a great poem. it touch my heart in so many ways. pls do a poem that the theme is like this. im tired of falling out of love.
Angela

Beautifully written. The words flowed gently, gracefully in sync, appealing to emotions. Thank you!
Shastie

This poem reflects me and the way I feel it saying that becuase of this love I feel this way
ashley

wow i really love this poem, if this happend to you. i really no how you feel.
Michelle

its beautifully written and true at the same time.
Liz

WOW! That was an awesome choice of language, it really shows what people are capable of. You are very talented.
Amandsa

very beautiful poem. very touching.
Sarah

Your poem touched my heart and brought my nieve mind back to reality, I will never find the pieces of my heart for they are scattered in the wind.
Krystal

Wow! This was like the most aweful poem ever written in histoey! . I LOVED IT!
Moses

Ths poem realy helped me 2 undrstand ths confusion i felt inside wen i ws heart,wen my heart ws cryin out,it made me cry yes. cuse 4 once sum1 knws hw i fil,i wsnt crazy,tanks
Jen

You touched my heart with your poem and have described what is like to have a broken heart I know cause I have one now. Your words has brought comfort to my heart cause now I know I am not alone. Thank you so much.
Heather

This poem touched me in so many ways i was a person who has been torn apart by love i have alot of poems about love and lost love ones but you should keep on writting poems i'll be waiting on them so keep it up. Sincerly Heather. H.
TiA

Very Butiful. So lovely that it breaks ma heart wen i read it. LOVELY!
jordan

thats was such a beautiful poem!I've been writing poems since i was 8 and im now 12. I've written many poems,none of them on here though,but yet this poem sounds just like one of mine. but anyways,i lost one of my relatives and this poem just brought him back to life!
Tia

very moving, i can feel the pain in this poem. so sad and yet ture pain lie's.
Barbara

This poem spoke volumes to me. It said the words I so wanted to say. Awesome
Abhijeet

this poem really moved my heart. i am going thru this phase and i have now began to like reading sad love poems. she still loves me but says she doesn't. my heart is like a crystal, kept alone to be broken by angels
janet

this is beautiful i,m at this place right now.
Felicia

This poem encompasses all that I feel. I knew when I read it that the author must have experienced this first hand, so as to put into words the longing, the hurt, the pain, one feels when one's heart is shattered and broken, and no longer believes in the fairytales about love and happily ever after. Excellent job.
Amy

Amy I loved your poem it made me cry. The reason is because i know how you feel. nicely done!
veronica

THIS POEM IS VERY VERY NICE! I LOVED IT SO MUCH.
LULU

this poem is really touched me. i really like this poem.
sherry

this a wonderful poem,filled with true meaning,if you have ever had a broken heart,you will truly be able to feel the pain,i have and i did,i love it!
chris

wow. just amazing. i hope one day i become as amazing as you.
Samantha

I LOVED IT SOO MUCH! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! :)
Tim

I loved this poem. It described what I'm going through right now. My girlfriend and I just recently broke up and upon reading this poem, it is exactly how I feel. I give this poem a 10 out of 10
Paige

9/10
Michelle

this poem really speaks to me its like my hole love life in one little poem i loved this poem so much.
Carmelo

I love the classic flow of the poem and the nature metaphors.
isaac

this poem really touched me it reminds me of my heart being torn out cuz of love.
heart felt

this poem is so beutiful it is my feelings deep down inside my heart felt love tourmented by my soul im not depressed yet my sympathy in this poem has touch my mind and soul it has made me forget my weaknesses so thankyou from the bottom of my light filled heart as cutting myself has no more pain i just turn to this poem and i weep sinful tears out of my burnt eyes all night long i read this poem again and again it is so meaningfull to me im am not alone do not feel sympathy as what i did with a stupid yobosman at mg made me realise that love is all around you just have to look harder and you will feel
angela

i think that the poem was true and you can tell wat they were thinkin
Micha

This poem is realy heartbreaking,but it feels asif the poem describes my true feelings as it is. I'm glad that I'm not the only person in the world with feelings like this.
Rae-Leen

I just loved this poem it's a 10/10. It really touched me because this is how I feel right now because I just recently got out of an engagement to this guy i was supose to marry and i would just like to say thank you very much and you have inspaired me to write some of mine own.
Chris

Your poem is sad, but so very true.
sad

perfect poet!
Brittany

This poem is so true. i love it it really touched me. Thank you Brittany Aden
Shianne

This poem it great its so true to me i fell the pain because i have the same pain the one i love is gone to a better place and not with me anymore so the poems isnt true to everyone but to me and a lot of other and it has tuched me and hopfully a lot of others this is the best poem i have read in a long time!
catherine

i really liked this poem because i can relate to it. between 1-10 i would give it a 10.
arjun

Speechless! When hearts cry 'loud in vain Feel i can truly this pain Truly wonderful. Go on speak your heart!
candace

I loved this poem the feel and tone were wonderful. It made me feel the emotion you might have had when writing it.
Shiloh

I can't explain in words how much this poem moved me. it conquers everything i think about love and using it as a simile makes it even more beautiful!
becka

omg. i love this so much
Jill

Beautiful
vanessea

welll I really liked the poem and it really touched me alot. I write poems myself. there pritty good I've been told. I have been told that i should publish them and all but I don't know how and where to publish them at.
Dani

This was an amazing read, it really inspired and brought up feelings long forgotten. The title pulls you right in and it was very worth the read.
esmeralda

the poem was very touching and sad nor ever have i heard a poem like that its an inspiration
nicole

this poem completley touched my hert and souli just had a brakeup yesterday and poems are mt coaping skill. the author of this poem is a bangen writer and i hope ur poems lead to to a great start in life. thank you
J.C.

this is really nice. it really spoke to me and the words flow so beautifully. (i'm making it my desktop. ) you should consider making poetry a major hobby-or maybe even a part-time career? keep it up! jc
Vicky

I really liked your poem. It's full of sadnees, I hope you find the missing pieces of your broken heart. Write more poems.
marci

Absolutely beautiful, sad. beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing your gift.
cindy

i love this poem i really says what i'm feeling thanks
BETY

YEAH I LIKE THIZ POEM!
Michelle

I love the thought you portrayed in this poem. I couldn't have said it better myself. Great job and the best of luck to future poems.
david

You have touched me deeply and i thank you for it . xxx
Emilia

The words are just truly refeclting the deep - can't say more than than Thank you ^-^
Jessica

I can feel the emotions of this poem dripping of thw word, this was written well, and I liked it alot, it really reflected me a little ^^ lol. I'd say this is the best I've read so far
Sara

Thius oem is simply great! I love your choice of word, and when i read i can picture.
Timothy

Very good it touched me
Danielle

i really like this poem. im more into this type of poems.
Angel

It shows how life changes and how we feel whebwe lose a friend.
Hannah

I loved this poem. I myself have just lost a love to the continuing current of life and I know how it feels to be heart-broken. This poem put into words the way my heart feels. Thank you.
elizabeth

im voting for this poem because it touched me so deeply that i almost cried
kyna

It's true as these words so say. Has not everyone been in this tremendous moment of life's one great sadness of the many? A very poignant piece. Thank you, poet, for these words.
Christopher

