#77 Her Unending Faith

This poem was thought up by me one night when thinking about my possibilities in life. It is based on a true story. It will make you think...

K.S.-14 years old.

This poem originally was published in Poems on Life - Teen Poems

Her Unending Faith

by Kat Skye

"God, if you love me, I know it's right,
Please let us make love tonight,"
She asked Him with a pleading voice,
Thinking she had made the right choice.
She put on music that seemed best,
He would get right to the rest.
She didn't exactly know why she felt,
A cold hollow feeling as he undid his belt.
Her parents found them before it got worse,
She kicked and screamed and hit and cursed,
But ceased when she heard their news.
Many girls had been in her shoes,
They didn't stop him, he caused their strife,
And soon AIDS would take away his life.
See, God really loved her and kept her safe,
And now she has complete and total faith.

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Joy

ooo goodness our father God is awesome. what an amaing blessing thnk you for sharing
Mel

All I can say is WOW and OMG. When I first started to read this poem I was like okay bad joice of words but when i finished reading it I got it. Keep up the good work!
sarah

i is very touchin, something similar happen to me.
Latosha

Many young girls need to read this poem because guys are paaing out diseases right and left. Young girls love to hear the lies boys will tell to get what they want. I too, was once a teenager.
jessica

i realy thougt your poem was touching and its kinda the same thing i went through
Pamela

this is a very good poem. i think the message is one that many arent giving any importance to and welll frankly it is VERY important, keep up the good work!
daniela

hey i really like this poem and it means a lot to me and i know how you feel cause it happened to me and my brothers girlfriend
AJLA

i LOVE IT ITS SO TRUE AND IT HAPPENS ALOT!
J

This is an awesome poem, i give mad props to the writer! Keep writing girl, you got major talent. A+
Marketa

i thought this poem was wonderful ireally like it ans it take to hearts.
hannah

your poem sends one heck of a strong msg through to people. it really hit and touched my heart when i read it!
Lacey

I really liked it! It was AWESOME!
Melissa

Awesome poem, i really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!
chelsea

Very good poem. I realy liked it!
Kaela

This is an awesome poem!
Cyndi

Great Poem Megan, You know i dont believe in "God" but i do believe in a higher power. I love your poem its the best i have read. You need to get another one one here so you have more published poems.
Tears

Great work, its such a beautiful poem, i have read it so many times its just amazing how much you capture ones imagination. keep it up!
Kelsey

WOW that was so great! It's really moving. Thanx for sharing it with us!
Brandee

WOW! VERY GOOD JOB, SOON MY OWN POEMS WILL BE PUBLISHED POEMS WILL BE ON HERE TOO. I HOPE THAT THEY GET THE SAME ATTENTION AND RESPECT YOURS GETS FROM ME.GOOD JOB.
Krystal

this is a really good poem

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