This is written to my good friend who recently committed suicide. I want him to know he still means a lot to me
This poem originally was published in Friendship Poems - Poems about Lost Friends
You Were Always There
Whenever I needed someone to talk to You were always there. My eyes filled with tears, my heart filled with pain, and You were always there. There was no time when I had doubt to come to you because You were always there. I could see in your eyes you wanted to help, and that you really cared. Whenever I was down and blue You were always there. No matter my problems, are what was wrong You were always there. Whenever I felt like nothing matters You were always there. Now your gone, and I don't know what to do I close my eyes and think of you, and how You were always there. It's hard to look at the pictures, and get memories of you Can you hear me now At night I pray, and I speak to you I guess you were right when you told me no matter how far you were You would always be there. I know one day I'll see you again, but till then I have to say goodbye Even though it hurts to hear your name, and speak of you One thing I will always say is You were always there. |
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1999
Zac
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463 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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SONJAthis peom really touched me. I love it so much
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MARLYNITS NICE KEEP IT UP^^^^^
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jessicaI can relate to this poem at this point and time in my life because my best friend and me of six yeats are no more. It's hard living without a best friend to cheer you up when eveything is wrong or when you just need some one to laugh with. I miss her so much and I will always remember that about her that she was always there.
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susiewow thnc alot for the poem i loved it. keep up the great work!
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AshrafMade me cry, so sorry for your loss, i know how you feel.
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shashivery nice
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CharleeThis poem touched me greatly because it sums up my feelings about the death of my best friend, a year ago, when we were 13. It gives me great reassurence that someone else feels the same way.
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lilieHello, i love that poem. i have a friend that always used to be there but now she has gone off with another girl and i sent her this poem i hope she just thinks of me and rembers the good times we used to have x
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rosemaryI have been looking for something that means everything to me in one poem and now i have found it thank you
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MarcelaThis Was So Sad.
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HeatherThis poem is amazing. It describes excately what i'm going threw with a friend i have who is leaving for college next year. I was a freshman in high school this year and she was a senior. We weren't best friends but i'll miss her like she was my best friend. Thank you so much for this poem.
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EMILYTHIS POEM IS SO TRUE I JUST WANT TO SAY TO THE PERSON WHO LOST THERE FRIEND I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL I JUST LOST MY HOMEBOY AND NOW HE IS RESTING BUT HE WAS ALWAYS THERE FOR ME AND THIS POEM I READ AT HIS FUNERAL THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITTING THIS POEM SINCERLY EMILY
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danielleIt was almost 10 years to the day that my best friend died in my arms, the 10 years prior to that he was the driver of a double fatlity car crash and one of which was my other best friend. I am only 28 years old and have been blessed enough to have 2 best friends. Two only friends. After Linds died I clung to Brennan like a life line and found it very difficult to make any form of friendships with other people. I lost him this past Novemeber 10 years after the car accident. He died in my arms . as did Lindsey by the side of the road. I too can relate to this man's loss. If at all possible please forward this comment to the author of his poem. Sincerely, Danielle
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Deanthere was a time where my best friend was always there for me, but he drifted away and hangs with chavs smoking and will end up drinking and getting a low standard of life, i hope he realises how much i care, and will come running back. and this poem can make me cry every time. and Zac, i sympothise for you, i know how this feels, thankyou for this poem. i know that crying makes no difference, for some reason when he walks past me i cant cry, but i cry myself to sleep about my loss and his loss. hoping that he will come while im in bed, and hug me and be my friend again.
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JessI love this peom. I read it and Tears begin to wel in my eyes. I lost my best friend just over 2 years ago, i loved her like my sister and everyone says that i shold be over it by now, but. . . i would give the world to just spend one more day with her, just to be able to have someone to be there for you, no matter wat. Someone to be your shoulder i guess. I miss her so much. this poem but just put all my feelings into words. Thankyou so much
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crystalHEY! your poem is great. it about made me cry. i bet your friend loved it im sorry he passed . crystal.
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shovannyaVERY SAD I HAD A BROKEN HEART BEFORE
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meghanthis is reallly sweet
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JayThat is very touching. Your poems brought up emotions long lost, as I lost my best friend years ago. I thank you for that.
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YggdrasilMagnificent. =3
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ErIn ReBeKaHwell yeah, my best friend and cousin died almost 2 years ago on april 6. I really wanted to say that you will never loose your best friend because he always be there. I love you kendall.
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SamanthaI just want to say that your poem really touched me and you did a really nice job writing it. Life is sad and unfair.
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joannei love this poem. i had a cousin that died a year ago and i loved him ssooo much. he was always there for me when i needed him. he was soo funny. this poem tells me thateven if someone is gone they will still be with you when you need them
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SarahWow, i thought that was very well writting, i was searchin for insperation to write my poem, me and my friend are writting one together for a friend who just passed away, and yours really helped . well done! and thanks . -Sarah
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sweetyits a beautiful poem i reminds me of my frnd who has left & i really miss
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TracieZac, I understand how you feel. This poem touched my heart. My best friend died in september of 2006 and I have been lost without him.
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jgood job loved it ,inspired me a lot thanks
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CarolineI'm sorry that you lost your friend to suicide. But, if your friend was here, I'm sure they'd be touched to know the extent and depth of your care.
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renaei loved it because it sp describes my friends and also it was read at my nans funeral by me n mi big sis! :)
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nikkiI just lost a really close friend and was looking for the right poem to put to words what I am feeling and this poem did just that. Thank you.
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Hollandits a beautiful poem and i totally relate to it
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VThis poem touched my heart. It is as though it were written for my dear friend in heaven.
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RakeshHi Zac, Very nice to red your poem, Dont worry. Everyone are born to leave us some day, But still they are alive in our heart as you made your friend alive in your poem. We never loose a friend who really care for us,
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DomanikaI loved this poem because i have had something like this happen to me.
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haleythis poem is very sad but with that it tells the truth. Always remember your lose love ones,a nd always remember they are loking at you right now
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laurenREALLLLLLLYYYYY GOODDDDDD LOVE IT .
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NinaI loved this poem. It was very heartfelt,,the author of the poem really,,,expressed his bittersweet pain in this poem. I identified with it because it reminded me of how I felt and still feel about my big brother that I lost. Good work Zach! I am looking forward to seeing more work from this author. Thanks,,,,,9a
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TiffanyI think this is rele good i lost a bestfriend in a car wreck last year and it's very hard bc once you lose that one bestfriend that you can talk to about anything you want have another one and not a day goes by that i don't think of her! And i have been wanting to call her bc i have been sooo depressed and it hits me she's not here to talk to and i get rele angry and she was a rele good christian she was 16 years old!
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ashleaomg that poem brought tears to my eyes
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charWell, i lost my friend due to suicide and this poem. Real explains how i feel, although she has passed on 2 years ago, i still feel the same pain that i felt that horrible day. It's unbearable and i want to say thanx 4 explaining what i couldn't.
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Gracei really loved this poem. me n my best best friend r having a agurment at the moment n this poem reminded me of just how mush she means to me n how i dnt want 2 lose her. coz she means the world 2 me n is always there for me no matter wat. i cnt imagine my life wifout her. so BEC i hope u read this n no just how much u mean 2 me. i told the world bout how ur da best best friend EVER! lol so now ur famous! love u bec! xxx p. s. n well done 2 zac by the way GREAT STUFF keep it coming
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RachelHi Zac this is a beautiful poem, keep up the good work. My one and only true close friend Lesley (age36) died in her sleep today, So if you don't mind I'd like do dedicate this poem to her as she was alays there the best friend anyone could ever wish for.
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CHARLENEI REALY LOVED YOUR POEM IT TOUCHED MY HEART IT IS VERY TRUE AND IT REMINDED ME OF MY MOTHER MY BEST FRIEND AND IT MADE ME CRY I THANK YOU CHARLENE
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ashleyZac I really love this poem. It really hits home for me. I think u did a wonderful job with this one
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ekomzone thing is certain it surely touch my heart and relieve the past i had with my bestest friend!
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mazz100% for this poem i lost my husband through suiside and i know how it feels,i also right poems and it dose help to place words on paper, regards mazz
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cassiei loved your poem.
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hopei like this poem cuz i just recently lost a friend, we all did. her best friend could use this poem because im sure its how she feels.
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lizziethis poem really touched my heart and made me burst into tears coz i also lost a fren and it was a tragedy good work zac !
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emilyThis is the most touching poem i have ever read. August 7, 2006, i lost a best friend. and after reading this, it just enlightened everything. and it makes me realize so much. I have to give props to whoever wrote this poem, you are a great person and you know how to go deep into thoughts. it's easy to read between these lines. and i think to everyone who has lost someone like i have, this just makes things seem so much better. i read this poem outloud and it made me cry but. the crying was so much different this time. the tears weren't as sad. now i know that no matter where Nick is. he's always gonna be there for me. thank you.
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RickyThis poem really touches me. Because one of my best friends died. He killed himself. so it fill my heatr that this poem was said.
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janathis poem mad me cry becouse i lost a firend and she was always there for me
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rachaeli think that the poem was a really beautiful. i can send that to alot of my friends who i have had to leave behind for some reason.
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AnnaThis Poem Is The Best Poem I Have Ever Read! I've been in that position. I love it! Great Job!
