#58 Rachel

I wrote this for my friend I met in 6th grade. As soon as I met her, I realized that she was the person I wanted to grow up with. The person I wanted to share my dorm with, the person I wanted to share all my secrets with, the person I wanted to remember forever. She was everything.

She was honest, nice, funny, cheerful, and best of all, sweet. In 7th grade we started talking a little more, and then it turned into going and doing things together. But, then at the end of 7th grade, as our friendship was getting better and better, my aunt decided to put me in a different school the following year.

Well, I think Rachel and I would have become best friends if I'd stayed at the school I was at. But I guess I'll never know!

This poem originally was published in Friendship Poems - Teen Poems

Rachel

by Gap

I'll always remember her,
in good times and in bad.
I'll always remember,
the good friend that I had.

Next year we'll be at different schools.
We'll have new teachers, new friends,
and al new rules.

I'll always remember,
the good times that we had.
And with her in my heart,
I'll never feel bad!

Every time I saw her,
She made me feel better.
I liked her more then anything,
the day that I met her.

I wish we could've been best friends.
That way I'd know she'd remember me,
till the very end!

As our school year comes to an end,
I'll always remember her,
as my "wanna be" best friend.

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Jessica

Sweet, sad and wonderful. Incredible work.
Chelse

This poem is is nice i am in the 6th grade also this poem really got to me.
jaquelyn

oh may that was a very great peom its so true with any people and also with a lot of friends that feel that way and this peom says it all i loved it.
Emilee

Hey, My name is Emilee and my situation is a little like yours but also a little different. Well you poem was really touching
flakita

this is a really nice poem i dont have a friend named rachell but i do have a niece that i love very much shes only 10, 6 years younger but i love her very much and were kind of best friends but more than that famaly well keep posting them good poems
Courtney

This is a very sad poem because next year I will have to leave my Best Friend.
ryan

there is a girl that i real like i met her in the 6th grade it is the 9th now i hope i will "tuch" me as it "tuched" her and i hope that it will all work out and thank you for the lovely poem (that was i bit corney because i am a guy. but hey a guy gots to do what a guy gots to do)
Cynthia

This poem touched me especially since I have begun looking for my junior high friend, Rachel Pando. We lost contact after I moved to Pennsylvania from Arlington, Virginia. Cynthia
Deanna

OMG i loved this poem so much! me and my BFF are both going to a different school next year and it made me think on how much i know i will never forget her! thank you so much to whoever wrote this cuz it really made my day!
yeo

quite touching
josh

I like this poem alot because i have a friend named Rachel that i like alot and want her to remmber me because we both are going to diferant hight schools next year.
Rachel

that was sooooooooo sweet i wish some one wrote that about me
jessica

gap, this is such a great poem! my bffe-or so i thought-is moving at the end of 7th grade also. i loved your poem-it really touched me-keep ^ the good work
Rachel

this poem is soo aaw some. and this poem really touched me to the bottom of my darkened soul well hope ull write more
nichola

i fink dis woz real sad but really sweet. hope u c ur m8 agen
lala

this poem remined me when i was moving away, away from my friends and best best friend. when i had told her that i was going to a other school we both started crying. thank u for remined me that i had fun beening her friend.
ashey

i hope u write poems 4 a liven that was over cool nice gob
Rachel

wow thats a wicked cool poem. its cool cuz my name is rachel. just cause i like things with my name. its a really good poem. well written.
Ahley

I think this poem relates to me alot 'cause i hang out with sarah,Megan, Danielle,etc. and i'm really not best friends with them but i would most definetly like to be but that will have to be up to them. i really like this poem! Sarah,Megan,Danielle if you ever read this i love all of you and i hopr one day we all can be best friends. love ya girls!
rachel

I like this poem mostly because my name is Rachel and because it was greatly written and reminds me of my best friend Carolina, only we've been best friends since we were in 2nd grade (4 yrs. ago).

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