We all have days where we feel we can't go on anymore, as if we're all alone. In this poem, I guess I was trying to depict the mind of those who come closer to not going on than most. The people who sometimes choose a permanent solution to a temporary problem. A reflection in the mind of those who contemplate the end...suicide.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Depression and Suicide Poems

Remembrance
She remembers it all,
All the people who had said
They cared, but did they really?

She remembers it all,
The sound of laughter and
How happy she'd been, but was she really?

She remembers it all,
His arms around her and
He said "I love you," but did he really?

She remembers it all,
The pain she'd felt when he left,
How her heart ached, but was it really?

She remembers it all,
The feeling of being so alone,
The feeling no one cared, but did they really?

But now they'll remember her,
Staring at the knife in her hand
How easy to slit her wrists, but will she really?

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  • Fallen Angel
    touching and deep i like it and it says what i want to say but cant put in to words
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  • crystal
    i know how it feel to belike that all the time. because when my dad died.
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  • Jay
    I have been thinking about suicide all day but reading poems like these lets me know that im not alone in my pain. It has helped me so much. Thanks. I will think twice about my solution to end my pain
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  • Deep
    You are a great writer. My real name is Shanik. But I express the "Deep Truth," in my poems.
  • Taylor
    i really liked it i am so in to poetary it is how i let out all of my fellings it was verry good!
  • LCO
    this makes you think, is it really the solucion?. its not. your poem was great
  • Amy
    this peom reminds me of one of my friends
  • charlotte
    i loved it. it made me think of me and how my life is im married and things r not to good he left after 3 years at times i just wish i was never here and maybe things would be better for him even though he dont know it hes still my life
  • stephanie
    I think that this is a really touching poem and can relate to it. I think u did a really good job on writing this poem and I hope to see more of them!
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    This was awsome . . i put it in my profile so more people can read it
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    I this is this is one of the best poems ive ever read. it says everything.
  • lisa
    left me speechless! lol not an easy thing 2 do! amazin! wish i cud write like tht! xx
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