This poem is meant to show how great a hot and sizzling lovemaking session can be. It attempts to show a bit of the harsh and lustful side and the loving and sensuous side of the act at the same time.

It is purposely lacking certain subtleties to gain the effect of a heaving chest and the rhythm is written to that of energetic lovemaking.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Erotic Poems

The Coupling Of Passion And Erotic Lusts
A touch of skin soft and slippery,
With the hint of hint of sweat.
We fought our resistance beneath the cool sheets,
As the wind flowed from the window above us.
Eyes met briefly and begged for the chance,
To abandon all of our uncertainties.
You began your work on my lips,
Probing gently as if drawing sex,
From a deep well of longing and need.
Then heated tongues met in the midst,
Of hot and quickening breath.
And greedily we drank the wine of our lusts.
Then intoxicated with those spirits,
Our clothes found resting place on the floor.
Piece by piece,
Until there were no hiding places,
For the two glistening and wanting bodies.
Hunger revealed in this hot moment.
Then skin meshed with skin,
As the floor became the stage.
You moved atop of me easily,
And lowered yourself gently.
Kissing me as I was filled with you.
As a gasp broke the kiss,
Your hands stroked the stray strands,
Away from my forehead, then became entangled.
Our slow rhythm gave way,
To urgent and demanding thrusts of passion,
As I arched my body for your comfort,
And you threw me into ecstasy,
With the strength of your blows.
You left me screaming and soaked,
In oblivion again and again,
As you growled my name from the back of your throat,
And our bodies both demanded more,
Each giving to the other,
High on the fluids of foreign substance.
I grasped, then released you,
Grasped then released you,
In effort to relieve you of your control.
The taste of your skin between my lips,
Was like no other.
To hear your cry of mercy,
When my teeth met your warm skin,
Was more breathtaking than you knew.
Yet I still released the control to you.
As you wound your hands in my hair,
And pulled until the flesh on my neck was taut,
You moved with one final and breaking blow,
Forcing our way to the peaks of bliss,
Leaving our screams to echo on like battle cries.
I welcomed the weight of you to crush me,
As you collapsed on top of me,
Still hot and burning,
And I glowing like an ember,
Casting a welcome light,
Should you seek my gifts again.

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  • Dionne
    This is absolutely mind blowing. I love it. Now all of my body parts are awake and alert! Fantastic!
  • Rebekha
    Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You captured everything perfectly. I cant tell you anything else but it was beautiful.
  • Tarique
    Best ever
  • ravi
    Awesome!, truely Passinating, rekindles the memories of passionating romance.
  • shedevil
    That was absolutly wonderful, and inspiring, to feel love like that is such a wonderful thing, I know because I too have found such a love.
  • Tye
    I love it. so passionate. Great Job!
  • charlene
  • alicia
    you did a great job on this poem
  • Sarah
    Amazingly, you have captured the true meaning of love making with words. It was like a play, every word leading to the next in perfect harmony, without being voulgar. It is perfect, you should be really proud of your ability to voice such a moment as that with such elegance.
  • Faith
    Amazing, it's like you're right there. Loved it!
  • Donna
    This poem is beautiful and reminded of a very special encounter that I've come to share with a man. Thank you for sharing this.
  • Carrie
    i love this poem. i felt the passion and the hottness. it was wonderful. i even think i broke a sweat reading it.
  • Kimberly
    I would like to say that poem is so emotionally involved yet so passionate and touching with the ways it has been written. Fantastic!
  • Debbie
    I ws so touched by this that I had to send it to someone. It brought me to tears because it describes exactly the way we were with each other the first time. Beautiful!
  • bre
    i loved it it was intoxicating and exciting i couldnt wait to read the next line
  • jeancarlos
    its very full of passion
  • Don
    This poem had my girlfriend melting in my arms.
  • Jess
    I love this poem. Takes me back to some very good encounters. Keep up the great work!
  • Kimberly
    Absolutely fabulous! The writing was enough to let the imagination flow free, but not too vivid to be porn! Great!
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