This girlfriend sparked such passion in me! I wanted to tell her all I ever felt before was trivial in comparison to her.

All the things I saw in her sparked off so much deep passion. I had to write her this to enable myself to get across to her the things I would be unable to say without being affected by the emotions.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems

Things I Love About You
Your eyes
which first held me captivated
where I stood.

Your smile
to dazzle the sun
and warm every corner of my soul.

Your voice
like a sparkling mountain stream
which flows into my heart.

Your walk
and the way your gracefulness
takes my breath away.

Your hair
about which I dreamed
cascading into my face
as you leaned over me.

Your hands
whose caress I crave
to hold my face
in their tenderness.

Your arms
I long to have around my neck
as you pull me close
to your warmth.

Most of all
everything you are
changed the way I feel about my life.

I love you.

392 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
  • brian
    This poem freaking rocks. Dude its a reminder to the reader about the first time or anytime he/she fell in love. Because of this poem you are now a poetic genuis. I've wrote a few poems in my day but this is exactly how I felt the first time I was in love and I still feel that way. Thanks man. keep it up. You will do great.
  • Annlizmarie
    This peoms reminds me about WELL, Me. My first love, he was sweet and he was everything to me. But I REALLY LOVED THIS POEM. ITS GREAT! I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE!
  • christer
    i love the poem. i realy love how u describe ur love one. =)
  • DANIEL
    IT DESCRIBES MY GF JESS
  • synetrick
    I LOVE THE POEMS YA'LL RIGHT THEY ARE INTERESTING SO CAN U RIGHT ONE ABOUT ME . LVE U AUTHORS
  • fattukh
    it touched my heart. reminded me of my wife who is temporarily away from me. simply beautifull
  • shai
    this poem brought a ffew tears to my eyes, i have really enjoyed reading it and now i know why i love the guy am i with. keep up the great work, i would love to read more of your poems thanks shai
  • melissa
    i love this poem, that is why i feel my husband
  • andi
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  • dorothy
    thank you.
  • charlene
    I LOVE THIS POEMS IT PUT U IN THE MOOD FOR LOVE AND IT LETS YOUR MAN KNOW JUST HOW MUCH U LOVE HIM. IT ALL IN THE POEM.
  • Mocha
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  • thine
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  • josh
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  • Mari
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  • Kaitlynn
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  • ladonda
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  • kara
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  • sherry
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  • Jessica
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  • danielle
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  • james
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  • arnold
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  • Wanita
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  • red rose
    I love the poem and i send this poem to my boyfriend
  • Ashley
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  • Ashley
    i love this poem. it makes me think of my ex-boyfriend and how much i miss him and wish things worked out and how i still want to be with him regardless of all the things that happened and where we went wrong. i just want to hold him again
  • Keilee
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  • jessica
    This poem is the way u feel about someone special to you
  • jave
    nice. poem. have too much things to say but cant expalin. cant find words. but its nice and beautiful poem
  • scott
    this was awsome
  • billy
    i just love this poem i just found my g/f and this how i fill about her
  • daniel
    i thought it was sweet the girl who has u is very lucky
  • adrian
    this poem touched me alot. espicailly the last part becuase she did make me think differently about my life! everything about this poem is the way i think about my girlfriend.
  • Erica
    This is a really good poem. It reminds me of my boyfriend.
  • erika
    it inspire me a lot.
  • susannah
    This is such a beautiful poem and it is lovely how a man can be so expressive. It is really sweet how much he loves her.
  • phaye
    very good i wish u tha best of luck n tha future
  • Sarah
    how brill is this poem?
  • nikita
    this is a very nice poem you wrote keep up the good work!
  • josue
    very touching. (",)
  • claudia
    this poem touched me because it was so sweet!i loved this poem! . !congratulations!
  • Ashleigh
    wow this hit me so hard my boy friend is every thing in this poem!i love it so much! you write really good!
  • kopji
    THE POEM IS REALLY COOL. IT GAVE ME A FOOD FOR THOUGHT. WISH I WAS THE PERSON THAT WROTE IT. THANX FOR THAT.
  • latara
    i loved the poem but in a way if a boy reads it he would cry in the poem its saying how much they love the other person. i would do the same.
  • deandra
    nice poem
  • deandra
    everyting ilike about this poem is the way ilike about him and is ture
  • leyla
    i love it .
  • alexandra
    i LOVE it, only if it was bout a boi then i'd love it even more
  • amanda
    omg this poem is sooooo cute. i wish i can write this good like you. you have very good writing skills.
  • Pawankumar
    This is the expected poem about loved person which express the exact things which I too was wondering for but I was not having proper order of words to arrange as such the author has arranged in the above thanks
  • a7mad
    hiii thanks alot for dat poem. it also describes my girl friend. keep on da good work
  • Ashley
    I love this. It's beautiful.
  • ada
    I LOVE THIS ONE
  • marie
    This poem can help relationship when it is in a rough spot,
  • Dusty
    I thought that poem kicked man. Keep up the good work with your future pieces.
