#76 Lover's Dance

• Kristi
  Absolutely beautiful. Completely erotic and sensual. It completely caught my desire!
• malissa
  this poem is powerful in every way, you can feel the passion in each word as you read it. it is a masterpiece indeed.
• Sarah
  nice description
• joanna806
  this poem tatch the heart and heat up the spirits of lovers and writers! thanx for sharing.
• Laura
  beautifully spoken
• maggie rose
  YES! This poem is superbly exquisite! I have read it over and over and the passion within the poet just keeps flowing. GREAT JOB!
• Amber
  oh my gosh. it was wonderful, I loved it
• Ann
  wonderfully explained!
• Deborah
  This poem reminds meeh of someone I'm in love with.
• naina
  Thats was so hotttt! my screen was on fire loved it
• Aliyah
  what you wrote is not having sex but it is makeing love! reminds me of my first time, this is beautiful!
• Jessica
  I've never read anything that put it in better words. The symbolism and wording are magnificent! Bravo!
• Lea
  This poem inspired me to write more erotic poetry. I thank the master for the gift he shares with us.
• Ashley
  Absolutely breathtaking!
• Shonta
  I really LOVE this powm. it is really touching and reminds me of the first time me and my fiance did the do. I couldn't express the way I felt the first time but now I can. Wonderful Work!
• lucyluv
  Poet deVine, This poem was very sensual. I reall touched me, both physically and mentally. It makes me very excited about the night that I am going to spend with my fiance on our wedding night. I can't wait for the two of us to join together as one! Keep up the good work.
• nesh
  This poem is awesome! It makes me wanna get off work right now and go home with my husband!
• Lauren
  I really loved this one, it's vivid but not dirty in any way, it was beautiful and passionate with a hint of class.
• christina
  wooooooooow!
• Jamie
  This poem shows passion in a romantic way ! I give a 10 outta 10
• d
  I feel as if I am embraced in the words of now. Remembering that first love and all it brang
• Ashley
  This poem was so beautiful. It kind of remined me of my first time. But every one is made for someone and it seems like they have found the perfect one for each other that will fulfill each others fantasy.
• alex
  this poem is very good indeed,the poet deVine. is gifted in describing a very intimate actions and expressing emmotions in a very classy way. to read this poem ,it makes you imagine the scene as you are watching a very intimate movie. it makes lives the situations and that is prove that the poet is gifted. great work.
• Queenie
  I have always had a hard time trying to put together the words that descibes the raw, intense passion that I experience when I am making love with my fiance. This poem describes it as well as it can be described. I forwarded it to him and I know that it will immediately put him "in the moment " as it did me. We are hundreds of miles apart and await his arrival with even more anticipation when reminded of the extreme pleasure to come. Thank you for the beautiful expression!
• rhiana
  that was great !
• Rese
  dis poem is rely tite n sexi. sex is mor den sex. its love
• elizabeth
  this poem is all too real. it was written very well.
• Sue
  Excellent 10/10
• christen
  i really enjoyed the poem i love to write poetry but i have not seen some one right a great poem like this one i loved it
• Tiffany
  I Loved the poem! i write poetry too and that one really touched me! the thing about that poem is that i could actuall picture the words coming to life between my boyfriend and i! It was a Great poem!
• Shawn
  Wow! Very sensual!
• sharen
  this poem really hits home. i can say that this poem brings full circle how i feel about a certain gentlemen who i have known for many years and he holds my heart and soul
• Kathleen
  I think this is one of the more expressive poems I have read. kudos to the author.
• Kathleen
  Great poem
• Lovely
  I like this poem a lot. Because it makes you think of you and your partner life together and how lucky you are.
• Tasha
  the poem is tight
• Cheryl
  Hey wuz up this poem was really great, the reason why i consider this poem so good was for the great words and, for it actually being so realand true. Hope to see more poems like those. LOL.
• lakentra
  THIS POEM WAS SO GREAT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
• TAM
  I LOVED THE POEM, IT REMINDED ME OF THE HOT PASSION I ONCE HAD WITH MY HUSBAND, NOW THAT WE HAVE CHILDREN, WE HAVE NO TIME FOR LOVE LIKE THAT. THANKS FOR THE MEMORY.
• Lynn
  Wonderfully expressed. I myself am a poet and you just blew me outta the water! Great work.
• trish
  awesome. that's the only word to describe this poem!
• Liz
  love it! Love It! LOVE IT!
