#65 Our Love

This poem is meant to be short and sweet, yet profound and truthful. This poem is my heart put into words; it is the aftermath of a relationship blown away with the wind.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Lost Love Poems

Our Love

by jenawin

our love is a
wasteland
of
promises in vain

of past
of present
of future
nothing

rotting
quietly
in my palms

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CHRIS

WHEN YOU WROTE THIS POEM IT SHORT SIMPLE, AND TO THE POINT. GOOD JOD I WISH YOU THE BEST AND REMEMBER JUST KEEP WRITING. CHRIS
Kim

The poem said everything a braoken heart feels
sara

i really like your poem because its that really touch your heart
judy

its real good
Cindy

I love your poem. It described exactly what i am going through and had not been able to put into words. You have described in short my current relationship, if you can it that.
brittany

i liked your poem it was short and sweet lol!
Gabriela

my boyfrind just told me that he felt that his love for me not as strong as it used to be. :(
samantha

I really like this poem. It brought back alot of diffrent emotions I use to feel. It was a really good poem!
Desseray

I liked your poem because it's short but it has alot of thoat put in to it
Courtney

I really liked this poem it really touch my heart i really like it.
JESSICA

BEAUTIFUL POEM . ITS A TRUE THING NOT EVERYBODY BELIEVES IT BUT ITS THE SIMPLE TRUTH AFTER THE ONE YOU LOVE LEAVES U .
Josephina

Very true.
Emily

I love how it talks about the failing of the relationship. This inspires me to make sure the next guy I want to date, is the right guy that won't rot in my palm.
wilow

this is so true thats it hurts.you managed to put in words something i been trying to do. much respect and i don't even know you
jamie

it is kindove a short poem but i liked it.
Belinda

i love it although it was short right more
charlotte

it woz bloody gd
Amanda

this is relly sweety i loved it alot
toni

i like this poem because it is different and it really expessies how i feel about someone.
Jackie

This poem touch my heart every day i feel this way it blends in with me and my boyfriend.

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#65 Our Love

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