#14 Promise
When Becky and I got into a fight, I got very upset. It just happened that the next day I was going to a church camp over the weekend with some of the teens in my Sunday school class.
Here I met another friend, Katie, who was having a different problem. We both connected with each other that weekend. She completely understood what was happening between Becky and I, and I completely understood what was going on Between her and Charlie.
We're best friends now, and we haven't said our mutual promise out loud. We don't need to.
This poem originally was published in Friendship Poems - Teen Poems about Friendship
Promise
As you sit in silence, Wondering why I'll be your shoulder to cry on Until your tears run dry. When you've been hurt, And can't believe what they've done If you need someone to talk to I'll be the one. If a close friend hurts you, And you don't understand Remember I'm here, I'll lend a helping hand. Burdens are lighter when carried by two, And I just want you to know I'm here for you. |
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1999
Jessica Sills
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560 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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KristianI love the poem thats how i feel about my ex gurl andk everthing so i tahnk you for posting this on the computer
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merissait was great
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Vaishnaviit an awesome poem.
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anaThis is a great poem. It describes what a friend should really be. Jessica Sills even though I really don't know who you are , you did an amazing job writing this poem.
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JennyThis poem Really Touched Me. i have a friend who barely shows emotion and no matter how often i say that he can tell me he never does. i can tell he hurts emotionally and it makes me hurt too
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hebathis is the most wonderful poem I've ever heard,its so fabulas and fantastic and even great.
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caRaH PauLiNeAmmm. Actually, I haven't got in this website. We just needed to search about friendship poems as our project in school. And among those all poems that I have read, this attracted me the most and it also gave me some ideas to be a better friend. So, I voted it!
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BrittanyI THINK YOU DID A WONDERFUL JOB WITH THIS POEM AND I'M GOING TO GIVE YOU A 8 THATS GOD.
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gizemthis is one of the best poems that ý read in this site
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SophieThis is a very touching poem and it means alot to me as I have many friends who I would feel like giving this to! I hope this poem will one day get published!
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Ashiathis poem almost made me cry it is REAL touching!
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brittanyi loved your pome it touched me i have a firend that is goign thow some stuff and this is the pome 4 us
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JessicaThis poem is so pretty, i love it! It makes me think that Jessica, you're a very nice person. :)
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AmandaThis poem touched me. it reminds me so much of how me and my best friend used to be. I couldnt help but shed a little tear as all of the memories came flooding back. Thanks to who wrote this poem.
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stacyit is a really good poem i like it a lot
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wajwaji love it . it's cool
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fretai love this poem i think it's the best poem for friendship
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queenasiai love tis poem!very sweet remeinds me of me n my ex
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MeganI needed a poem that told how much I would be there for her and this was it . It was truelly great.
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suzandats a really good poem der ! it touches every aspect of true friendship. fellow readers. if u want 2 test ur friendship , no need 2 do sumthin crazy jus compare it with d poem n u will get ur answer
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MartaHi everyine i do like this site
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HaleyThis is an AMAZING poem!
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Cthis poem is just like me and my friends and i think this will help them understand that i am always there for them
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kimi think this peom is a good one because it tells the truth of some friends
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maryi love this poem. it's a wonderful description for when two friends are close. It reminds me of me and my best friend alison.
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kristian denisethis is a really cute poem 2 give some1
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ShamikaThis poem is nice. It says a lot about the person who wrote it
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devonnethis pome was verey peaceful it made me cry can you be my shoulder to cry on. just joking. but the pome was good
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Ingridwow! such a beautiful and touchable poem for me it so great
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melissaI really love the poem, it touched my heart, the poem had good detail and a nice set up
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minatsuThis poem is awesome! I have been in trouble with my friends lately and my best friend has been staying with me all the time and when I cried, she was with me, when I was in a very sad mood, she was with me. She always makes me relief. So, when I read this poem, I promised that I would be with her when she is in trouble and I would be the one who protect her. That's why I like this poem.
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reasialol i love dat poem it describe me and mah two best friendz love dat keep up da good poem work.
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ZABREENATHIS REMINDS OF TIMES I ALWAYS WENT TO MY BEST FRIEND WHEN I HAD A TOUGH DAY ! NOW THAT I LIVE IN RIVERSIDE AND SHE LIVES IN LA NOTHING WILL KEEP OR FRIENDSHIP FROM FADING AWAY! THOSE ARE THE WORDS WE TELL EACH OTHER EVERY TIME WE TALK WEN U ND A FRIEND CALL ME IF YO U ND A SHOULDER TO CRY ON ILL BE HERE!
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BritneyI really like this poem. Right now, expecialy, it reminds me of somethings going on in my best friend's life, and how I'm always reminding here I'm here for her forever and always. The poem may be short but to those who can relate to it know its so much more then just written words. I give this poem the highest score u can get. Good work!
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kendallit was very good and its helping me with my friendships! thanks you rock~
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BrittneyWOW! great job! i really liked it!
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sheilai love it it explains how i feel for my long distance friend who is pregnant and has no where to go -thanks
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Christiethis touched me becaus me and my friend had a fight and then we were all good now. thanks
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laurenamazing poems love it ur really talented
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EmilyThis is a great poem it tells the truth and it has happened to many teenagers and it could also happen to older people it has deffintly touched me it is amazing!
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courtneyThankyou so much for writing this poem! I have a friend at the moment whose fairly stressed and upset but doesn't want to talk. so i was searching for a poem to let her know i am here. yours is perfect. thankyou!
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brandiei gave this poem to my friend and even when times were bad and we were in fights she kept it because she knew that was my promise.
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hannahthis is a great poem, i found it said so many things i feel ive often need to say thank you and keep up the good work
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NurIt is a very nice poem. I felt really touched. Reading this poem had reminded me how my best friend and I had broken due to my stupidity. Not being there for her when she needs me,never showed love,care and concern.
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Brittthat's good,really good
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IeshaGreat job it had a lot of feel to it.
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Robbithis was awsome! i loved it! WHOOT!
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JessicaGreat, touching, wonderful poem. I love it.
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KatrinaThis is great poem and it truly goes into the heart and soul of what a friendship needs.
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CathyI loved this poem. I am about to graduate and I found this and gave it to my best friend. It is a wonderful poem.
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NicholeDis is a great poem. me and my boyfriend was having problems and I got on line reading poems and I started reading yours and I had to print it out and call up my bestfriend Amanda and read it to her cuz its da same way I feel about her. cuz if it wasnt for her I dont think I would still be wit my man Andrew. But yea dis poem is wornderful, dont stop writing them cuz if ya can come up with a poem like dis, then girl you can come up with anything else you want to. well peace
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lluviaI liked, its nice.
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hollyi like this poem!it is good!
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RachThis poem is gr8 it was purfect 2 send to my mate when he was crushed it related exactly to waht had happned
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alysiai like this poem
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CindyI LOVE IT!It was so sad but true.
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AndreaI love this poem! It touched me i love it! Its like when I read it I remembered how I always tell my friends that!
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brynThis was a relly good poem it really touched me. bryn 14
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JuanAt this point in time my best friend did something that was not right. she could have taken a different direction and she didn't and i sent her this poem and i hope that when she gets out of the hospital she can read it and she will understand why am here and who much i care for her. how much her friends care for her.
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jasminei like the content of the poem. it's like me. always there when a friend need help. great one.