  • FRANCESCA
    This poem has touched me. It is the same way that I feel about my boyfriend. I love him and this poem helped me realize it even more
  • whoa
    that's how you say I love you.
  • Becky
    I love it. Its very poetic. I also dont know many guys who write poems.
  • priscilla
    i melted into every word of this poem ! i loved it !
  • Patricia
    I love this poem.
  • jocelyne
    i luve it
  • thomas
    great poem thanks
  • ariel
    i loved it because it reminded it alot about myself. it is very beautiful. i think this writer should follow his dream, because he is a very good writer.
  • Ellen
    This poem brought a tear to my eyes. It is exactly how I feel about someone who just came into my life. It is very beautiful and well written. Ellen
  • sherry
    this remind me of my guy whom i love and fell the way he love s me
  • JEROME
    SIMPLELY BEAUTIFUL. IT TOUCH MY HEART
  • travis
    i loved your poem i just wish i could right a poem as good as you im 14 and am trying so much to impress someone i just wanted to say i loved that poem and if you have any tips for i would love to use them thanks Travis
  • Khalida
    Dis poem is so good it remems me of all the thing I like is about my old gril friend. so keep doing what udoing. one
  • JACKIE
    I LOVE THIS POEM ITS BEUTIFUL. I THINK IS BEUTIFUL BECAUSE ALL THIS THINGS HAPPENED TO ME. SINCERELY, JACKIE REYES
  • nikki
    i think your poem was GREAT!
  • cristi
    realy romantic poem well done keep going u doing realy well.
  • monique
    this poem is great. i love the way u decribe people the way u do. i love every thing about your poetry. plz put some more on the net so i can tell u how great they r. im going 2 rate this 1. 10\10. love monique xxxooo
  • Rasheedaah
    I love your poem it is wonderful you most really love that person keep up the good work
  • mudasir
    The stance from the poem which i liked most and flew in my heart is: Your voice like a sparkling mountain stream which flows into my heart.
  • Nellie
    i love this poem. it's kinda like i feel about my boyfriend when he's always right by side.
  • nikki
    this is a good poem b/c it realates to me alot and it shows whom ever this poem is to that you love them alot and to see people love each other is cool has hell.
  • Tynisha
    i love this poem i write poetry too. this poem makes me think about the time i kissed my boy friend. it is BEAUTIFULL
  • nisha
    its wonderfull. coz hardly any guy expreses so to his gf. nice. very nice
  • Jason
    I love it. I absalutly love it. This poem is a great piece of work.
  • sashika
    this is the bom. keep it up
  • james
    this poem is great it remind me of my life
  • Realitee
    i think this poem is so good my boyfriends tell me the tells me things like that
  • renisha
    I LOVE THE WAY YOU EXPRESSED YOUR SELF TO TELL SOME ONE HOW YOU REALLY FEEL AND I DON'T KNOW ALOT OF BOY'S WHO EXPRESS'S THE WAY THEY FEEL AND TAKE'S THE TIME TO TELL SOME ONE HOW MUCH THEY REALLY LOVE THEM AND THAT POEM TOUCHED ME IT'S VERY ROMANTIC I WISH SOMEONE COULD TAKE THE TIME TO WRITE ME AND TELL ME HOW THEY REALLY FEEL SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND GOOD LUCK AND MAY GOD BLESS YOU
  • Dunisani
    i iked the poem becouse it is natural,telling just the way the writer feels about the woman warming his heart. he needed not to say some magical,alluring words,but just the way he feels. i am a young poey also,and i enjoy writting love poems which are simple and straight forward.
  • DEBBIE
    As i read this poem i could feel my heart melting as if the love of my life had just wrote it for me. I melted, it made me weak .
  • bonnie
    I love the love poem. Its very descipitive and its reminds me of my boyfriend corey and i love him so much. Thanks. I love this poem so much and its very meaningful
  • Shanta
    I really liked the poem it was really touching
  • Ashton
    wow your poems are really good -ashton
  • april
    i really feel the way you love her.
  • Allison
    This poem is so sweet! You must really be in love! I hope everything works out
  • Gerde
    I love this poem, well writtenand touching. Well done
  • Kaci
    love this poemit is so sweet
  • Fred
    Most excellent! A very good poem.
  • Ray
    EXELLENT POEM!
  • Tholakele
    i think ur work rocks keep it up the good work .
  • Tom
    As soon as I read this, I had to send it to my wife to be. we're getting married next week and this said everything to her that I wanted to say. (well, not EVERYTHING, but you get my point).
  • Paige
    I really loved this poem it touched my heart. It really told me how i really feel about someone.
  • Brittany
    hey this is a wonderful poem and you really have touched me with that. good job.
  • anabelle
    Id really like this poem! why?? coz it touch my heart so much every word of it very meaning full to me. This poem reflects the way my husband love, me and so do i to him.
  • Brittany
    The reason i liked your poem so much is that it has everything i love about my baby's father in it. It gives my a soothing feeling when i read it that lets me know what to say to my child's father when we are together and wrapped tightly in each other's arms. This will be in my mind from now till the day i leave this world. Thank you for being able to write poems like this. This will be our first child and i would appreciate it if i could use some of your lines from your poem in my vows when i get married to my baby's father.