Theese poems have really thouched me and riminded me about my past thank you, Chris
Janielle

I liked this poem alot. I liked how you used the unormal words and the ending was just touching. You have really inspired me to write. thanks
Kristie

Wow, this is a really nice piece of work. ^^ I love it to death, nice job!
Frances

I love this poem cuz this is how i feel
autumn

its exactly how a felt after a moment in life happened. it has inspired me too write more poetry. it was intoxicateing and beautifully written.
Jayce

I really liked how you wrote this poem. My heart has been torn for years and I have just recentley found love once again. I applaud your beautiful work.
Alyssa

this is a poem that i can relate to and i know there are probably others that agree
samantha

the poem was very good i write some poetry to.
guillermo

from 1 to 10 i give it a 10. its a great poem.
ashlyn

that was awesome. it's one of the best poems i've ever read. i loved it.
Natisha

Your poem is really good i thought it was it means soo much to some people! It did to me because i lost some one that was so close to me! Now we dont really talk any more like we use to when we were together an now i think about it an i read your poem it was cool!
Patricia

just brought tears to my eyes.
Moniquea

This poem tocuched me because i can relate to it. Life has given me so many obstacles that i thought i could not go on. This poems is wonderful and I love it.
pam

this is one of the better poems i have read in a long time
Leonie

I think this poem came from the depths of the writters soul. I believe this is a very good poem. Im just sorry that someone had to feel the pain that brought on this lovley piece of art
briana

wow this is such a good poem from scale of 1-10 i give it a 100
Norlyn

i lov all the love poems coz its really touch my heart. very romantic and hve much compassion
Sammy

Well. I really liked this poem because at this very moment I'm lost in tears and becasue of this guy. I told him i liked him and he told me that he liked someone else and i asked him, just because that we already have a strong relationship. to notlet this come between us and he just left without a word and I'm not soo sure we're that good friends anymore and just think that this poem. Reading it . was like reading my emotions. and my emotions are soo far from happy that i don't think it's funny and i just thought you should know that. Sincerely, Sammy (what he calls me:Sammy)
ely

very beautiful poem very well done
Cassie

This is a very tuching poem, my boyfriend just cheated on me with my best friend and i just fell in love with the poem as soon as i read it.
joey

i loved your poem. it touched my heart. i just broke up wih this boy named justin. i couldn`t explain how i felt,but when i read this poem that is how i felt. i hope you will keep wrighting your poems. love,joey
Andrea

I loved this poem! The imagery is amazing. It takes me back to a time in the past when I felt just like this.
Karina

For too long I've felt broken. This poem offers comfort via understanding where many of my friends failed. Well done!
Morgan

It was great
Jean

This is the best poem of a broken heart u can find!
angelica

this poam . says just how i felt when i parted from my love . it moved me alot
Victor Winston

I liked it very much vicor
Christo

This poet has amazing potencial
Jennifer

Wow is all i have to say. wow. you hit that dead on.
Alana

This is a touching poem. Hits my fallen heart. I hope you don't mind but I have posted it on myspace page.
Kati

This poem made me cry
melissa

great style of writing!
beth

okay that=that was beautiful i geuss everyone has either lost a love and been broken after words or been so truly hurrt that nothing can ease them.
Lucy

This touched exactly what I'm feeling at this very moment.
Amber

That was a Beautiful poem. I can realy relate. You are vary talented! Stick with it because that could be famous one day.
joshua

This poem gets right down to level that you would be in if you had your heartbroken by somone. It really depicts love in a very lovesick way or like being depressed over the loss of your lover. I myself have been heartbroken, there was a girl i liked and i still do. She has the face of an angel and she is so beautifual that she makes my heart melt, i love her so much.
geetanjali

this is a beautiful poem.
Carla

I think this is a really good poem. you must of put your heart and soul into this. It brings back memories to me when i was 6. Carla Age 14!
Oscar

NICE
Michelle

very beautifully written . great insight into a broken heart . just when you think there are no words to describe a pain you are enduring someone captures it just as this author has!
cris

very poignant. it fully captures the meaning of the phrase " broken heart" and the author did it with very simple lines, great prose and magnificent rhyme. reminds me of this other classic poem " AD FINEM " written by an anonymous author.
jasmine

this is really good you should publish a whole bunch of your poems in a book they'd really sell!
Jeff

This poem is very good, it depicts sadness in a very poetic way. The rhyming is also very good, I feel the rhyming is not forced upon the poem but flows with the poem.
Katie

Very lovely poem, it was extremely touching
Ariel

I loved this poem! It is beautiful.
michelle

i have voted this poems because it made me cry with sadness and it also made me remember parts of my family that have past away thanx you for letting me read this poem.
andrea

This really touches home. My heart is also torn apart. Everyone say's, "you'll be ok it just take time". How does the love you have for someone ever go away?
Ashley

I just want to say this poem was so beautiful and i think it is great that somebody can write a poem people including myself can relate to
Ron

Wow! This was probably not what I needed to read shortly after my marriage of 13 years ended, but it is so moving and powerful. so much emotion. I think it is great.
shufeng

My heart is numb from depression and now hurt by a lost love. This poem moved my numb heart to feel and dry eyes to tears. thank you kit.
Ashley

i really like this bacome it is like the way me and my boyfriend is.
Troy

It was awesome. I'm a poet myself and I've never heared a better poem, not even from my teacher!:)
Adam

This poem is beautiful just beautiful. I loved the flow that was used.
jessica

this was an awesome poem keep up the excelente writing
pam

one of the best poems I have read in many years, keep up the good work
James

This poem is amazing. It touches me axactly where it hurts. Its beautiful.
Callie

Good job!
Cassy

This poem is sooo good. This poem touched me. Good job!
Tiffany

This was a very touching poem i love your sense of words.
Clara

I can only tear up when i read this poem
cayla

i loved this poem and i think that i can realate to it!
ecidnac

you did very good i like keep it up
Tara Lynn

Breathe taking, beautiful and spectacularly eerie! I loved the imagery.
Titania

I loved it.
Kendra

that was so pretty and you really know what to say so keep up your good work in writing poems and you may go somewhere far.
Raquel

I know exactly what you mean.
Amal

your gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Michelle

Are you absolutely SURE that you are not related to Shakespeare?
melissa

You have got something special in WORDS---GO-GO SEND THIS IN TO EVERY SITE!SEND YOUR EMOTION & That emotion will set ya free! PLEASE take time and touch hearts, as ya did mine! Thank you SO MUCH!
marie

this is a great poem, it touched my heart and it made me cry.
Juan

It is a great poem, it touching and inspiring. Love it!
Raven

effective
bylly

it`s all about love :) :(
kirsten

This is a formidable description of how it feels in a one-sided love situation!
zerokull

love your poem
Sexy

GREAT!
Candy

Oh! This inspiringful sad poem is well-written and I love the descriptions! Great job on writing your own poetry! `C
Samantha

really good poem made me get tears in my eyes reading it
Ashley

As soon as I read the first couple lines of this poem I just felt like crying. I am a poet myself and I just recently lost someone I loved very much and yet I could not find the words to explain how I felt about it, but this poem says everything it needs to and so much more and it honestly touched my heart! Thank You!
Brittany

