#96 Waiting

My poem was written about how I feel that I am stuck in a relationship without love and how bad I want to feel that love for him and to receive it from him.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems

Waiting

by Dawn D.

Wanting,
lusting,
to be held,
to be loved,
to feel warmth,
to feel your beating heart.
Wanting to be sheltered from the cold,
heartless winds.
Falling into invisible arms;
into an abyss of love.
Wishing,
hoping,
that my desires will be filled;
my desires of loving warmth.
Wanting to be held,
comforted,
loved.
Dreaming of passionate embraces,
of tender kisses,
loving words,
romantic nights.
Waiting for undying love.

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autumn

i've been through in this kind of love till now i do. the saddest part is to reach out for the love but it wont be happenend. At least this poem shows this kind of love do exist.
Andrea

Hey. I relli like this pome it made my eyes fill up with tears. Its a really toching pome to me.
sonia

I love your poem, it was written for my relationship. keep Writing those wonderful.
maria

so many hearts left to be broken to bad it has to happen to everyone some more painfull than others but every tear every lonely night makes you appreciate love even more when you find it
caffeine

it says all that is in my heart. feelings and emotions i cannot put a name to about a man i am so unconditionally in love with and yet mos of the time, seemingly so unmoved by it. and so i suppose i must say thank you, for having given me a glimpse of what is going on inside of me.
Bobbie

This poem touched me b/c it's what I'm going through right now. The man I was going to marry is questioning his feelings and all I want is for him to hold me again like he did before. Thank you for writing this.
Isabelle

I think this poem was really good and I also think that alot of people can relate to the feelings your trying to portray. I cn really understand how you feel because I to was once in a relationship where I felt the same exaxt way but now I'm in a relationship where I feel that I am conditionally loved and I think that you will also find someone who will make you feel loved.
Love

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! I KNOW HOW THAT IS! I AS PUSHED INTO ANOTHER MANS ARMS! KEEP DOING WHAT YOU ARE DOING
tracey

it moved me because this is how i feel about my boyfriend and i. he away for 5 months and already he is changing and were drifting apart. this poem explained how i am feeling
bill

i know what you mean i was just married now feel the same way
Stacey

I've been waiting for six months for my love to come back and guess what one day he did so now I dont have to wait,but three weeks later he left my love in he's hands. But I'm still waiting for him to come back
jess

I realy didnt no what to expect when i read your poem, but i truley did enjoy it it reflects how i have felt the last four months. those things you wrote about was all ive wanted and now its too late. you made a very beautiful poem and it reflects on what most people need so keep up the good work
briana

i am waiting for someone. and just dreaming and hoping that it will happen. im waiting still
james

i like this poem coz i can rel8 on it. im waiting 4 da one i truly love.
misty

I'm wating too.
Scott

This poem really got to me, my gf just left for spain and i wont see her for a while and i kno exactly how you feel
Rochelle

I can totally relate to this poem. I was searching through these poems to find out how I can express how I feel. this hit the spot.
Maggie

I like this a lot
anna

i think this poem is the best i loved it
Dennis

I love this poem. This what how i feel. Ive loved my X-girlfriend. But we are not together anymore. Well back to the poem. It touched me thank you thats how i feel.

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#96 Waiting

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