#33 Things I Love About You

This girlfriend sparked such passion in me! I wanted to tell her all I ever felt before was trivial in comparison to her.

All the things I saw in her sparked off so much deep passion. I had to write her this to enable myself to get across to her the things I would be unable to say without being affected by the emotions.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems

Things I Love About You

by Anthony West

Your eyes
which first held me captivated
where I stood.

Your smile
to dazzle the sun
and warm every corner of my soul.

Your voice
like a sparkling mountain stream
which flows into my heart.

Your walk
and the way your gracefulness
takes my breath away.

Your hair
about which I dreamed
cascading into my face
as you leaned over me.

Your hands
whose caress I crave
to hold my face
in their tenderness.

Your arms
I long to have around my neck
as you pull me close
to your warmth.

Most of all
everything you are
changed the way I feel about my life.

I love you.

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ariel

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mudasir

The stance from the poem which i liked most and flew in my heart is: Your voice like a sparkling mountain stream which flows into my heart.
Nellie

i love this poem. it's kinda like i feel about my boyfriend when he's always right by side.
nikki

this is a good poem b/c it realates to me alot and it shows whom ever this poem is to that you love them alot and to see people love each other is cool has hell.
Tynisha

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nisha

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Jason

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sashika

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james

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Realitee

i think this poem is so good my boyfriends tell me the tells me things like that

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