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SANDRAI really loved the poem. I recently lost one of my closest friends this year. This poem really touched my heart and I can totally relate to it. Lovely
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kyrstyon september 5 2006 Isiah wilson; my best friend commited suicide. This year has been the rockiest and most painful year of my life; i lost someone who i truely loved, and i cant deal with it. I read this poem and i started to cry because its true. Isiah was probably the onyl person i could talk tom he listened and hew as always there. Im sorry about everyone elses loses truely; its things like this that help us cope. thank you.
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michelleThank you so much for this poem. I was struggling with my own thoughts on how to convey my feelings at my mother-in-law's memorial(I considered her my second mother after my own mother died 12 years ago). Thanks to you I now know how to convey my feelings. Thank you
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MargaretThis poem could not be more appropriate for "the sister I never had" best friend I lost last week. She was only 47. I want to use this poem in the online newspaper tribute to her.
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MarcyThis is such a beautiful poem. There are few people in this world that truly and deeply touch our hearts and make a life changing impact. Once that person is gone it is very hard to expresshow you feel and this poem does that.
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ALICIATHIS POEM IS SO SO SO GOOD I LOVE IT BECAUSE I JUST LOST MY BESTFRIEND IN A CAR CRASH AND HE WAS ALWAYS THERE FOR ME AND THIS POEM TOOK THE WORDS RIGHT OUT OF MY MOUTH I LOVE IT THANK YOU!
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Reemthis is one of the best poems i've ever read. You've mention nearly everything i feel when am away from my best friend. please write more poems . bcz u a really gr8 poet.
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kaityive lost my best mate so yer thats a poem where i can relate to great poem
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dorothyi really loved your poem i lost a friend or should i say friends i lost 6 friends in a least 2 years they were young 3 was 13 and the rest was about 17 or just graduate and i miss them so much and this poem really touch my heart
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lyndseyI loved your poem,its so moving. Your a brilliant writer x
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ALEIFIYAbeautiful poem. actually brought tears in my eyes!
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JuliaIt touch me very much so. I lost a dear friend from cancer and he was there to the end.
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heatheri just lost one of my good friends. it is a great poem it describes so much. if you would e-mail me i would like to see sum more of your poems
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melodieI lost a friend today. She was more like a sister to me and no matter what I was going thur she was there with her words that said all was going to be ok I was married to her brother and the day I lost him she was right there for me she never did judge a person just tried to help and she would give you any thing you needed here is to you BONNIE I love you
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sammandis really a wonderful collection of poetry about a lost frnd
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StephanieIt's very sad and everything. It is a very good poem so me and my BFF {Best Friend Forever} might make it into a song for a band we're going to make.
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kaylanice
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EchoTouching poem! Dont know why i cannot stop from crying while reading it. Since he left, i know nobody can be him again, do wish he could be with me forever, and never go! Love happens secretly, but he went away at the right time of love coming. I am here, where are u now?My heart is waiting here, but ur love will never come back.
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DIANAWELL ZAC I REALLY LIKED YOUR POEM I HOPE YOU CONTINUE TO WRITE MANY OTHER POEMS IF YOU DO NOT MIND WILL LIKE TO DICATE THIS POEM TO MY 2 BEST FRIENDS ONE THAT I HAVE AND ONE THAT I LOST
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TeresaThis poem it's amazing please do not stop writing this kind of poems.
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AspenThis was a sad poem, but it was great because I know how you feel/felt.
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kassiesad poem but true and i need a friend like dat badly
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MikaylaOMG!Its just like what i feel my best friend moved away and every night i cry for her to come back. She was always with me. in normal times and fights she was there. And finally tommorow im going to see her again and im hoping i can give her this poem because i can never really say what i feel. im sure im going to cry tears of joy. AND ITS HER BIRTHDAY PARTY FOR GODS SAKE!
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nithyawoooooooow. this poem is realy great n it really made me cry. i jus lost my friendship whic was truely sincere. we were friends for almost 4 years. everyting is gone nw. this msg made me value my friend more n hope tht one day she'll come to me. atleast before i die. i really miss her
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mirandiait really touched me Because i just lost one of my best friend. he was in a bad car wreck and it was his time to go. well this was the best poem ever think you for having it for me to read.
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JAsminei really enjoyed this poem it really reminded me about my mother sah pasted away one year ago i really enjoyed it. Thank you I love you mommy Love your little princess Jasmine
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Courtneyhey this was really good! it so reminded me of a friend who moved away a lil while ago almost a year! Its really awesome! keep up the awesome work!
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KellyI voted for this poem because recently I had to move to North Carolina and leave my best friend Amber behind. I'm always thinking of her and telling her how much I'm thinkful for having her as a friend and no matter what I'll still be here for her. I always thank her for always being there for me. One time she helped me stop cutting and doing bad things to myself. So when I read this poem it touched my heart and made me relize how special she was to me.
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AnnieOMG, i fell u homie. i luved dis poem. i can relate to it sooo much. :( i had sum1 pass away very close to me, and i miss him sooo much and u no it is hard to lose sum1 dat close. and it's good dat u can express urself by writing this. cuz i bet A LOT of ppl feel u. i got much luv and respect fo u dawg. n dnt trip, cuz whoever ur writin dis to is up there listenin and luvs u til da end.
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MonaHi Zac, Your poem hit home for me ~ my 26 yr old son passed away in Dec. 2005 after a long debiliating illness and it is still difficult to think of him not being here. Thank you for your words. Mona
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MatthewWOW! this poem is truly written from the heart. My female friend, Darcy, is moving to Houston and it's affected my life in ways that I don't even think about, it's kind of a emotional domino effect. I thought I was the only person who would really know what goes on when you lose a friend, whether loss of life or simply moving. Thank you.
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samanthait made me cry my friend i got in a fight he said he doesnt want to be my friend anymore
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daniellei also had a friend commit suicide and i can relate 100% to this poem. i loved it.
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LisaI cried when I read that poem. It was really beautiful.
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melissaI really likd this poem it was really good and I sent one to my best friends Rachell and Mariah.
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BrittanyThank you so much for sharing this poem it touched my heart so much. This thursday will be one year since my best friend Kendall Galmiche died. He was always there for me know matter what. it broke my heart when i woke up to a phone call that he od'ed. Its been a really tough year and still is tough without him but i know hes watching over me from heaven now. He'll always be my guardian angel
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Jamie!OMGEE, THIS POEM REMINDS ME SO MUCH! I HAD THIS ONE FRIEND BRANDON, HE WAS THE ONLY PERSON THAT WAS THERE FOR ME NO MATTER WHAT! HE DIED IN NOVEMEBER, & LIFE HAS BEEN HELL WITHOUT HIM! HE KNEW JUST WHAT TO SAY, & EVERYTHING WOULD GO AWAY! I LOVE THIS POEM!
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MatthewI lost someone that was always there, it hurts to think about it. Your words really touched a soft spot, thanks for bringing me back to reality.
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CJI needed a poem for my ELA assignment and this was perfect! Its a really great poem.
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streekerHey this a good poem and its sad! I know i hate when my friends try to do that! I guess they have lotz on there mind and dont realize that they dont hurt just thereselves but us too! well g2g like the poem and sorry to hear that
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cindyi love this poem this brought tears to my eyes this reminds me of my old friend sammy but she moved away and i never get to see ehr also my friend ashley that was killed in a car crash. thank you for sharing this poem R. I. P ashley louise forton we love you
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SarahThis poem really touched me while reading it becuase I lost my dog who I've had all my life and he passed away recently. I miss him and this poem says exactly how I feel about him.
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SI really liked this poem because not 2 long ago, my best friend died. He was the best of them all and he died in the worst way: he got ran over by an 18 wheeler truck. this poem really touched me in ways i cant explain. thanks.
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Amandathat it so reminds me of my x bf
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ScottQuite a touching poem! I too, like so many of the others who have left comments, have lost friends to suicide. I can relate to the emotion in your poem. What touches me even more however is that I can relate to the other side. the side of the one who is always there. the one who no matter how much they are there for others feels so alone. I am TRULY sorry you lost your friend! Know that by always "being there" he was showing you how much he cared and that "deserting" his friends was the toughest thing for him.
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CookieI really liked ypur poem! it was great, i'm still crying because i had t say goodbye to one of my friends and she said she'd always be there for me and even since we're not friends i'll start to cry at school and she'll be there even though we're not friends any more! thanx loved your poem!
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Stephaniethis poem is really nice.
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Sarah-janeO. M. G. you are such a great writer. you put a lot of feeling into that. i think that is very brave. i know it isn't quite the same but, i lost both my parents by the age of 10 and that is exactly what i thought. especially about my mum. good luck in the future!
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SarahI love this poem I started to cry. It reminds me about some of my friends, friends that did die in car accedents and got hurt or died in other ways, or moved far far away from them and can't really see them any more. I did have a close friend, but I had to move far away from her. Now I am just tring to find her, so I can talk to her again. I don't think I'll ever find her, but I am not goin to keep my hopes up. She was always my closes friend. We use to do lots of stuff to gether. I'm going to print this off, so I can think of her again; know that she was always there for me when I needed someone to be there for me.
