#32 Wave Of Mutilation

This poem is about how I feel and what I do about it. It's not a suggestion but I'm open to them.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Depression and Suicide Poems

Wave Of Mutilation

by Bec

I press my forehead on the window
And through it watch children
Playing on the lawn

Desolation pulses through my veins
And my futile fingers reach out for guidance
I savor the blade, sinking deeper than blue

I can taste tranquility for a wavering instance
The anger flows down my arm as the bitter black blood
Burns off my fingertips

Death swims before me in hazy illusion
Images of eternity skip shamelessly through my mind
Pain surrounds, I am resolved to be - still

I run my hand on the tear stained window
And distorted through it
Watch children playing on the lawn.

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Ani

The images of your words are beautiful. keep writing. one day you might find an angel. **smiles and disappears**
spencer

i know how you feel love the way you wroke it though
paige

thank you so much for wrighting this poem this is how i feel every day and its good to no that im not the lonly one who feels this way thanh you keep up the great work
claire maree

I really enjoyed this poem. It was, in my opinion, well written and well received. I hope to see more of your poems in the future (which means you aren't dead). Caboodles of thanks for the poem, from Me!
Heavenly Demonic

i love your poem because i can relate to it. i used to cut myself but i do not anymore because i have learnt that i have friends who care about me and that life is worth living. your poem means alot to me. thank you so much.
Rebeca

that is exactly how i feel and its good to know that people are feeling the same pain im feeling and it lets you know that your not the only one i really liked it
lauren

it was so good i could pic er it in my head i wha t to do that sometmes to my slef well nothing els to say bi bi
Mirela

Wow. Your poem gave me chills as I thought that there are people feeling this way and doing what your poem described. You have skills!
Amber

I thinks its really really good and yeah its just really good and really really true.
mk

Beautiful absolutly entrancing. I do the same thing as i look for some way to get through every day and not die. i feel the pain also. just know i'm with you.
camara

i liked your poem. it was really great. It was written greatley. good job and keep writing.
Kristine

I love this poem, It's exactly how i feel sometimes. I relate to it.
Kristy

This poem touched my very soul because I can understand it completely. I'm glad that I can relate to others who have had similar experiences but if I had the choice and so did others I'm sure they would have preferred to not go through that type of agony. Thankyou for writing this poem and sending it to this website so that others can see it and know that they aren't alone.
sharon

I love this poem cuz it relates to me alot . it's good to know im not alone. It's really deep and touching. i can feel your pain.
Gemmae

young children seen playin thru a window while slicin ur wrists is exactly wat self mutilators feel like inside they feel like they will always be the child or person locked away and will never be able to play again. this poem shows exactly who i was and who many other ppl were and are.
shani

your poem is deep. i love it. it remindsme a lot of myself. cool.
Danielle

This is one of the most Beutiful poems I have ever read. Reminds me of mine at times. Well done hun x Danielle 15
Nikki

I was really touched by this poem. It just sord of jumped out to me. I am a cutter and I relate so much to the things Bec said in the poem. You are gifted as a writer, and also as you do, I write. Thank you for posting that!
keky

that poem was deep. it was like what i had done to me. u can see me scars and know
beckie

hey. this poem really touched mem when i read it i started to cry. it really hit me, if you kow what i mean . well odne on rtin thid poem . i hpe you will rite somemore ok lots of love becci

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#32 Wave Of Mutilation

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