#24 What Should I Do?

I wrote this poem when I thought I was in love with two guys, and I didn't know which one to choose. But now both of them are gone, and I still care deeply about them.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Teenage Love Poems

What Should I Do?

by Diane Peterson

What should I do,
When I love two?

When I am with one, for the other I long,
I can't find a place for my heart to belong.

You promised that you would always stay,
But now you have gone away.

Your love to me was as clear as a bell,
You promised that I'd always be your Angel.

We used to love each other so very much,
but you were blinded by another girl's touch.

But now I have found someone new,
And he loves me like you used to do.

And now you say I am right for you,
but with only half my heart do I love you.

Now I must choose between both of you,
I am so confused, I don't know what to do.

What should I do,
When I love two?

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Carrie

i would just like to say tat this is so true but i really feel there is really only one true love in ur life so ull know who to choose
Ash

this is a really nice poem. it relates to my life a lot. nice work
Lauren

this was the best i have heard or seen u get 100%
Monica

i love this poem ,it explain the exact way how i feel right now. Thanks for writing this!
leola

it is a great poem if its true stay wiv the one your wiv not the first if he treated you rite you wouldnt of gone lookin for someone eles ps keep your eyes open you will find the perfect partner one day
presy

wow i went through the same thing and i lost both of them it really hurts cuz one really cared for me more.
Gabriella

OMG, this poem really hits home! i am going thru the same thing. it sucks, but now i know that im not alone. awesome poem!
Amanda

i like this vote because i am in love with two and i dont know which to choose. one sees me at school everyday and the other at home, down the road from me.
desiree

this poem is true and spoken as a true teen gurl who is stuck 2 choose like me once!
Shaundra

I really like this poem its kind of the same as me but I only like one.
wendy

i know how you feel because i was in the same situation but now i found someone who really cares about me.
Devil0415

It's really a touching & sweet poem. Talking about my feeling. i really don't know what should i do now! Don't know which one i have to choose.
brittany

you should give the one you havent gave a chance to give a chance to him not the one you already gave a chance to cause he can go to hell.
Jordan

I really liked this poem I know exactly what you are going through I have been through that once and I just followed my heart and I went with the one that I loved so much!This poem could REALLY get to someone when they are stuck in the same situation. I know it hurts sometimes letting go of the one you think is right but you really have to go with the one that knows how to treat a girl.
geraldine

that poem was gooooooooooooooooooooooood I love it
Sarah-jane

WOW! this is exactly how i feel. it makes me feel better to know i'm not the only one who loves 2 people at the one time. Keep writin!
Faith

Wow, What a fantastic Poem. Great Structure and Emotion. 10 out of 10!
Jessica

i think it was good and stuff like i was in that situation before i had to go to compition in Arizona and stuff like that and i think what this person who wrote it should do which is my point of view in what i did is who did u do more with? who can u trust more? who can make you feel more special when ur with them? Like just ask ur self all of the real important questions and stuff and then u'll figure out what u should do.
Nika

i very much understand where you're coming from because i'm in that same situation but im dealing with as much as i can before i finally break down
Kymberli

That was so "tight" that is exactly how it goes 95% of the time.

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#24 What Should I Do?

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