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DEUNCAI THOUGHT THAT THIS POEM HAD ME ALMOST IN TEARS. I COULDN'T NOT BELIEVE THAT THIS PERSON WROTE SUCH A POEM THAT MAKES ME COME TO TEARS. IT HAD ME LIFTED UP AND THAT'S HOW I WANTED A POEM TO MAKE ME FEEL THIS WAY . THAT'S IS HOW I WANT TO ALWAYS FEEL ABOUT MY SELF. I REMEMBER THAT I HAD ONE FRIEND THAT HAD DID ME THE SMAE WAY AND THEN I HAD TO MOVE AND COME AND GO TO A DIFFERENT SCHOOL AND I DONT HARDLY HAVE ANY FRIEND BUT MY FRIEND THAT USED TO GO TO ROCKDALE THAT'S THE SCHOOL I USED TO GO TO BUT NOW I DO REALLY THANK YOU FOR MAKING SUCH A WONDERFUL AND BEAUTIFUL POEM THANK YOU SO MUCH
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debbyi had a very good friend but she pasted away not that long ago due to illness and this poem makes real sense about the way she and i were to each other it was written with alot of thought behind it and was very beautiful
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gemmai loved this poem because ive sent it to a friend i lost the other day
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saraGreat, it touches me deepley. It reminds me of when my bestfriend(bloodbrother) commited suiccied.
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SaraThis is a wonderful poem. Im very sorry about your loss. Ive lost a friend too. and she was always there for me and now she is gone. So keep up the good work.
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katiei love that poem it reminds me of the way i felt when my grandpa died.
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KatieThis poem really touched me because last year i lost my very good friend even though he was a animal this poem said everything for me. I know that the author of this poem could not of wrote this without going through it so i am sorry for your loss, I know what it fills like.
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JACOBThat poem is really awesome. You did a good job. I'm glad I read it.
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LeenaHi I love this poem your poetry tached my heart I also write poems but this is the first poetry i feld in LOVE WITH! EXELLENTO
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brooklynni deticated this 2 my friend that got sent away 2 a mental hospital 4 the 2nd time 4 cuting herself and trying 2 kill hersrlf me and her are closer than anyone i know and she is all i have cause i am in D. H. S. well i have a family but i am not alowed 2 see them well i just wanted 2 tell you why your poem was so special to me
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juliethis poem was really good. i love it
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Sarai liked this poem so much. I mean even though me and my best friend are still together we've joined different collages so i guess if our friendship ever ends this is exactly how i'll feal. Hope it never does though coz my best friend is the world to me.
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aliceI liked it. Brings back good memories destroyed by love, hate and my depression.
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melissayour poem is very deep. i feel the same with a friend of mine,i lost a year ago. she was my best friend and in ways as i daughter to me. and now shes gone,and it feels as if a part of me died with her.
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Chikathis poem really ment a lot to me because my best friend of 12 year was always there for me but then we got into a fight and i backstabbed her taking it to far. now we arn't friends anymore. maybe in the future we will be but the one memory i hold closest to me was that no matta wat problem i had i could always go to her and she would be thur.
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erissathis was a really good poem. it reminded me of how my sister was to me. now my sister is gone and this poem made me think of how she was always there for me. thanks for making my day.
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JamieTheis poem touched my heart because had a problem that had something to do with a friend I think if we do all look harder we will find that a friend will always be there, Although it might just be harder to see
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LaShaeThis poem really got to me, because about a year ago in january one of my best friends/boyfriend died and I was always with him or talking to him and you could talk to him about anything he never judge or said anything to make you more upset. he tried to make you smile or tell you something that was worse and then you'd feel better about it. i miss him so much still
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laurathis poem touched me bacause my friend reacently commited soicide and it broke a lot of peoples hearts and your poem made me feel better i really liked how you touched my feeling and i always pray at night to him also
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Nizai really love this poem because even if its such a sad poem it also came from your heart
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DanielI really liked this poem. My best friend recently left and this poem reminds me of him. he was like a brother to me
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laquettagood job this sounds like a poem a friend wrote to me one time but worded different
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ElizabethDear Zac, I Injoyed reading your poem, And I can relate your pain. I lost my wonderful sister patty ten years ago and it feel like yesterday. Zac keep up the great work! I also look forward to hearing from you. -Elizabeth
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billiethat was a really good poem i too lost a close friend that took his he was always there for me. that poem was moving
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AimeeThis poem was amazing, it really touched me, one of my best friends commited suicide last month she was only 18, so i no how hard it is
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CamelliaThis is honestly the greatest poem i've ever heard this poem really brings out meaning and has passion. Thanks for writing it!
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priscillai really like ur poem
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albertaI recently lost one of my friends last year and to hear this poem it really touched to hear that someone is really writing what they feel because i feel the same thing he was like a little brother to me.
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anonwow, this so made me cry. its realy ironic tho as its exactly how i feel about my mate who i recently fell out with really badly. im gonna show it 2 her and see what she thinks. thankyou
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lindseyhey i love this poem, my boyfriend recently committed suicide and i know how you feel, this poem is so true he was ALWAYS there for me anytime i needed him,. i just wished he would have talked to me bout whatever it was bothering him cause he knew everything there was to know bout me and my problems,. i will never be the same wihtout him hell he was the love of my life,. but anyways keep writing poems this one was great hope to read somemore of them
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varshawell i find this poem to be really facinating. i bet it can touch anybodys heart.
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DianaThat was an amazing poem! It said everything I was thinking, everything I wanted to say and more. It was if I spoke to Zac in preson or on the phone and told him about my friendship I had with my bestfriend that pasted away two and a half years ago. I have an illness and my two boys say that she is my angel watching over me. I still have her number programed in my phone and not a day goes by that say is not on my mind. If I ask my boys were is Mary they point to either there chest or mine & say forever in our hearts, Thank you Zac the poem is prefect. Mrs. Diana Nacchia
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lindseywell i like your poem alot. my boyfriend committed suicide sep. 23, i thought we had it going so well and now hes gone i dont know what to do without him. and your poem is about me and him, it has really touched my heart alot. Rest in Peace CODY MICHAEL WINGLER 10/2/89- 9/23/05
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BrittanyHey I love this poem. It reminds me of what my best friend and I went through when I had to move. Even though I don't get to see her anymore it don't matter cause she will always be in my heart and well as you say it she will always be there. Thats all so bye. Love Brittany.
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KimOne of my best friends was hit and killed while riding her bicycle on June 20, 2005. She was only 14 years old, and had just graduated from 8th grade 6 days before. We are now fundraising to build a gym in her memory
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iani like your poem it made me remember of my friend who pass away . she is so there for me everytime i need help i can relate to the poem.
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PatriciaThis poem touched me. I really liked it. I lost my BEST FRIEND Melissa to a car wreck and it does still hurt when I see her pictures or talk about her or here her name.
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KrystalThis poem was extremely good. I give you props you really understand the feeling of losing a friend
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LindaAll I can say is, I enjoyed this poem very much. Not too long ago I lost a very very dear friend of mine. He was just after his 17th birthday. God blessed me with his friendship, but it is still hard to look at pictures of him and speak about him. May God bless you all. Please wear yall's seat belts. It is one way to keep a friend. to take care of him/her.
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ToddA touching poem and i hope someone has deep feelings for me like that when i pass on
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laurenthat was a great poem!
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TerinThats a really nice poem because im in that situation right now and its hard and i can just relate to that all the way
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SamanthaI think that the person who wrote this poem was going through something really tuff. And this writing has just touches my heart. Yesterday i got a phone call that a frriend of mine i went to high school with, (we were really close) had died that thursday before. He has been in the marine corps for about 2 years and last june he was shipped off to Irag. He was shot and died later of complications at the hospital. Im miss him so much. and just the feeling of knowing i will never see him again just makes the miss and hurt that much more painfull. Thank you.
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JerryI just lost a very close friend of mine (Aug. 29 , 2005)and i loved her and when I heard this poem i started to cry no one was expecting it just happened for no reason. The next day at school everyone had heard what happened they were devestated, everyone was in shock not knowing what to say but I just want every one to pray for me, friends, and family , thanks.
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KatieI loved this peom. it touched me on such an emotional level. i got goosebumbs all over while reading. u were meant to spread joy and sorrow at the same time :) a true gift
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GiannaI luved that poem, touched me. i think i will use it for my project we have 2 read a poem out i like this 1!
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CJZac I love this poem one of my friends found it online and sent it to me when my best friend was killed. you poem describes mine and my best friends friendship. Your peom is great it really touch my heart you have a really good talent for writting and i hope you don't ever stop writting.
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damieli really love this poem coz it reminds me of my dear friend, vin. HE'S ALWAYS THERE.
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LucyThis poem is so beautiful and meaningful to many people im sure!
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for Ronnice!
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BrittanyI really love the poem. It'sjust like me and my best friend. She was always there for me but now it's my turn to say godbye, and I don't know f I'll ever se hewr again. I'll always love her thoght no matter how far apart we are I'll always love her! I love that poem it's pretty great.
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DeniseThis poem reminds me of an old friendship I use to have. We were best friends. We met when we were babies, and we always got along. Now, we just don't speak to eachother, and although I try to forget, I will always remember the great memories we shared. Its so hard and painful, I wonder what happened. There was no fight, we just stopped seeing eachother. I sometimes feel as if it was my fault. I wish we were best friends again. This poem is VERY good. I'd give a five out of five stars.
