#6 Alone

This poem describes the love/hate paradox I have going with my ex-girlfriend. She was, in more than once sense, my essence and my poison. If there ever existed something so perfectly tailored to fit everything I ever needed, she was it.

But as fate has it and is illustrated in the poem, it wasn't to be.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Lost Love Poems

Alone

by Moondust

Purity once had a name,
And beauty once had a face.
Life once had a meaning,
And once I was safe.
Once there was freedom,
And once I could laugh.
Happiness once was alive,
And once I had another half.
Once I shared her love,
Once I was by her side,
Once I felt I fitted,
So quickly that died.
Her grace so great,
Her beauty so vast,
All I ever wanted,
Was for it to last.
Fate maybe had another plan,
Or maybe she had another love,
But it all fell apart,
The hand too big for the glove.
Now it's all died away,
Happiness, joy, love; all memories.
Now I walk alone in this dark, dark world,
With no light to guide my way.

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Mitch

I FEEL THE SAME WAY. PAIN. AND PAIN. CANT SLEEP AT NIGHT. SHES ON MY MIND. EVERY NIGHT DAY MIN, SEC MY THOUGHTS BEGANS WITH HER. NOW SHE IS GONE. ALL SHE LEFT ME WITH A PAIN. VERY NICE POEM.
silentstar

I almost cry with this poem! Im so touch!
Johanna

It really touched me:) x
marisa

I love your poem it's real deep and not most gys would admit they feel that way when a girl hurts them RIGHT ON!
David

This poem is excellent. It says alot of stuff that i'm going through. This is poem is a great poem.
Shayna

i would say that this poem is pretty good i don't having anymore judgement aganist the poem.
Hannah

this is soooooooo sad i think im going to cry cool poem you should be like a poet or sumthin
kennjane

the poems you have written are very touching. i can really relate. i can remember what did my ex boyfriend did to me. but its okey. at least,now i realize that i better loved than not knowing how to loved. its a great poem
Elizabeth

My boyfriend and I lost touch a while ago after he moved to a different school. I understood why he left, it wasn't his fault. But we lived in a small town and did everything together. So after he left I had nowhee to go. It seemed like memories of us were painted all over town and I just couldn't get away. He was everywhere because we had been everywhere I just couldn't get happy because I felt like I didn't deserve it that was an us thing I was only ever happy with him. After he left I realized (after a while) that any relationship where u NEED to be with them is unhealthy. I'm a lot better now, but befor I got better this is exactly how I felt it was awful.
tammy

this poem really touch me. i understand how u feel. i feel alone when i loose da one i luv. he mean a lot to me. thanks,and hope to see more.
aisha

it was just really sad but hopfully once again life will have meaning. life goes on
Brenda

Nice Poem. Keep It Up
Anna

I really liked your poem. It was really similar to my situation. But life goes on so you should move on too. Great poem!
courtney

this poem is awesome. i feel the same way!
hayley

your poem is really good i loved it
Kayelona

i like this poem because i am now single . i loved ththe guy i was with dearly and he prewtends he don't care he talks to girls in front of me like my feelings don't matter but i wilkl always love him no matter what.
Stephanie

This is a great poem is really grab my attention becuase i been really hurt from a guy. well keep up the good work don't give up easily be strong and focus to make another poems like alone.
Nakita

hey i saw yo poem and i loved it i truly did! Nikki
Rachel

you know i lost a true love. he was everything to me. and when he comitted suicide i wanyed to do the same. i felt lost and alone. but in the end i pulled throuhg. don't ever think you are all alone becase everyone is loved.
Angela

Let me say something. wow. and Its unfortunate that I can say i am going through the EXACT same thing right now. excelent work. great figurative language. nicely put. 6 kudos!

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#6 Alone

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