This poem was thought up by me one night when thinking about my possibilities in life. It is based on a true story. It will make you think...

K.S.-14 years old.

This poem originally was published in Poems on Life - Teen Poems

Her Unending Faith
"God, if you love me, I know it's right,
Please let us make love tonight,"
She asked Him with a pleading voice,
Thinking she had made the right choice.
She put on music that seemed best,
He would get right to the rest.
She didn't exactly know why she felt,
A cold hollow feeling as he undid his belt.
Her parents found them before it got worse,
She kicked and screamed and hit and cursed,
But ceased when she heard their news.
Many girls had been in her shoes,
They didn't stop him, he caused their strife,
And soon AIDS would take away his life.
See, God really loved her and kept her safe,
And now she has complete and total faith.

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  • grey girl
    i love it. god closes doors, but opens windows. totally.
  • Rebbecca
    Really good work. It touched me alot. I am 16 and at age 12 I was silly enough to be with a man aged 39 who was HIV and Hep C positive. I just found out that at the time we where together unprotected that he was positive for HIV and Hep C and im still waiting for my results. good work.
  • lola
    its a good poemmm
  • julia
    this poem changed my thoughts about life, not that I didn't know about STD's or STI's. I hope I would still live with my mom.
  • ShaVania
    U SEEM TO BE A VERY CREATIVE PERSON WHAT A LIFE STORY.
  • REBECCA
    THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM. ITS SOOO TRUE,KEEP ON WRITING.
  • Joy
    ooo goodness our father God is awesome. what an amaing blessing thnk you for sharing
  • Mel
    All I can say is WOW and OMG. When I first started to read this poem I was like okay bad joice of words but when i finished reading it I got it. Keep up the good work!
  • sarah
    i is very touchin, something similar happen to me.
  • Latosha
    Many young girls need to read this poem because guys are paaing out diseases right and left. Young girls love to hear the lies boys will tell to get what they want. I too, was once a teenager.
  • jessica
    i realy thougt your poem was touching and its kinda the same thing i went through
  • Pamela
    this is a very good poem. i think the message is one that many arent giving any importance to and welll frankly it is VERY important, keep up the good work!
  • daniela
    hey i really like this poem and it means a lot to me and i know how you feel cause it happened to me and my brothers girlfriend
  • AJLA
    i LOVE IT ITS SO TRUE AND IT HAPPENS ALOT!
  • J
    This is an awesome poem, i give mad props to the writer! Keep writing girl, you got major talent. A+
  • Marketa
    i thought this poem was wonderful ireally like it ans it take to hearts.
  • hannah
    your poem sends one heck of a strong msg through to people. it really hit and touched my heart when i read it!
  • Lacey
    I really liked it! It was AWESOME!
  • Melissa
    Awesome poem, i really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!
  • chelsea
    Very good poem. I realy liked it!
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