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AmandaI think this is one of the best poems I have read on this website so far. It's sad, but yet it is also very inspiring. Great job.
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SamI lost a really good friend to a hit and run accident and this poem says everything i can't. It's amazing thank you
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BeautyI like this poem a lot, it really reminds me of a very close firend of mind who died way before his time. Whenever, i needed him he was always there. Always in my heart.
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anGieI reallie enjoyed this poem. because on July 3rd of 2004 my bestfriend had also commited suicide, it's one of the hardest things to deal with, so i know how u feel. and till this day it still tears me apart. ur poem touched me. thanks:) keep writing cause ur good at it:)
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AllyI read this poem and I loved it. I think it touched me soo much because my friend it movin to Alberta and I will miss her soo much! I have very little doubt that i will see her again but this world is so small u never know what is going to happen next! But I have to go talk to you later!Thanks for doin this poem! It was amazing!
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janneti've always lean on friends. your poem made me cry. congrats.
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jessicayour poem was awesome it made me think alot it was probably the best one that i have ever read it made me cry with tears of joy keep up the good work cause you going to reallt make it big some day sooooooon thank you and have a wonderful day!
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AdriannaOh my. that was amazing poetry, I know how you feel though I had someone close to me die, I am sorry for what happened to your friend. And as you said they will always be there for you no matter what. Thank you.
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annettethis poem reminded me so much of a friend of my that just passed away recently, thank you it help me so much!
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VictoriaThis poem touched me it just did
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annettethis poem touch my heart , a good friend just passed away it remindedme so much of him in always . thank you
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Merlenai dont know what made you write this poem but it helps me alot cause my friend killed him self and we were really close. he was always there to wipe my tears and to make me laugh.
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laureni am cryind aghhh. good poem. xxxxx
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emmathis poem says alot for me vbecause i have recently lost a close friend and this says everything
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LeehaYour poem touched me in ways i never new i m sorry to hear u have lost your friend. i have losted heaps of friends but not in the way u have mine have just left town and c me once in a while. but i loved your poem and i think your friend also would have loved it too.
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JemmaI love this poem! I can really relate to it and Zac I think you have done a wonderful job expressing yourself and putting your feelings into words-that takes alot of strength! Your poem was great!
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MaryellenI loved how true the feeling is of losing a friend. You hit it right on. I'm doing a project for school about lost friendships, and I'm going to reference this poem in it.
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AmsA poem i can very well relate to. one that put into words what exactly i feel
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brookei love your poem as my best friend died recenly and shes been there for since i was 4 yrs old
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Hannahthis was a great poem, i know how it feels to lose something close to you. hope you get throught the hard times.
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JessicaThis poem ment alot because a very good friend of mine just passed away and i miss her smile so much but i still talk to her alot
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mollyyour poem was great it helped me appreciate my best friend , who sometimes i take for granted as some1 who will always be there. you made me think of what i would do if she vanished one day
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stephanieI thought your poem was great!,,, I lost one of my best friends,,a couple of weeks ago,, he had lost is brother in a drunk driver accident,, he was the victom,,not the cause. but my friend couldnt take it any longer and he killed himself,,found him on the ground. i was so hopeless when i lost both of them,,and i dont know what to do,, i could always talk to him about anything and now that he is gone i really dont have anyone to talk to like i could him,, i miss him so much and your poem really touched me and it said everything that i thought when he died! thank you so much for sharing the poem with me. ! ,,stephanie,,
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KATIEI LOVE THIS POEM. THIS HAPPENED TO ME TO ME TOO. MY BEST FRIEND MOVED AWAY WHEN I NEEDED HER THE MOST,SO I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL.
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selenei think the poem was very good and expressed the way someone would feel. very good words that were used.
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Emmai swear, i cried after reading that, probally cause it is sorta what happened to me and my friend, good job.
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ryleyTHis peom was so great. It explained every thing. A year ago i went through a mental break down and tryed killing myself. I have the scars on my wrists and my friends saved me litterly. This poem shows how stupid it is to kill your self because it leaves so much hurt behind. I admire you so much for every thing youve done.
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KristaThis is a very good poem it touched me and dreminded me of my best friend Bree
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O.MandyYour poem really touched me and made me realize that we should apreciate your friends and what they do when they are near you.
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Ericai loved it it made me cry just reading it because the same happened to me exept my friend was murdered
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Karenthis poem touched me because it was deep and from the heart it wasn't like anyother poem i have read this one sent a clear bold message about someone u care about but is lost i give this person props for writing this inpecable(perfect) poem
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fozzythis poem really touched me. i had someone who was always here for me and left, so i can relate to this poem. i would like to send this to the one i have lost to let them know how much i love them. thankyou so much for writing this poem. you are a wonderful poet. please write some more like this, im sure many more people will love them too. xx
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leoniei would just like to say that the reason i am voteing for this poem is because it is full of emotion, and the poet has obviously put his heart into this poem. it is a very touching piece Zac. x
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JackThis poem brought a tear to my eye . perhaps several i recently (as in the past year) lost my very best friend to a guy in intorduced her to from me school i should be grateful that i've made her happy, they are madly in love .
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jessicaThis poem really touched me i could relate 2 it cuz i lost my best friend n it hurts so much 2 no dat he is gone but i always remeber da good times and da way he was always there for me.
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mariai hope u read this. if u do, i want 2 let u know that i luv ur poem. i wish i could write poems, i try but end up not finishin bcuz i get stuck r its 2 childish. my best friend passed 8mnths. ago. i read this poem at her wake, i hope ur not mad bout me usein ur poem. i know she loves it bcuz i luv it, its perfect. thank u! keep writing!
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liviaIt was a good touching poem
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areeji loved the poem because i just lost my best friend and it helped realize how stupid it is to fight when you have been friends with some one for so long(8 years. thanx i needed that -areej
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AllisonI really liked your poem. It touched me
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BrittanyThis poem is very meaningful because it says to me that you should never give up on your friends because no matter what you think or say your gonna need there help during something and untill then you can help them and if one day there gone all you need to do is keep on thinking positive things like there gonna come back to you or that your gonna see them again one day and I know from experience
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crazythis poem, really touched me. i have lost a friend b4 who wuz always there. i just wanted 2 say thanks and i love that poem, and 2 zach, u r a great person 4 sharing such a loveable and meaningful peom 2 me. thanks crazy'lover
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Biadnyi feel your pain i too went threw this i had a friend that just well flew away and forever more to leave me in pain i truly didnt know what i would have done if i didnt speak my mind out what you did is probably painfull and i will understand just letting all of you people know writting poems is a very good and healthy way to let your feelings out dont hold back
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FeliciaThis poem was very touching to me because I just lost my best friend to suicide. Your poem made me think of what good times and thoughts we had together and gave me comfort to know what we shared can never be forgotten. Thank you
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MelanieI LOVED IT! I HAVE JUST BEEN PULLED AWAY FROM MY BEST FRIEND BECAUSE OF MY PARENTS. I CAN REALLY RELATE TO THIS POEM AND I WANT TO TELL YOU I WRITE POETRY ALSO
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BeckyWOW! this poem was a great poem and really had an effect on me. my best friend died last year and i know how your whole world comess crashing down and you need that person more than ever and there is nothing you can do. im sorrry to hear bout your friend but be thankful for the time you had together
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stephanieLOVE IT LOVE IT made me cry! It's so treu love it!
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kimberlyThe peom really got to my heart In a way i can relate to it cause my friend that was always there about 6 months ago she had to go back to Ecuador an well i feel like ive lost a friend cause now i cant go upstairs to her when i need her like i used to b4 we all moved thanx for helpin me remember how much she meant to me hope u rite more poems
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ThomasThis is an awesome poem. I found it when doing research for an English assignment. It was called Oral Interpretation. We had to pick a poem, and read it (hence the Oral part of Oral Presentation) in front of our class. I knew when I read this poem that it was the one. I got a 100% on the poem. Thanks, Zac.
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AshleyThis is a very great poem! I know how you feel b/c my best friend Adam got killed in a car accident right after he has left my house!
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jonahthat was such a good poem. It was so sad. I am sorry for your lost but that was a really really good poem thanks for expressing yourself to others.
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ShawtyYea i really like ur poem it was very touchin! Thanks because now i kno my friend will always b wit me!
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tanashaI loved the poem it was sooo beautiful u have alot of talent i write poems 2 but never put them on the internet i enjoyed reading ue poem
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jeffGreat poem. It hit close to home. It seemed like it was made for my best friend that just passed away at 17
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mariaits hard to try and forget someone who is close to you. my friend was killed in a car accident and when i think of her its hard not to be able to see her smiling face. always follow your dreams because no one knows when it is our final day. always talk to your friend because from above she/he will be sending their love
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stephanyI like this poem and is very nice this hole page is very nice and all this poems are juts so beutiful im so threlled and suprised to see so many talented people im so happy that one of these days im going to be able to put up some of my poems.
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TristaThis poem was great, I'm so glad that you take the time to think and feel for your friend. Thats a true friends. It made me think of my frineds and how one day they aways wont be there for me.
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Mariahi really liked this poem when i moved i lost one of my bestest friends so thanxs zac for writing this poem i was really touched by it
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EricaI like this poem because i once had this guy friend. he was always there for me until he moved. but i guess i will see him again.
