I knew this girl all through high school. We were buds, chums, but then one day she caught my eye in a totally different way than ever before. I began to care far more than I ever did. That is where this poem came from. Sad thing is she never read it. I never got a chance to give it to her. We had a falling out just days before I was planning to give it to her. I always wondered what would have happened if I would have given her the poem sooner. I guess I will never know.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Love and Friendship Poems

Heart Thoughts
Sitting here remembering when
I saw the beauty rush out like a might wind
I never saw it before or bothered to notice
But now I see it and on it I am focused.
The gentleness of your voice
The way you make me feel
when I see your lovely smile.
The way you laugh and care for others
Even go beyond the extra mile.
I am focused on that
whether you believe me or not
My heart aches for you
And my stomach is in knots.
Now I had to declare,
The thoughts of my heart.
In hopes that you'd give me,
A place in your heart

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  • Peggy
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  • Tiffany
    I think you should still give her the poem. it might save what you had. What can you lose? Its worth the try! I know how hard it is. im going through it right now.
  • rachel
    wow this is a great poem and i once had the same feelings for a friend and the same thing happend to me if the feelings are still there then you should give it to her so she knows and you won't have the regret of her not knowing.
  • christy
    i can relate to what hes poem means. i liked it.
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