I think this poem is great. I myself write poetry and I think this is by far one of the best I've read in a long time. I love the style and the message. It's really a great poem all around.
grim

this poem was so good and you have a really good thing going with poetry.
cloe

this tuched me so i almost started to cry
Pamala

I love this poem.
ashleigh

this poem is really good i liked it because i feel the same way i have had so many experiences that have made me feel this way and this poem shows me im not alone in my pain sometimes.
kim

this is really good and i can relate 2 it
Yessie

I LOVE THIS POEM!
gunnar Andre

This was deep, moving, heartfelt poem of loss and how this person has reached deep within his soul and found his/hers poet, and how he grieves, oh yes, grieves over his lost love and whith it, his soul was torn apart. I absolutely love how you made it informal -- it gave it more profound meaning, more passionate and as if it was this person's thoughts. You've artistly managed to reach into the well of feelings, otherwise known as emotion memory, and explored the emotion of love and how it is when loosing it again. It's a terrible feeling, as if you're, as you said, torn to pieces and want's nothing but to grief. You feel like you belong in a crooked world, a crooked world of unjustice. This is my favourite poem, and I think you can manage to write whatever challenge there is because you've reached the emotion memory stage in writing, and that's when the feelings get coloured, deep, three-dimensional and real. The prose is excellent; vivid, fluent, easy and lyrical. The rhythm beats with the emotions of the character, moving with the sad beat of an elegy. Keep writing poems, for I see talent in you, great talent that shouldn't be spent to waste. Indeed, I think you can be a proffesional.
Lori

This poem is awesome. It too is also one of the greatest poem's I've ever read. This author has great talent and deserves alot of recognition.
Emily

From one to ten, I'd rate this poem ten. This poem has touched me, greatly. Lately I have doubts about God and depend on anything, but God, to make me feel better, but it just seems nothing helps. I've tried writing my feelings in a poem and well, this has taken it's place. It's written my feelings so much clearer and it's better written. I want to thank you, I think about this poem, and it makes me realize that I should depend on God and there is nothing to doubt. This poem has put my faith back in God. Thank you.
Felicity

This poem expressed the bereftness of lost love as perfectly as I've ever seen. I can't stop crying, after reading it half a dozen times! To me, it speaks of a very real love, lost through tragic means of one kind or another. a healthy, wholesome love that should not have had to be lost. Elegantly tragic. Or tragically elegant. Thank you so much, to the author.
neil

i think that was really good it really got to me and im a boy and im 13
Kat

I'm not good a poetry none the less of sounding smart. baiclly I'm leaving this comment telling you your poem was unbelivable. Please continue to write!
d

Beautifully put. a heart broken i s like death itself.
William

These words reflect my broken heart. Thank you, the words of this poem helped me.
Sherry

Very beautiful, great work. Love it. I could feel the words.
nimmy

it made me cry and made me feel something deep inside my heart. it made me remember the special moments i shared once
kim

loved it
samantha

your poem is one of the best poem ive read. Full of emotions, i can relate to it!
Alyssa

that poem was amazing. i love it.
megan

really really good poem
kent

I'm a Chinese. i like you poems,but my english very bad, just this,haha.
natalie

I give this poem a 10! It's beautiful and nice. It sounds like something i would write.
Brandi

That was great just what i was looking for thank you
shawna

This poem is tyte. not only expressing the heartache of relationships but so much deeper than that. the pain of life, the heartache of lonliness. it was very deep and i respect it alot. you got some talent.
Richard

You poem is very beautiful. It has deep meaning and is capable of bringing a tear to people's eyes. Kudos to you
Jesus

This poem I read has touch my heart because my life going corrupt. It move me in the fact that I could relate to it.
krissy

this poem is really good it took me away and i could feel what the author was saying if you read this poem you will love it i know i did
Robert

This poem has touched me more than I'd like to admit. My own sad story is spinning around in my head, and somehow you have brought a little beauty to my own broken heart. Well Done!
Rob

This Poem struck a chord in me, i am going through a break up of my marriage, and she is out with others, it was painful and it helped me to cry like i needed to. thanks
Sarah

This is 1 of the best poems I've ever read.
michelle

~beautiful, deep.
Waellzly

This poem is excellent. From experience I can confidently say it describes well the agony of a broken heart. Despite the beauty and blessing around someone, the weakening pain remains strong. Seek Not My Heart is a beautiful and inspired work of literature.
kiwi

this poem really touched me
Jennifer

This poem is really nice and you can feel the emotion that the author has put behind their words.
prfnt

wow. let me know if u write any more poems. that was really good!
shaylee

this poem was very good infact one of the best yet
Chrislin

i lov tis poem really reflects on my feelings ^^
FANTASEE

THIS POEM IS GREAT
lydia

hey i love this poem, When i first read it it completely related 2 what ive been going through at the moment and i think kit is amazing at writing! thankyou i love this poem sooo much x x x
missy

this poem is great!
Maags

Oh my how estoteric and beautiful ! I give it a 10 on a scale of 1-10, I loved the use of old English.
fire fly

your poem is one of the best poems i hav ever read and i hav read a few. it really touched me and u should be proud
Teena

beautiful
Jody

wow. I was moved to tears by this poem. Absolutely awesome.
elle

this poem is really touching and found a way to reach my heart broken soul.
Taylor

OMG THAT POEM GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS! I LOVE IT! IT WAS SO DEEP AND HEARTFELT! YOU REALLY PUT YOUR HEART AND SOUL INTO THIS! KEEP IT UP!
Kori

wow! this poem was sooo good! i absolutely loved it
alysia

i love the poems all of them ya r real poets love ya work:)
Ingrid

That poem is WOW. ITs beautiful. ^_^
kerrie

the poem did an excelent job on explain heartbreak when heartbreak cant be explained in words.
SHATARI

nice poem i can really relate
Stephanie

It had the feeling that was ment to be given. :)
sammi

I loved your poem. It was so touching I almost cry. I believe someday you could be a great writer.
Jacob

an outstanding poem, sinks deep into the heart and mind.
Andrais

Beautiful. This was. i cant describe it. i know ive felt the exact same as that a few more times than once. You always have my applause because thats the most beautiful thing i have ever seen in my life.
Natalie

This poem really touhed me and I would like to thank you for displaying it! You saved my life!
Kyle

I love this poem. The language was awesome and the theme was kept perfectly throughout. This poem was touching and I could read it a thousand times.
Lillian

VERY NICE
theresa

I loved this poem, it truely is an exceptional piece of creative artistic ability.
Lucy

Very, Very, beautiful poem. the wording was perfect and made me picture her feelings completely. Go Girl. =)
Karen

I absolutely loved your poem. It really touched me and it was impressive.
Arlett

This captured exactly what I feel.
lil g

wonderful
Adrienne

God, this poem is beautiful. It symbolizes everything i'm feeling right now. You have an amazing way with words.
Kaylee

This poem is really good! It just tore me apart reading it! It's great. good work !=)=)
Christine

