#88 Remembrance

We all have days where we feel we can't go on anymore, as if we're all alone. In this poem, I guess I was trying to depict the mind of those who come closer to not going on than most. The people who sometimes choose a permanent solution to a temporary problem. A reflection in the mind of those who contemplate the end...suicide.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Depression and Suicide Poems

Remembrance

by Brier

She remembers it all,
All the people who had said
They cared, but did they really?

She remembers it all,
The sound of laughter and
How happy she'd been, but was she really?

She remembers it all,
His arms around her and
He said "I love you," but did he really?

She remembers it all,
The pain she'd felt when he left,
How her heart ached, but was it really?

She remembers it all,
The feeling of being so alone,
The feeling no one cared, but did they really?

But now they'll remember her,
Staring at the knife in her hand
How easy to slit her wrists, but will she really?

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sade

THIS POEM IS ONE OF THE BEST I THAT READ SO FAR N A SCALE 10 BEING THE HIGHEST IT WOULD BE A 10. INFACT I AM GOING TO WRITE A POEM LIKE YOURS YOU INSPIRE ME GREAT
crystal

i know how it feel to belike that all the time. because when my dad died.
shannon

this is a very good poem i love how its been written about someone else it just makes it more appealing to me but i love it!
Jay

I have been thinking about suicide all day but reading poems like these lets me know that im not alone in my pain. It has helped me so much. Thanks. I will think twice about my solution to end my pain
chicana

WOW! i have to admit You are a really good writter. i now exactly how that girl felt. It makes you wonder if someone DOES care.
ilona

ey gud poem n im sry u felt pain i hope u feel betta
Deep

You are a great writer. My real name is Shanik. But I express the "Deep Truth," in my poems.
Taylor

i really liked it i am so in to poetary it is how i let out all of my fellings it was verry good!
LCO

this makes you think, is it really the solucion?. its not. your poem was great
Amy

this peom reminds me of one of my friends
charlotte

i loved it. it made me think of me and how my life is im married and things r not to good he left after 3 years at times i just wish i was never here and maybe things would be better for him even though he dont know it hes still my life
stephanie

I think that this is a really touching poem and can relate to it. I think u did a really good job on writing this poem and I hope to see more of them!
Tj

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Leesa

I this is this is one of the best poems ive ever read. it says everything.
lisa

left me speechless! lol not an easy thing 2 do! amazin! wish i cud write like tht! xx
Stacey

This poem reminds me of how my life is right now. I think is the best one i seen all day.
helen

this poem is brilliant. it has touched me so much, i know how she feels, i've been there.
Erica

i like your poem alot.
Jamie

This poem really touched me. because there is always that second were you think will i or won't and that second determines the rest of your life.
Chelsea

This poem is one of the best ones that i've read so i will really like to see you win for this poem because it really tells the truth.

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#88 Remembrance

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