#94 Something

It is descriptive of the way I feel every day when I wake up.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Depression and Suicide Poems

Something

by Raquel

And so it came to be
this isolation that I am
I can only look to me
to find the way it all began -
this confusion, constant
hunger for something more than this
I strive to find this being
that I envision, yet seem to miss.
Could it be that I am empty-
or maybe a little lost?
Could it be that I am lonely,
or seek happiness at any cost?
This never-ending Something
that I am living deep inside,
depicts the illusion of myself
and all I have to hide.

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margarita

i loved ur poem i know wat u must be going through its exactly how i feel
Joao

Sometimes in life we have a moment of reflexion. this poem says it all.
tyrenza

This poem is great you identify all the feelings many youth like myself feel but are afraid to express. KEEP WRITING YOU HAVE A GIFT!
krista

hey that is a good poem i kno how u feel
Carol

I love this poems for the same reason it was wrote
larissa

this should get 10 votes cause it is goooooooooooooooooooood
Leticia

This poems is very deep and shows clearly what one feels inside in true life. Most people can relate and this poems states the reality or the real world.
Rio

This poem was great and I think it captured one of the biggest forms of depression. Personally, the kind I have been dealing with for 2 and a half years.
Charles

This was a great poem and it really touched me. I have felt like the poem for so many years.
ilona

ey gud poem n i hope u get rid of dat pain u wake up to everyday . be strong
Keri

This poem describes exactly how I feel every minute of every day. I have always had a hard time expressing how I feel in words and in writing, but this. is it. You did a great job of writing this poem. Thanks
Hippie

Iloved the poem, it was deep and I think it really relates to everyone at one point or another. I now it really touched me. And I also want to say Rest in Peace Alyssa, I will miss you, and so will everyone who's ever met you
Chris

Thank you for this poem. It touched my heart and soul. It seems as if you wote it for me.
crystal

this poem really touched me. it reminds me so much of myself, i do hide, and yet i dont know how to not
Kevin

I relate to this poem a lot cause a lot of times I feel empty and Im searching to make me feel complete.
Brooke

This poem touched me. (I suffer from depserion. ) It made me feel like there are other people out there that feel the same way that I do. Keep on writing.
Raquel

the only thing i can say its deep and i kno the feeling
Amber

That is a good poem
julia

i like it. it say a lot. get same if u dont care. it would be niss maybe u could stay mailing people things like this if they r in to it like me. just and idel thats all well bye
Lorraine

Well, this is a really good poem. I like it. :-) Keep up the good work!~!

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