#85 Dance Of Terror

I wrote this poem late one night. I was in a very strange mood. I had not been getting much sleep. mostly due to insomnia, and was a bit sad about lost love. And why I had moved so far away from home.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems

Dance Of Terror

by Justbleu

Window panes come crashing down
Amidst the tears and pain
Vanishing hopes are gone and flew away
Up above through twilight
Shadows cast across the floor
Reflections of the past
Trembling thoughts of one
Dwelling deep within the soul
A mystical sense of reality
Captured by the craze
All in bewilderment
Of the shock in the wave
Creatures of the dimness
Chattering amongst the green
Everything slows in stillness
What is this we see?

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Lana

I though that it really jumped out at people and made them think about what the words mean't. lovely poem. enjoyed it heaps
sara

i liked it. it mad eme think of my long lost love who left to the army the other night and has no idea i love him
ashleigh

i like the poem, its very touching to me at least.
mmm

The poem was really sad and it got me thinking. what would we see?
Vicky

I love it! It is a very good poem. Write more.
devika

i really liked this poem of lost love . i am a seperated woman , just got seperated from my partner , and when i read this poem , i felt the same ,i am badly hurt and have gone through the same pain of lost love. which we never get back.
kim

good poem really makes you think!
michael

i like you poems awsome
skyla

this is a wonderful poem and i love it you got some true talent so keep on writing your work would get my vote anyday so next time send me oyur work and ill e mail you about it ~skyla~
Tammy

I understand the authors feelings I have been there. It's like you start to dance and it's all so nice then the dance takes on a life of it;s own. One you can't control. You get lost in it.
Starlynn

Well If The Poet Is Talking About 9/11 Then It Really Touched Me And If That Isnt What They Were Talking About Thats What It Made Me Think About. It May Touch Some More Than Others Like It May Effect Me More Than Others Because I Lost Someone (My Uncle) That Day And That Day Was My Birthday. I Know That I Am Not The Only One But I Am One Of The Few.
Lizzy

This help me so much by I making it into a song and letting my felings out. I thank God for you. Lizzy
michele

I thought this one, it was, it was interesting, it describes alot of peoples life. the memoris, the sad times, the rough times, and the sad tears weve all cryed, and never knew we really could tear out.
Pinka

This poem have touched me and I can't help but say I do hope things get better for you.
ZoZo

I love it! It really touches the soul and makes you think.
Sheila

WOW! all that i can say is WOW! i tottaly understood what was happening in the poem it was very deep and really captured alot of emotion i was really actually shocked at it. it just suprised me with all the emotion sorrow and pain. the thoughts i can tell were very deep and i basically loved it!
charlotte

it is a beutiful poem, it shows you how powerful love is and how much it can hert. a new love is born every day, every where around the world but yet it is rare, and its not every day that YOU find some one you want to spend the rest of your life with, and whene you do you dont want to let go of it, but some times you hav to, and you might never find some one els, and that herts the most. this is the best poem
Carly

this is a real gd poem, n its real sad aswell.
Amy

I think this poem is graet because I can relate to all of the emotions used in it.
Amanda

i really like this poem it sad but good

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#85 Dance Of Terror

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