Dear Kit Hi :) I just want to say reading your poem 'Seek Not My Heart' was very validating. Many individuals who have loved and lost someone very near to them either by choice, death or a break up has felt this type of sorrow and your poetry captures this. Keep it up you have a gift. Many blessings sent your way.
mallow

wonderful poem. so touching. it's simply the mirror of my thoughts and emotions
cathy

you just described my feelings in a more subtle way
amber

this was a heartfelt poem full of emotion and i luved it!:)
tasha

this was a very good poem it reminds me of me and my x-boyfriend thank you. you did very good.
Kiana

This poem put me in the mind state of poetry that was written hundreds of years ago but the language was not something that I could not understand. Beautifully written and it conveyed the perfect thought of loneliness. Job well done.
Trisha

I have re-read your poem a thousand times and it fits so well with my own broken dreams, broken heart. I truly believe your an angel sent to me to dry my tears within the words of your beauitful poem. Thank you so much!
noelle

it was really toching
Arno

Strong
Belle'

it's really touching and well written,it spoke to me.
JaZmInE

THIS POEM WAS SO TOUCHING I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY ON A SCALE FROM 1-10 YOU SHOULD GET 15 :)
Ashley

That was such an awesome poem. All the words really meant something in a deep way. I love your style of writing. it really makes you think.
k

it was great
Shalee

I really love your poem it touched me in a way I thought no poem could it touched me because thats the way i feel everyday. thank you for writing it!
jess

This is a brilliant poem that has touched me! You are a good poet Kit McCallum keep at it!
Kat

I absolutely loved this poem. My boyfriend actually showed this poem to me and told me he did a presentation on it in school last year, and I nearly cried. It's an incredibly powerful poem with a lot of obvious meaning, yet hidden meaning you have to search for as well. A very well written poem after all.
bianca

i thought that was wonderful it reallly captures the essense of havin ure hart broken ,trust me id kno it was the perfect feelings ,gud job xxbeexx
Reina

this poem blew me away. Not only could i relate but the mood that it set and the place that it put me was unbelievable. i have never read a poem that i could read so many times and have the same feeling. Everytime i read it, it's like the first time. wow
jessy

That was so so good
Jennifer

This was a tremendously graceful poem. It was worded very well.
Chelsea

This is a really good poem!I am rating it as a 5
keeba

this is such a beutiful poem! please continue to write them! you have talent.
Ina

Touching
Nati

It was truely amazing. Well written and straight to the heart. Great job writer.
Amberlee

The poem touched me because my heart has been broken a lot,and sometimes it feels as if I don't have a heart at all.
Rick

Really good. I sent it to a lost Love. And hoping.
lucy-anne

wow this made me cry it just touched me and made me realise i am not the only one hurting thank you so so so so much you have a amazing talent thank you!
Cait

WOW U ROCK! i loved the poem, its amazing. Everything is true, theres so much put into it, i give u props on putting it out there for everyone to see, again ITS SOO GOOD!
eloni

the poet expresses his feelings like a mirror. without doubt it touches me to the core.
Hannah

that is awesome, i love how you usd nature in it! well done!
Eileen

"SEEK NOT MY HEART" . was truely one of the best poems I`ve ever read. (and believe me I`ve read thousand and thousands)This poem was straight from the heart and conveyed the depth of their pain so beautifully. ONE COULDN`T HELP ON READING THIS TO BREATHE A SIGH AND SAY"YES, i`VE BEEN THERE AND THAT`S EXCATLY HOW i FELT. ".
Naomi

This is 100% how I feel. I have been hurt before and will be hurt again. Time will heal me I'm sure, but while I mourn this is a very satisfying poem to have with me. Thank you.
frank

I am not really into poems much, but i really liked this one, i cant explain it!
sarah

omg that poem was sooooooo good. ilove reading poems but im not to flash at writing them, i like to move people tho so i write storys,
Katie

This poem has really touched my heart b/c my fiance just broke up with me and my heart is torn into a million pieces, we still love each other but maybe it was for the best.
Damlyn-Boston

This poem evokes great emotion and is something- i'm sure- many people can identify with. It reminds me of a Piece from Romeo and Juliet (Baz Lurman's version) and should be accompanied by the music of Desree's song, "missing you. " It is INSPIRATIONAL and AMASING! THANKYOU!
SYDNEY

i loved it
Laurene

I loved it so much think you for writing it! I can write good poems but, that was amazing, excellant,and inspirational to me.
Robert

The poem really touched my heart. It's amazing to come up with such a sentimental poem. BRAVO!
andre

ilike it alot it make me want to become a poet too. LOVE IT
Markus

I really feel attached to this masterpiece of poetry. really good work
Jannea

i don't know but thats how i felt when 1 i thought was my true love broke up with me and i never thought about writing a poem about it she did a really really good job!
kriselda mae

It is very beautiful and it touches my heart
jay

i loved it, your poem was fantastic. it put my gave me a feeling i cannot name but made em feel better just the same. we all wish we are not alone, even in our sorrow we wish for a another to beside us moan. from one to 10 i say its an 8 for it gave deeply identified with my heart ache.
Sandra

This is the best poem I have read on this site. It is very touching. The silent cries is a reflection of our daily lives when it comes to love and how it can hurt! big ups to the poet:)
Amanda

That Poem. Was So Beautiful And I Loved It Even More Because. Its What Im Feeling Right Now. I Can Relate To It So Much. Nice Job Kit McCallum, Nice Job
naomi

this is absolutly moving, & heart felt! it captures the pain remarkably, i hope you continue to right,cause you are truly blessed with a way with words! bless you always naomi
Annie

MY GOSH!IT PIERCED MY HEART! SO OVERWHELMING INDEED!
carol

this poem was really good it really touched me!
stephanie

i love this poem!
misty

Your poam is very beutiful and soulful many peaple has had at least one broken hart and i can relate
Cassandra

your poem is very powerful i was reading in computer class and i started to bawl my eyes out. i honestly know how you feel i just lost my boyfreind of two years but your poem is completly touching!
Josh

That poems was one of the most amazing poems I have ever read in my life I idol you
Mona

This was so close to my heart.
Ques

this was a real real good poem, good job
Ma. Theresa

I can say it's touching. Well, it's because I've just been to pains. The heartaches is still fresh. And, I never expect my ex to have someone right away. Which is said, that they're living together now. This poem really touched me soooo.
Heather

WOW! When I read you poem it made my jaw drop in awe.
j

That was incredible, it humbles all my futile attempts at poetry. That's the best poem I've ever read.
DREW

I REALLY LIKED ALL THE POEMS I READ AND I THINK THEY SHOULD WRITE MORE,
RaShell

This poem is true and full of emotion I truly wept for your pain. live on and thankyou for touching my heart.
Amy

The pome is very true!
Sha

this poem I can really relate to alot it really tpouched my heart
red

This poem is the best of sorrow and pain i read it it changed the way i feel thank you
C

Splendid poem. Obviously written by somebody who knows what heartbreak is.
Vicky

I related to this poem for many reasons. It was a good read and spoke many a true word for people suffering from heart break
jessica

