#3 Hand In Hand

This is a poem simply about a perfect night. We've all dreamt of or felt that special feeling where everything in the world seems right, and there's no where else you want to be. This poem describes a night of perfect love.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems

Hand In Hand

by ShoeBowl

Laying underneath the stars,
On a warm silent night.
Your arms are wrapped around me,
And everything feels right.

You kiss me sweet and softly,
I feel your warm gentle touch,
You help me feel protected
Under the sweet night sky rush.

My world before me is perfect.
There's nowhere else I want to be,
Except laying underneath the stars
Hand in hand, you and me.

Just when everything is perfect,
And you seem so delicately sweet,
A rush of wind comes past me
As I'm swept beneath my feet.

Nothing could be more right,
There's nowhere else I want to be.
Let's take a walk my only love,
Hand in hand, you and me.

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emily

i thought this was increadable i could really relate to it
shakira

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brittni

this is me and my bf jonathan i mean i love him so much i theres nothin i love more then for him to hold me under the stars
ana

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kayla

i think that this is a really good poem b/c if u really do love someone then they should know how much u feel about them and how much u love and dont want 2 lose them for the rest of ur life.
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Elisha

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Elisha

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ashley

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Dori

awww, that reminds me of me and my boi friend. we were once hand in hand just like you discribed in you toching poem. i cant wait to see morre of them on here! over all id personaly like to say very good.
Reyna

I love this poem! It makes me think of my boyfriend Daniel. We live in different states, but this poem comforts me with the thought of the day we will finally be together!
anthony

this is a very very touching poem. I am using it with a picture of me and her. I think she will really like it

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