• bridget
  What an awesome poem! Everything you want to tell when you are making love!
• Ann
  This poem was so exciting. The words were jumping off the page into my soul. Thank you to the author!
• LadyLove
  Oh my God. This poem was so extroardinary. It made me feel as though I was the one in the poem actually feeling and doing the wild things that you so wonderfully described and worded. I became horny and fiesty as I read the poem. I know I should probably feel embaressed or something, but I'm not. It was just straight out wonderful and you know it Poet deVine. Keep writing!
• annie
  i think that whom ever wrote that poem had a good heart to write and knew exactly what he or she was talking about and knew exactly what to write.
• bradlyn
  i think that poem was great my boyfriend loved it too
• marissa
  this poem is excellent. ilove it so much. ihope to see more of this person poems in the future.
• Sharon
  She has come a long way since this lovely poem in her writing. To put it simply, this was beautifully done and with taste.
• a.r
  WOW!my palms are sweating and my pulse racing. i had to resist d impulse of calling my man and just do it right there and then!WONDERFULLY EXPRESSED!
• amber
  I LOOOOOOOOVED THE POEM. IT WAS GREAT! WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE OF.
• Dimples
  ALL I CAN SAY IS FINALLY SOMEONE HAS PUT INTO WORDS THE WAY I FEEL ABOUT MY BABY (MAN). WOW, POET DIVINE U SURELY NEED TO GO ON AND MAKE SOME MONEY WRITING CUZ U R TALENTED IN SUCH A WAY TO MAKE THE READER FEEL EVERY WORD YOU WRITE. WOW. TO ME, THIS IS THE BEST POEM ON THIS ENTIRE SITE. THANKS FOR THE READ!
• candy
  I love this poem it gives a real open mind to anyone who has not had that kind of passion in there life,and the boost to want that kind of heat when making to love to those who have someone.
• Julz
  This poem really hits the spot!
• marianne
  I loved your poem so very much. I am going to frame it and put it up on my bedroom wall. It brought me back to the summer past when my fiance and I spent five wonderful weeks in a village in Morocco. Your poem is so tasteful and so erotic and just so beautiful. It really touched me within. Reading this poem you feel that you are making love. What a great job you have done.
• Linnea
  Excellent, excellent poem!
• Krystal
  I got to give it to you. GREAT poem. Your very good with the way you words things. I really enjoyede reading this writting.
• Sweety2102
  Wow. That was a Good one!
• angelica
  this poem was wonderful! there is not anything that can describe this better than what u did man u were great!
• Rossana
  oh my gosh, this is true poetry at it's best and describes the beauty of two people really enjoying one another. Thank you
• Ri
  One word: DAYUM!
• Melissa
  I think this poem is amazing,its a mix of passion and love. And its real. This poem rocks!
• KaShawna
  This is a good poem, i like it very much
• Dez
  It sent chills up my spine.
• fAiTh
  HOLIE. thats iz the most descriptive poem i have ever read in my whole life its so poetic. Poetic Emontion
• Bonni
  Oh Yeah !
• Danielle
  This poem took my breathe away! It made for a very intresting night with my boyfriend.
• Jack
  This is a decent love poem
• cheri
  All I can say is dynamic, equisite, seductive, and oh so sexy. Excellent, superb job!
• Jess
  The poem makes a very strong point. I is most definately very graphic and shouldn't be read alone.
• Shay
  One Word: WOW
• Melis
  Perfection!
• Sandy
  Beautiful!
• Holly
  This poem makes me think of a special person. He means the world to me and always will. Other than that it is a really good poem.
• Ken
  My lady loved this one. It had the desired effect.
• Jennifer
  This poem gave me chills up and down my whole body!
• Cindy
  True desire and fulfillment in print. Delightful!
• talented
  *speechless* i just don't know what to say! All i know is that i hope to be as deep a poet as you are!
• Ruth
  This is absolutely the best love poem I have read ! It totally describes the real passion of true love.
• Angela
  This poem was so moving. I was so moved by it I had tears. It was exactly what I try to say but can't.
• seanybo
  WOW!
• Heather
  Loved the poem. The words were beautiful and very erotic.
• Angelina
  one of the sexiest poems i've ever read. excellent!
• Raechelle
  I had been searching all over for a poem that might be able to describe how I feel about my husband. I just never was able to write my own words or express how I felt, until I found this poem. Thank you!
• Donna
  wow. what a poem! All my compliments to the author! believe me, it's a masterpiece!
• Annie
  Beautiful poem right from the heart.
