This poem is meant to be short and sweet, yet profound and truthful. This poem is my heart put into words; it is the aftermath of a relationship blown away with the wind.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Sad Love Poems

Our Love
our love is a
wasteland
of
promises in vain

of past
of present
of future
nothing

rotting
quietly
in my palms

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  • leeann
    is poem touch my heart by the way sound
  • gladys
    wow this poem is real deep
  • jacqui
    this poem explains exactly how i feel. i think you did a great job
  • CHRIS
    WHEN YOU WROTE THIS POEM IT SHORT SIMPLE, AND TO THE POINT. GOOD JOD I WISH YOU THE BEST AND REMEMBER JUST KEEP WRITING. CHRIS
  • Kim
    The poem said everything a braoken heart feels
  • sara
    i really like your poem because its that really touch your heart
  • judy
    its real good
  • Cindy
    I love your poem. It described exactly what i am going through and had not been able to put into words. You have described in short my current relationship, if you can it that.
  • brittany
    i liked your poem it was short and sweet lol!
  • Gabriela
    my boyfrind just told me that he felt that his love for me not as strong as it used to be. :(
  • samantha
    I really like this poem. It brought back alot of diffrent emotions I use to feel. It was a really good poem!
  • Desseray
    I liked your poem because it's short but it has alot of thoat put in to it
  • Courtney
    I really liked this poem it really touch my heart i really like it.
  • JESSICA
    BEAUTIFUL POEM . ITS A TRUE THING NOT EVERYBODY BELIEVES IT BUT ITS THE SIMPLE TRUTH AFTER THE ONE YOU LOVE LEAVES U .
  • Josephina
    Very true.
  • Emily
    I love how it talks about the failing of the relationship. This inspires me to make sure the next guy I want to date, is the right guy that won't rot in my palm.
  • wilow
    this is so true thats it hurts.you managed to put in words something i been trying to do. much respect and i don't even know you
  • jamie
    it is kindove a short poem but i liked it.
  • Belinda
    i love it although it was short right more
  • charlotte
    it woz bloody gd
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