#34 Reflection

I am a girl with many talents, or so I am told. But I feel all alone in this world. I long for a man who will love me and a clean piece of paper. I have so many emotions bottled up inside myself and the only way I can get them out is to write. It keeps me sane. This poem is about me and my life. I feel like I'm drowning is an ocean and I am the best swimmer in the world. I am a poor girl who just wants to be happy.

This poem originally was published in Poems on Life - Teen Poems

Reflection

by Olivia

I am looking in a mirror,
but all I can see is me,
trying to be
what I want to be
instead of what I really am.

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Sisko

i love this poem. it's short and simple but so true and i feel the exact same way sometimes, in fact i wrote a poem somewhat like this once but longer and not nearly as good. :)
steven

this is a great poem
sherrell

goood
Desiree

I loved this poem its short but very meaningfull and i can honestly say i can relate.
Negine

Wow Olivia! your really good with this poem stuff!I bet you Shakespeare is so jealous.
kayla

so simple, yet so true
Chelsea

Although this poem is very short it is very well written, i love writing poetry as i feel the same as you, i love to read other teen poetry as thats where i get my inspiration from. When people hear the word poems or poetry straight away they think ryhming but i think feeling. I just thought i should share what i thought about your poems and it was very touching and gave me a bit of a wake up call.
Kimyata

olivia your poem was short but filled with an important messege for the world if you don't know I am a poet too i write all the time mabe we can e-mail each other and mabe one day we will meet. (ps) keep writting olivia your words can change lives
May Ann

wow! two thumbs-up! great poem. Short but very inspiring. Continue touching lives Olivia!
kitta

I can really relate to the poem it is short sweet and to the point
Brittany

this poem is short but it is also good because somethimes wen poeple look in the mirror is a person of them and then it isn't because at different places they act different then what they really are
eric

i thought it showed that alot of pple try to be some 1 eals but they arnt and its not allways every one eals it is usulay your sealf
Courtney

hey good poem i dont think the length of the poem means anything but the words make it what its is its a really pretty poem keep up the good work!
Britt

OMG this is such a great poem. It is short and i love it! It has such a strong meaning! Thanks for sharing it.
Tera

I really likd this poem because when I read it sumthing just touched me. Likesometimes when I lok in the mirror I want to be somethng else like Idont like my image.
jonh

this poem is very good and beautiful.
JazaRae

I think this poem is awesome. I love how I and mostly every teenager in America probably even all over the world can relate to this write.
Rachel

Hi my name is Rachel and I am 16 years old and I wanted to say that I love your poem. I write poems and lyrics and very talented at doing it. I cant wait until i become a famous singer. well me and my two friends. But ant way im going to bring out a poem book that I wrote.
Selah

Short and simple, but with a very deep meaning. Very nice. Very inspiring! Keep up the good work! Godspeed!
laura

That poem is fantastic!; short, snappy, honest and frankly. im lovin it! it reminds me of the christina aguilera song reflection; "when will my reflection show who i am inside" good job!

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#34 Reflection

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