  • LIVIA
    i realy realy like your poem. it reminds me of my boyfriend whom i love so much. i don't know why i love him. i only know that i love him so much. but your poem touchs my heart and make me realize that i love all thing that he has. eventough he often makes me hurt,i still love him very much. thank you so much.
  • leticia
    good
  • Fallon
    Most of all everything you are changed the way I feel about my life. I felt such a warm place in my body when I read those words. It felt good. Thank you.
  • Monica
    This poem is very romantic. I would love it if a guy said something like that. The girl you are talking about should be very lucky. U rock man and it is good to be the romantic type. Monica
  • Rey
    i love that poem ever!
  • aiza
    Very nice poems I love it!
  • curtis
    this poem is one of my favorites. it has touched me very deeply. i know how it feels to love someone this much. thank you for this poem.
  • Brittany
    That was a beautiful poem that helped me to better describe the feelings I have for my love. It was deep and made me feel as if I was already in his arms. I hope I can get my words out better now.
  • monica
    i really like the poem it made me think about me and my ex boyfriend.
  • steve
    great poem i loved it gotta give u credit for it
  • brianne
    that is such a good poem i wish i could write poems like that. I love to read poems that talk about love. You should make more.
  • Jeannette
    I loved your poem. It was great. It's not other poem that put me to sleep, I hope u keep writing nice poem like that. I injoy reading ur poem. love Jeannette(Chula)
  • jordan
    i like it more than the others one very good job be sure to spend me a poem like this one?
  • GENEVA
    I LOVE IT BECAUSE IT IS RELATE TO HOW SOMEONE LOVES YOU IN A WAY
  • michael
    It taught me what I think is love It really helped me with my relationship
  • George
    please Anthony West,i can not afford to miss your poems because they o sweet. could you please notify me when you write another sweet poem?thank you so much
  • cacey
    something so sweet so nice and simple is the only thing you need to describ it
  • Jessica
    I thought that your poem was really good and hope to see somemore from you.
  • tara
    i loved it coz i dont normally hear a guy expose his love for a girl so profoundly and meaningfully. she must mean a lot to you.
  • Amber
    hey i think that this is a very good poem and that many people feel this way about their special person and it is amazing to find someone that you feel for like this! Keep writing your beautiful!(:
  • Jeanette
    Hey dude this poem is really nice and I just want to tell you that you have heart in saying all this it really sounds like you really wrote this with your heart I give you props.
  • Tiffany
    i love you that poem it really touched me
  • jasmine
    this poem really touch me and made me cry i like it alot
  • tosha
    i love this poem i sended it to my cousin and her bf by telling her how much i love her and that i sended it to my boyfriend albert
  • Amy
    Excellent!
  • Roseline
    I like the poem. He is so romantic
  • priyanka
    Very touching poem. very ture also for true lover's
  • Natalie
    just love the words and the feelings of and for the poem! Awesome poem luv it
  • ashlee
    great poem
  • courshya
    this is greet it makes me think about a freind of mine
  • henry
    i think this poem really describs my feeilngs to the one lady i love so very much especially that i can't tell her dirrectly maybe cos iam shy? pls keep this up and i'll like 2 really get more of ur poems.
  • Jasmine
    I LOVE THIS POEM I SENT IT TO MY BOYFRIEND!. I FELL SO IN TO IT!.
  • Clive
    I have found my true love,I wish I had written this to show her my love,brought tears to my eyes.
  • pg
    gud n soft. i liked the gentle epression
  • Kayla
    What a poem! It mad me laugh thinking about how true it is about the way i feel about someone.
  • Lauren
    I loved the poem. It was very beautiful and touching and described how I feel about my boyfriend. It was perfect.
  • BRENDA
    IS BEAUTIFUL, IT MADE ME THINK ABOUT MY HUSBAND.
  • Courtney
    You poem was good. It had a lot of voice, I pictured every word you said.
  • sarah-jayne
    10/10- beautiful poem, exactly how i feel about my boyfriend
  • zeinab
    hi my name is zeinab. I loved your poem it was very very sweet. I liked it alot and thee was not even a part that i didnt like. you are a good poem writer and i wish u good luck on your other poems you write. zeinab asghari
  • Chrishaun
    This poem is very pretty and I really loved it you hane skills girl.
  • nadir
    its very good sit. very good poets. it helps a lot to send a message to someone who love. i sended this poet to someone i love. she stays far from my country we meet once in twenty days and that hurts a lot. thank you.
  • jackie
    I love this poem. It made me cry because I long for his touch.
  • robert
    I love your poem, it explains how I feel about my girl friend. Thank you very much for taking the time to put down what I am feeling.
  • Darrion
    I loved your poem it made me think about my first love which I still love and while I writing this I'll read it to him keep up the good work
  • justine
    after i read the poem "what i like aabout you" it mad eme just want to hold my boyfriend so close and never let go. it touched my heart and i think Anthony should continue writing poems. i realy do like your poemand i wish you the best in your future. good luck and continue your good work!