EXCELLENT POEM
sunni

this peom it tuoch ed my heart and im a person that stuff dont do the very affton keep it kool and stay in life no matter what. im a poetry person well laterz sunni
Me

i really lk ure poem. is really tight. i bet ya it touches alot of peoples heart. but most it touches mine ;)
Steven

WOW, this has touched me deap. I trie so hard to explain how i feel. its been a little more than a month since i lost my girlfriend and i feel so lost and confused but this poem; wow. its awesome.
helga

what a wonderful poem for me to read today--sometimes its hard for me to put my pain into words--thanks for doing that for me.
jaq

this poem really touches me. what a masterpiece.
Sarah

wow that was great i love to look at all these great poems and see who i can relate to and yours is one of the best i feel the same but you gotta keep going
Becca

omg, ur poem is so good!thanks for putting how ive felt all along into words.
anne

It's quite moving:)
Suzanne

Very beautiful and exactly how I felt at the time I read it. Something happened that hurt me more than anything ever had. It helps to see your feelings in the form of words.
ashley

it was very good poem and i thought that it was very deep into the meaning of the poem "very good"
Tam

Very deep, very touching. Well expressed. Two thumbs up!
lily

im sat here crying . knowing ive jush lost the love of my life n yor poem jush summed up how i feel such bewtiful use of words. truly wonderful poem
Elissa

This is a great poem i wished all mine sounded this good.
Ann

AWESOME! Kit, you're an absolute natural. I can't even begin to express the feelings this poem evoked in me. I was truly touched by the power of your words. Please keep writing--you definately have a gift!
Gaurav

Its amazing. It has shaken my soul and got tears in my eyes. Read something like this after a long time. May God give happiness to all.
nicole

I really loved this poem I can really realate to this person. I feel as though I can never be loved. after such an event has happend as this. I shall never have the peacefull love. for it will always be filled with dought! as you said why should you seek out the mornfull heart! all you'll find is grief!
Lee

Great poem, i have written quite a few myself, but what i have written I don't think would ever match up to this poem. It really speaks out for how I feel now, especially the last two lines, No gentle winds, seek not my heart, For simply . it has torn apart. It's almost true. Great job, but how i wish, they were under a not so sorrow atmosphere
erica

this is very goodand touching.
Eric

The beauty of this poem touches me in the deepest way. I would like to hear some more of your pieces!
Brianna

I am 14 years old and I love to write poems/stories and this poem is very excusite with its deepness and compassion. I love it! Way to go!
kim

this poem expresses how it feels to have a broken heart. i was so close to tears when i finished reading it!
Elise

I love this. I can so totally relate to it!
Crystal

I love your poem! It made me want to break down and cry cuz i feel the same! Write on you amazing poet!
Crystal

I loved it, it not only sounds good, goes well together but it can compare to life. It touches my soul and fills my eyes. It was beautiful.
Sam

omg! this is one of the best poems ive ever read. keep up the good work!+
Tasnuba

So beautiful and so touching. thanks so much for this poem.
Amy

i can relate to you feeling. that was wonderful. brought tears to my eyes
shekhar

Simply touched my heart. no word to say how i felt while reading it
Nicole

I really enjoyed it. You have amazing talent. I can't wait to read more of your work. Keep up the excellent work hun. *Huggles*
Danielle

It was the most moving thing i have ever read. It really did touch my heart
Aubrey

I loved this poem because it expresses so many of the feelings that have found me lately. It's really inspirational for a poet like myself to read other people's writing because it makes you want to get in touch with the most honest feelings in your soul. Thank you so much.
Naomi

Hey this poem was to rad it touched me! it was really cool hehe
MTh.

Lovely, you got it, puting beautiful words just like a song. song from the heart.
Tunisia

WOW! this is the best poem I heard all night. It makes me feel unset and heart broken. This is a trutly thoughting poem, keep up the good work.
Maria

good poem
steph

BEAUTIFUL. I am there, still after 6 years
Jessica

This is a poem for anyone that has been hurt by a loved one. Most people know what it is to feel as though their heart has been torn apart, and this poem describes it so vividly, and so touchingly, i just want to cry everytime that i read it! It is problem one of my favourite poems ever.
erin

this poem was awesome its like totally what im going threw and ever thing so i just wanted to writer to know that you are great and never stop what you do because its great
Joan

I LOVED IT!
kimmy

i dont know why but for some reason it made me cry and ona scale of 1 bad 10 good i give u a 10
Brooke

I love this poem. It puts into words the way my heart feels. My boyfriend and i broke up about a month ago and i've tried to get him back but he doesn't want me, even after i tried for months to make us better, he was just out for himself and what suited him. I was just left to wait around until he "had time". I say this because he NEVER made time for me after the 5th month. Before that, he was great but i guess he just got tired of me and didn't bother to tell me to my face.
Angie

This is a very special poem. It is awesome.
ashley

This is a good poem because it describes exactly how you feel when someone walks all over you,it's as though no one can see that your dieing from the inside - out-*me*
Halima

Your poem is very heart-touching. I can't think of a word to describe. I love poems
Albi

I hope you don't feel that way, Kit. No matter how many heartbreaks you have in your life, it is worth every minute of it, even though you feel like you are being torn apart. It is a great poem and I wish you the best of luck.
Jamie

This pome has a touch of delight and a whole lot of sorrow. I was touched and delighted by your sorrow. You shold be greatful for your talent. THANKS
Shelley

I loved this poem. My friend recieved some very bad news about someone she liked a lot the night I read this, and it was fate that brought me to this poem. It is truly a moving piece.
Kristie

Your poem is so beautifully eloquent, you truly have a gift for touching people.
kim

This poem is great it touches me in so many ways
Anonymous

This is one of the best poems I ever read!
stephanie

this poem was very cool. it almost made me want to cry i didn't know just how to exlpain it. it remindes me of my old lover we were going to get married but we were separated. i miss him much and this poem just reminds me of what all i went through it is very beautiful and touching.
Jesi

Its touching in an unexplainable way.
Megan

This is a remarkable poem and it describe's everything i feel when i'm in doubt with a relationship. #1
Deana

This poem really touches me. I love it!
Heather

Your poem is too perfect to spoil with heavy hearted words. So I just want to say thank you for writing this beautiful poem, it is unconditional in it's beauty and perfection and is undoubtedly my favorite poem of all the poems I have read all my life. It truly touched my heart and is so wonderfull. *l*
Ash

I suppose I will not be overgeneralizing if I said everyone has have their heart broken, and can relate to your poem. Your poem, nonehtheless, is heartfelt and touching.
Barbie

Very well written. Very touching. It gave me goosebumps and provolked the kind of thought and emotion found in only the best of poems. Truly a masterpiece worthy of publication and a part of history.
Melanie

I have read all of your poems and I think this is your most beautiful and talented poem yet. I think it is truly a magnificient piece of art.
kristina

I noe wat that poem means i had a abuseve b/f and i didnt wanna get out of it b/c i loved him alot but he took it 2 far and now hes in his on grave
synthyche

This poem mirrors exactly what I am feelin lately. For you who was able to put words into this kind of feeling. thank you. In a way, your poem lessens the pain i feel.
karen