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Sarah JaneIt's really great!
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brittanyi liked this poem it was really good!
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AryeTHis is a great poem. I chose this because it really has something that touches my heart! luv it. ^_^
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poppyi thort that was realli moving and i will be sending that to my best m8 coz it realli fills wat i want to say that is a grate poem and you are very taulented welldone that is my fav of the year i love it thx for the plesher that u gave me to read it thx love poppy xx its grate wb
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Al'Meshathis poem is very touching it reminds me of talking to one of my friends cause i will alway shave her back she is like my sister! n. e. ways that was hard( great )
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LucThis poem I liked because it is sending a message you need friends real true fruinds to help you though hard times
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dgdi love this this is true. i may not have many friend cause i lost mine but this is true id do anything for my friends.
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Nikkicool. cool. cool. cool. cool. coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
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sureshyeah it really touches my hearts
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camillei love it. in fact i copied it and paste in my project in english. Promise rocks. people should love it.
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ElyseI thought this poem really touched into the subject of how new friends can touch you in a way that your lifetime friends cant even amount too. How you can start over new with them without being judged by past actions and start a great friendship.
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CobyIf i was to give this a score out of 10 i would give it a 9. 5, i think that this is a beautiful poem.
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RachelThis poem really hits the spot. It almost had me in tears. I'd like to shear this poem with my good friends. From a poet to another poet you are truly talented.
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brittanythat was a really cute poem!
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Amandagreat
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Dianathis is great!u have a talent
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ReanneThis poem by Jessica Sills is very touching and i feel as though it may touch your heart too. Between 1-10, for sure i would say a 10.
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alysoni love your pomes it really help me get thought the held day
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GabiI think it'a really good. It's simple. but it has a good message! I'm useing it for school ^_^
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sandraThe poem was very nice. Sometimes there are things that we feel we can only share with a close friend---and having someone there is wonderful.
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KarinaThis poem really touched me because I feel that friends are really important in life. I have written some poems and even a song expressing my friendships. It's great.
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SuzuOmg. This poem is so deep. I almost cried when I read this. I hope my friends are like that to me, and I hope I'm like that to me friends.
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FeliciaI really enjoyed this poem and I believe that it is all very true. My best friend is a guy and he is always there for me and gives me a shoulder to cry on all the time. He is always there when I need him the most he is like a big brother to me. I think you did an excellant job on writing this poem.
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katei gave this poem to my best friend when she was going through some hard times,she loved it just as much as i did when i first read it. i think its great how so many of us can relate to this poem,it just means that there are some good friends out there.
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KellyYes that is true friends are always there for you and when you need them most
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CheramieI was able to relate with this poem. when I read this, I remembered my bestfriend. We never said anything about us being the best friends, we just did.
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MichelleThis poem is really. the only word I can think of is touching because there are only a few people one person could truly say this to and know that their friend would do the same. I love this poem.
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laceythis is such a sweet poem, it says all the things you want to say, without being to dramatic. it flows like friendship and it really helps to tell your friends they can rest assured that you're there for them. great job jessica.
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amandai think that this poem says a lot and i realy like it.
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JadeI do like this poem it seem to me like it came from the heart keep it up because to me it seem like you got a lot of talent
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Zenyathis a great poem this poem will help your friend feel better if they don't feel good at all
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CZARYLit touch my heart. because it is like my friend who dont know i am here for her.
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JessIts a brilliant poem! My mate was having a hard time so i sent it to him and i thnk it summed up jst how mch i cared and hoe he wasnt alone! thanks x
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mercedesI love this poems it should help most of us.
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chelseeomi god i luved this poem i sent it too my friends!
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tonithis is the best poem it is good for a sad friend this is something i would send to me best friend if she/he is sad.
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NettieGreat poem it had lots of meaning to it and i liked it alot! Great Job keep it up! Nettie
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TiffanyA poem like this could probably relate to tonnes. And for that I'm thankful.
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AlixI was really touched by this poem, because I am going through some tough times at the moment and it really relates to how my friends are helping me, I sent it to them to let them know how much they mean to me! So thank-you
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hannahi love dis poem i am actually gonna print it out and give it 2 my hom3grl!
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florenciai think this poem is great. its tell really what frienship means . been in the good and bad prtoblems. that feiend must be always
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samanthaMy best friend and I read this togeter and we were like 'OMG i love you so much'
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KayThis poem has kept me and my best friend in touch (Adela). She knows I will never leave her side. I love her with all my heart and because of this poem it will never change.
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CarleyGreat!
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KaytaI really liked this poem it's so comforting and It's true about me with my friends.
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AshleyThis is a awesome poem it means alot to me and its the type of friend that i am.
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ashleyThis say desiree thompson all over it it is great just like her I love this poem
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PaulI loved this poem it was sweet it really touched me. this poem decribes my friend she is always there for me.
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crystalthat was such a awsum poem ay it relates 2 me in so many waiz well just keep up ur writing and make em great n tell da truth no matter wat ay coz dats wat ppl love is da truths LOVE DA POEM
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ashleyi thought this poem was so beautiful. it made me think about all of my friends and we ever broke up i would still be there for them always because of what of all we've been through
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jessicathis is a poem that touched me this is how my friends and i are. Keep writing poems i will read them i have a few my self. Well done.
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ShakiraThis poem is short and sweet. It is to the point and it is just righ t for my frinds.
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Amberthis is a very touching poem and i think that you are a very outstanding writer!
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rockyi can not believe this that you become a good friend of mine on thei computer and i love that way because you become a wonderful and a special friend of mine in my heart and back to you makes me love you more now .
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amie roseHey jessica hun, thatz a awsm poem ai, i write poetry similar, normally rhyming, it helps my thortz cum owt easier. Umm yeah i like they way u rhymed it and love the last bit which is amazingly tru! It was nice to read, so keep writting and i might post one mahself sumtyme.
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RhiannonThis poem iz heaps heaps nce. good work u have real talent. u can go far wit poems lyk that
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Regginait really touched. really touched! it make me remember my BEST Friend, RANTHY. though we're seperate by distance, time, and place, i'm in Canada and she's in Indonesia, i believe we have each other and we have a connect in our heart and we are one in our LORD, JESUS CHRIST. =)
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JessicaWow This poem Is AMAZING! I love it so much! I sent it to my friend, and she called me up thanking me because she was going through a tough time in her family.
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anneit's simple. but very touching.
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chelseathis is the cooles poem ever
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laurahey i liked your poem alot it is s good one if u have close friend and i jave alot i sent it to all of my friend and i hopr they like it as much as i did
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willieI liked this poem because it was about how u should treat a friend, and tht u should always b there for them.
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dieraoh my god you were talking to me
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ethanthis poam is one inspiring poem of all!
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brittanyi loved this poem its so true about me and my bff chloe. i love her to death i just dont have a way to tell her
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JustinThis poem is going to make my friend cry. My friend Sara is all was ther for me when I need her. She protects me or stands up for me. I love this poem. Thank you Jessica Sills for righting this great poem.
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sarahOne of my friends alwys lets this other girl tell her how to live her life but she wont listen to me to not talk to her anymore. Instead of constantly fighting with her about it i am now just there for her. This poem is how i feel. Its beautiful and exactly what a friend should be!Brovo
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phyllisthis poems realy helped me in my friendship:}
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charmiei lurve the poem it's simple yet it tells everything you can ask from a true friend.