  • nicole
    luv d poem
  • Nay-Nay
    I think that poem was good I write poems to and that one was real good.
  • Melanie
    I love this poem its so senual, its so sweet awe
  • kimberley
    I really like your poem it goes to my heart is beutifull i love it
  • larrenda
    this poem means a lot i have felt that whay but did not know how to pu it in to words it was traped inside me some ow and when i red this it all sounde d like i felt so thak you larrenda
  • rebeca
    how sweet
  • David
    Really sweet!
  • Stefany
    i think it is a great love poem. The reason i liked it is because it had a lot of detail that was great. i give it five stars if i was the person that does that stuff.
  • genesis
    boy love is just to hear .
  • Kim
    I love this poem keep writing
  • Jon
    I have just met somebody very special, and as i read this lovely poen, it is everything that makes love what it should be.
  • Nay-Nay
    That was a nice and cute poem.
  • yemi
    i like the pome
  • mackenzie
    that was one of the most beautiful love poem i've ever heard. keep em comin.
  • Michelle
    This poem is excellent. Keep up the good work!
  • Paula
    Took my breath away. took me back in time . thanks you!
  • lauren
    love it,i wish i can write poems lick you.
  • Tawanna
    I loved this poem. Very good and it did touch my heart
  • adela
    i loved this poem it really touched my heart
  • Bobo
    Wow! I've fallen in love recently with the most wonderful lady in the world. This poem puts into simple, beautiful words what I feel for her. Just wonder if Anthony West has met her - there can't be two women to have this devastating effect on men, surely.
  • Jase
    Yo Anthony, I gotta give you a 10/10 as well, I really enjoyed this poem and can really relate. I actually wrote sumthin along these lines once. Keep writing, good work, all the power to ya man.
  • kat
    10
  • maxwell
    oooooh! this poem touches my too much i have been searching for romantic words like this but now i have fine. i love and i want to learn it kown how to say but i don't have the capacity to write like this. thanks alot. buy. max
  • pankaj
    i have great feelings about and it has a terrafic sense of emotions that i'd like to share my close friend. in this regard i would say it has a exotica of beauty of the author who nisely put on his/her feelings through the poetic way. thanks pankaj.
  • Madilyn
    This poem really reminded me of just how much my boyfriend loves me. whom ever wrote it is very talented. You know I'm a writer too maybe I could subbmit some of my work and you could put it on your website for me I'd really appreciate it. Thanx alot.
  • briana
    this poem is a very sweet poem and whom ever it was wrote about must feel very lucky
  • Justin
    This poem replaced the lost love in my girlfriends heart that has been lost for 2years, and in mine. We are useing this poem at our wedding in Febuary. Thanks, Justin and Kristy Fahnestock
  • tara
    i love your pome because it reminds me of my boy friend jonathon on how much i love him im lookn forward to lookin and more pomes :)
  • rinki
    This is a great poem. i wish my boy friend would send it to me!
  • Andreana
    I really enjoyed this poem. Excellent job!
  • krista
    ya know you sound alot like my ex boyfriend anthony i love him so much but have not been able to find him but anyways your poems is beautiful
  • Stormy
    A friend of mine sent your poem to me decribing the Love in his heart and it reminding me so much of his personality and what he would have said to me if he could find the words and you made it very special and made the love come alive in your words and I think it is just so beautiful. It touched my heart but I'm not in love with this man but it made me feel so very special. Who knows what the future holds for us. Thank you again for your poem.
  • Lucia
    I loved your poem it explains things i couldnt explain to my man for a long time and for that i got to thank you. sincierly, Lucia
  • SIERRA
    GREAT POEM COULD REALLY RELATE
  • Samantha
    I really like that poem b/cuz it relates to how i feel about a certain person.
  • Jackie
    ya poem was off da chain it reminds me of how i like my boyfriend i mean it really touched me you are like so good at writing these poems i wish i had skills like dat good job sweetie KEEP DOIN IT BIG
  • bety
    omg!you'r poems is exactly the way i feel about someone i really love and its the most sweet and beautiful thing i have ever heard.
  • Jennifer
    I love your poem is exactly what I was looking for to send to my husband for are one year comitment that is coming up thank you for writing this beautifull poem. Once again thank's
  • brandy
    i love this poem. It had great dictation or context. i think it's very good.
  • corey
    Awesome love poem. Very deep and meaningful
  • griselda
    i voted for this poem because i thought it was cool.
  • phillip
    that was awesome to me I think we can all relate to that but I don't think we can all be as gracefull with words as this author was. I will send this to my girl.
  • Mo
    i love it; it describes my bf almost but more.
  • Josephine
    This Poem says everything that i feel in my heart for my Husband of 28yrs. Jo
  • Danielle
    i like this poem
  • Jesse
    I love your poem it reminds me of my girlfriend Bridget.
  • Danni
    this totally discribes how i feel about the guy i love and i totally think that this is an AWESOME POEM!