I loved that poem because it said how I feel right now. besides my own poetry this poem says how I feel.
Autumn

OMG i looooooooooooved that poem! It was so deep and thoughtful. I can't wait to see more of your work!
Lauren

oh my gosh, that was an awesome poem. It killed me. That was so articulate and it flowed with grace
S

My heart felt heavy My eyes filled with tears I felt the long time pain of past heartbreaks I love it
Hollie

Thank you so much, Kit, for writing this beautiful piece of work! I've read many poems on this site and none of them are as touching as this! God has blessed you with an amazeing talet!
Diane

touched my soul,i also have felt this way when i and my loved one were split up for three years i felt the pain in the poem ,by a miracle we have gotten back together,i thank god ,now i am so happy,it's a very moving poem,thank you
Emma

This Poem To Me Was So Moving And Touching . I Myself Also Write Poems But This Was Just Well It Just Blew Me Away. Great!
Javier

Very few things make my eyes tear up, my heart tighten up, and my lungs let out a sigh. Kit McCallums poem has this triple threat of writing, for which I thank, as it is a reminder to me that I am alive, and with feeling. Thank You.
Silver Tears

BEAutiFUL luved luved it u have real good use of words and I never rly got howta make a poem sad and beatiful at the same time At a personal opinion i think ur great and should keep on writing!; )
Hayley

I have read many poems before, but yours stands out amongst the crowd. You are fantastic, made me cry, and I think you are one of the most talented poets to write something so heartfelt, yet so innocent and sincere. Congrats, it was wonderful!
Monique

Nice Poem, Keep up the good work. I am also a writer.
Tiffany

i think that this poem is very good. i like how she used the words and its very meaningful.
AMANDA

I THOUGHT THAT IS WAS A WONDERFUL POEM KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK MAYBE ONE DAY YOU WILL BECOME A FAMOUS WRITER.
ryan

this is the best poem ever!
Ashley

I love your poem. it really is great!
Bryan

i love this poem i describes everything i feel at this moment it helped me when i read it thanks
Heather

I think this poem speaks for itself. Many people feel this way and you expressed it perfectly.
Julie

Simply. beautiful.
natalie

this poem was excellent. it very rare that u find sumthin that relates so much to u. it was excellent. keep it up
Shannon

GREAT POEM! AS I SAT AND READ THIS , I COULD FEEL YOUR PAIN AND SADDNESS EVERY STEP OF THE WAY. GREAT JOB.
Jen

Oh my god I coud really relate to your poem a lot! It really touched me inside. It reminded me of the time a guy told me it was over and I was heart broken! Keep up the good work!
Michael

Elegant. I love the way the author constructs the lines of thought. It's unconventional, but reads very well and, somehow, gives it a different feel (try reading it with the "you" in front of the "do not"). Great poem and I, as I'm sure lots of us, can really relate.
Brian

Do not you hear my words of praise Responding to your sad malaise? Do not you feel you touched me true? And thus, I cast my vote for you. Thank you for your poem, it was brilliantly beautiful!
TRISH

I simply loved this poem. It is really well written and it says so much. Great job!
Randy

I honestly can say that your subcontios contrast with the changing sky and stars is the glue that relates and intertwines this poem to Love. Great poem and thank you for sharing it.
alycia

you go boy your poem is of the chains it really touched me, i want you to keep up the GREAT job your doing and i encourge you to DON'T GIVE UP NEVER! it really was a touching poem. I LOVE IT!
Paige

This poem is so inspiring. And it has really made me think about everything a little harder. You are a great poet. KEEP IT UP!
Melissa

O my that was good! I loved it! Keep writing!
Kayla

I like this poem cuz i love this guy soooo very much, but he HATES me! And even though this poem is confusing it shows all the pain that i feel EVERYDAY OF MY LIFE! And i didn't know how to express myself and you did it 4 me. Thanks
Char

It's a wonderful poem. I hope to see more of your work soon.
Markie

This is a AwSoMe poem that i think alot of people can relate to and understansd Good Work keep it up
Poetic

This is a very good poem! Keep up the good work! =)
Ann

A truly beautiful poem. I can relate so well! The author obviously poured their heart out. Thank you.
crystal

I love the way the poem rhymes. This is one of my favs. on this site.
zach

i just wont to say thanks for these good poems so i know there are more people out there haveing to go trou the same stuff i have to say thanks for the good poem
Michaela

All I have to say is: BEAUTIFUL
LoNeLy OnE

This poem is wonderful but yet sad at the same time,i know how Kit McCallum feels cause ive been broken hearted before and since then i havent been with someone isnt that sad?
Cope

I like how similies were used in this poem it made me feel the poem a lot better.
jackie

This poem touched me in such a way that is hard to explain. It was almost as if this person read my mind. Thank you
Chris

Very beautifully done. You depiction of real life scenery with emotions is absolutely fantastic.
carmela

i love the poem so much! its soooo touching.
Maeve

o my god,i hope this poet realizes what a beautiful talent she has. i have never read anything that decribtive and perfect in my life. i am in awe.
Myranda

Woot! I'm not one for lengthy expressions of enjoyment, so that will do it.
Louise

I loved this poem as my heart is also shattered and broken :'(
Elizabeth

OH MY GOD! I REALLY LOVED IT. I wish some guy could write me like that, I like literally had tears running down my cheeks. Keep up the good work, and create more of these poetic stuff.
Kyle

i liked it!
Shameez

Coolest Poem I have ever heard. Great work Well done. Keep it up!
Shorty

That poem was beutiful every feeling u felt in that poem I can feel. I can totally relate to u.
AliAngel

WOW! Thats is so beautiful and touching i felt a tear run down my cheek! That is truely a wonderful poem! I love it! Keep up the beautiful work
katrina

this poem was da best! i can relate to it too.
sonja

its beautiful
Amanda

this peom is very fantastic and so are alot more but i want my poems to be like that too so i hope any of you poem writers have advice thanks bye
Eric

I love this, and I think that what you write, everyone can relate to. It was very beautiful, and I'm glad that you shared it with the world.
Mona

beuitfull poem i sent it to a friend and i thank you for letting me use it
ankur

beautiful poem. really touched my heart. which is as well broken and shattered
Thuy

I love this poem. It is so beautiful. It mix nature and the feeling of lost love together so perfectly that it is amazing. This is outstanding poetry.
Elizabeth

This is a great poem!
Bejaze Beth

wow this poem totally touched me!
chrysty

This is such a wonderful poem. The writing is exquisit, and the emotion so strong. You brought tears to my eyes. I wish you luck and a way to mend your broken heart.
Michelle

I really loved your poem. It reminds me of this guy I love and i lost him because of alot of upsetting reasons. Your poem says all I couldn't. Thanks for writing something so real and true.
Afra

This poem was sutnning, the way the poet asked questions, simply wonderful. It touched my heart, my soul.
candie

this poem is awesome! i love it! this is extremely good!
LaToyia

I really enjoye this poem. This is the first catching piece of poetry I've heard in a very long time. It really struck my attention and I felt as though I were the person describing each heart-felt experience in the poem.
Lizzie