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joanai loveeeeeeeeeee the poem so much i would read all day long over and over again
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clairethis poem really touched me. i described how i felt about my best friend ashley and when i sent it to her she really appreciated it and made us even closer
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amieI loved the poem itremindes me of my friend and i and i always tell her that im here for her and i did live next to her any more so i sent it to her and she was on the phone crying she said it was so pretty how the writer wrote it and i loved it i show every one it now they send it to there friends well 1-10 rating i would give it a 11
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Brianthis poem. its jsut. wow. lol i loved it. i actualy wrote it on my best friends wipe away board thing as a gift. casue i sjut bought it for her. i hope you dont mind. -) its awsome
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LindseyI love this poem it is really great.
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Karithats a great peom
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princessi wuld dedecate that to a realli gud frnd of myn nellie and im very sorry to her:( x0x0
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TaylorI loved this poem because it is just how my 2 best friendz and i r it caught my eye in such a way i cant get it out of my head this is really what a friendship is about!
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NikkiI just wanted to say. awww =) ahah very cute & i love it!
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KaitlynJessica, Your poem says alot. It decribes me i have written poems like that just to tell my bestfriends that if they need me I will always be there. Your poem means alot to me.
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Mikkai love this pome:)
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KatieI love this poem and I will and do encourage you to keep writing. Awesome job!
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brandii really like this poem and it kinda brought tears to my eyes when i read it and it reminded me of my friend britney alot when i read it!
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Emmawow. I love this poem. it brought me to tears. My best friend recently moved away from me and I'm guna have it framed for her for her birthday :)
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Shawni really like it. i hope you don't mind me posting it. i give it a 8. 5 out of 10
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MelissaI just wanted to tell you that you have talent. I'm sure you have more to share and I think you should further your ability with poetry.
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VictoriaI have no comment about the said poem above. I just admire how she make the poem and her passion in making it.
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JordanI really like it. 4 out of 5
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jessThis beautiful poem brought tears to my eyes, and it truly described the one thing that is important in my life, friendship.
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dannithis is a gr8 poem! X X X X X
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Jaydethis poem is really good i like it
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MegsI Really loved this poem, I sent it to All Of my friends and My mom. (who i haven't spoken to in 3 1/2 years. ) It's really Beautiful.
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elishai think this poem is good it makes me think y friend are there and now i know thank you
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BeckiIt's really nice,It touches the heart! Thanks Jessica you really made my day!GODD LUCK in the comp!
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nancythis is such a true and cool poem Keep writin im interested
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katherinethis poem is realy good nd it really means something to me
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KelseyThis poem touched me so much because I have this one friend who I have only known for about 9 monthes, but he is now a best friend. He has gone through some hard times. He has tried to run away many times, and even tried to kill himself one night in early May. He is now in rehab and I miss him so much. I dedicate this poem to Jerome, my troubled friend.
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brittanythat poem rocks!
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Jackie10/10 This poem was soo beautiful! Well done Jess!
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LorissaI love this poem because it represents the same kind of frienship me and my best friend have
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Tyleri like this poam it is very good
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amandait is a true friend poem
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ElizabethThis poem really means a lot to me because it reminds me of the time my friend got dumped by a jerk and the 1st person she found was me.
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kelseyDUUUUUUUUUUUDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEEE** this was sweet man it was a great poem dude! Keep em' comin yo! Peace
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CubitOh, that's really sweet. I like this; brings a beat back to my sorry little drum. I was in a quiet bad mood before I read it, but was soon glad I did. ;)
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ashleyhey i really like your poem it's really good
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Kelseythis poem reminds me alot of my best friend she is always there for me and i will always be ther for her this poem really touched me
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Briannahey, i have to say. your poem was awesome. it touched me, i have one of the greatest friend anyone could ever ask for, your an awesome writer
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ShannonGREAT JOB! it's cool the way you put it together.
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AryanThat was very interesting and i enjoyed it very much i'd love to read more of yours
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ShannonI love this poem, it's really good and it just best explains the ways you can be there for a friend. great job!
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juliehey i just wanted 2 let u no i loved this poem. also maybe you could e-mail me the date when u wrote it cuz i want 2 use it in a poem portfolio i have 2 do for school. thanx a bunch!
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Makaylathis is a very touching but true poem and I LOVED IT!
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sianWoW , I am not one to read poem's, or anythin like that. but that was amazing . fair play you must be thinkin of someone when u wrote that, an you'r friends must be very special for u to do so .
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ashleyi really liked this poem because it really sounds like me and my best friend yahaira!
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Lizits very emotional and true with my life its just what i can show a friend. i would give this a 10.
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AdrianaThats so good! Keep writing poems like that
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tabathahey this was a great poem it reminds me of all the bad times ive gone thro with my boyfriend and i have a best friend thats always thr for me
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savannahthat is a good poem you enspire me alot!
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laceythis poem is like me
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Re'NeshaI Love this poem and I think this is an understanding poem about some frienships and this is a true outgoing poem.
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aprilit was really good and i like it
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krystali loved your poem it descrides the relationship between my friend and i. i hope that you continue writing from your heart
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MandyTHis poem rocks
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chantellethis poem is just so good. i sent it to my friends and they nearly cried i loved it.
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Sheathis poem really touched me! Because this really put what happened with me and my friends.
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JianNICE! I LOVE IT. 8-)
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WhitneyI really liked this poem. it almost made me cry and it touched me a lot
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adamthis is very good poem and i am going to use it for a school project:) thanks much, adam
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Kellythis was a wonderful poem and i can relate to it a lot !
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amandagreat i really love this poem
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KaylynnNice poem Oh and Hi
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Rachelhey this poem is awsome it is really nice
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sarahi can relate because that happened to me too. i really like your poems here. keep getting new ones for me. plzz ~_~ . well bye bye. sincerely, sarah
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nessathis poem is sad but i think it is great
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Hopeits a great friendship poem. Keep up the good work! ~hope~
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jenniferWow i guess you really care for your best friend.
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UtaDefinitly a great poem I'll be sending it to many people.
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ashleyi love this poem it should be a greeting card
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TrishaHey. Thats a great poem, I my self found it touching and great way to put it. Im also a writer but not on this site. I write about love. but keep it up, that was good Trish
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LIsaThis poem is a very good poem so good and write some more!
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aNiCeToThis peom is a really good poem. As soon as I read it, it touched my heart. It makes me feel having a friend in your life is a wonderful gift that should never be taken for granted.
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amannieWhoeva u r i want u 2 no dat i really enjoyed n'd luv dis poem. i myself writes poems but dis is good. it touched me in so many ways
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chelseathis is a good poem! thank you it make my friends day!:):):):)
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KevinYou just defined friendship just the way it is.
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Liriethis poem was beautiful. because i'll always be there for my best friend and she knows it,nut the poem really relates to us. thanx.
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AntionetteI really like this poem. I hope you continue to write these poems. May God bless you sweetie!
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ChantyI think that this poem is a wonderful and truly amazing poem. I liked it because it reminded me of myself. and what I went through. I almost cried when I read this poem. It really touched me. !
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meganThis is a great poem. This is something I would say to a very special person in my life to.
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leahThis poems is great. It makes me think of my best 2 best friends michelle and jillian! just reading it makes me think of some times we have had !
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RockyI loved the poem! it was soo cute. i just gave it to my friend and she was soo happy. i love this poem. you are a really good poet!
