#9 My Heaven

This was written for man that has shown me how to receive and share, not just give. I can only try to describe how he makes me feel, I hope someone else can relate to this poem, everyone should be this close to heaven just once.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Erotic Poems

My Heaven

by Kamma Roberts

I look deep in your eyes.
I see there what I feel inside.
We share something between us,
Neither one of us can hide.

I feel your lips touch mine,
I loose all my control,
All it took was a look and a kiss,
To know you were part of my soul.

I see your hands on my skin,
I want and need you to do more,
The passionate look you give me,
Tells me heaven is in store.

I feel your need against my thigh,
I know you will fulfill every wish,.
We were made to fit together,
And all it took was a look and a kiss.

I look deep in your eyes,
And I see heaven there inside,
You make me feel so beautiful,
What I feel for you I cannot hide.

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annette

your poems brought tears to my eyes because it feel like we make up the same thing and keep up mthe good work and don't forget to be you all the times
tamara

When I read this poem, it made me think of my man. This is exactly how we feel for eachother. I really enjoyed it. Keep em' coming.
Shannon

I Love this I just sent it inside a card to my deployed Marine the love of my life!
Jacqueline

It was beautiful and amazing. Very Nice job
Mohamed

very very very Good Nice Poem ( Kamma Roberts )
sonyell

I loved this poem its just the words Ifeel like saying to my baby. Thanx!
Shannon

I loved this poem. I would like this author to write more poems like this one. I thought It was really powerful and touching.
Cathy

Your words totally describe how I feel for my husband of 17 years. He is now deployed to Germany so through your beautiful words I am able to express my love and feelings in ways I could never describe myself, thanks.
Jeannette

This is the best poem I have read so far. I have been a poet for over ten years and this is one of the few poems some else has wrote that truly touched me. GREAT JOB.
Jessica

This poem was very thoughtfull and some people could not understand her words unless they have found someone who they dream about and can not wait to see. This poem tuched me dear to my heart, it reminds me of my true love.
Mainul

I am feeling good after this poem reading. As I believe Simple with the best. Thats way This poem is really simpley but unexpression language express by the poet. And here is privew of dream and heavan. That a couples future and feelings. Thank you and thanks the poet. Have a nice day wishing by. Arif
paula

This is a amazing poem. Your emotions jump right off of the page. real life events are the best thing a poet can right about. This poem was very heartfelt and exstremly well written. It's wonderful you could find someone who made you feel all of those emotions. Your are an exstremly wonderful writter. Hope you continue your work.
christy

My boyfriend proposed to me last night infront of 200 people in a restaurant. I am still overjoyed and find it hard to express what i feel. This poem fits perfectly!thankyou
Naaz

I really like ur poems from the core of my heart. These poems work like a love bridges between me n my luv. Sometimes i feel that these poems are written only for me coz my every feeling towards my luv is expressed in it. so thanx alot for giving me such a precious gift by that i'll be able to express my emotions n feelings to my luv.
brian

i showed my gf this poem and were going threw a really tuff times right now and it touched her. thank you for sharing that piece with me. it ment alot to me
alysia

this reminds me so much of the love i am in right now. so sweet yet simple. a look and a kiss is all it really takes!
Phytreseia

THis is a great poem to show a man that his woman care and that he is always on her mind
T

Its touched me. the deepest chord of my soul
Ashley

i love this poem so much the first time i read it, it made me cry a little you did good writting this
amanda

this poem has got my vote all the way because it true. how people feel about there spouce and true love. i know when i read it it reminded me of how i feel about my love. though there are no words that truley tell i really feel.

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