#25 Everything

I wrote this poem after my boyfriend and I broke up. I still really care about him!

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Teenage Love Poems

Everything

by Marie Lavigne

The day we met
I had the oddest feeling
I didn't know what it was
So I just brushed it off
After a while I found myself waiting
Waiting for that phone call every day
The one I always got from you
Every night I went to bed happy
Happy that I had talked to you
Every morning I would wakeup
And think of you
The day you asked me out
I was on cloud nine
I couldn't stop thinking of you
The time we spent together
I was always so happy
Then one day
It was gone
Everything
The hand holding
The cuddling
The drives
The times we spent
looking into each other's eyes
The long good- byes
Everything
Just vanished
Everything
except one thing
The one thing that can't be taken from me
That's my love for you
It's here from now
And forever

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vannessa

this was great and im really sorry 4 u
Grashus

Me and this boy where just like this i love this poem
Damaris

I love it! Its so true if you love someone that much then some times you got to let them go! Damaris
jasmine

I like that poem b-cuz its real something that we all go through and i can ralate 2 that poem but im out *ALWAYS D&J*
sandra

Swweeeeeeet! you have talent, embrace it, i also write and appreciate talent especially from the heart. i totally understand what ur saying, and while these things takes time to heal just continue believing in yourself. and we are all special! time is known as the best healer. keep in there! sandra
Tederia

i love this poem. this is how i felt when me and my ex broke up.
Ashley

omg ur poem touched me it almost made me cry i hope everything turns out
Joanna

hey gurl well ur poem was GREAT i know how u feel! it remins ms of my ex. he would always call me n tell me he luved me. but i broke up with him 4 months later kuz all he made me do was worry. yeah he was on drugs n i didnt like dat. one day he called me crying saying dat he never meant 2 hurt me n dat he luvz me but i moved on. i love da guy who im with rit now. i really dont know at would happen if we were stll 2gether it wouldnt have worked out. 4 ALL YALL TEENZ N LUV I JUST GOTA SAY FOLLOW UR HEART N DONT LISTEN 2 DEM HATERZ!
nan

i love this b cuz it reminds me of me ex boyfriend he had cheated on me but before this reminds me of him
sara

well i thought this was a really touching poem and actually i about started crying but if you decide to make anymore please email them to me ok cause i really liked this one thank you
Sandi

i really like this poem and i think it very good it makes me think of the way me and my boyfriend was
Samuel

Waoo this poems make me matured
Rae

Oh MY GOD! That poem mad me cry. I had that same feeling with my ex-boyfriend and we have been broke up for two years. I still feel the same way I felt about him seven years ago. I rarely talk to him and all I can think about is past memories and how I wish I could have it all back. This poem touched me truly. I was on internet almost all day looking at poems and this is the only one that made me cry and was true. U GO GIRL( I truly can relate and feel your pain)
Alyse

OMG that is exactly what i'm feeling about my ex. It's so hard not being with him though but I know I will always love him even if he don't feel the same way. You are a very good writer and I thakyou for sharing that. You have inspired me to write something now.
sambasivam

simply very fantastic . Iam moved by ur poem ,tears of joy shed from my eyes . No more words to say. EXCELLENT
leigh

this peom is really great it relates to me an my ex perfectly
marie

it reminds me of a previous relationship i had. its just so true and real
kendra

Wow great poem i know whatyour going through! my bf did that too
ashley

i love this poem because i was with this guy michael for 2 1/2 years and he hit me once and i left and i went back with him after that and he broke up with me after that long!i did not go back with a guy for1 to 1 1/2 now i found the love of my life!even though it is long distance relationship i know in my heart that he will not cheat on me! ashley nicole gamble loves dustin dennis lambert
kayla

i loved this poem a lot

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