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TanessaI loved this poem, because all my friends are being mean to one of the coolest people i know and i'm right there beside her sticking up for her. and leting her know i'm always there for her and she has nothing to worry about! It is one of the best poems i've ever read and one of my favorites!
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crystalHey, this poem is incredible. keep up yhe good work, you kan realy touch someones heart by you work!
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KaylaThe poems wore very lovely and sweet and I think they will touch people very much and I love all your poems
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Melissai love it
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allyits a heaps nice poem casue my friend just sent me an email saying heaps nice stuff and thats the way i feel bout her :')
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ashleyI read this poem on the right day i was on the phone with my best friend and she is having her problems and this poem goes to her
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LaurieThis poem made me cry, it describes my friendship perfecly with my best friend. This desribes exactly how i feel :)
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AshleyI think the poem is great i hope u cant write more like it
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ShayleneI really liked this poem a lot. it was great and showed a lot of emotion. it's awesome.
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marinathis is cute i think it would be some thing i send to my best friend grecia i love her we have been best friends for 6 years bye
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kaitlenthis is a great poem. I love it!
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JodieI think this is a very good poem. This poem is how me and my friends are if they get in a fight they come to me know one else. They know im am all wasy here for them.
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kelliethat was cute. !*****
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AminaHi, First of all I shall thank the staff that made this awesome site. Second, good goin' it was a poem that touched me and made me send it to my friends by e-mail. Again, thankx very, very much. I consider this poem as a A+! Yours, Amina
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nellieI loved it! Your poem described everything i wish i could say to my bestie. but i hope he already knows. It was beautiful.
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sableHey i loved ur poem me and my best friend fight all the time but it never lasts for long with specail friends like us even though she was all over my boyfriend i forgave her that is a true friend dont u think?
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seanthis poem was inspirational . simple and straight to the heart.
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AmandaIt's REALLY good!
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angelai LOVED this poem. its beautiful!
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fangthat really touched me, and i am giving it to my good friend
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AmadaI loved this poem. it reminds me of my bestfriend Mandy and me. we are like twins and she would also love this poem. Who ever wrote this should keep writing. you will be a great writer someday. :)
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BellaThis poem has touched my heart. Today my best friend and I were experiencing this. I read it to her as she cried not knowing why another friend was doing some dreadful things. She knows I will always be there for her. I wanted the author to know I am truly grateful for this poem as it expresses a lot of my emotions as well as many others
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DanielI really like your poem. I found it while I was researching a school project. It reminds me of my close friends, boys and girls. I also shared it with my family.
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Amandai saw this and it was just how i felt about one of my friends so i sent it to her in her time of need
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Tashai loved this poem, because it related alot to how good my friends are to me. i have some friends who are everything and more, and this poem reminded me to not take them forgranted, and it reminded me that i need to be like them and be there for them like they are for me. thanks alot for reminding me.
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kassiit is really good it makes me think of my friend becky
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zanathis is a really touching poem, it really relates to what teenagers really feel about those special close friends. x
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chelsiethat is a very sweet poem an its really good.
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Juliethat was so touching! it was one of the best i've ever read! you could really go far with your talent and ability!
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Daniellei really liked this poem bc my friend is in a bad part in her life and i think ill give it to her. thank you
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ErinIt is very good in style and it reminds me that friends r always there 4 u
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rosei loved this poem. it really described how i felt about my friend(s). i've been having a tough time (with them) and this poem helped me to understand.
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sritikathe poem is really touching. friendship has been potrayed very well!
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michelleomg! i love this poem and it is soo true and i can relate soo much to it. So thanx for writing this hun!
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AmyThis poem really captured what friendship is or should be all about. It was fantastic!
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Mujerand exciting and truthfully poem that enchants waht people belief
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tinawell i relly love ur poem it can touch people but its jus like me n my best friend thats y we can relat to this poem!
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AsmitaIt is a very touching poem, and the second line of each stanza describes exactly how anyone feels after a betrayal or disappointment. The rhyme and the meter of the poem also make the effect more pronounced. Kudos to the poet!
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anthonyawesome poem!
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MoeI loved this!
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YanisThis is a great poem. I love it.
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RobertI voted for this poem for the simple fact that i have a special friend called Charlotte in which this poem relates remins me of us two.
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Amberi really liked this poem. it reminds me of me and MY best friend, Romni. i would like to see more poems from this author.
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StephanieI love this poem ! It`s like I am saying it , because all my friends come to me because something happend and they need someones shoulder to cry on . I LOVE THIS POEM!
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RaineyI loved it. It was so sweet. I loved it.
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sherellI love this poem "Promise" by jessica is the best i heard yet!so true
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nikkiThis poem touched my heart and it helped me to realise who my true friends were, they were'nt the ones who ignored me they were the ones that helped me to share the burden.
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caryn-marieTHIS IS A GREAT POEM, I SENT IT TO MY FRIEND AND SHE LOVED IT TO! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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CharissaI LOVED THIS POEM IT REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART I THINK IT WAS A TERRIFIC POEM.
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ChelseaI love this poem i think that it is really good and i write poems myself and i think that u can go along way if u keep it up
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Woone of my best friends bf jus brake up wif her. she took it relli bad. shes been crying tears of sadness for awhile i read this poem to her and for the 1st time in a while she cryed tears of happyiness, it just made her relise that friends are one of the most strongest fings in the world and more important then ne guy! this is a great poem and relli help my friend relise the importance of friendship. thanx:)
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Kimberlyhey, i just wanted to say that, that was a amazing poem and i was wondering if it was ok if i printed it out to send to onw of my friends that just lost her boyfriend and i wanted her to know that i am here for her. thanx KIM
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Aprilthis poem is really really good and made me think of me and my best friend! thanx for being such a good writer and thinking of a poem that is so inspirational good job!
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Ishitai liked it because i also just have one friend and we both have same problems like one in the poem
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preciousBeAuTiFuL! ( :
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TiffanyI think your poem is Very Very TOUCHING! please write more for me to read!
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MonicaI loved your pome and so does my exploratory arts teacher. It's deep and it touches me. I hope you go far with this pome.
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coriyour poem rele touched me and my best friend kayla we cried wen we read it thnks!
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TiffanyThis poem was sooo good, I read it 3 times. This poem really touches me.
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JulieI really liked your poem. I have been through the same thing. it is a great poem!
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aididGood job! It make me think about all my old friends
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roxyit is a great poem and thanks to who wrote. me and my friend were making this contract to each other and couldn't find the right poem until i found this one it is a very beutiful poem.
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samanthai just went through a once in a lifetime thing with my firend and this poem rocks for her she deserves it and so much more
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Franshellthis is a really good poem and if you think this is bad writing you are really crazy! good luck on you writing! :P/;)
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nicholai thort dat woz wikid
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Bumthis poem is a nice poemm bt it should be longer. But its still soised.
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noelI LOVE IT!
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AllyI really like this poem. It's exactly how friends feel good job!
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Angelamy friend is in jail and i know these are the words i have been looking for to say to him this is a great poem u have skills go with them
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CourtneyI am 13 and I recently had a little conflict with my best friend. Now that we're friends again there's nothing more I'd want to say to her than what is already expressed in this poem! This is great and shows teenagers' true feelings about their friends. GREAT POEM!