Beautiful poem. ^-^
Mandie

It was very touching and I felt like I could feel your pain speaking to me through the words, it's a very deep and special piece of art and I really enjoyed it!
Gladys

nice poem!very deep
dreamerz

This is one of the best poems i've ever read, and i really can relate to it! Kudos to ya!
Katie

Simply Excellent. Its these poems that help people get over relationships easier because then they know someone else is going through the same thing!
Katharine

Oh, Stunning work! Mavelous! Simply wonderful! That is DEFINITLY the best poem I have ever read and I have read lots of wonderful poems.
Yuske_Boy

I loved it. 1 of the best i've ever read. You are a genious.
Debbie

These words are very true, I wish my ex-boyfriend cared enough that I could send it to him. To let him know how much life hurts without him.
lisa

I have no words, Onlt tears
Howie

perfect. it describes exactly how i feel now. why is love so painful and tearful? it really tears my heart apart
CRYSTAL

THIS WAS ONE OF THE MOST HEARTFELT POEMS I HAVE READ. I COULD CRY, SERIOUSLY.
Lela

This poem is beautiful. I absolutely loved it.
Serene

Bravo. Touching. Simple and sweet. Bravo.
Shavon

Your poem is truly beautiful!
R.E.L

I LOVED this poem. I felt so moved, it really touched my heart. Kit, please keep writing, I want to read more beautiful poetry!
Joyce

very well written. anyone that has ever lost someone they truly loved can relate to this poem
Sarah

HOLY CRAP- don't mean to be crude- its just that poem was incredible, soooo classic! I could see it next to edgar allen poe! keep writing and everyone will keep reading. beautiful, just beautiful
Minahil Sardar

This poem is remarkable for its Lyrical beauty,natural flow of thoughts and intellectual depth. Though this poem has pessimistic touch but even then it seems to come dirctly from the heart of poet and goes directly in the heart of reader!The moment i was reading this poem i felt that poet has expressed all the feelings that r floating in my heart and mind. And obviously good poetry is that in which reader finds his own reflection!
Karen

Wow!. Thats all I have to say. It was definalty one of a kind. an I was deeply touched by it. because when me an My boyfriend broke up I went on this site an this poem was the very first one I chose to read. I dont know why. but it definatly some how or another made me stronger an made the healing process go by faster
Krist

wow. you are amazing
jaqee

muahahahahahahah i love this poem hehehehehehe hehehehe heheheh! i though it was good because i can relate to it!
Loni

it was a very good poem i can relate
mike

awesome poem!
sofia

your poem was deep truly one of the best i have ever had the privaledge of reading
Kaori

True, True, True.
Eileen

It was fantastic! It actually gaveme chills. It was different approach to explain the deep pain one feels when their heart has been broken in two! I love your style. keep up the good work.
Stard

Simply; I liked it.
Ana

I love this poem it reminds me exactly of a relationship I'm still kinda stuck in at this moment, and it helps to know other people know what I'm feeling. Lemme know when you write new stuff
Dan

Beautiful. Stunning. Truly, a work of art.
Ailee

Such a beautiful poem, beautifully written. What more can be said. ?
liv

o my goodness, i moved to a different town about an hour away from my loved one, he didnt think it would work until i sent him this poem, we are still together and i owe it ALL to you kit! thank you, with love, liv
SHERR

I TRUELY UNDERSTAND YOUR PAIN BECAUSE I AM IN A SITUATION RIGHT NOW THAT IS TAKING ITS TOLL ON ME. THANK FOR WRITING THIS POEM FOR IT LETS ME KNOW THAT I AM NOT GOING ONLY ONE WHO IS GOING THROUGH TRIALS IN MY LIFE. THIS POEM WAS VERY LOVLY BUT YET SAD.
Bekah

This poem was trully moving, and symbolizes what i have felt for quite some time, the feeling of a broken heart.
steve

Man absolutely a work of art brilliant i hav saved it and will look at it amongst others when i am feelin down absoluitely wonderful
Casey

Your poem Is so beautiful, It has brought tears to my eyes - knowing that someone out there has felt the same way I do! Thank you for writting it & keep on writting!
kara

Brilliant!
kendra

the poem was great! i wish i could write like you
cary

I love this poem it reminds me of an incident in my life. It was very very sweet.
Star

I really can tell how you feel because i feel the same way. i Think that we are experiecing the same thing right now. i can't stop crying , no matter what! well, your poem was very beautiful!
Reem

your poem has toutched my heart, it made me cry. you are a great poet.
sarah

i think that this poem is great
soona

Hello Kit, I just would like to thank you. This poem had me in tears. You know what? I really needed a good cry. take care
tru

It takes powerful words close to my heart to make me feel like crying. Intense yet gentle. It's great.
Candi

I think whoever wrote this has a lot of talent and they should keep on writing. More power to people who have the ability to write what they feel in as great of words as this person has.
Win

truely magnificent
silvia

just great
Svet

I can't really say anything other than simply: WOW
kelse

oh I LOVED this poem! it really made me feel the pain
Sarah

Your poem, ITS GREAT! rock on! I know how you feel!
Arlene

I thought this poem was great! It really talks about their feelings. It was great!
Tatatee

fantastic work. =)
Rose

Such poetics. A tear escaped my body.
AMANDA

THIS POEM TOUCHED ME IN WAYS UNEXPLAINABLE. THE WRITER OF THIS POEM DEFINATELY HAS TALENT.
Allison

That poem was great! The words were so meaningful, and there was a lot of feeling put into it.
ray

This arangement of words was taken from my quiet whispers and placed on paper with pen. Great work!
Kerry

Oh!,so beautiful.magnificently beautiful.i will await patiently for your next work of art.the only words i think of are power and grace.
Jessie

I love the poem and author. Keep writing.
Mary

This poem is wonderful. The words come directly from the heart. This author is truly talented.
Parul

A very true.touching piece of art crafted in a flamboyant style the vacant musings of the heart. Sometimes when Love is so precious, we often try to preserve it's pain too.tendering it with equal passion, holding onto it like a little piece so fragile.strange are the ways of the human heart!
Mary

Kit, I think this is a wonderful poem, filled with emotion. Your pain comes through and almost brought tears to my eyes.You are truly talented.
Trish

i am voting for this poem because it touched other peoples' hearts including mine. the way this writer wrote this shows a lot of feeling. i know that i am not cridict, but i do think this poem is one of the greatest poems i have ever read. i will definetly share this poem to my friends. simply superb! :)
Dinny

This poem speaks so much of what i have been through in my life.
Yvonne

one word >> WOW!<< this poem is absolutely amazing! i love it! Keep up the work! :0)
Paul

Just sums it up when love is torn from you. Sometimes it helps to know you're not the only one, that there is some one else who knowns what it's like. Thank you.
j

hun--its like you were in my mind---i absolutely love this poem
Eloisa

This poem truly describes the crushing effect of what my last break up has place onto my spirit. Am truly broken over losing the one true love in all my life. Now I have to reinvent my woman's spirit from this disheveled broken state. But I have a growing faith that "this too shall pass." Bravo Kit McCallum!
Mike

