#21 Could You Be The One For Me?

I wrote this about a person who came into my life after another person hurt me very much. It's about the wonder of someone who is willing to clean up another's mess, merely because they think you're worth it.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems

Could You Be The One For Me?

by LoveBug

Could you be the one for me?
Could you be my find?
Could it be, after all this time,
Fate is going to be kind?

Could you be the one for me,
The one to help me forget
The man that broke my heart, my soul
The man that haunts me yet?

You tell me that I'm beautiful
Something I've never heard
But the one still lives here in my mind
That couldn't spare a kind word

It's going to be hard to forget
And pick up the pieces he left
Could you be the one to teach
How to love again and forget?

Could you be the one to come
And mend my broken heart?
Are you willing to piece together
What another broke apart?

It won't be an easy job, you see
My road has been long and rough
And the heart that was once so soft
Is now shut, locked, and tough

But I can feel my heart open again
It's opening for you
Just come in, and love me back
That's all you have to do

I must ask you one small thing
Before we kiss and part
Please be nice and kind to me
I'm tired of broken hearts

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emily

i totally relate to this this is exactly wats happening to me right now i loved the poem
Once

This poem touched me and explained that feelings I haven't been able to explain in the past 2 years. Now I think my heart can handle one more love, I just want to be hurt again.
sendy

wow. this poem was awsome. i love it. it relates to me and my life. it was great. and its so true. good job. i like it alo! : )
Marcela

i like it alot because i could relate it to me because i dedicated this poem to my boyfriend cause i was still in love with my ex. From Marcela
michelle

i really like this poem. And the reason why is cuz its happaning to my best friend right noww
Treena

Very beautiful and intriguing poem!
Lauren

This poem is so beautiful and it just makes it so clear how hard it is to heal from a broken heart and be able to love nother, especially when that other person deserves every bit of your love.
Michelle

Nice poem i really liked it. its sorta how i feel i cant get over my lost love but yet i want to move on and let someone else love me but he'll always be there in my mind things he done how he done it. it will always be there.
Flame

I feel the same way. This poem explains so many of my feelings toward this girl I just got with. Before her I was very hurt overa major fight I got into and I wasnt really looking for a girl, but this poem shows me that I also have to keep my heart open and the right person will come. Whatever you do, never stop writing.
JAZMIN

this is soooo cute. this reminds me of my ex with the broken heart and my new boyf. i love who ever made this
arti

its very touching
jody

this poem was realy touching. it reminds me of what i use to ask myself. you the person who wrote this keepon writting your doing great! take care and dont let astupid boy ruin every thing for you keep your head up!
Tonnisha

Lovebug, I really can connect with your feeling through your poetry. you expressed how much love hurts and how hard it is to love again. I really like this poem and will look foward to reading more:)
Meron

i love it very much
shardae

i thought this poem was very good
Glyn

A great poem, mirrors a happening in my life, very touching
laura

this poem was touching and seems very personal to the author it touched me deeply from past experiences
Beaonca

It's great
Shay

I really like this poem i've recently found someone who is helping me out i lov this poem.
Dana

This poem is deep. Its simply stated and gets right to the point. It is awesome and spoke things I have only felt like saying to my new man.

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