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EmmaYour poem was really good. You should like get it printed in a book or something. It was amazing. I really liked it. You have a wondeful talent. How long di that take to write? I wish I had talent like that. Keep up the good work your poem really touched me. You're awesome at poetry!
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jessthis poem touched me deep inside. it gave me a reality check of how important my friends r 2 me. jessica sills, never stop touching people like this through ur writing. U ROCK!
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Melissawow! this is a reallie great poem! i really enjoyed reading it! i even got teary eyes! it is a reallie touching poem! i wud luve to read more of ur poems! keep writin peoms for tha world 2 be touched! lol. i loved ur poem!
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JadeThis poem shows the value of true friendship. To call someone a friend is something that should be trasuered forever. If you are a friend be, true to all your friends, through thick and thin. I love this poem because friends are important, and they bring out our character and sense of humor in times of need. "A friend in need, is a friend indeed"! Well done Jessica on a fine poem. -Jade
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AmandaThat was a great piece of writing. for real. like. I write poetry. but I can never honestly find a piece of writing that I really really feel. not even mine. But I really really liked that one
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TygraI really enjoyed this poem because it really touched me. This poem is how i feel towards many of my friends because we are always there for eachother. It was nice for me as a teenager to read this poem and know that i will be there for my friends and they will be there for me, and to see this in a beautiful poem which really touched me.
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WhitneyThis poem is awesome. i love the meaning i love the way it all closes in the end. i luv the way it flows! i am going to give it to one of my friends, cuz it soo good great job!
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sandy (sis)good job you real discibe a great friend
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kendrai think friendship is very important to a person and should never be trampled
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CrystalThat was a very good poem. it was real deep. we need alot more kids around our age to read and listen to stuff like that. i LOVED it. it was very touching and inspiring. keep up the good work
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ELLENhey i luv this poem! it really touched me about how friends will be there when ur in pain and they can help nuture ur broken friendship
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Tiffanythis poem waz awsome i really liked it keep up the good work
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cAmLiNlOvEd iT yOu hAvE tRuE fEeLiNgZ
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pjthis poem was very intresting
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MichelleThe person who wrote this poem is a very good writter! Never stop writing! You are really good and that maaay take you alot of place when you use it!
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JaimieThis poem is amazing! Omg, you are the best teen writer ever! Keep it up!
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VeeI really loved the way your poem was worded. It flows so well! I've tried so many times to communicate the same thing in poems of my own, but they end up being too long and not quite to the point. Yours rocks!
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HeatherI loved the poem. It relates to my best friend and I's friendship. It is very moving. You are a very gifted writer and I encourage you to keep publishing your work. You will make it very far in life with your writings! God bless you!
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johannai give this a 10 is was nice
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giai was lookin' for a poem for my bestfriend cuz is her birthday and this one is perfect and beautyful, congratulations to the writter,it really touch my heart.
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ashleighthis poem made me cry man i have been there done it great job!
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dimpleit is so so cool it not only rhymes but wait for it it realy touches the heart . ITs not very cheesy or too sad its just perfect.
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DelilahI think this is a GREAT Poem it is like so real and its from the Heart!
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LacieThe poem was very good:)
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annaOn a scale from 1-10 i would give this poem a 9. I really liked it alot. It explains me in many ways of how I think and am with my friends. YOU did a really great job on this poem.
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triciathis peom is very good it touched my heart.
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TerrieHi this poem was right it's not fair if you don't keep a promise then friendships wont stay together.
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graceits a excellent poem i love it
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AmberYou are a very talented poet. This poem was very touching and pulled at my heart strings. Keep writing!
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BrittanyWonderful poem, it fits what is happening in my firends life better than any poem i have read before!
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HaleyJessica I know what u r going through cause I've been there before and I have respect for what u do. Keep doing it! I'll check for ur poems. P. S. I LOVE THIS POEM!
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savanahi love it! it inspired me!
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samanthai think this poem is very touching and i thank you for writing it because it helped me throught a lot of things in my life
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MichelleIn the past few days I have lost a life long friend and have been quite upset about it. Thank-you so much for the beautiful poem, it really helped me!
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noevery good. ! :-)
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amandai really do like this poem. i sent it to mmy best friend
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HalleyHi. I ove your poem. It was very sad.
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DavidIt's A real relief,The poem has put down all my burden.
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reginathat was a good poem. it reminds me of when me and my friends get in an arguement.
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NicoleThis is an awesome poem. I think that you should take this up. This poem really did touch me. I want to say thank you for writing such a beautiful poem. I will never forget this. It is in my heart forever.
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andreai really liked this poem. i just went through a rough time with a bunch of my best friends and reading this made me believe that someday we will work everything out and that i will someday have them back. it was a really cute poem.
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jackiThis poem is so great i luv it! don't stop now, keep going!
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kizzyIt make me feel like u know how i feel.
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chriswhere have you been. ive had a rollercoaster of a week and this sums it up brilliantly . fantastic thank you.
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JessI love this poem it is really touching Love Jess
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DarleneThis poem is very good, its very touching. Im glad Jessica you wrote this. It reminds to be the one. Good Job
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juliei liked ur poem cause it really touches me
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Kaylai thought i was really good and i wish i could write like you. Keep up the good work
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MelanieThis poem is sooo good! I loved it!
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vanessathis is such a pretty poem i wish i had wrote it jessica keep it up!
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n/aThis poem really touched me because recently my best friend lost her close friend to suicide. She has gone through so much in her life already and did not need this and i wanted her to know that I will always be here for her and sending this poem to her really let her know that.
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kirathis poem gave me shivers like when u hear a good song. it was great!
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Nur HafizAhi lyk diz poem. it really made me feel inspired.
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Dorinei really like this poem. it reminds me of my old best friend. we were always there for each other until a boy got in the way. we were inseparable, but now we are cuz of this boy who took my best friend away from me.
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melissai think this poem is really great because it says so much to a close friend because peolpe cant always explain how they feel and it really helps to show how much you care about your friend in an easy way.
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ChelseaThis poem realy touched me a lot. I almost cried when I read it.
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SwapnaThis was a really great poem. I wish I could write a poem like that.
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allisoni really appreciate the meaning of this song. it really touched my heart. friends are really important to me. thanks for making this poem. it really touched me.
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Myishai love this poem because if i was to need a friend i would love to get a poem that sound like this one thank you!
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JessicaI think tjos poem really touch my heart i have lost so many of my bets friends and all new ones came along and now there the best friends i have ever had.
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angelPretty good poem i liked so much my whole family thinks it great your pretty good don't quit
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Bryttanithanks for sharring this poem with us. keep up the good work on making such good and great poems!
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AdebolaI think that this is a very good poem, and it has helped me a lot. So I would just like to say thank you to the writer of the poem. Thank you so much
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nessaThsi is the best poem i have evr read! it helped me so much thank you
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KaylaI think the poem was lovely n sweet. I could say that it touched me. So much n I think it could touch lots more people because its all about friendship n thats what it counts.
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Jessicathis is a great poem i sent it to my best friend Mandi it is just a great poem
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slinkytH!s p0eM !s $0 c0oL! iT'$ r#alLy gR3@t
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Mariathis is a nice poem
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SarahThis poem is very touching, and it doesn't just work for best friends, it also works for my crush, I think he knows all this information, but I would just like to show him this poem so he really knows how I feel about him. This poem tells how great of a friend he is to me, n that I don't wanna let him go! Even if him n i can't b 2gether, I wanna b friends w/ him 4ever.
