#43 Nobody

This poem deals with the feelings of an individual who has broken up with his significant other. It is something that a majority of people feel after losing the one you love. At least, this is how I felt at the time. Breaking up is something that takes time to get over for some people.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Lost Love Poems

Nobody

by Maze54

It's gone
What's gone? My mind?
Soul? No, I'm fine
Not really
Deep inside, something is missing
The love and tender kissing
She walked out herself
Now all I do is talk to myself
in the mirror, with my reflection
My heart is dead
Soon it will make a resurrection
Once the wounds heal
And I'm loved for real
A type of love I can feel
But nobody loves me
Nobody cares
Nobody loves me
That nobody is me
I can't love myself because no one does
I'm all alone and no longer what I once was
But the only thing that keeps me alive
Is knowing that the next day, it might all change
For the best
And that "nobody" becomes somebody

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JULIE

i love this poem i know exactly how they feel i was in 12 year relationship and its been 4 months since the break up.
mika

very beautiful poem. i really like it. can i put your poem in my website. because like you i'm also nobody and hoping that someday it will chenge.
jennifer

lovely poem . i really feel where you are coming from.
Liz

This poem is really good. I felt like this when i lost the person i loved. Now he's gettin married to a woman he doesn't even love.
Megan

I can relate alot to this poem. I used to feel like that alot but i got help. If you really want things to get better you have to speak up. No matter how hard it is.
magic baby

this poem touched me so much, i am that person in that poem because i feel that everyday and it sucks, i don't know when i will find a gurl that will actually love me and stay true to me and never leave me will that ever happen?
Lasheika

i can understamd what your poem is saying and i like it so keep writing them and you will always have somebody to read them
kevin

you poem was deep reminds me of alot
alen

THIS POEM EXPLAINS MY LIFE. I LOVE IT
Destiny

LOVE THIS ONE!
tiffany

this is how i feel right now. your poem explained it better than anything ive tried to write. keep up the good writing! :) much love tiffany
nas

that was such a nice poet. please keep it alive. thanx Nas. XxX
Dalia

I LOVED YOUR POEM , ITS JUST GREAT,ITS THE FIRST POEM THAT EVER TOUCHED ME.
LUPE

THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL INSIDE OF ME CAUSE THE ONE WHO I LOVED & CARED FOR WITH ALL MY HEART AND BEYOND DECIDED TO GIVE UP IN OUR RELATIONSHIP OF 7 YRS & NOW IT'S BEEN 3 MONTHS AND I STILL FEEL EMPTY EVEN THOUGH THE REST OF THE PEOPLE AROUND ME THINK THAT IM ACTUALLY HAPPY AND GETTING OVER HIM. IS SAD HOW THERE ARE PEOPLE WHO END UP HURTING THE ONES THAT JUST WANTED TO LOVE THEM FOREVER.
shawnee

Man that was fantanstic ur r a good poem writer i know exzackly wat ur going through cuz iam going through the same thing just in a girls shoes! please write me back
Lashunda

i love the poem it really gives me alot of thinking about my own self maybe i'll write poem about this topic to then.
maria

omg this poem touched my heart i know exactly how you feel cause my boyfriend broke my heart and shredded it to peices and now i dont know who to trust and i dont think i can but your poem lifted up my mood.
BRITTANY

THIS POEM I HAVE TO SAY JUST DREW ME TO THINKING WOW CAUSE I NEVER READ ANYTHING THATS REALLY MADE ME HAVE THIS REACTION THIS POEM I HAVE TO SAY THIS IS EXCELLENT IT ROCKS KEEP ON WRITTING AND ILL READ MORE
Maze54

Thank you all for the comments.
cutie

this poem touched my heart and soul because sometimes i feel nobody cares

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#43 Nobody

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