A really excellent poem. Very intellegently written, with a good stlye and flow. The best poem I have read for a while.
Daniel

I am stunned. I have to say this poem is quite amazing with its perfect iambic verse and enchanting metaphors
Pat

Your poem was very precise and heart stricken. I love how you used your arangement of words and how I can almost feel threw you the pasion you bring to the poem. I once went threw a similiar romance and I could have never wordeed this incident as perfect as you have.I think your a wonderfull poet and you have a great future ahead of you
Anna

This was such a great poem. I wish mine sounded like this!
Barby

Wow! this has alot of strong feeling. the way the words are expressed make u feel what the auter was feeling at the time and i think that every one has a time in their lives when they feel this way i really liked this poem.
Elbert

Not many poems touch me profoundly, but from the first stanza, I could feel an invisible hand physically tugging at my heartstrings. Such a poignant piece of art!
nHi

i realli liked this poem...i felt that it realli touched me and that it captured the pain and sorrow of having a broken heart realli well...
Danielle

That is a great poem. It was wonderfully written.
Jessica

This poem was outstanding!! It found a a piece of me I didnt know I had. I can sit here for hours thinking of this poem and it makes think about alot of things. You are a wonderful and talented writer. Keep up the great work. I hope to read more of your poems in the feature.
Chris

That was good, very touching it made me start tinking bout my wife.She's dead.She died in a car wreck 4 months ago.I did a poem.But it wasnt as good as yours.
Liz

it spoke to my heart, from the middle. I am the person you are talking about. Love hurts and it dont conquor all!
Laura

Easy to read, involving deep emotions. Wonderful poem! Keep on writing! Your poem reminds me of a romanian national poet, Mihai Eminescu. Probably you did not hear about him, though his poetry was translated into English as well. Anyway, if you find his poems, maybe you'll read a few. You will see I'm right.;-)) Congratulations for your poem!
Stefanie

This poem made me feel like i had to cry :'(
H.M

Absolutely beautiful. It's deeply touching and beautiful.
Brett

This is amazing. It flows with such ease and is so powerful. Thankyou for such wonderful work.
tony

i love this poem, i think everyone can see themselves like this after a brake up, or a could have been love. it touches the heart
kia

wow! i'm speechless.i'm still in awe.such a heartfelt poem.beautiful!
Megan

This is truly great. It deserves to be published in a book all it's own :)
Jessica

The poem Seek Not My Heart is the best piece I've ever read. It just touch my heart. Its very cool! Keep up the good writing!
Dewdrop

This poem was truly beautiful. It was well worded and emotional. A masterpiece. Please continue writing!
kristin

omg.i have felt like that for so long now! You did a great job, and i hope to see more work like yours! oh, one more thing.note to self: "Love Sucks!" hehe.great job
Tiff

wow, beautiful poem.not only captured YOUR feelings as you wrote it, but it also captured mine.thank you
Squall

How sweet is love.yet how it stings.
Jackie

This is a very pretty poem, it totally flows w/ the breeze.
J

I loved the poem, it definetly expressed how I felt about my boyfriend after we broke up. And I'm still not over the pain.
Himchan

Beautiful way of expressing your broken heart. Yeah IF LOVE SOO NICE TELL ME WHY IT HURT SOOO BAD..
Meg

Sweet sorrow.your pain is felt, embraced, and enjoyed.
Rohit

I know it though, but tell me again, Is it your poem, or a reflection of my pain?
Uncertainty

Your poem really touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes. You are a very gifted and talented poet and I admire you for that
J.D.

No words could do due right, purly a textual mirror or my soul. Beautiful,
AH

such truth in the words, made me cry even harder as i sit here with a borken heart! great poem!
Devvy

Excellent poem. I love how it was so open-minded and unique in every way.
Jamie

Wow!
LoneStar

Loved the way your poem was written. It seems to flowas you read it. I'll be it would sound good if music was put to it.
Kasey

I loved it. It touched me deep inside. And I almost cried.
Julia

I could feel my own pain in her words. Great poem.
Tomeka

This poem is extraordinary.
Amy

this poem has a heartfield depth, which i relate to. the writer is remarkable!
A.S.

Your poem was well written.
Jennifer

This poem is so true. it touched me deeply. Thank you for writing such a heartfelt peom.
Martha

I think this person has talent
Kara

One of the best i read yet and yet it explains how i feel right now.
Izora

I feel everything your poem says. I feel betrayed by my husband of 30 years.
cindy

absolutely beautiful!!!!
Chloe

very heartfelt and sincere. I appreciate good poems such as this, it makes you really think about what love is and how important it is. Congratulations on an awesome poem!
Lauren

Oh this touched my heart soo much.. it gave me chills
LATINA

I THINK THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM. IT'S VERY TRUE AND IT EXPLAINS EXACTLY HOW SOMEONE FEELS WHEN THEY HAVE A BROKEN HEART.
Erin

Words fail me...my simple complements would diminsh the actual effect your poem gave me. Its beautiful, I'd love to read more.
cordell

beautiful writing, great rhythm and rhyme, wonderful meaning, very deep, excellent metaphors. I really enjoyed your poem, and I am going to use it in a writing project that I have to do on poetry at school
Chandra

Beautious!
Alex

This is one of the best poems I have read lately. It is easy to read and makes a lot of sense in what the writer feels.
pm

Cool! Really spoke to my heart.
Kerryann

beautiful poem and filled with emotion,also very touching.
D.Elrod

I really enjoyed this poem, I think it is written well. I read alot of these and most are yuck, but this is a good one! Good job!
Kanta

It is a lovely poem.
Fredi

i like this poem
Melanie

MY FEELINGS INDEED. SOMETIMES JUST READING POEMS HELPS ME GET THROUGH THE DAY. I FIND IT MOST DIFFICULT WHEN I'M ALONE. I GROW STRONGER EACH DAY IT SEEMS YET WEAKER AS MEMORIES RESURFACE. IS IT WRONG TO FEEL SUCH SORROW?
Jackalou

Oh my...such unduly passion...such a talented poet...peaceful.
Patricia

A work of art! Haven't read anything so touching in a long time.
AS

Beautiful. I loved it. Truly.
john

it was very touching, really !
Marie

This poem really touched my heart. I've been going through a struggle with my valentine and your poem expresses how I feel. It's really great!
Maya

I love it I sent it to all my friends ^_~ it describes how i feel
poetry

i thought that this poem was very well thought out with words truly brought from the heart. it is touching yet gripping and easily understood.
Bree

I really liked this poem, I could really relate to it.
Dennica

i voted for this poem b/cuz its like it was written for and about me.i can sit here and read this poem and feel what the author is feeling..it touched me where no other peo mhas and it made me think about alot of things.i am grateful to have found this poem..keep up the great writing.u found a place in me .that i never knew i had lost.
Catherine

It was beautiful- how could I not vote for it?
Jezebel

what can i say? very beautiful and sweet..
Zara

Hey there I just wanted to say that this poem of yours is beautiful! I love it!
emerson

I can feel this poem.
Emily

This poem was very cleverly written and i love the message it gives.
Vanessa

I really enjoyed reading your work and look forward to more.
Faith's

No comment,really cool!

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