  • Lyndsey
    This poem is very nice 10/10!
  • tikila
    i think that this poem is the stuff i love it in i love to do poems
  • VIVIAN
    ANTHONY YOUR A GREAT POET AND YOU SHOULD KEEP WRITING. YOUR GF LUCKY TO HAVE YOU.
  • walter
    this poem is the best one i ever read it make me thinks about my girlfriend who i really love she means the world to me.
  • amie
    i really love the contents of this poem. keep on writing.
  • Kelly
    This poem is so good. It's very touching and it's one of my favorites! I give good remarks to the poet who wrote this!
  • Lisa
    BEAUTIFUL! Simple and to the point! I cried when I read it!
  • kelsie
    hey i thought this poem was so good it realli touched my heart and its the same way as i feel bout my boy n i love him so much so i sent it straight to him i give it a 10/10 great work
  • shaneka
    I loved the poem first of because it reminds me of the way I feel with my boyfriend. That poem just opens your hearts up. Because alot of things aren going for me and this poem just put a smile on my face. I could be getting i trouble but I am writing about the poem i love its very different thanks for listeninng good bye
  • shalana
    This poem touched me in a way u wont believe. It reminds me of my first love and im still with her now, its been 4 years. i would love to dedicate that poem to my true love. I rate this poem very high
  • wong
    very nice
  • Marcus
    I love this poem an I want to give it a 10.
  • shane
    this poem so reminds me of my girlfriend, because she makes me think about what she does that i truly love about her. thank you anthony ill be reading this to my girlfriend
  • Andy
    yo i really liked this poem cause it touch me and it really made me cry.
  • Carolynn
    I thought this poem was so beautiful, I am a women and am experiencing for the first time this exact same love for a wonderful man I just recently met. I feel blessed. May we all have joy!
  • alycia
    nice, nice! great. makes me thing of good times wit my man! thanx!
  • asha
    the poem was really good and i showed me that i really love me boyfriend because that is the same way i feel adout him.
  • Ameera
    Wow, I love the poem a lot very romantic words and beautiful! Thanks a lot!
  • Charlee
    Even tho written by a man, this "hit me" and reminded me of the things I feel about the man I love.
  • ashlee
    that is a very touching poem who ever wrote it need to keep writing
  • ALYSSA
    IT WAS GOOD I REALLY LIKED IT. GOOD JOB! =)
  • Hilary
    A simple yet, profound love poem with utmost intensity
  • April
    I really liked it, it made me think of someone i used to know. He's name was Anothony 2. Really sweet!
  • Jim
    The poem sounded prettty good to me i liked it. it was very nice and stuffs like dat i really dont know what esle to say but it was nice k
  • g
    I CAN SWEAR EVEN OVER MY LAST DROP OF BLOOD THAT THIS POEM REALLY MOVED MY HEART
  • SHALONTAE
    I WANT OF GIVE THIS POEM A 8
  • sharron
    i just dont know where to start,,,, i felt every word in my heart.
  • Lucy
    This is one beautiful poem. I feel the same way about my boyfriend.
  • jenny
    i love this poem so much
  • alana
    hi i was really touched by ur poem u have great writting skills and im sure that in the future u will really touch someone with ur words keep up the good work
  • karla
    this poem is very good i wanna send it 2 me boyfriend in a minuite i give it 10/10
  • tony
    Simply Beautiful
  • dannielle
    the poem is warm and thrilling, i like it alot 9/10
  • Dawn
    i love the way you express your poem i have never read a poem like that and i love it
  • Amy
    i really feel this way bout my boyfriend!
  • Michelle
    Your poem spoke to me because I lost my first love and that is what got me intrested in poetry in the first place.
  • patrice
    this was a cute poem, and i like how you describe your feeling for the girl! very sweet
  • Felicia
    It was so kind. I really like this poem it is great!
  • stephanie
    i loved ur poem so much i can relate!
  • Chetana
    This is a such a sweet poem. How I wish my boy friend had told me even a single line out of this.
  • Elise
    !******I LOVE YOUR POEM IT IS SO AWESOME IT RELATES TO ME IN SO MANY WAYS *******!
  • patrick
    i loved your pome it says just how i fell about a gril i know see im 14 you might think im to young to know about stuff like this but im not. im looking forward to reading more
  • Liz
    dis poem is really nice poem n i luv it!. KEEP THE GOOD WORK;)
  • admirea
    hay i love the way you sound the words if you were mine id love yo to bits
  • Kyle
    this poem was perfect for me and my angel. i lvoeher very much and this said it. thnx good job man keep it up
  • JoAnn
    I love this poem! Wish I could write somthing like this!
  • Bob
    I loved your poem. It captures many of the same feelings that I have now with my love. She is in India for 3 months. I sent it to her today. Thank you for capturing such strong feelings and sharing with us, who share the feelings, but do not capture the words.
  • Danai
    i think your poem has touched my boy friend & me so much when i gave it to him he was very impressed and that was when i got my first kiss from Jack my boyfriend that i am going out with right now
  • VuRy
    OMG. this poem is so cute! It reminds me of the "Love Of My Life"! Though we are not 2gether, yet. I can still relate 2 those things!
