#61 Crazy

Crazy is a poem about life - well, not life in general, but specifically my life. The opinions expressed here are not necessarily those of Steffanie in her right mind, and all of my opinions and comments become null and void after 3 hours, excluding Daylight Savings Time, Goodnight.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Depression and Suicide Poems

Crazy

by Sweetsteffanie

Trapped inside my own head
With nothing but my own fevered dreams to comfort me.
I know the pain of the madman;
He lives inside of me.
I've felt the strength of demons
And the weakness of self- preservation.
And hope. Hope.
Hey, parents, do you know where your kids are tonight?
Are they locked away inside of themselves?
Are their minds slipping away?
Mama hen, mama hen . . .
The fox has taken your baby again.
Precious minds are a shame to waste
Memories are forgotten in haste.
I am losing all that is me . . .
Yet gaining something entirely different.
Something that acts like an animal
And speaks like God.
Comforts me like a best friend
And loves me like its child.
I am its child.
An innocent brat, ready for its teachings.
Ready to do what is told to me.
Believing all that is said to me.
Taking in all.
And living off of my fevered dreams.

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britt

i like it alot, it reminds me of how i feel most of the time. i even printed it out to show to a couple of my friends who feel the same way. :)
lele

it was good
cindy

you so rok
Mark

This poem is an honest look at watching ouselves sell-out and feeling powerless to do anything about it. I hope you get you back soom
Nicci

Intense!
rayshawn

i loved the poem i thought it was awesome good luck with your career
Paul

Ex. act. ly!
Alexandra

I can totally relate to this poem, 2 thumbs up hun!
A.J.

There is alot of emoition in this poem good job.
ilona

ey dat was a gud poem n im sry u feel dis way i hope u feel beter .
megan

i love this poem it really touched me keep up the great writing!
diamond

i loved it your mind is almost as mines
Tahli

This poet really created some fantastic imagery! I felt like I knew what they were going through even though I have never experienced anything like that. I am a poet myself and have personally been touched and moved by the strong, empowering words and imagery that was created in my head while reading it. Thankyou!
kelly

damn that is so creepy. i love it. its almost like a pink floyd song or something. peace, kelly
Tami

TOTALLY KILLER POEM!
David

This poem was incredible, it reflected exactly how my life is turning out. For the past couple years I've felt myself slipping away and been all too aware of the monster inside. I hope we both can beat it.
Jessica

Hi, i really like ur poem. i really dont know what to say. i think i am crazy. so does everyone else.
linda

I thought the poem was absoulutely brilliant,it defines what it needs to. keep up the good work. excellent
SongHero

i can really relate to this poem. is't something i go through and i like to read poems to make myself feel better. and this poem does that.
Taylor

Your poem is REALLY great! I have been suicidal and get angry and lost all the time. I feel no one cares, only because no one knows. I am still waitin for someone to figure out who the real me is.

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#61 Crazy

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