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JindrichThis is one of the most beautifull things ever! you have a lot of talent
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CandaceThis poem touched me in a BIG way. It makes me think of all of my friends that i love so much. Im glad i have a friend like that.
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natalieit is a great poem
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SomeoneI find this poem an extemely touching one and it seems as if the author wrote it from the bottom of her heart. I thnk that Many people would like to read this excellent piece. This deserves a very high score. By the way you have a great website.
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JennaI loved this poem. if you don't mind, I'm gonna put it up on my xanga 4 a friend who's going through a really rough time in her life right now. I have your name on my site. It's a good poem and it shows what a good friend and person you are. Thanks!
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NikiThis was a very deep poem i liked the wording and it reminds me of me and my best friend
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JessGood Job! Very cute and touching!
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ririThis is a tight poem it puts in to words things we don't always say
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lindait is the best i have ever read
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Danishai like this poem. It reminds me of when me and my friend got in a fight and i told her that i would do anything for her. i dont want her to get mad but i feel like she will not forgive me. i try my best to tell her that i am sry but it doesnt work.
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Crystalit was a great poem
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chloei loved your poem! it's so meaningful and it really touched my heart. it dispicts a strong friendship. i hope u will continue writing more poetry. coz u have the talents for it. =)
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jessicait was really sweet
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UmmiIts a great poem. I liked it a lot. It taught me a lot of things which i thought i should have known before.
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samanthahey this poem is awesome and i would like to get a copy of any other peoms you write
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jenThis was a poem from the heart
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WhitneyThis Poem is great. It shows what friends are really there for.
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desiraethis poem is touching. this poem just wants me to send dis 2 all of my friends. jessica you write so beatifully.
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Marisai really like the poem. to tell you honestly i printed it and gave it to a special friend of mine. she like it to so she put it on her binder. if i will rate this in 1-10 it will be 8! its really nice! :)
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Jackiehey this poem is great. i was wondering if i could use it because my best friend is moving away to collage this year and i wanted to wright her a poem but painting is more my style.
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AshleyI think that your poem was great.
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LeonGreat. Loved it. Keep up da good work.
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Jessicathis is a good poems i really like it i have friends that would jump off the end of the world for me and i would do the same also. this poem kinda says that
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CarolineI love this poem . it has made me so tender and I am going to write some of this to my friend.
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ChrisI love the poem.
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kateThe poem reminded me of how close i am to my friends! I put your name and peom on a gift for my good friend. It ment a lot to me!
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AmberI think this poem is wonderful!
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kaylagreat poem! it was really good. Same as me in some catagories
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Danaiahhh that was so sweet it brought tears to my eyes
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SherryComing to a new school for me was very hard, and there are two girls in my class that have been best friends for a long time. And i constantly keep trying to find a way to tell her that even though i m not her best friend, i will always be there for her and i will never let her down. :) (I would just like to say that I wrote this comment for Brittany Parsons and Lizzy Hartley)
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AngelaThis was a really good poem
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GinnyI get goosebumps when I read sad poems or poems that touch my heart and that is the affect that your poem gave me. Thank you!
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nicolewell this poem touched me in places that ive never been touched before
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crystalthis a really nice poem!
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Jessicawell done. That's exactly what I would do for my two best friends
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EmashaThis poem is so sencitive I like it so mush .
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ketlyneI liked it it describes me and friends
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AlexisI love this poem it is so much better then any of mine your a really awsome writer. I can't wait till I get as good as you are but I have a long way to go. I hope you keep writing!
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Jackieyour poem was very inspirational. And made me realize how important my friends are to me.
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LauraI read this poem, and i am truly touched. I am telling with friendships and fighting right know. This is an awesome poem!:)
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SeriThe poem is very nice. it's the best one so far. it's absolutele wonderful!
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moiits REALLY good
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cnIt is great
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jeaneneit touched me and i read it to my best friend and he cried and the only time i ever seen him cry was at funerals.
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TayOMG that is sooo great now that is so what a friendship is about keep it up!
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BrittanyHi, i'm not much of a poet so i mostly read peoples poems and by far yours is one of the best i've ever read. It may really touch someone like it did me
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Amandai really like this poem its a great poem about friendship
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PaolaThis is a really good poem it is really touching. I am pretty sure your friend loved it Jessica.
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JadeYr poem touches my heart! REally good words put in that poem of yr's Jessica!
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MalloryJessica, I just wanted to say this poem is so beautiful and very well written, I love it so much and thank you for putting it in here and sharing it with everyone. it really is a beautiful poem and i can relate to it so well. You are an awesome writer so keep on writing.
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MikaThe poem was awesome and so true.
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Whitneythis poem fits a problem in my life right now where ive always been there for this person and i sent him an e-mail telling him my feelings were a lil stronger than he knew. and well he took one of the things that i said wrong, and now he thinks that i don't have time to listen. That im no longer a true friend. :(
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teganit was so sad it is perfect almost! i abasolutely looovvveeeddd it
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LaceyI totally loved your poem! I'm love to write poems myself! I like how you put thought into how you really feel. Keep your head high and stay at writing poems!
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TiffanyI loved this poem, i got online one day to look for a poem exactly like this one b/c one of my friends is going through a rough time and i wanted to let him know i am always here for him and i seen the name of this poem and sure enough it was the perfect one, and to Jessica u wrote a wonderful poem, it would be nice someday to see more poems by u up here. i'd definately read them.
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Lorayour poem was awsome it is touching and i relly know how it is to be in fights with friends and i have people i talk that understand the situation! i really like your poem it was touching!
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RichardThis is really a beautifull poem, I've got a very close friend with lots of problems, I'm trying 2 help her as much as I can. And this poem made me think 'bout what dear friends we are :) I love it, I really do!
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GrAcEHay, I really liked your poem it was great! You must have a good imagination. It reminds me of this fight im having at the moment with my best bud and i sent it to her to show her i care. Well done and keep writing :)
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DebbieThat poem was awesome Im gonna show all of my friends what a great poem writter you are. Awesome job!
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SherrieI LOVED THAT POEM HEAPS AND I SENT IT TO MY BESTIE.
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SherrieI love this poem! As soon as i read it i sent it to my best friend Rebekah. It is so sweet!
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Jaydai loved your poem it was great!:)
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dianai really liked it good job
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nickthis is a very nice poem. right some more
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shilahYour poem is a very insperational
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WhitneyI thought this poem was so good. I sent it to one of my closest friends. I could feel her passion in my stomach as i read it. I LOVED IT!
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GeorgeVery Nice and moving poem May God Bless you to write many more. Cause you are a good poet.
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LauraIn my language arts class we had to find a poem showing gratitude and love to someone and since I picked my best friend Kelsey I needed a good friendship poem. This poem described exactly what I was feeling! Thanks Jessica:)
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KameraThis is a great poem. It really explains how I feel right now with one of my closest friends.
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FerneMy best FRiend just sits in silence all day and never speaks english and very soon she will return to Japan and I reminded me how much I will miss her
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JennyMy best friend is the best, most wonderful person I know and this poem reminded me of our unconditional friendship and how we help each other through hard times. You really are a great poet Jessica!
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lauraThat poem expresses exactly how i feel about a new friend. He goes through a lot. But i'm always gonna be here for him.