  • Shaobo
    nice poem
  • Vanes
    this poem is my favorite because it expressed the way i felt about my first love anthony west just putted in words for me . which i did not know how to do. thank you .
  • Mailynn
    my boyfriend feels the same about me but he doen't know how to express himself like that
  • Amber
    this poem is great i think it really describes the feeling of love!
  • P
    The poem is wonderful can't describe how much. Keep up the good work and Good luck for the future.
  • KIMBERLYN
    I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM IT WAS VERY GOOD AND PERFECT FOR SOME COUPLES OUT THERE.
  • sasha
    i loves this peom so much it really touch me u just put in to words everything i feel i really like it the sweet imbraces of my love is all that matters to me i really love your work i am hoping that u could write more because this was off the chain 4-sho i am loving it, it means a lot to me.
  • Nikki
    Your poem has really meant something to me! I didn't even get half way through and I was crying! It has really touched a part of my heart that has been hurting a long time!
  • Shalena
    hi. i thought that this poem is very good. i just wish that someone would send it to me, it would mean alot to me. i give this poem a 10++/10
  • Kacey
    I loved your poem. It made me shiver inside. Your poem was beautiful!
  • Love
    Its very moving. And has lots of imagery.
  • Andre
    Your poem is appropriate for our time and language. I enjoyed it very much. It is fresh and sincere. I pray you continue in love with this person for a long time and that your love is reciprocated.
  • Jarod
    very nice poem! it is exactly how i feel about my wonderful wife!
  • Sheri
    This is perfect. keep up the good work.
  • SAGUN
    SIMPLE AND IMPRESSIVE
  • smarty_pants1988
    O Wonderful Poem Indeed!
  • Jess
    I finally found the true and meaningful poem i've been looking for, My boyfriend and i were having some troubles with our relationship, but i then found this poem to let him Know exactly how i felt about him! Everything's fine now. thanks and kind regards to ya! xx oo
  • Brianna
    it is soo sweet to hear a guy feel this much for a girl it is great
  • melis
    I htink this poem is great. It reminds me of the way i feel about my boyfriend.
  • Coney
    I liked the form. The series of three-liners, then a venture into the unknown with three sets of four-line stanzas. Only to revisit the three and end it all with a simple "I love you". Great form.
  • Josh
    Wonderful poem! I assure you that your sentiments are shared by many. Unfortuantely we are not all as capable as you at putting them in to words. Good work! Please make more and share it with us.
  • Samantha
    This is a great poem. I am 14 and I sent this poem to my boyfriend who is now 15 and he luved it.
  • Tina
    Hey dis peom is da best one out there it reminds me so much of my baby which i have him now but i love him so much man dis is a good poem yo keep up da good werk
  • Annie
    Your poem realy touched me to th heart. It make me feel things about my man that I REALY DO FEEL.
  • Ashley
    I thought this poem was great! I wish I could write a poem like that.
  • dee
    dude u kill me its so nice and so evertything
  • tony
    I told my girl about it, and everything went well
  • minaz
    your poem is wonderful true to the heart what one actually feels but can potray in words. but u have done it.
  • Pinalkumar
    This is really very nice poem.. i feel for AEW this. hey AEW i love you.
  • Carla
    This peom is exactly how I feel about my boyfrien. It seems so hard to teel him how I feel in words, but this peom says it all.
  • tricia
    this poem was a perfect. it described my spouse explictly.GREAT!
  • giuliano
    this poem brings back memories about an ex-girl that i felt the exacy same way ..unfortunately we are not together anymore but it is a great tool to try get her back ..thanks for thinking this poem up!i feel the same way but just didnt know how to explain it!
  • adam
    All I ever wanted to say ..cannot forget All that I could not relate. thanks. i enjoyed this poem.
  • Erin
    This is exactly how I feel about Sean.I love him so much.I just wish he knew..Sean.if you are reading this I love you! I always have!
  • Rosie
    This is a great poem.
  • Kevin
    Great Poem!
  • SMOKEY
    I THINK THIS POEM IS SWEET TO GO TO MY BABY LOVE ERIN I LOVE HER WITH ALL MY LIFE SHE IS PRETTIER THEN ANYBODY IN THE UNIVERSE I LOVE U !
  • mechi
    I think that this is the best poem thats out there.
  • Rehana
    I thought this poem was sincere.he really does love this mystery angel of his.Good for you Anthony!
  • BJ
    This poem reminds me of how I often dable at poetry. I can't ever find the right flow as this, thank you kindly.
  • Nandanie
    This poem was so great. Made me remember my fiance and how I feel about him. I'm gonna send this poem to him . Keep up the good work
  • Heather
    i love the poem it makes me want my baby back!
  • jeff
    your poem really touch my heart dude, i'm using it to make my women understand, i think it will work.
  • Daniel
    this poem kicks and it was heart felt!
  • Doc
    Good stuff. Reminds me of all the emotions and longings i had.
