#2 You

This poem was the first poem that I wrote for my boyfriend. I was sitting in class one day, thinking about him of course, and I decided to write what I felt about him

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Teenage Love Poems

You

by Ashley Mclean

The first thing I think of
When I think of you,
Is your wonderful smile.
The second would be your adorable laugh.
I could go on and on,
But the list would never end.

When I think of the short time
That we've been together
And of all of the happy memories we've already shared
It amazes me to no end
And I know that we were meant to be together.
I look at you and see overflowing love, hope, and joy
As well as charm, strength, happiness and dignity.
With all of these wonderful qualities
It's no wonder I love you so.

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Markeashia

That poem reminds me of my ex that i really love and wnat to be with.
kAYLA

this poem really xpresses how you feel bout someone or something
Almager

Hey that was a realy sweet poem i might just right one for my boyfriend keep it up girl
Chace

I think jthis is one of the best poems I ever read because it reminds me how I feel about my ol lady,and of some of the things I tell her on a daily basis.
lisa

me and my best friend have been friends for a year and a half. but we jsut statred dateing. and that poems reminds me so much of him
Grace

This is such a wicked poem so easy yet powerful. Its my best one yet.
Nou

It's hard to let go, when you think of the loving memories. I thought of him when I was reading through this poem. I'm happy that I found this poem. Made me thought of a lot of things between me and my boyfriend.
kettie

so far i've look at just about three of these poems and all describes my baby, i'm chosing this one cuz i can't tell my baby how i really feel about him and sending him a poem that can from the bottom of my heart, although i didn't write it but still it's truly what i needed. Thank u so very much, and keep writting nice poems like that. Whoever wrote them. ! U"R GOOD! Bye now, and again Thank u
randy

i love this poem it makes me think of my boyfriend and you must be a wonderfull poet.
trineika

this poem really touched me because it remains me of my boy friend and i. how every little thing about him makes me love him more and more each day and reading this poem gave me a reason for telling him i love him so much
Adrienne

OMG I HATE IT WEN PPL RITE IN AL CAPS AND MISPEL THIER WURDS Its a really great poem, I enjoyed it alot. :-)
Sarah

It's beautiful and wonderful, exactly what I feel.
Mary

I love this poem! it reminds me so much of me and my fiance. we've been together for 5 months and we already know we were meant for each other. This poem just really speaks to me.
patricia

good job on this poem it just what i wanted to read
della

cute!
Ashley

great poem!
Holly

What I liked about the poem was it made me realize that I Do Not Take Credit For Everything my boyfriend does for ME!
keveta

Well ashely i loved your poem it kinda reminds me of me and my boyfriend so keep up the good work
Latrice

I love your poem so much. It really touched my heart. I am also a writer and I was really trying to find a way to tell a friend that Im in love with him. When I read your poem, I wanted to cry because what you love about your boyfriend is exactly what I love about my friend. Now I have an idea of what to say. Thank You.
Brandy

This poem is amazing! It really touched me, I can relate to it about how I feel about my boyfriend. I have been with him for 10 months now and I think we are meant to be together. I hope we stay like this forever. Thanks. keep up the good work!

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#2 You

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