#99 Our Time

This poem is about a girl that I had wanted to go out all of my freshman year and most of my sophomore year. She shared the same feelings too. Then when we got the chance, finally, to go out, she said no.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Teenage Love Poems

Our Time

by Dan Losee

I knew it was you
when I first laid eyes.
I wanted you so bad
but I thought you were way out of my league.

Throughout the year
we had hurtful confrontations.
We kept waiting and waiting
but it never did happen.

We each had our times
with somebody else.
Some were short
Some were long.

But either way
we never got our chance.

We grew apart over time
but still had our memories to fall back on.
Though we hid them deep inside
we both still knew they were there.

Now our chance has come.
Now our time is here.
Now we can be.

But only if you let us.

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c2739 lover

Love ur poem i'm goin' through somethin' like that w/ some1 i really want to me with. great job!
aimee

Hey , this poem is gr8! Im a girl but i feel the same with a boy, no matter how much we love each other we never gt it togther, now were close again but hell always b confused' the last line sums it up. if only he'd let us in my case x
alexander

nice job! i love it it really tells your feelings. it's sad it never happened, you and her, but i hope it dose cuz no guy should feel like that. also i agree with rendell we do need more guys like this but you guys can count one more. me :)
brittney

this poems really touched me in many ways. i had a guy that i liked and i told him about it and he never got back to me but acted like he was in to me
Mary

I can totally relate to this one right now i loved It great write. ~Mary~
lechelle

Nice poem to be just about time.
rendell

luved it
rendell

man,this poem is off da chain, keep up da good work. We need more sweet guys out there like us to express our true feelings to these gifts from god called"women" god job
Patrick

this poem really relates to me, i mean i was basically with this girl for about a year but we were never accually together like she always had a boyfriend and she never told me how she felt and when i confronted her she was 'confused' and then we quit talking it was like my chance had come and gone with the blink of an eye and now i miss her more than ever
ryan

This is a great poem, I am currently going through this right now, and hope you will continue to write great poems
Amy

WOW! This is an excellent poem it totally relates to me and my first love. You have a great talent.
Selina

incredible. just amazing it's definitly one of the best I've ever heard. i usually don't comment on these, but this time i'll make an exception
aileen

it was the most beutiful poem i've ever heard.
Samuel

That's so sad. Actually..this almost happened to me before.but at that time i didn't realize that i was thinking of her 24/7.so i didn't dare approach her.. I hope i don't make the same mistake again.sigh
Jenny

this is basically the same thing i'm going through right now. it's nice to know i'm not the only one like this. Great poem!
Kris

This poem is exactly what I went through for almost 2 years. I know exactly how you feel. Its excellent
ASHLEY

I commend you for writing this poem. It really can open a person's eye. I just wonder if this is how "my guy friend" feels. I am happy to see that a guy can express his feelings through poetry.
Melissa

wow! this poem is amazing... it totally descirbes what i am goin through with my best friend...it'z explained so well and touched my heart as soon as I read it...Now i kno im not the only one feeling that way
Melissa

I really liked that poem because he tells how he feels about the girl he has had his eyes on.
Amber

I was looking for a poem for this guy i am in love with, he recently told me he wanted a relationship. But he hasnt done anything about it so I wanted to tell him and to explain to my best friend what it was like for me. I was really surprised because this explained it exactly

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