#64 Evermore

Proposals are a difficult thing to do. You have the joy of acceptance and the fear of rejection that seem to occupy your mind and fill it with doubts and hope. This is how I would propose to my love.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems

Evermore

by desperado

wait
just a moment in time
freeze
the movie in your mind
put aside the whispers
filter out the doubt
look into my eyes
ignore the muted shout
don't you wish to melt away?
into the golden sun?
don't you want to whisk away,
and have a little fun?
aren't you sick of pain
and fear inside your life
all I know inside of me
I want you as my wife
I'm tired of the race
I'm ill with blank disgrace
I want the world to leave us be
I want the world to set us free
take my hand and smile
you can let those tears fall
I'll make it worth your while
and always give it all
through good and bad I'll love you
through thick and thin I'll stay
from the blinking of the sun
to the fading of the day
and in the night I'll hold you
until the sun appears
I'll take away your sorrows,
and cast away your fears
so let our love combine us
and let our spirits soar
just take my hand within you
and I'll love you evermore

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Roek

Unbelievable! Best poem I've ever read. You have a gift for words my man. From start to finish you have a spell over the reader. Just amazing! And the word "evermore" at the end, wow. Haha, good luck with your proposal, but I doubt you'll need it.
Sarah

this is a very beuatiful poem a very well written poem. i like it.
Wonder

this poem is so beautiful. and whoever you wrote it for is one lucky girl. great job! Wonder*
Shauntell

I cried when I read it. So beautiful!
Heather

This poem best describes me and my boyfriend. some people don't want us together. we hav similar backgrounds but our familys are different.
Thsering

It straight touched my heart!One of the best poem I've ever read. Gud work!
Shawn

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mark

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Nakia

This poem talks about my reltationship with my Baby and I am sittinh here reading this poem about to cry cuz Its sooooo ture I mean the words are soooooo ture and ever worte this poem Ive give them an award for this beautyful pretty poem and this poem touch my heart just by the words that was said. (Thank You) for this beautyful poem Nakia Moore
Jennifer

I loved it. it was wonderful!
stephanie

i loved it i like some what sad thingz cuz my life s alwayz sad i dont think im ever really happy so ya it was really sweet
hisham

this is a very good poem,composed by a very talented poet. very inspiring which has a powerfull way of expressing true love and emmotions to the woman who he loves and wants to be his wife. it is a beautiful way of expressing love .
Kristen

If any man proposed to me with this poem, I'd melt into his arms right then and there. I love it!
heidi

i thought this wasgreat
Shenoah

i vote that this pome is a 4 out of 5 becuzse it tells that the person wants to the moment for ever. we are doing a poem notebook and this is one of the selected few i am going to put in there. Thank you for your time.
Tierra

If all people were in touch with their feelings the way you are, there would there would be no need for lies.
TK

Very good poem- my dream for a man to say that to me!
Miriam

I love this poem it was very touching. It expressed so much and it also says everything that you can think of
MARY

I LOVE THIS POEM YOU ARE A GOOD POET
Tracy

This poem was great i plan to propose to the love of my life in two months and i cant wait and i hope that when i am doing it all of this is running through my head

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#64 Evermore

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