#40 Forbidden

This is my first attempt at writing in 7 years. A very special girl, Tiffany, gave me this gift back. She is a friend (or is she more) and it is the typical situation of crossing that line, and who is hurt in the process. No one has ever invoked such emotion in me before and I just had to release through writing.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Love and Friendship Poems

Forbidden

by Todd Fulton

Forbidden pleasures
Who makes the rules
Unfound treasures
And beautiful jewels

Can that line be crossed
What could we truly be
And at what cost
Do you see what I see
I know there is more there
Waiting to be found
Can you feel how much I care
I feel like I'm being drowned
If you knew the amount of desire
That I feel for you
My burning fire
That wants one to become two

Forbidden pleasures
Who makes the rules
Unfound treasures
And beautiful jewels

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Todd

wow. this is ME! I randomly googled m name and this pops up 1st. Crazy. This was so incredibly long ago. I have so much more ive never submitted. Mayhaps I should.
Lupita

I read this poem many times but I really only had toread it once because thats all I needed to feel the way I feel. I loved this poem because it reminds me of well, me.
naz

what can I say. Beautiful, beautiful,beautiful. your words to me,I want to share,I want to say the same to him,but its impossible for me to tell him. {my friend} thank you for this beautiful poem!
carmen

What a beautiful poem!i love it!
Bonnie Kate

The poem really touched me, because at one point in my life I was in the same situation, and I am glad to know that I wasn't the only one. You're really talented!
C

Beautiful!
Deasy

i loved this peom because that is the way with me i love some one but is forbidden for me.
diana

Todd,just wanted to let you know that your poem was really beautiful. keep up the good writing.
Kimberley

I love this poem it is similar to feelings that i have had and i have always looked for a peoim that describes them as i could never find the right words. Thank you
T

Loved your poem. It is exactly what I am going through right now. It made me feel not so alone with the whole thing. Great Poem
MEMEME

This Poem is great. It has my vote cuz thats exactly how I feel for some one
s

wow is all i can say . it was like he knew exactly how i felt, brought tears to my eyes. beautiful!
Lindsey

God you poem is so much like me. See I am a teenage lesbian. I love a friend and I never told her and it been eating me up inside. I do not get to see her now becouse of her family. I always wounder what could we have been. I do not know if bugs you but this teenage lesbian loved it.
Lin

Our love is a 'forbidden' love! With your poem I was able to express my love to him in words I could never put on paper. My deep felt thanks and keep up the good work.
hillary

i like this poem because it makes me think about my boyfriend.
Maddy

I really love this poem. I had the saem experience once, and this poem beautifully expresses many of the emotions I have felt before.
Denise

This is a very sweet poem.
jessica

i really felt a connection it reminded me of what i am going through with my x boyfriend i really do want him but their i another side of me saying no i don't know but i do know that i like the poem
Marissa

This Poem Rocks!*!
ms.riddler

i am in love with this one guy. he is my everything and i dont noe wad id do wit out him and he does not seem to see that. he sees me as just a friend. my love for him is true, its no childs game. my love for him is an inferno. i noe that he is the one for me but maybe he doesnt see it that way. he noes my desire for him and he chooses to ignore them and it hurts like a knife striking you in the heart. i love your poem and i think that your beautiful writting will touch people around the world and theyll pour theyre heart out to you just like i did. i wanna become two and maybe so does he but not wit me it, hurts. but hey dats life!

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#40 Forbidden

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