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kateI lost a dear friend not to long ago and every time i hear this poem i cry. she meant a lot to and hearing this poem it reminds me of how she was there. This is a very beautiful poem.
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Brittanyi love this poem its so very touchin, its so sad but so true. god be with you god bless
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darioi love your poem it hit me good i lost my brother not long ago he was only 39 and my best friend he made me a man and was always there for me and i know he will be for ever you made me cry and made me happy keep writing and make more smiles
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Nikkita-Nikkolthank you so much for letting everyone read your poem it ment a lot to me to read this because i had a friend who committed suicide also so i know how it feels to lose a close friend he was like a brother to me but anyways your poem was great thank you so much again Nikki.
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rhoelynman you got such good poem so i was saying my friends says it makes them sad. well i think it was cool for a loner
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KatieThis poem really hit home. My best friend just recently moved away. She sent me this poem, and it brought tears to my eyes. We miss each other a lot, and this poem totally put both of our feelings into words. Come back home, Jasmin, we all miss you!
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Brandoni just recently lost my best friend of 13 years. when i read this poem it touched me so much becuz my friend was always there for me, and i know that he is always there now. i thank u for writing such a beautiful poem i am very thankful for reading it.
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mirandaThis poem really touched me, my eyes were getting watery as I read it. I just lost my twin sister a month ago and this poem really related to me and my sister. This is a really excellent poem!
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AmandaI love this poem it remines me of someone!
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sexybest damn peom ever. hope you keep on writing
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Kay-Kay-18this poem tells the truth, I should know because I just lost my best frined to cancer. I'm very sorry for your loss. God Bless you, never forget your friend, I know I won't, thanks to your poem.
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shaunathis poem really touched me because i am in this same situation with one of my lost best friends
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michelleThis poem really touched my heart and brought back memories of a friend that i lost to murder 18 years ago. Great job !
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jazminethis poem really have touched my heart, specially , cause' i know how important is a friendship in the people´s life. Gaviota
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JESSICAI THINK THIS IS A GREAT POEM BECAUSE I ALSO LOST A GREAT FRIEND THAT WAS ALWAYS THERE FOR ME AND I CARED FOR HIM VERY MUCH.
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lizwhen i read this i know that it was about me and my b\c thomas and he lives across the stree from me and we did stuff together and now hes gone he moved and i never see him and when i read this it was everything that i do and i thought that was cool i really love this poem a lot nice job
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emilythe rasnes why i pick this one is becasue it is touching and it is thue friend are like that
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DonnaI started to cry ,when i read this! I just lost my best friend 2 weeks ago,and everything that was said in this is how i feel/felt!I miss him so much ,and still heart breaking and im still hurting! KEEP UP THE GR8 WORK!
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LACEYmy best friend was killed in a car accident during my sophoore year of high school. i am now a senior! and when i read this poem i brought back so many memories of him. i just miss him soo much and this poem was a great way for me to think of all the good times we had together! thank you for writing this. it has touched me in a way you will never know. thanks
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nikkiYour poem was wonderful. I am truely sorry about your friend.
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Lac eyI have a great friend that this poem decribes perfectly! I printed it out for her and I know she'll like it.
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ashleythat poem is so true because there were these two guys who were my best friends and they moved away and this poem describes our friendship prefectly! thanx
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BRITT BRITTTHIS POEM REMINDS ME OF ON EOF MY FRIENDS THAT WAS IN ACAR ACCIDENT AND SHE WAS KILLED AND HOPELLY SUM DAY I WILL GET TO SEE HER R. I. P. MEGAN JO
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Kimthis is a very good peom. expecially for those who lose there friands and need something to show how much they meant to them! * K I M *
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laciethat was awsome :D keep up the good work
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armandinayou poem it's very good a love alot keep it up with love armandina
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anineYour poem really is a touching poem, I know exactly how you feel my best friend died a year and half ago and I know the emptyness that you feel but the only thing that keeps me going is the memories of her and everything that I do i do it for her. I hope this helps you in some way.
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stacyi came looking for poems that reminded me of the love i had for a very close friend, oddly enough named zak. he was killed a couple of years ago, and this poem really touched my heart. i speak to him quite often, and some days it's still hard to look at his pictures. this poem is proof that love can cross even celestial boundaries.
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Cheyannei really liked this poem because my best friend recently died in a car accident and the only way i can get over the anger is to remember how she was always there when i needed her and how she is still here wiht me now. in my memories.
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LaniThis poem touch my heart. And I know how you feel. I lost my boyfriend 8 months ago because he commited sucide. I it is hard letting go someone you actually cared for. But I love this poem.
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angelinahey man omg this poem totally roks like omg omg omg! like its sooo kool and its makes meh think of jennie. jennie i miss ya MWAA! big kiss. the author is sooo good like mah god.
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BrittanieI like this poem of friendship of you were always there cause one of my friends moved by me, and we became great friends in just one day, a couple days after I promised her that I will never move and I will always be here for you, a year or a month after I told her " sorry I have to move I know i promised you that I will never move but we need to move but I don't know why we have to move but I will miss you all of the time and I will always think of you" we both listened to a sad song that made us both cry all day and all night
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JosieThis poem as touched my life in so many ways. Now instead of me wanting to kill myslef over the loss of my cousin Oscar i want to rejoice in the love he brought to my life, to all the ppl hes met all the ppl that love him. thank you for such a beautiful poem. God Bless You.
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AdrianaThis is a GREAT poem! I loved it because it is really touching and a scale from 1-10 I would definetely say 10!
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leighit touched my heart because i lost my bestest mate in the hole wide world it just makes my cri every time i read it.
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CiaraI know how it feels to loose a great friend. and its hard to realize that they aren't there anymore. Hope you move on and you will find someone else that will listen and help out with advices or problems.
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ellei found this poem very touchie coz i jsut lost my bestfriend and i'm going to give this to her thankyou very much
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Laurathis is a really good poem good job on it!
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MonicaThe reason this poem touched me so much was one because I write poetry as well and could sense the emotion behind it and two because one of my really good friends commited suicide as well. I like to know that there are people out there who have felt the pain I have felt and who can express it in ways as poetry or writing. I think poetry and writing are very effective strong ways to express yourself and I idolize those who can do it as well as this.
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vickyI can relate to this poem alot! i've known this guy for 10 years, and im only 15, but he went to jail for 4 years, he was like my brother and we were so close, but now i only talk to him in letters. i miss him soooo much
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michelleThis poem really helps with my loss of my best friend and two of my really good friends in a car accident a yr ago. It really describes what I still go through you really captured true feelings. I was looking for a poem to put next to there pictures and this is the one I choose.
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KRISTALwell it was a really touching poem l ost a best friend cuz she never really cared and always took me for granted. but no matter what i'll always be there i guess that's why i liked it you'll get really far!
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Jessii rate this poem a 10 out of 10 because i had or almost had the same thing happend to me. but she didnt kill herself (almost). she couldnt do it when she got to the suicide letter that she was going to write to me! but i would like to thank you for that inspiring poem! i read that poem to her. and it made her stop and think. once again thank you!
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Bradenthis really touched me i kinda related to it one of my best friends just died of lung cancer and i didn't know how to deal with it so i just wrote all my emotions on a piece of paper i didn't know what to do without him and so all my memories are on one wall in my room
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Maggietrust me i dont cry a lot. but when i read this i had a tear in my eye. i wanted 2 comit suicide be4. but i thought of how my friends wood help me out n i knew i could get out from this mess.
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HeatherI LOST MY BEST FRIEND JASON EIGHT YEARS AGO. IT STILL FEELS LIKE YESTURDAY. HE DIED AT THE WORST TIME EVER. NOT THAT I WOULD THINK THERE WAS A GOOD TIME FOR HIM TO DIE. HE DIED ON HIS BROTHERS BIRTHDAY, THE DAY BEFORE OUR SENIOR PROM AND A WEEK BEFORE OUR GRADUATION WHICH WOULD OF ALSO BEEN HIS 19TH BIRTHDAY. NOT TOO MANY PEOPLE UNDERSTOOD OUR FRIENDSHIP. SINCE I WAS A GIRL AND HE A GUY. WE WERE BEST FRIENDS AND THAT WAS IT. HE WAS ALWAYS THERE FOR ME NO MATTER WHAT. ALWAYS THERE WITH OPEN ARMS AND A EAR TO LISTEN OR A SHOULDER TO CRY ON. HE WAS TAKEN BY A DRUNK DRIVER WHICH WE KNEW. I NAMED MY SON AFTER HIM. THANK YOU FOR YOUR POEM. IT REALLY HIT HOME.
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NayYour poem is really really really sad :( I really like your poem. i really like how you put your hart in writing it. good jod and good poem
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FatimaI really like this poem, it makes u feel sad, and realize how much a friend is helpfull and important in our life. I love ur poem.
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TanyaOh My Gosh! That poem really hit the spot congrats:) Great poem keep up the good work you are very talented
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BeccaI really liked this poem. I've never had someone in my life that I've loved so much as my best friend tell i lost her and this poem just really touched me!
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WendyThis is a very good poem because i just lost a friend she moved away from here and she always calles me to talk if something is wrong or the other way around.
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EleThis poem is somethin. I love it. It's probably my favorite poem i've ever read. It's also kind of sad and I can relate to this poem.
