#65 His Paradise

This poem describes the true feelings of people who love each other so much that they are willing to give the ultimate gift. This poem is dedicated to my one true love, my muse, my soul mate.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Erotic Poems

His Paradise

by Amanda D Besserer

Bring me to his paradise
a feeling of within,
naked to his loving eyes
caressing me with sin
I long to feel his softest kiss
upon my dampened skin

Bring me to his paradise,
and let our bodies meet
the trickle of the rain outside
would shower us with heat,
I wish to be his fantasy
and make our love complete.

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JONNIE

I JUST WANTED HIM 2 KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE HIM
anthony

hello amanda you poem inspired me in a very strong way and i possibly would like to discuss your feelings that made you write such strong poetry i wish you the best of luck and hope you e-mail me.
Lettie

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Chrissy

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Monica

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sarina

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Shemeka

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Tiffany

Amanda was saying some of the things I have been feeling about my relationship and never knew how to say it! Thank you for saying them for me! Tiffany
corinne

Just the kind of poem I love to read. My exact words to my lover.
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Brooke

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#65 His Paradise

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