  • dana
    this is one of the best ive read i hope he continutes to write more
  • Johanna
    That reminds me of something my boyfriend wrote for me you have tallent keep it up
  • chuin
    great poem ..
  • Cruz,
    This poem was like the one about me and my gf and i loved this one. It was great reading someone elses that i do not even know
  • Patty
    I think whoever she is she's lucky to have you.There are very few guys who can express their feelings to a person, but I think poetry is the best way.
  • cougar
    Your poem is so sweet Your girlfriend is lucky to have a sweet guy like you. Keep up the good heart hope you and your girl are doing well Best wishes
  • Kelsey
    This kind of love is hard to find.. so once you do. hold on as tight as you can. it is going to be rollar Coaster. but in the end you will be so happy!
  • ED
    Been married 20 years sent it to my sweetheart, It says all the things I feel.
  • Tracy
    What a fantasic poem. You say it all, it was perfect.
  • Anne
    hey! i really liked this poem. i sent it to my bf, and now he REALLY knows how much I love him! this describes so much about me and him! :)
  • Tyalia
    My friend Angela and I thought that your poem was very sweet and meaningful, it really touched us deeply. Thank you!
  • vikrant
    It strengthened my belief in the fact that simple is beautiful. It was very calm and soothing.
  • John
    My fiancee and myself love finding poetry that contains thoughts we've expressed to each other, restated in another way. A lovely, poignant piece, thank you for sharing it.
  • Kyle
    Man that was totally awesome and I know what you mean I feel the same about my girl. Well written and just was so sweet.
  • Mae
    This is beautiful.
  • belle
    I LOVE THIS POEM!
  • jaymie
    This is an awesome poem, This describes the way i feel about my boyfriend except for the girl hair thing. But you know what I mean
  • Heaven
    I was scroling along and I found this poem.I read it to my boyfriend and once I finished reading it he had tears in is eyes and was very happy.This poem should be #1 caused it's touched many lives in my family and friend's.Thank you Anthony West for making such a heart warming poem.
  • jesus
    oh cool this poem is great for those who are in love like me!
  • bill
    such A beautiful poem..its so sweet and kind, it really touched me, made me feel inside. i think its terrific and beautiful..god bless the genious who wrote it:)
  • ma
    never knew it would be you. *.*
  • Chandra
    I thought that this poem displayed a very strong passion. Very well spoken!
  • mandie
    I loved the poem it was so sweet.
  • Dave
    This poem is exactly how I feel about my girlfriend. I love her more with every breath I take and every thought of her. She is my princess.
  • Fahanny
    Thank anthony for making this poem cause with out this poem I could probobly lost my love this poem reminds me how special she is thats Grace and reminds me the things that I love about her so thank u very much anthony
  • Dani
    It´s a nice poem because when you read it you get a lot of compliments.
  • AL
    great poetry.must say it puts my own feelings about someone in a bundle
  • Laura
    I love this poem. It's my boyfriend and I's anniversary and this is the perfect poem to send to him, for we can't be together for it. Thank You
  • Joe
    Well I would have to say one of the best in this whole site because it really moves me into perspective of how much other people can love the people they care about. Peace
  • nabela
    its a very lovely poem wheni read it i felt love and passios
  • tina
    i have never heard a poem as sweet and as touching as this one. it made my heart tingle when i read it.
  • Ashley
    I really loved this poem. It's pretty and sweet.
  • Dessie
    DEAR,WHOME EVER THIS CONCERNSED, I LOVED THE POEM AND YOU ARE A GREAT POEM WRITER! AND I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE IN YOUR LIFE TIME THROUGH. WELL, I HOPE TO READ ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR POEMS VERY SOON
  • Chad
    This poem totally helped me express my love for my beloved. Thakyou for writing it every word was right on the money.. your great man! keep it up.
  • Tamu
    What a romantic poem. Reminds me of my moments too.
  • Jordan
    THIS POEM IS GREAT BECAUSE OF THIS POEM I AM IN A LOVING RELATIONSHIP THANKS~!~
  • nicole
    i love this ,it says everything i feel for my boyfriend
  • Danielle
    WOW! this is such a great poem..Any guy could say that to me anyday!
  • IMRAN
    Some love stories live forever This poem is very good loving persons I like it very much .
  • Angela
    Anthony West is an amazing poet. What I wouldn't give to date a man like him :)
  • julio
    It's just perfect.my girlfriend loves it..i never read something like that before!
  • sara
    i like this poem. it describes exactly the way i feel about my boyfriend, jeremy who i love more than anything and since he's gonna be gone for 5 months at basic training i can print and mail this to him to let him know i miss him.
  • michael
    thank-you for summing up what i wanted to say to the woman i love maybe one day i'll be able to write with such passion, until then thanks for the help.
  • Chris
    Great Poem
  • Emily
    Hey! I think that you understand what you wrote and I believe that I don't have to tell you that I like your poem because I think you already know that it is wonderful and as long as you know that then it doesn't matter what anyone else thinks!
  • bryan
    BRAVA DUDE EXCELLENT POEM. DO YOU WRITE SONGS
  • Paula
    This poem is very beautiful.