• blue
  Thank you Thank you a poem to make me sit up and take notice. The emotions that we asleep in my heart were awakened by the racing of my heart while reading this Thank you!
• Russ
  Fantastic,,, thank you for an expression of the act in a very steamy way
• julie
  I feel in love with this poem as soon as I read it it's so beautiful
• Destiny
  WOW! Im speechless!
• Kat
  This poem is excellent and it descibes the art of making love to a T..At least to some of us.Keep it up.
• oscar
  No comment needed ;)
• Kathy
  Simply Wow is what I said in my personal email to the poet! I also said that I was sure the man I love would react as I did. Lord did he ever! Thank you for sharing your words with us
• Joona
  Whoa.. This one makes the blood run in your veins.
• Heather
  that was an awesome poem.
• wet
  Im dripping with desire.
• angel319
  I know DeVine..he is brilliant. the most romantic soul to roam the Earth. He captured my heart and resides deep within my soul. Iam a better person for knowing him.
• Les
  One hot poem in a clean way. Better, much than any poem I'll ever read!
• toya
  I LOVE THIS POEM.
• Mica
  this poem is great. it made me sweat. it is hot. keep the poems coming.
• Caroline
  It's the best poem that i ever read.. so emotional and sensual. It shows how sex must be!
• Paula
  i soooooooo long for my man to make love to me like that, to bad it usually lasts as long as the poem did! lol
• Becky
  Oh my! This poem is just what I've been looking for. So sensual and erotic. Perfect!
• Erin
  incredible, moving
• Holly
  Is it hot in here or is it just me? That was the most intense, beautifull, lifelike poem I have ever read.
• Bambi
  You are amazing, i could feel every emotion within, the desire in me has been brought forth and will be shared because of your writing
• Joe
  These are moments to treasure And these are moments too few But if these are only moments I think I like this brew That was an exquistie poem. True devotion of a night. Very sensual. Breathtaking in it's own way. Thank you for sharing this poem.
• Jolene
  Words can't describe what an excellent poem that is. It is so beautiful just the right words.
• Shirl
  HOT-HOT-HOT!
• jody
  WOW!
• Selena
  all i can say is WOW! best poem i've ever read & i must say i shared it with my boyfriend & he was speechless.
• Laura
  Totally awesome poem! I loved it!
• Jackie
  A very erotic poem, enjoy by both myself and my partner.
• dennis
  Fantastic poem,one of the best i have ever read on the internet! so full of passion and love! so touching and sentuous.keep up the great writing.
• Ino
  Wow.and wow some more.
• KIKI
  THIS POEM WAS SO MOVING I FELT LIKE A BURST. I READ IT BY MYSELF
• Thane
  Beautiful
• D
  Hey DeVine, I think you are a really, really great poet, I read every single one of your poems and thought they were all really great. I really liked this one especially, "Lover's Dance" that is the best love poem I have read. Well I think you'll get big girl,soon you'll have your own poetry book:)Well much props to ya.
• Veronica
  I thought this poem has captured everything that there is to capture about the act between two people that brings them as one, i liked it.
• Gary
  This sets the standard for sensual love poetry, tastefully written and beautiful.
• Kari
  All I can say is that was passionate and mind blowing. I felt as if I was actually having sex while reading it.
• winky
  Terrific!
• dap
  WOW! AWESOME!
• Julie
  What beautiful words. I had such emotion reading this poem. Please write more.
• Jamie
  I can feel this poem. this is very beautiful. I love it!
• MsFire
  So erotic & sensual...I love it.
• Kacey
  I loved this poem. It says it all!
• ROSES22
  This poem is beyond great. it is phenominal in it's own passionate way...
• Lawry
  I could not have said it better!
• mysweetself
  speechless....WoW..THANXS!!!!
• Debbie
  Absolutely the best poem i've read so far
• Laura
  MARVELOUS!!!!!!
• noelia
  Wonderful, Great, Just Beautiful I have never read anything like it. You are just great.
• Roxane
  Oh this is a most wonderful poem it has captured feelings of love passion,and desire.Thank You
• Annie
  A beautiful poem from the heart Keep writing them
• GODSANGEL
  FOR US IT WAS A 12 SO VERY EROTIC ,FELT THE LOVE AND LUST !HUSBAND AND I COULD NOT THINK AFTER THAT,GOOD
• Sofie
  Only words needed for this poem are beautiful and passionately
• nessa
  it a very beautiful poem! It so true!
