#40 Losing Yet Again

Love in my life is like wind, it blows my heart and soul around. You win some and you lose some. I wrote this poem when I was only 16, after I broke up with my first true love - who I will always love in my own funny way.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Lost Love Poems

Losing Yet Again

by Katie

Love in my life is like sand,
I give it care and attention,
Then a strong gust of wind sifts it through my hand,
I lose yet again

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azu

This is so me. So much like what I'm feeling right now. Sometimes, I think of why it's too hard for me to find the love of my life, why do I always have to end up broken-hearted. why do I have to endure this pain.
Kesha E.

I loved your poem it was very good it I go through the same thing getting and losing everytime
Missy

as confusing as the poem is , i understand it & love it !
lubna

although it is very short,but it has deep meanings. i can feel it quite well
talia

. I'm sorry
Jessica

OH IM LOVING THIS POEM. THIS REMINDS ME OF MY RELATIONSHIPS.
janelle

so short but yet the poem is very true.
requel

Wow. Amazing. I love it. It's perfect. I can invision it and it is so true.
THELICIA

The story of my life!
Jordann

i think this is an awesome poem. its so short yet its screaming out many different words. GREAT JOB on expressing your feelings through yet so little words. i think its very touching and its worth a thousand meanings. its wonderful
lauren

this was a wonderful poem. it describes just how i feel. at my graduation i saw a guy that i havent seen in 5 years and yet, i talked to him for about 10 minutes and then he left again. i long to see him again, i cant get him off my mind and this poem says it all, once i love a guy, he's gone in a split second.
jc

nice poem. one of the best 4 me
kelly

i really like this pome it is so me.
schy

even though it was short it was very very meangingful, at least to me. great job!
Kristen

I like it. It is right to the point!
Prakruti

Exactly my feelings right now.
CECILIA

i thought the poem was very good, it tells all lot about how love relly is,all though it was short i enjoyed it very muck and i will share it with my friends.
sillysilla

i love it it shourt and to the point iv been there a lot
Lydz

I thought this poem was awesome! It's short but each word is so deatiled it's like it has 1000 words! And i can definatly can see where you are coming from with the whole sand thing :)
DJ

Awsome analegy with the sand. Cuz really, thats how it felt like. She was there, so perfect then all of a sudden lost and i could never bring it back.

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#40 Losing Yet Again

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