  • shannon
    Your poem was fresh. This is how i fell about my fiance!
  • Jenn
    your poem is really inspiring and you can feel what you are trying to tell her. I really enjoyed it.
  • Jenn
    your poem is really inspiring and you can really feel what the girl means to him.
  • gracie
    that peoms was great,it felt like you were speaking to me about what hes like and how he is,thanks
  • walid
    it excellent
  • Sheila
    It really explains how the author feels about his dream gal... Simple but yet a wonderful piece of work..I could just picture what a lovely girl he has in his mind.
  • Carl
    This poem is great. I sent it to my girlfriend and she melted.
  • tintin
    it makes wish that someday i'll find the right man.
  • Robert
    good poem.
  • lit47
    vvveeerrryyy gggoooddd
  • Danion
    I thought that the poem was really good my girlfriend really liked it and because of this poem we are no engaged. Thank You
  • Starlena
    It is a very lovely poem.
  • georgette
    It is a really nice poem and definetely something I can relate to even though I,m a girl.
  • Marc
    Anthony truly has a gift. I wish I had the talent to express my feelings to my girlfriend in words such as those.
  • Josh
    this poem is a great poem i hope it will help me and my girlfriend get closer to each other
  • Charity
    This was beautiful. My boyfriend sent it to me and it was absolutely perfect!
  • hayley
    it's so sweet. i love it
  • bill
    This is an awesome poem. I love the words to it. Im inspired by it.
  • brittany
    I loved it!
  • Richie
    A very good poem
  • Richard
    I have a new love in my life and the word writen here say what I feel for her. Vary nice well done.
  • Krystal
    I Love this poem. Because it says everything that I feel about my boyfriend. Great Job.
  • Heather
    This is how I feel about my husband. But I m not sure he feels the same anymore. But this is a really great poem. I love it.
  • RONALDO
    I give it Four Stars out of Five.
  • mallory
    That was so sweet!!
  • Joseph
    This poem is GREAT! Im currently in China on a 6 month internship and my girlfriend is back in America preparing for medical school. My love for her goes deeper then bones. I sent this poem to her to let her know what I love about her. Thank you for helping me communicate my emotions to her.
  • Tabatha
    I really like your poem.If you have anymore please send them to me.
  • mimi
    coolnessss...sweet
  • Larry
    Nice job. Had I been a poet, I would have written the same thing.
  • Simon
    Wonderful I really needed this today! Thank you!
  • Rob
    so true I like this and I feel the same way with the one that tuches me
  • Tammy
    awsome poem i loved it, it was just so real...
  • Thomas
    I liked it alot it suited my relationship
  • Amanda
    this poem is inspireing and sweet. i love the way he described the way he felt with such a passion
  • Chris
    A M A Z I N G
  • Jon
    very good i give it a ten
  • nicki
    Thiks is a really good poem and i just wanted to vote for it.
  • Ashley
    I really liked this poem it was really cute.You hardly ever hear stuff like that from a guy and thats what really attracted me to it.
  • Elyse
    I love this poem. it reminds me of why i love my boyfirend!
  • Lisa
    WOW! That was really good were did you learn how to do that
  • nely
    I think your poem rocks.
  • Fas
    this poem is great !
  • Angel
    I loved this poem because this is the same way that I feel about my boyfriend. The way he does feel about me did change the way my life was. I wanted to thank you to me your poem is like a sign to me
  • Isabel
    I think this poem was very cute. I liked it alot. Keep it up
  • Rachel
    I absolutely love this poem. It is truley beautiful. Even though I am female, and cannot fully relate to you, in a way I understan where you are coming from. I understand when you look at the person you love and just really think about them, you can just find a million things about them, its suprising, you can find a new thing everyday! I just wanted to say that you are a great poetry writer. Good Job! Please keep writing I enjoy reading them.
  • Tonya
    I have read and wrote poetry for 10 years now. It is my favorite pastime. It is rare to come across a poem so beautiful and touching.
  • jim
    this is the best poem
  • alex
    man you really know how to tell a girl how much you really loooove her. i was dumbfounded by the words. you just capativated my heart. it pumping, it coming out my chest. if you could write me one love poem so my coochie could quiver and my liver could shiver.
  • katie
    i liked it alot it made me feel that this girl has a wonderful boyfriend
  • jessica
    i reall love this poem. it fits right into my life right now so it hit the spot perfectly.awesome
  • GhettoChick16
    I like this peom. I think this peom comes from the person's heart and I can tell that this person has deep feelings.
  • TJ
    I was looking for a poem for my soon to be girlfriend and I wanted to tell her what I love about her, this poem said all that I long to say to her. Everything that you said hit it right on the nose. Thank you for the gift you have shared. You have made my chances a lot better.
  • KC
    it's just how I feel about this special guy.
  • Mysh
    All these emotions that the author felt I understand as they're the same way I feel about my boyfriend but simply cannot express my feelings verbally. I've found a poem that speaks for me and my emotions and I applaude the author.

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