#21 Loving You

This is about my first real boyfriend, he and I had been together for about 4 months, and I was in love. I couldn't express my feelings by just saying I love you, So this poem is what I came up with.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Teenage Love Poems

Loving You

by Tera Nickell

Putting my feelings into words -
Impossible.
For my feelings for you are
Incomprehensible.
If I could let you see the effect you have on me,
You would be blinded.
For if you did the darkness would fade,
Shadows were no longer.
For I am in love,
More in love then I have been for a long time.
I love you is all I can say,
But my heart says more,
There is much more to my love,
Dreams, Hopes, Fantasies,
That all can become realities.
For with you I am a new me,
A me that shouldn't leave.
In these few words I hope you see,
How much you mean to me.
In Life, Love and Spirit,
I want you to hear it,
I Love You!

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BROOK

THIS POEM IS VERY GOOD. WHEREEVER AND HOWEVER YOU CAM UP WITH THIS IT EXPLAINS EVERYTHING ABOUT ME AND THIS BOII. THANX I GIVE YUO PROPS.
Chris

This is a very good poem, and well written. I absolutly loved it.
Taliah

such a sweet poem! ^_^ it's exaclty how i feel about my long-time boyfriend! i love him mare than words can say!
maggie

wow. When i read this poem my breath was caught. This is my life's story. Ever since i saw my boyfriend i now understand why those mushy gushy people are the way that they are. This poem, Loving you, reflects all of my feelings and emotions and for him, not to mention the wonderful changes in my personality and character for having met him. This poem is exquisitely written and it certainly brightened my day!
amanda

hey,i love this poem bcuz my x-boyfriend dumped me over a year ago and i cant get him out of my head. he and i were dating for almost 2 years,and i dont kno what i did wrong,but he dumped me. i havent even tryed to get him out of my head bcuz i still love him so much! he's in 3 of my school's classes and i juss dont kno what to do. i love him still and i dont kno how to tell him or let him kno some how.
Kimberlee

This Peom was great. I like to write peoms myself but i never let anyone read them but my boyfriend. Keep up the writing. I LOVE YOU JUSTIN
miranda

this was a great poem and i think that it described how i feel for my boyfriend so thats why i am voting for this poem
krystal

i really like this and am voting for it becasue its exactly the way I fill when your really in love with some one words can not be enough to discribe how truly you fill in your heart
carina

this poem really touched me it is so beautiful good job
Erika

Oooohhhh my gush this poem was the most touching thing that I ever read. This poem was amazing. I hope you continue to create more of these special poems. I understood this poem. Everyword I read I could tell how you feel about your lover. Well I just had to give you your props on your poem. GOOD WORK :)
Samir

hey its a beautiful and passionate poem and i thank you for it because i am having the exact feeling because i am madly in love with my girl friend and know you gave me more passion for love i thank u for this beautiful poem. Keep on plz.
Autumn

I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH, BECAUSE IT EXPLAINS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL ABOUT MY BOYFRIEND, ITS LIKE YOUR HEART WANTS TO SAY MUCH MORE BUT THERE ARE NO WORDS FOR WHAT YOU ARE FEELING, AND NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU SAY "I LOVE YOU" YOU CANT SAY IT ENOUGH FOR HIM TO UNDERSTAND JUST HOW MUCH YOU CARE. ITS GREAT
Chris

I went through a bunch of poems looking for one that would descibe how i feel about the person i love. and you said it like i never could. Great job. I hope to see more of your work later on.
Brittany

I really liked this poem thats how i feel about a special someone
Rachel

wow this poem was great. I can really really relate to it. You are a really good writting
Kayla

Good Job
olivia

i thought that this poem was really good i mean when i read a poem thats this good it makes me want to keep writing. i really liked it
Diamond

THIS POEM WAS WONDERFUL I FELT THAT THIS POEM WAS GREAT
Angelina

This poem is just. Something more. It's different. All others use the same words, same phrases. I just like this one more. It shows talent.
Amanda

I really liked your poem. It was beautiful and you could tell you put your heart in it. bravo good job Tera

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#21 Loving You

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