#25 Last

This is a poem I wrote to scare my self from committing suicide. It has helped me through hard times. When ever I feel that the world is to scary to live in, I read this to myself.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Depression and Suicide Poems

Last

by Azazel

For everything there must come a last.

A last minute, a last hour, a last month, day, or year.

A last drink, a last coke, a last tequila, scotch, or beer.

A last love, a last heart, a last kiss, hug, or rage...

Or even the last words written on a page.

But the worst last thing is your last breath
because what is to follow will surely be your death.

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Alicia

i love ur poem it only the truth i have tread committing sucide but ur poem has just scard me from committing suicide so i know how u feel
emily

i found it very unique, i was very impressed
Julia

OMG! Just a few days ago I wanted to commit suicide. then I remembered this poem, and I got scared. I figured that wasn't going to be the way I die. I cant say I won't commit suicide, but I'm still here now. Thank you so much.
Eryn

This is a really good poem and has helped me, its pinned up on my wall
Sonia

Excellent-makes you remember how precious life is
kaylee

i love your poem i would like to write poems but i just can make them sound right but i love yours. if i could write my own it would be abody all the boys and gurl that brake eack others heart. and all well i just like u 2 know i loved youes.
karla

wow, i have never thought about that perspective of the word/meaning of LAST very nice i enjoyed it
coral

BEAUTIFUL. VERY TRUE INDEED
Delcee

ouch. Beeing a multiple suicide attempter, i must say, thank you for writting this ! it really hit me. god bless you !
sophie

i feel like comitting suicide everyday of my life, it can really hurt if you feel like i do. thankyou for writing this because it can really open my eyes, i always try to stop myself, i find a good way of keeping your mind off cutting is to find something easy and quiet to do that will destract you, keep up the amazing work!
sheree

i love ur poem its nice and kool
lauren

this is a truely amazing piece of work! so clever! im lost for words with how amazing that is
monica

i loved thepoem it was a bit sad but realy good it makes you think of the more important things love mon
HEATHER

very clever and sums it all up. many a time i have felt like that
kelly

omg this poem is sooooo ace i loved it.
ilona

ey. gud poem im sry bout how u feel i no it must be hard and i hope u get threw it . and dun have to hurt no more
jazzy

i like your description i might use this once
Brandie

I thought that this poem had a very good understanding and it was very interesting to read.
kalyn

wow. it is very nice. i just wish i could write poems
sydney

your words are so true, those who must read it have probably realized how deep your words are, like a knife cutting through pure flesh, it struck my heart, it kept me alive i must thank you.

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