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ChandraI ENJOYED YOUR POEM IT BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES BECAUSE LAST YEAR MY FRIEND DIED ON ME AND WE WERE ALWAYS THERE FOR EACH OTHER AND NOW THAT SHE GONE IT SEEMS LIKE EVERYTHING IS GOING WRONG SHE WAS LIKE MY GUIDING ANGEL SHE TOLD ME ALL THE GOOD AND BAD THINGS I SHOULD DO AND I MISS HER VERY MUCH. I LOVED YOUR POEM AND THANKS FOR PUTTING A GOOD POEM LIKE THIS ON THE INTERNET IT LET ME KNOW THAT MY FRIEND DO KNOW THAT I TRULY MISS HER!
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BrandiI LOVED this poem! About a month ago on "GOOD" friday April 9,2004 we lost three of our best friends! They died in a car crash the last day of spring break. They were always so full of life and always had a smile on there face! If you were ever upset they would always try to cheer you up! WE REALLY MISS KELLY MEGAN AND MARY! WE LOVE YA'LL!
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sadishaI thought this was a great poem
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monicathis poem omigod its sooo. good i can so relate to it! :)
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nickthis poem was really good it touched my cuz i know wat its like to lose ur best friend. my best friend was shot and killed 2 weeks ago and this poem really reltates to my feelings. good job
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StanaThiz poem is the best and wen i red this poem i started 2 cry even moore(i woz b4 i started 2 read thiz) and it really touched me and it fits in so well with mi best frend and teacher coz shez leaving us and its so good to me thank u for writing thiz!
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Samanthayour poem rele touched me and i no wot u av been through because my m8 has jst been killed! i was wonderin wether i cud read out ur poem at his funeral! thanx!
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sarahi love this poem. just last year i lost my friend trimane he was only 14 when he died. it was such a supries. he had such a big heart. our whole town was broken hearted. he will never be forgoten. and this poem reminds me of him. thank you
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jessicaThis peom was awsome it made me cry i have lost 3 people in less then a year. i was very touched.
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Tarai am going through a hard time with my friend and i cant wait to send this to her! if i had to rate this poem i would rate it an 1,000,000 because it was soo great!
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Laurythis was such a sad poem. i almost cried. i have never had to go through the pain of losing a best friend through suicide, although i had a friend that almost committed suicide and i didn't know what to do.
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hamadahit was hell nice . i never read nice things like this be4. and i am sorry for ur best friends. may god bless him always
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TreciaWonderful poem. I can definately relate.
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Marcoi loved the way you express and even known that im in a kind of situation like that i loved its great
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BrittianyThis is a very nice poems I understand the feels and the pain.
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lilothats really good i lost my boyfriend two weeks ago and that really touched my heart
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VickyI LOVE THIS POEM! i can relate to it. cause i met this guy from brooklyn new york online and i knew i could always talk to him. but i dont talk to him anymore so that sucks. i really miss talking to him.
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karinaI think its a very sad and helpfull poem because it helps you.
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AndreaOMG I love this poem it is so perrty and i can relate to it so much. Keep up the good work and never let anything stop you from doing what you love.
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KayCeeThis poem was wonderful. I know what's it's like to have a friend committ suicide and it's been very hard on me since he's been gone. But I feel the same way you do. And I know he'll always be with me even if I don't see him.
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amandaI really like this poem because it explains exactly how I feel at this time. My best friend was recently killed in a car accident and it has been so hard, because she was always there when I needed her.
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naomithis poem really is one of the best i heard it really shows what people like my grandad are like you never do say goodbye i have wrote lots of poems about things like that but put them in a book for my grandad to have but i dont know were to publish them so i and others can read thanyou
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TiffanyThis is a very good poem it touck me in a very deep way.
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marlieit was a great poem and i really liked it.
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Leahomg,this poem is lovely. iv had many friends pass away, and this is how i felt. this is a great poem, i love it, good job.
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PankajHi Zac, Ur poem was excellent and heart touching. Feelings were expressed very well. God bless U. I'll surely pray for ur friend.
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KentIloved that poem it hits home in many different ways
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KieWhen i first read this poem it took my breath away. This past year[2003] one of my friends passed away and i became depresssed thats when i found this poem. I went to her memorial service a few days later and recited it aloud. I may be rambeling on but my point is this poem helped me get over my troubles and move on. Thank you 'Zac'[oh-yah by the way awsome poem]
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sezi think it very sweet wat he wrote and im sure his thinkin about u i know how u feel im sure he knows ur a good freind
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AshleyHey! Nice work. I hope that you will cheer up and get on with ur life. Know that your friend will always be there looking out for you. God Bless You.
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Tiffanytat's my life. my best friend left me and i luved.
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TaraThis is a really great poem that touched my heart.
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CharlieOmg, omg, omg, i love this poem so much. nearly a month ago i lost my best friend in the whole world. she also commited suicide. right in front of me! I have been so distrought about it ever since, and this poem expresses how i feel about her almost exactly. It is comfurting to know that someone else in this world feels thesame hurt and pain that I do! Thank you so much!
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chelseai think this poem is really good. i can relate because i lost my best friends beth 5 months ago and my friend mikey 7 months ago and i never got to tell them wut they meant to me and thank then for always being there for me
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minervahey, this poem reminds me of a friend i used to have. He died in a car accident when he and his little brother didn't buckle up. this poem really brings back memories thanks
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bawiThis is the greatest poem I ever read
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ChelceeThis was a great poem and I sent it to one of my very best friends to whom i havent seen in a while and she loved it! This poem brightened up her day & when i read her email it brightened up mine! thank you for writing this poem, it made a difference in my life.
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desireethis pome is the best one i have read yet it reminds me of my friend who passed way when we where in high school.
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LauraThis is an truly amazing poem that is inspiring to me!
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tomisinaHI! i really liked ur poem. i wish my friend would say something like that to me
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Amberthis is a very good poem. i am srry that you had to go through this. i feel your pain
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JessieI think this poem is the best! it is so true! I can so realte to it because my very best friend dustin is moving and he was alwayz there 4 me! I love the poem so much!
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melaniei love your poem and i am so sorry that your friend committed suicide. my best friend hasnt died i just havent seen her in 7 years.
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kristiethis poem is very touching i had 3 friends that commited suicide 3 years in a row all in different years but the same day! this really touched my heart
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shellywwooww this poem is like me and my bestguy friend he always told me he was going to be here for me no matter what. and he will always be in my heart no matter what even if his not here right by my side his up in heaven waiting for me. will yeah i really love this poem thank u for making me feel like i was not the only one that felt like that.
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ElisheaTHAT POEM WAS REALLY MOVING AND IT EVEN MADE ME CRY. WHOVER WROTE THIS POEM YOU REALLY HAVE A TALENT
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Rocioi loved that poem so much! I read it when my best friend was goin to leave to mexico and i would never see her again. So i thank you for writting that poem. Its really nice. I gave her a copy and she'll always remember me and i'll always remember her.
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samanthaOH MY GOSH YOU POEM IS THE BEST EVER!
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erikai lost a friend in a canoeing accident a year ago! i can relate to this poem because my friend was always there for me no matter what! i like your poem and hope that everything with you will be okay. we are kind of alike in a way because we both lost someone we care about very much. i hope you can find peace in your heart, i know i did after a long time! sorry for your loss!
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JessicaWOW, that was very emotional. I have recently lost a good friend of mine, not to death but to a controlling gurl. But i cant have any communication with him ever. ur poem is exactly what i am feeling and that was awsome. Props to ya.
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Biancahey zac, you dont know me but this poem is awesome. you have so much courage, being a guy. and your so talented. most guys are embarassed to write poetry and share it. your poem really touched me. your lucky to have this sort of talent
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APrilThis is such a good poem! it reminds me of my best friend who moved away and i cant wait to see her again. GREAT JOB!
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yeseniawell i love your poem well just today i got kicked out of my school and this poem made me cry casue my friends where always there so thx
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JasminI know how you feel because I lost my father and I can relate to your poem. Hopefully you can find another good friend but he or she will never replace your loved one.
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Alyssathis poem is really good. it makes me think of my friends and how much they care about me and how much i'll miss them when there gone.
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mistythis is a very good poem it has help me out i lost one of my good friends last year he got shot in the head by his best friend . but it was a total freak accident he did not mean to but like they say the wrong place wrong time
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AshleyThis poem was very touching and i really enjoyed it. It was very awesome!
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moniquei liked it. I relate to what it's saying! It's one of the most productive poem i have read in g a long time!
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SAMIn June my best friend and co-worker died in his sleep of a massive heart attack. The suddeness of his death overwhelmed me. I felt I had lost so much. but as the months have passed I have realized something very important. I have only lost his physical presence in my life. But I have not lost him, nor his friendship. for he still is in my heart! Thank you for a beautiful poem that helps to express what I feel.
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AngieI lost one of my best friends this year on Mothers day of 2003, he was 21. It was a terrible accident and I miss him more then words can say. Your poem was amazing and described exaclty how I feel. I would give 10 years of my life to have him back and say the things I never got to say. I loved him very much and miss him even more. Shane! you will always be in my heart
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Cindi (sin)I loved this poem and i would just like to say that you are a talented and awsome writer
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lauraleethis poem was the best i have read. it brought me to tears. it explains everything i am feeling about loosing my best friend last month in a car accident. your thoughts and feelings are sincere. you can tell your friend meant the world to you. you have talent. you put feeling into what you write. i hope to read some more if you write.