• Tassie
  I LOVE THIS POEM!
• Cynia
  It's the best poem!
• suzan
  very sexy and romantic
• Martine
  Wow! I have the perfect person to mail that to.. Keep writing!
• Don't know
  Ohhhhh ahhhhhhh
• Candace
  This poem is so vivid, so alive. I shouldn't have read it alone, now I want my baby and he is at work! applause to the author. Keep up the unfeigned work. This is by far the best on the site!
• Lori
  Simply beautiful. You have managed to put into words what is felt from the mind, body and soul. You are bless with a wonderful gift, and I for one, am grateful you are willing to share.
• Susan
  I have shared this poem with my love.It is the most beautiful erotic and exciting poem i have ever read.
• Tori
  Beautifully written.
• Bob
  Softly erotic, but very passionate. I sent this to my wife. I'll let you know what she says (DOES)!
• shawn
  BRAVO! BEAUTIFULL! EXCELLENT!TRULLY PASIONATE.
• namrata
  it's an amazing poem which left me and my partner read it again and again . it still lingers on our minds..
• Candace
  I read it and read it again. some parts are so true. the author of this is truly magnificent. I love it!
• His
  OHHH GOD! This poem really took my breath away. It reminded me of the first time my true love made love to me.so erotic,so sensual,so completely he fulfilled me and my soul.INCREDIBLE..I sent it to him as distance keeps us apart for now but in my heart I know it wont be much longer till I feel those feelings again..truly brilliant.
• TONYA
  IT WAS SO REAL. I REALLY ENJOYED IT.
• Michelle
  One of the best poems I ever read
• Claudia
  BEAUTIFUL poem. Wish I hadn't been alone when I read it.
• Oyin
  His words describe everything i hope one day to feel with and from my future husband. I'll tell you how it worked out after we're married!
• Fritz
  That was the sexiest thing i ever read please email me personal with ideas. WOOWOWOWOWOWOWOW
• Billie
  I thought this poem was breath taking! I really liked it!
• Renee
  I loved this poem ! it was so real.truly captured the love making of lovers in a very classy way. :-) i read it over and over. it the best one i've read so far!
• Ara
  This poem was great. I loved it. I just had to pass it on.
• Debi
  I loved the poem.Had to send it to a friend to remind him of old times.Really great work.
• Pat
  When I read this poem my first thought was ohhh wow and a double wow , words can not say what I feel for this poem except it was awesome .. loved it.
• Ricardo
  Exquisite description of passionate lovemaking between two souls.
• Lindsay
  I loved this poem so much.It described in the detail my love for my husband in a mature way. A lot of poems on this site are not in such detail as this one is and that counts to some one like me.This poem is the best!
• Charlotte
  this poem is so awesome. i can't believe that i read this. this is so intense.
• Cathy
  Very hot and steamy. I love it!
• Kim
  I'm speachless.
• Patricia
  Without question, the best poem on this site! Highly sensual and erotic.. my boyfriend and I love it! Bravo.!
• Cassandra
  I think this poem is great! I would love to submit some of my poetry, but I don't think mine can even come close to this!
• Marcie
  If I could but a lover's dance, I would dance with these words. If I could but a story read, I would read these words.. No medication desired when this poem is around.
• chantel
  Wonderful poem
• evelyn
  this poem is great very graphic and leaps of the page at you it is really realistic
• SxyLatina
  WOW! this has to be the best poem i have read in a very long time i must say u have talent thank you for sharing this poem with us.
• Lauren
  Best poem I have read in a long time.
• Christie
  I have never read so much passion in one poem,If there more people with this much passion no would be lonely.
• Stacey
  I really like this poem. It described itself very nicely. Keep writing.
• Acqulyn
  The poem was very filling to me . It really makes you think about what you have.
• Bob
  Simply beautiful.
• Peg
  One word.EXQUISITE.
• Paul
  This is the best, It describes the passion of love , and it remind me of how Love making should be so magical.
• Vina
  This is among one of the most interesting poem which i hope will decribe myself one day with the person who i give myself to with all my passion which has be bottle-up.You my dear poet have given me the feeling that I long to feel...... ;) Thanx you.
• henny
  this poem is hot ;)
• Jay
  One of the most erotic poems I have ever read! Beautiful!!!
• amanda
  i loved this poem it speaks clearly of the beuty of making love and this poem is the best i have read so far - truly inspired
• Bonnie
  The best love poem on the site!
• CY
  Enjoyed the poem true to life. What lovers are.