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AmberI thought the poem was great. It was everything I've been wanting to tell my best friend, but just haven't found to right words. Good Job!
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jessii wish i could write a poem like this one i liked it alot.
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IlliThis is a great poem well done Jessica!
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Jessicait was very nice & sweet & it sounded like she said it ALL from her heart! It touched both me & my friend who was sitting next to me when I read it!
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ROCIOI really enjoyed your poem. it was great.
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DonnaI really like this poem and I understand were you're coming from and what you mean through out this poem.
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AdrianI LOVED this poem. IIt has emotion and heart and can relate to many people. There is REAL talent herre!
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amberMe and my bestfriend foughtyesterday and this totally describes everything that i needed to tell her. Thanks!
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yusraI love your work. It's really touching and made me realise what friends really are. well done!
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Desiraei wanted to say that this poem was the best its is real good and it defis friendsship well
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KimberlieI loved this poem. it reminds me of my best friend lola, we've been best friends for 7yrs n we've both been through alot. We met in 6th grade and through out all them years, she's been with me through the ups n the downs. n vice versa. now i'm gettin ready for college n she's bout 2 1/2 mths preg, n gettin married. even though our lives are changing, we're still the very same people.
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MeghanI really like this poem. It reminds me of my friend back in my old home town. We were always there to lean on when times got rough and since Ive moved its been hard to do things w/o her being there beside me. But like the poem I know shes always there for me. Your poetry is awsome!
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Andriau are really talented , and u found the way to express yourself i wish i could to . this is just great honestly keep on writing
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Joethis poem is great, because it reminds me about my friends.
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Tiffanyi like this poem alot i give it a 10 after i read this i sent it to my best friend jackie
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ChihiroIt was so good, that this poem make me cry. Jessica, hope u could made more poems like this!
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Shaleiahey! jessi if you read dis its me shaleia. just wanted to say dat dis is such a great poem and it really does express what i go through with a lot of my friends.
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lizzyI really liked this poem it descibed my feelings exactly.
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StephanieGreat poem! Its dedicated ( by me) to my friends!
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Courtney & EmileeIt was very good!
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katharinathis poem was very touching. i am having trouble with a friend right now and this really helped me understand. thanks
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KristaYour poems has touched me! Its exactly how i feel about my best friend!
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RyanThat beutiful poem, It touched my heart, A poem of friendship, The power of art
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jadei really like ur poem. its beautiful
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LacyI love your poem! My friend, Sarah and I have been having troubles with our friendship because since we are in high school now we dont see each other as much as usual, so we are starting to get together more often, and this poem was the reason. Thank you so mcuh!
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Cassithis was a very touching poem, i liked it a lot
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AshHey This was an excellent poem. I just recently moved out of my house after years of abuse from my father and I live so far away from my best friends whom I loved a lot. It's been hard but I finally made a best friend where I am living now and her name is Heather. She is my guardian angel and I sent her your poem because it says everything a person like her deserves to hear. Way to write such a poem-keep it up and you'll go places.
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HezI LUV IT! My senior class and I are going to Chicago this weekend and while we are up there My three friends and I are celebrating a birthday and I think that this will fit the card perfectly!
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Danthis poem reminded me so much of how my best friend ditched me, and it just reminded me that i have new best friends now, and i have 2 b the best friend i can, and give them a shoulder to cry on, thx for the reminder Jessica!
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JonJust wanted to say that i love the poem it is really nice and beautiful :)
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LeeAnThis is such a good poem! I love it.
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jackithis poem was really nice and showed just how much friendship is worth and how much we care about eacthother.
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TyliseEveryone needs a friend like this! I found one and I am not giving her up! I love her!
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KerriI really love this poem. Its great and makes alot of sense. This is just what I needed to send to my friend!
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AngieI read this poem and it made me cry, I think it is really good and touches you right at the heart. Please write more I'd love to hear them!
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AsmiI think ur poem was reallly sweet.
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racheI TOO HAVE BEST FRIENDS AND I MIGHT LOSE THEM AND THIS POEM DISCRIBED MY FEELINGS. I LOVED IT
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mandathis poem told myfriend exsactly wut i needed to tell her! we were gong through a very rough time and i printed this uop and gave it to her and from this day on all she will ever say say is a burden is lighter when carried by two! i love your poem and i only encourage you to keep writing pieces like these. people like uyou have a talent and u finally found the way to use it! keep up the good work!
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TiffMy best friend Becca and I had gotten into a fight, and i always visit this site and i found this poem! When i sent it to her and she read it she wrote me a long email that made both of us cry! And i just think this poem is really touchin and sweet!
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LibbyThis poem really spoke to me and helped me to put my life (inparticulary my friends) in perspective. Keep on writing your awesome peoms coz they're da shit aye. Thanks again for your poem. I'll never forget it.
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RachI think this poem is great it gets right to the point
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JessThat was great. helped me find the right words to say to one of my friends
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gwell jessica that an awsome poem and it makes alot of sense i kinda felt the same way too. But sometime that just the part of life and friends will be there 4 u or and sometime they won't but when you loose that friendship that means alot to you it hurt. But then you find someone better or someone that will understand you and be there right by your side when you need them. so keep on writing because sometimes that the only way that you can express yourself on writing poems i write poem too and well just keep it up aight?
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APELI HAVE A BEST FRIEND SHE IS EVERYTHING TO ME I CAN TAKE A BULLET FOR HER, ANYONE WHO MESSES WITH HER THEY MESS WITH ME, WE NEVER FIGHT WE SPEND EVERY DAY TO GETHER. WE KNOW EVERYTHING ABOUT EACH OTHER. BUT ANYWAYZ I LIKED YOUR POEM ALOT.
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roxi loved your poem it really meant alot it touched me in a way that wasn't sad but wasn't happy all i have to say to the author of this book is you can go farther than you think with your skills of poetry and may all of your dreams come true!
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TAMMYwhat a brilliantly written poem. well done!
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maryI thought your poem was great it reminds me of all the friends i have and all the friends i had its really great.
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allythis poem is really good it reminds me of a friend that I have that is just like that
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JESSjessica what a groovy cool poem i've always wanted to write something that good and its so hard writing. i have a friend called becky as well i don't see her because her mum is a bit mean i mss her a lot.
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BethI think that this poem is very touching.
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KrAzYIt Was a TIGHT poem and i luved it i dedicate it to my BEST friend for life Nay-Nay!I luv you girl
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AndiPromise is a great poem!i gave it to a friend who was going through some tough times so she knew i cared. she's doing much better now Thanks!
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wafait is so touching
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JadenThis poem touched my heart and it was great to give to my friend because she and I are a lot closer now and we hang out more and it also touched her heart too. I think you are a really good poet and I wish you lotz of luck on writing you next ones in the future. Thanx a bunch!
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DanaYour poem was really great. It is just the thing to help me cheer up a friend who's parents are going through a divorce. I know it will bring sunshine to her day. Thank you and God Bless!
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quitaThis poem ROCKZ and i would just like to say that u have such a good poem riting talent Keep the good stuff going man!
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NikkiJessica - This poem really hit home for me, becuz I recently got in a big fight with a friend. and her name was Becky. SHe died recently in a car accident, and this poem just reminded me that I think her and I could have been friends again. Great Job Jessica!
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RayzaI think this poem is meant for all the people who have problems with there friends and its stading the truth so i think is realy good that jessica made apoem about it.