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PatWonderful poem. Sorry for your loss.
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ashleyhey great poem made me cry right now as i write i am looseing a freind not the same way you did but it is about to happen and thats how i feel but about a year inb a half ago i lost a friend in a car collison with a light pole and he died at 16 well that also how i fellt and you should keep writing!
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chessiei really liked your poem, i just lost a friend and . i dunno but the poem just really made sense to me
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kodyThis is a very touching poem. It made me cry. Somthing like this has never happened to me but it happened to my friend reading this poem made me see how he feels. Im really sorry about your loss.
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Andy1word, WOW. That was absolutly amamzing. Im lost for words and that doesn't happen very often. WOW!
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nickwow this poem was great it made me cry. i actually know how he feels actually suffering thru a best friends suicide.
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ericahey i love this poems this is like the best poem ever! i love it!
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RachelOMG this peom is so awesome! it made me cry, i love it!
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MaryVery touching peom, it's really true when loss a love one! Keep up the good work.
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Kristinhey zac your porm is soo nice. my friend jodi died in a car accident 3 yrs ago this aug, and it seems so much longer. she died 2 weeks before 6th grade, and didnt get to grad with us, or go on to high school. but your words, wow, it is how i feel about jodi. thanks!
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beatrizi loved your poem it made me cry
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KendraWords cannot express how is makes me feel. Amazing job. Excellent poem. Sorry about the loss of a true friend.
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Jenniferwhen i read this poem it was very touching for me because i have lost alot of people in my life that have ment alot to me. Family friends everything and now that they are gone i just dont know what to do with my self it just doesnt feel right but now that i have just tried to deal with the pain i guess it just all comes natural. when i read this poem i fell in love! i love it.
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AmandaWow! I have been looking for a poem that was suitable from me to my brother, who just recently died in a car accident. This poem is definintely the one. You've got talent!
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RhondaI have looked all night for the perfect poem to send to a friend I lost touch with a few months ago. I just wanted her to know how much I miss her. And I miss the friendship we had before she moved. This was perfect. Thankx Zac.
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KalaThis poem. is amazing. you wrote it for a suscide. yet. I can relate to what the poem says. I'm grieving still over the lost of my best friend (the last ten months) And the poem applies to me also. Your an amazing writer and your poem is outstanding.
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LuI liked your poem, and it made me cry
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MelissaWell I really liked your poem and I can totally relate to it. Since I read your poem I see what my friendship with my best friend really means and know I know what I need to do.
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stephanieDear, zac your poem really touched my heart ive had 4 of my really close friends die this year in a car reack, and from cancer. It is very hard to deal with but im getting buy. keep writting!
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ashitathis poem touched my heart coz it is that just i few days back i lost someone who is really close to me, its that i cant see her any more and that the paragraph remind me of what i told her when i was leaving her house that i'll come back its not that i m leaving for ever. this poem is a beautiful piece of emotions
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ASHITAi recently lost my friend as in we r seperated this poem is exactly how we were i miss her a lot and had tears in my eyes when i read it. its just too good and words r not enough to express my thoughts
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CynthiaYour poem "You Were Always There" is great. It hit home. everything you said on that poem is exactly what I feel. My best friend Elizabeth committed suicide on the 27th of April of 2001. Your poem brought tears to my eyes. Sorry for your loss!
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Chrissyi loved this poem. i'm going through the exact same thing. reading this was like seeing my life through the eyes of someone else's pain.
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StephanieThis poem touched me because it was perfect for the person I sent it to.
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Nicolethis poem really hits home for me because I just recently lost my best friend over something so stupid and i think I will send this to her because she was always there!
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TiffanyI love your poem and I think someday you should be a poet. Iam sorry about your friend I know how it feels one of my brother's friend died but he was my friend too but he died over sickness. IAM TRUELY SORRY
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andreayou know what,i miss my besyfriend and everytime i dream about her when i wake up i was always crying. hope that me and my bestfriend will have the same conversations like before
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schitzohi, i just lost my little sister, she killed herself! i miss her so much this poem means a lot to me, i was recently diagnose of having type 2 schitzophrenia!
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Sheri LynneWhat a beautiful poem. I would like to use this as a memorial poem in the paper
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ali-jothat was really touching and i hope for only the best for both u and your friend
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autumnthis is a very sweet poem i love your work
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brandiI have read about 50 poems from other poets and your was the best! i cried when i read it. I know you tried really hard to suceede and you did! KEEP UP THE GOODWORK!
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Mikewow. i read a lot of poems. but dat has gotta be one of da tops
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DebiI didnt really lose my friend physically, but emotionally yes. i became a christian, and she stoped bein my friend, she was my best friend for 3 years, i still think of her and dream of her. thank you so much for that zac! u really helped me. i just wish she felt the same way.
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kellyThat poem is so great. It brings a tear to my eye. Its such a great poem. ! Great Job. !
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moniquewell i luv this poem it's relly good this happend to me and my best friend erica i luv her still iwant her 2 be my best friend again how do i tell her
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meganThis poem is really good,im reallly sorry about your friend i cant imagine how you feel. God Bless You
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qudsiai really like this poem, itz just wonderful.
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DianeI can relate to this poem so much its not even funny. my freind commited suicide 2 weeks ago.
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kallythis poem really touched me my friend too resently took his life and what you wrote is exactually what i am feeling.
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SUGEYI REALLY LIK YOUR POEMS KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK CONGRATULATIONS.
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DanI have had a friend who recently was shot I miss her alot. I wish you good luck and I really liked your poem.
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HanoiHey zac. That poem was really good. I don't really like poetry, but that was just beautiful. I just enjoyed it so much, well not really enjoyed it, OK I loved it! hugs 'n' kisses
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JezzaThis Poem Was Very Touching It is so true. i lost My Best Friend not long ago and i still dream of him. I can't see pictures of him without crying. Your Poem is exactly what i needed to read. i was hoping one day i could find someone that new how it felt :( Thankyou Zac
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Nicoli recently lost a realy good family freind. he was 33 years old. he was in a car accident and was killed. he left behind a 5 year old boy, 8 year old girl, and 15 year old boy. it is really hard to cope with. this poems means alot to me because it's how i feel. i no longer feel i am the only one with pian. thank you so much!
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RachI love this poem, i just last week lost one of my best friends he was 17yrs old. He was like brother to me and this poem kinda says how i feel. thanks for your time
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sandrI liked your poem alot and i can really relate to it. a really good friend of mine commited in january and i really miss him!your poem helped alot cuz i know that he's always gonna be there with me! i just wanted to tell you how good your poem is and i'm sorry about your friend.
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AshleyA wonderful and emotional poem. Good Work
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BelaWow. I think you put into words how i feel. my best friend attempted suicide a couple of years ago, and life has been a complete mess. but my friendship with her is summed up in your poem. Thank you.
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MaddyI just want to say that my best friend has recently moved away and we can't talk to eachother alot. So when i read this poem it really ment alot to me. This is a great poem. I want to say thanx for helpin me feel a bit about the whole thing.
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jennio my that poem is very touching it makes me want to break out in tears.
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AthenI just lost my best friend to drugs and i'm trying to find a peom that will help me
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BekahThis poem is really sweet. I lost my best friend . it really was horrible. I feel like this poem describes the way I feel. I know someone out there feels the same way too.
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CindyI loved this poem it reminded me of my friend,who left,but more than my friend my HERO.
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KatThis poem made me cry. I just recently lost my best friend and me and her helped each other through so much. But the worst part about her dying was that she said she loved me when she died. I miss her so much and I dont know how I'm ever going to get over the fact that she is gone and that I'm going to have to go through the rest of my life with out her.
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shushi weawey wuved your poem. it is a vewy good poem i thing good poems r very good so u r a very good writer & keep on witing good poems like this good poem have a good day
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AprilThat was such a great poem! My friend just moved far-far away from me- and i miss her so much. We were friend for 7 years, and now it really makes me sad that she is gone. And she *was always there*. This poem really touched my heart.
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Danisthat poem is very nice and touching i am a person that can relate to that poem.
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stephThis poem was one great poem the author really touched me with the words he used! he should deffently keep righting
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Abegaili love this poem because just then i hert some one and i feel reall bad
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RebecZac, Your poem was very heartfelt. I lost my best friend in 1993. She would have done anything for me and I for her. I still wish she was here and miss her very much. Over the years thereafter, I have never had a best friend like her. I was truly blessed to have known her.
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Stephoh my god. I feel your pain because recently i lost a cousin to suicide in April and know one knew the reason but i know god is with him and i hope to see him one day.
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Robthis poem has really touched my heart, last year my friend took gas and died. she was always there for me when i had problems, keep up the writing
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shelyThat poem is a really good poem because me and my friend are fighting so now i have to gosay sorry because i dont want to loosea friend like that!
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Carothis is a great poem, its really touched my heart and reminded me of all my friends that have been there for me. I think that the person who wrote this has a great talent to wite poems and should continue. good job.
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Tashain my opinion its a very heart warmin, touchy story. well it made ME cry:)
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MelThis poem has touched me deeply since i have recently delt with the same situation. i love it.
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SharyI loved this poem because i could relate with all of the emotions and thought in it.