• Karen
  This poem was so totally realistic, and as i was reading it I could picture the setting. Hats off to the author.
• shane
  all i got to say is it is good and my favorite of all the poems i have read
• Amy
  I love this poem. I plan on sharing it, with the new man in my life. Keep writing, youre wonderful.
• Jerred
  i think that was the best poem i have ever read i am not much on poetry but lovers dance definately caught my eye and i enjoyed it alot i sent it to my girlfriend and it really turned her on and she loved alot too keep up the good work
• L.J.
  What a poem!!! deVine truly has a gift of words. This poem acutally brought tears to my eyes.
• Leslie
  so beautiful and passoniate
• chris
  WOW!!!!!!!!!
• Vickie
  My most favorite poem, beautiful, sensuous, well written!
• Jeffy
  Good God, this is sex in words!!
• Tina
  Amazing...a beautiful expression of an embrace shared by two lovers...I sent this one to my online lover who I'll be meeting in just a few weeks...I can't wait for his response...keep up the wonderful writing!
• rosa
  just excellent!!!! you have a great way to express your inner thoughts...keep writing!!
• Brandy
  I thought it was an excellent poem. I would like to read alot more of your poetry.
• Liz
  Never read this over the phone to someone who is alone! It will drive them crazy!
• val
  True to the love two people feel BRILLIANT, CONGRATULATIONS
• Nora
  All I can say is that this poem was by far the best that I have ever read. I am a big romance fan so this really kept me interested. It's just beautiful.
• Manon
  Really good!
• Charlotte
  the best poem i have heard in a while. This one really touched my heart.
• Cheryl
  This poem is the most erotic poem I've read. Tells it like it is with taste and grace. Wonderful piece of art
• Heather
  All I can say is....damn!! The author of this poem is so deep, connected, unbelievable. Keep writing, Poet, you sure are deVine!!
• judymarie
  excellent poem, glad to see there are others in the world enjoying love at its finest!
• Jim
  Beautiful!
• Winston
  My girlfriend sent this to me in a card. I had to check it out. Whew! Almost need a cold shower! Very beautiful in a softly erotic way. She loved it and so do I. Thanks
• Ellen
  Absolutely beautiful.....
• Clint
  This is the best "erotic" poem I have ever read.
• Anna
  Absolutely the most beautiful and incredibly romantice poem I have read. It was wonderful to share it with my soulmate!
• jeannie
  Oh this poem was very delicious! It really excited my imagination, I could picture every part, and loved it! You are vary talented! Keep it up! :)
• clarence
  This poem I feel captures the true essence of love. It set a feeling in me to my soul.
• shalanda
  I enjoyed that poem, it made me wish that my husband was somewhere nearby instead of 3,000 miles away. Thank you for making me feel as if he was here and for giving me the chance to e-mail him with something that truly expresses how I feel instead of just the run of the mill.
• Theresa
  I think this poem really captures the passion that two lovers feel for one another. It is so intense and emotional, you can almost feel the rapture the lovers express. I know that my heart rate really jumped when I read it...and I immediately sent it to my love! (He really enjoyed it!)
• carmen
  This is such a beatiful poem. It is very erotic and described perfectly the way i feel when my husband and I enjoy each other. Great work!
• Carrie
  this poem is awesome. Sexy without being vulgar.
• Dee
  Wonderful use of erotic phrases
• jess
  deep
• Donnie
  Oh!!!!!!! My the words made me rise. But this is the true essence of man being with a women. This is what I want to feel sometime in my life with a women.
• Brad
  This explains what making love to your true love feels like!!!!!! exactly
• Nancy
  My my my my! The heart skipped beats, the palms became sweaty, with short breaths I began to wonder why I didn't head the warning and wait to be with my man before reading on... he is in trouble. :-)
• Rebecca
  This is so beautiful. Never before have I read words that touched me so deeply.
• Kristi
  This was an awesome poem! It was so life-like, but in words.
• emily
  wow very emotional
• Dynesha
  That poem is the bomb! Keep up the good work
• Johnny
  WOOOOW, makes me just want to make love tonight
• sandie
  brings back the memories
• The
  This poem was exquisite, very passionate,and erotic. I really hope that everyone who reads this can feel the passion that i did.
• luckyguy
  what a beautiful piece of art?really set my heart and passion on fire and increased my longing for my beloved ten fold.
• Errica
  After i had red this I wished my man did not haft to work out of town. This was a Ecellent poem