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BobThis poem brought tears to my eyes. thank you
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norathis is the sweetest poem my friend vanessa and i have ever read about friendship! we think you should seriously publish a book about friendship poems! kewl buh-bye
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hederi love this poam it makes me think of all my best friends.
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megani love this poem sooo much. It expressed how i felt and put it down on paper. Great Job!
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heaveI loved your poem, it touched me and really shows whats in the heart of freinds, true freinds
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JennThis poem is exacly what i needed to send to my BEST FRIEND cuz she moved away from me about 3 weeks ago. Thanks
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AliciaI REALLY LIKED YOUR POEM ME AND MY FRIEND JUST HAD A BIG FIGHT AND WE RE FINALLY ARE FRIENDS AGAIN AND WHEN I READ THIS POEM IT REMINDED ME HOW MUCH OF A FRIEND WE REALLY ARE TO EACHOTHER
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Larryhey that poem is REALLY sweet! im a really tough girl, but some poems. like this one, make me just totally melt! it is really nice!
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Amandai loved ur poem it really touched me
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MichelleI think the author of this poem did a beautiful job of writing it
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JustinExcellent poem. This is exactly what I needed to say to a friend going through some very hard times.
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LaurenThis was very good. I have a really good friend and I wish I could wrie poems about our friendship like that but i am not talented at that sort of thing. But you are good job! I love it
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ashleythis poem is very touching. and comes from the heart- i can tell.
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Katei read ur peom and i thought it was beautiful i hope to be able to read more by you in the future.
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saharcoooooooooooooooooooooool!
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VanessaI have a best friend that had moved away years ago and we have been friends since pre-kindegarten. I've been looking for a poem to send to her to let her know how much she means to me. I also write poems like yours, but it is helpful to know someone else shares the same viewpoint. Thanks!
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AaronThis poem is great, it was what I needed to say to a friend, thanks!
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lucyJessica, i love your peom it is so sweet. Sine it was the way i felt about all my friends i sent it to every one. I just want to say i LOVE your peom.
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MelonyI really like this poem cuz it reminds me of my friends and what happened.
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MarisolGreat poem has a lot of truth to it.
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leshai really like this poem because it is what i need at the moment to give to my best mate
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bannanaI love this poem it reminds me about me in away.
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kidbeautiful
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MariaThis poem totally represents true friendship!It's short,but SO sweet.
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JesusThis poem was very nice and it shows what being a good friend is all about. I write poetry too, at least I try to.
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JenniferThis is a really beautiful poem.
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NikkiThis is a great one! I can totally relate to it with all my friends! They are there for me and they know i'm there for them..its goin to all my friends!
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JasonGreat poem It came straight from the heart you can tell
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ErinI wont be anyone to you..I'm a person out of many reading your poem..but you should know that you touched my heart..your poem will remain in my thoughts for quite some while..just one of those things
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LauraThis poem really touches my heart!! And i have a friend who is just like that!
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BabyI thought that this poem is really heart felt! I thought of my best friend when I read this!
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DaisyI really love this poem.You are a fabolus poet.Continue with this wonderful work.This poem reminds about my best friend.beautifu poem.
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JessicaThis poem reminded me of my friend Lizeth and how much she means 2me.
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jjinjkThis poem reminds me of me and my best freind Ericka. I want to decate this poem to her.
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SamanthaThis poem makes me want to cry.
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CrystalThis is a great poem
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FleurtjeJessica, your poem is great. I loved it
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Nikkisimple yet very, very touching. :)
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Karathis poem is sooo good. everyone should sent this too a friend that u truly care about.i loved the poem
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STRAWBERRYZI LOVE YOUR POEM!
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tanneri LOVE this poem. it really relates to my everyday life.
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MollyThis was a gread poem for anyone who has a best friend. This goes for anyone who does love, trust, and care for a good friend. If you have a best friend then you will know what I mean by this. Keep up the good work and you should accomplish life alot better.
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sweetangelwhen i read this poem it brought tears to my eyes. it is really great thanks for submitting it
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NicolaI gave this poem to my friend at a time when it pretty much summed up what I wanted to say and it only made things even better between us. Thank you for a beautiful, inspired poem that helped me a lot.
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BartezKeep up the good work!
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ErinI love this poem, me and my best friend think it's great, keep up the GREAT work~
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TrinaI love you're poem. It speaks volume's with friendship's because it's hard to find someone else who understands your situation no matter how hard you try! I just wanted to say that it's a GREAT poem!
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jessicathis poem totally represent what me and my friends feel, most if them, go through really tough times!
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ashleyI could tell the poem came from the heart and that is what made it so good. It was so true, spoken straight from the heart..
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Kittiethis is exactly what i've been telling my best friend since we've met and even though i dont like her boyfriend, i'll still always be there for her if she has a problem with him or any one or anything else.
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Carathis poem toatly explaines the way i feel towards my best friend
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lovelygreat
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arifaits a real good poem ! keep it up its for frendz who r alwayz there for each other
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DustinThis is a good poem that is something I would do for my friends.
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MistyI really like this poem. It explains true friendship. not all friendships are full of joy and happiness. For they all need help with burdens to.
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ADgreat poem, i love it <-ADFUNDUM-> ghent-Belgium
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HeidiI believe this poem is very inspiring. It's hard these days to find a true friend, but I did finally a couple weeks ago.
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CrystalIt is really good i like it alot.
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TalishiaExcellent work onthis poem it really touched me and my ffriends I am a poet to maybe we could email each other some of our work but if not keep up the good work
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laurayour poem, inspired me because I have a friend just like this.
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KathyThis is really a good work. Words so true, but sometimes hard to live up to.
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Caraaww it was sooo good i got chills!
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BobbyI think the poem you wrote was very sweet.=)
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shaynei like your poem a lot
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JessicaThis poem is great and I really like it because I feel that way about my friend.
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CMGreat!! Simply Great!!
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AnthonyYour poem is the perfect poem that describs a promise I made to a freind; it hit close to home... awsome poem
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DebsI can understand the strong feelings you have expressed in your poem, Jessica. I really liked reading it. Keep up the brilliant writing!
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aliThat was one of the most beautiful poems i have ever read! Keep up the good work!
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LauraI love this poem! This is what I try to tell my friends.
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BrandyI love this poem. It reminded me of my best friend.
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ShaunaI think that this poem is wonderful! It explains exactly what is going on in my life ad when my friend e-mailed it to me I practicaly baled! Thankyou for writing this poem you saved m life.
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AlisonI know exactly who to send this to. It is perfect.
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jonathanthis,is a very good poem!
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boshai loved it.i sent it to one of my closest friends and we just didn't become friends at the first sight he had an old girlfriend dump him and i was there to help him thabks for writing this poem
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EmilyThis poem is very well written, and it hit very close to home.
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HenryThis Poem "Promise" has made an friendship even more than it was. I would like to thank you for that. It just made alot of sense of what we were going through right then and there. THANK YOU!!!!!
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JessicaThis poem is very sweet, and sincere.
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DinezThis poem seem so real because a promise is something everyone needs to keep. I always try to lend a helping when needed.
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KayleeJessica, this poem was fantastic!! I loved eveything about it. It completly describes my friendship with my best friend, Kristy. Thank you and good luck on your future poems.
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BrittanyI thought that was an awsome poem!
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