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TateI liked your poem. I was reading it to my brother for a school project and I about cried
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kimZac don't worry, he's in a good place.
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terroi think this poem is very sweet amd it speaks of hardships in one life
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Grisi really love this poem because it reminds of my ex boyfriend that RIP
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PriyaThis peom reminded me of a friendship I had that just faded . it is amazing to see how I feel put so eloquently into words.
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ArunI lost a college buddy resently. this poem sums up in words my emotions. thank u.
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DawnI can relate to you. About 3 years ago I lost one of my best friends. This wasnt any best friend. This friend needed special care. She was blind. I just wish I could see her one last time. To hear her cry. To hear her little giggle. I really miss her and even though she was blind I could always talk to her. She always listened. I always wondered if she could she would she be my friend or would she be my enemy. Ur poem was so heart touching.
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kevinwell i would like to comment on your poem well i havent lost any one yet that i can think of about the way u put that poem makes me kinda think i dont wanna lose any one that is really close to me but yea it was a really good poem
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mandythat was a really good poem i. as i read this poem my eyes filled up with tears.
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StacyThe poems touched me very well. Even though i didn't lose a friends to suicide i did lose a friend. That poems was so beautiful. I'm sorry for ur loss.
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MarkI lost my grandmother June 18th of 2001. This poem is so beautiful. I wish I could have said it at her funeral. She meant the world to me and now so does this poem. Thanks for writing it.
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deannaThat was really sad and brought tears to my eyes.
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AdinaI loved your poem so much about five years ago I losted my mom and she was my best friend and I know that is exactly the way I felt. Keep writing great poems.
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Skyei love this poem. i recently had 2 friends that were going to commit suicide. but thanks to all of my other great friends they didn't.
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kobye*truly talented* that really touched me so much. i have thought bout commiting sucide before myself when everything was jus gone i had nothing worth being there 4 but reading that the impact that can have on someone else who cares 4 u so so much. now i know that no matter how bad things r there is always someone there 4 u and zac i wish very much that i could be there 4 u. thank u heaps i will neva forget this poem or u and the impact u had on me without even meeting u jus through words its truly amazing
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KrisThat was really good. I know how losing a fried goes
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AndieThat is so true! The words are simple but it really can struck my heart. Keep up!
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HoneySuperb poem. I really enjoyed reading it. It always happens to me that when I make friends after getting close to them I lose them, but this poem gave me the strength that no matter if we separate not one day but one day we will get together again.
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alliehey, u are really a great writer. i enjoyed this poem and only read it because im in some really depressing times right now. after reading this, i began to cry. thank you so much, and if not already, you should look into being a poet
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maryomg. i feel the same way u do. my friend commited suicide but he will always be remember for what we use to do and how he was always there. and how he stil is there. he commited suicide awhile ago but he is still my best friend. i still "talk" to him when i pray and i still dream of him. and i can kinda feel his presence. well anyways. this is a great poem. one of the best cuz it speaks to me on so many different levels ya know.
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ChelsI loved the poem. One of my best friends moved away last year and I know how hard it is to lose someone you love.
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jamiethat is a greatttttttt peom
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MartineIt's a very emotional poem! It touched me a lot!
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SaraI loved this poem. It kind of reminds me of a poem that my "adopted" sister wrote about her oldest brother who died almost three years ago.
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MarakeeThis poem really touched my heart.
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melissaI loved the poem..i canr elate too cause i am 15 and my best friend died 2 years ago and it still hurts everyday and i think bout her everyday
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AlinaI really liked your peom because I lost a friend and that reminds me of the times I spent with my friend. Thanks!
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kiaraI really like this poem it has really touched my heart. Im sorry to hear that you lost someone that special to you.
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KelliThank you so much for such a touching poem. 3 people from our school died 2 days ago in a car accident and this poem really helps because they were always there.
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vanessaoh my gosh! this poem is so beautiful. It makes me want to cry. I lost a best friend last November and this says everything that I feel about him. Way to go good job zac. U R amazing keep up the good work i couldn't have said it better myself.
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AnkurI dont have words to explain this wonderful poem.Its simply out of this world.
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KTI really enjoyed your poem. I had a friend that moved away and i can relate to this. I almost cried when i read it because i miss her so much. This poem really moved me so thank you. I enjoyed it.
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DawnThis poem really moved me. I lost a friend recently I know how it feels.
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kimthis poem reminded me of my best friend alison who is not gone forever but is 700 miles away.
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Catherinethis is a rilly good poem. it especially means a lot 2 me cuz i recently move away from my best friend. it's still sad 2 think about her, but she was always there 4 me, and i will never 4get our times 2gether. sumthines it helps 2 just sink into memories instead of thinking about now compared to then.
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kellyZac-your poem was very touching. It helped me communicate with myself and understand the feelings i have been having about the recent lose of someone close to me, myself. It also taught me that i can express my thoughts through poetry. Thanks
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jamieYour poem is awsomw!I loved it !
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lindai feel what you`ve written,a boy that i knew got killed a month ago,he was only 15.because he was half black..and i liked and cared about him a lot,but i didnt got the chanse to tell him,but you did and your lucky,in a nice way..
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emilythat is the best poem i have ever read i can relate to it its like its about me it made me cry its just so good
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MicheleI think that this poem is so insperational. It really hit right at home. Zac I think that you are a wonderful poet
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ErikaI can so much say i can really relate ot this poem.my friend has been missing for 7 days now.And this has already happened once but she called me and so then the cops found her and took her home.But that was only 1 night.Now its 7 days She's only 14! She hasnt called and im so scared for her I really hope she's ok.And im still waiting for that phone call.
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Jillomg that was one of the most touching poems i was crying thank you zac for a poem that has deepley touched me
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Robynthat made me cry that was sooo sad and touchin you are soo good at writting poems
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N/AI ASLO LOST A FRIEND AND HE WAS ALSO THERE FOR ME.
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MaggieI thought your poem was awesome. Sorry about the loss of your friend. I know what it's like to loose someone close. Keep on writing. I think your peom was a 10.
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Jennythis poem was very moving and it took me b ack to when i lost a very special freind, who was close to me from suicide. i will print it up and put it in a frame and it is going on his grave.
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meggyi can totally relate to this poem because my best friend also commited suicide and he was always there for me
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AshleyI voted for this poem because it has a lot of meaning to it. And it really touched my heart. I'm also sorry about your friend.
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shannonthis is a very touching poem contin to right may god contin to bless you and keep you.
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galaxiewhat a great poem! upon reading it,i've remember a friend who's been closed to me but then she's already gone.and it really hard for me to loose her.
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LauraNice!!!!!!!!!!!
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samanthai loved it so that i had to send that to someone thank u
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cinderellathis poem i read made me cry when i read it. it is really touching! It explain everything i felt and thought.
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NinaI totally understand how you feel. I lost a very close friend who was more like a brother to me during New YEar's this year, and i just found out today that another friend back where i used to live passed away yesterday. Not alot of people can relate to the feeling of losing someone dear, but i do. i totally understand.
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KELLIEtHIS WAS A REALLY GREAT POEM AND I CAN RELATE TO A LOT OF THE THINGS THAT HE TALKS ABOUT.
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MistyI THOUGHT THAT POEM WAS THE BEST. IT REMINDED ME OF MY BEST FRIEND WHO MOVED AWAY. I MISS HER SO MUCH. I JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT POEM WAS REALLY GREAT!!!
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CURTISI HOPE THAT YOUR POEM WILL HAPPY ME OUT A LOT B/C I REALLY DO NEED IT SO THANKS.
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LeilaniYou know...I made a pact with my Best Friend (Stephanie). We told eachother that no matter what may happen in life (If one of us were to move, or leave, or even die) that we would always be there for eachother. I forgot how much she really means to me...until I read your poem. I Thank You for letting me see...again...that Friendships are true, and a valued part of life! Thank You Zac! Always.... Leilani
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LaceyI really liked this poem it made me and my friend think about the people we lost and the people we loved!!!! Just remember to keep your head high and always set you goals high and don't forgett he is always thinking about you too!!!!
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BrianThis poem summed up a lot of feelings and issues I'm having to deal with right now. I commend your efforts and imagination, I really enjoyed this powerfull poem.
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BillIt was a great poem, its sad to hear you lost someone so special to you.
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yeahokwow. this poem could not have reminded me more of myslef. whoever wrote this - i know exactly how you feel. this is one of the best poems i have ever read. i often have wanted to say something exactly like this, but i couldnt find the words - now i know what to say. thank you
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AlishaVERY GOOD!
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CokoThis poem is a good one 'cause my friend wrote one to me like it.
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JenniferI really liked this poem. It reminds me alot about my friend. I feel the same way about her. But she just moved far away from me she didn't commit suicide. I really miss her and she was always there no matter what. I know how you feel.
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rachel"You Were Always There" by Zac is an amazing poem. I am printing it out right now because i know that if I am ever in a situation when i need to say goodbye to a good friend, this is the poem I will use. It is so unbelievably emotional..
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NikkiHaving my Best Friend pass away last year has been the most difficult time of my life. This poem says it well. I find myself repeating over and over again that she was always there. Thank you for the poem. It's things like this that help heal a little at a time.
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lisaI know how you feel that happend to me also, I think this POEM was very nice.
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