#31 A Fairytale

I wrote this while being away from my love. I just closed my eyes and imagined us together across the miles. It seemed so real!

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Erotic Poems

A Fairytale

by Millette Addison

Dreamland awaits you,
Close your eyes,

Imagine you and I,
Close as breath,

Skin upon skin,
Lips touching,

For you taste of Raspberries,
sweetly irresistible,

The fragrance of you,
Takes my breath away,

I am burning inside,
A torch of fire,

Burning fuel of passion,
For you are my desire,

My heart beats with every breath,
You are my destiny,

Your eyes evade me,
deep, dark, mysterious,

I am your slave,
Your love has captured me,

Grab my body,
Pull me close,

Show me your love,
In ways I could only dream.

Wake me I must be dreaming,
This is a fairytale.

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Fran

Loved the poem. straight to the point and full of passion.
quinda

I love this poem because I could send this to my girl and she loves it. I like poems and I write them myself. I am trying to have a book on my own but its going to take me some time to finished.
Shaunte

Good poem Keep up the good work
vanessa

this is one of the sweetist most romantic poem i have ever read keep on with the writeing and send it to!
Krishna

A lovely poem. Simple but provoking.
c

very well done. I liked it very much.
Gina

Loved It !
shareena

I really loved the poem it was really realistic. it actually felt like the person was there. You can feel the heat and passion that you have for that person. keep on writing!.
Dhirender

wonderful expression of desire. Poet not only disclosed the hidden pangs but have made it clear what he expects from the beloved. REAL GREAT COMPOSITION.
sarah

i think this poem was very good
sharon

So simple and sweet digs deep into ones heart . keep the words coming loved it
lauren

i thing this poem reminds me of my love i have got with my boyfriend
Baby Gurl

This poem was very good. You know, I sometimes find myself daydreaming during school about the one I love. But the author of this poem really hit home. For what its worth, I loved this poem its the best one i've read thus far!
Javier

From one poet to another; this is a great one indeed. Not many can express my heart the way that your poem does here. Love is the greates gesture of all and you've put it so eloquently
Amber

I thought that poem was great because you really expressed your feelings and I think everybody should be like that.
katy

this poems i can so relate. and that is so good and meaningful. great job!
Tink

Iloove your poem so much I could just cry right about now. even though I am single that has touched me so much that i just reminds of me and how I felt toward my ex-boyfriend. Love your poem. Keep up the good work!
Darrell

This is a very lovely poem. It catches every phrase that I think about! Thanks,
VILMA

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vanessa

this poem is a great poem i really like it!

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#31 A Fairytale

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