#31 This Kiss
I wrote this poem one night after I had come home from spending the evening with my boyfriend. We had just shared a great kiss, and this is a way for me to remember that kiss forever.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems
This Kiss
we stood in the doorway his hands on my waist the clock tickling loudly almost in haste he moved in closer his eyes locked in mine I long for his kiss For just a moment in time his lips meet mine and I feel the sensation no longer must I wait to give into the sweet temptation my knees go weak my palms become sweaty I go back to that place I have been so many times already the world disappears all that's left is him and I and as we pull away I feel as though I could fly |
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Martini
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394 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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Tthis poam is just how i will feel when he gives me his first kiss when we meet for the first time.
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wallacetouch me dip
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kimberlythis is really good
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sarahI Really Like This Poem. it Reminds Me Of The First time i Kissed My Boyfriend. =]
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alyssaI loved it was so good its somehting i wished for! very good great job!
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JoseNice poema, Love it.
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NOmg! Dah poem is so0 nice or I loved It !x!
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wildhorsegr8 journey through first kiss keep it up
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christinai loved this poem. it made me go back to my first kiss and the emotions i had at the time.
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leehis poem is very touchy 'it makes my heart smile,i just looooooooooooooove it!
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RilindaI really loved this poem! I said everything that a girl goes through at that momment. I would vote it #1.
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amberi love this poem so much. it brings back memories of the times ive shared a great kiss. WONDERFUL!
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AlGood use of words, I love you poem. Keep it up
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tyrellthis poem is sweet i luv i. whoever u r keep writting!
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Michellei especially loved this poem. even though my "first kiss" was a bad one, i knew what it was like because i actually had a moment like this with the next boyfriend (/ex-boyfriend) and i kinda know how it feels now to b my boyfriend (right now) cuz that was the situation for him. thanks for helping me understand.
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shelbyI think this is a very sweet poem
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TADZE ADAMUNo one ever painted the picture of the last kiss I received from her,my ever loving one. sometimes, minds around the globe resonate pls write more for me tadze
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syidahI like it
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stephanyi really love this poem i think that this is the real deal! i love u ppl
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MariaI Love this Poem!
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elizabethi luv this poem. it explians how i feel every time me and my boyfriend kiss.
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jordanthis is a good poem cause it happen to me good memorys
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Brittneyi really like this poem because it makes me think of the way i was with my boyfriend and when we broke up it made me think of all the good times i had with him
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BreannaI loved your poem! That is the feeling I get every time I kiss my boyfriend of 8 months! It really touched me!
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TrinaYour poem is so cute and I felt the same with my boyfriend when he kissed me the first time
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KarenMartini, I absolutely love your poem, it explains exactly how I feel about my lover. Thank you.
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TresI REALLY LOVE THIS POEM !
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josephineGod! so real is the poem. It makes me feel like i could fly go luk 4 him wherever he is and kiss!
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karynai love this poems so much i can read it over and ower and will always touch me deep in to my heart
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KelsayIt really has touched me beacause i can realate to it very much
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MAYRAExactly how I felt with my boyfriend, awsome poem, makes me go back to that day. :)Mayra
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CandygirlOMG!i love this poem is so awsome this is how u kiss j/k
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demondi want to give this to my girlfriend
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Louits just like the real thing in such a moving way
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Tthe poem was verry nice simple but it captured the true meaning
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anathis poems is really sweet keep it up with the nice poems!
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ashleyThis peom was how i felt when i first got kissed so from one poet to another wonderful job.
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Catherinei liked this poem very sweet
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emmai want my 1st kiss to b like that
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caridadthis poem is really great. this reminds me of me and my bboy friend that he hold me on my waste and kiss me. hope to hear 4rm u soon
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judyi write a lot of poetry as do you, that was great! it wass exactly how i felt when i recieved my first kiss.
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MeAmazing
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KaseyThis Kiss, I like this poem,very good. and I hope that you always remember it 4-ever
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CASSIETHIS POEM IS THE BEST ONE I'VE READ IN A LONG TIME. FROM ONE POET TO ANOTHER GREAT JOB KEEP IT UP YOU'LL BE FAMOUS ONE DAY.
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jenthis is beautiful i can definantly relate
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colleni really like this poem. who ever wrote it it is so awesome.
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Daniellethis is the best poem i've ever read. wow. sounds like me and this one guy love it so s soooooooooooo much keep writing!
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amyRealy gooooooooooooooood (*50 pg. )
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Cassiei really liked ur poem i sooooooooooo can rel8.
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annishayo this poem was fly. i really liked it it was nice. well my first kiss was totally different. but from a 1 to 10, i give this a ten! as leased your first kiss wasen't messed up!
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TiffanyI think this poem is absolutly incredible. i know what you are feeling girl, I've been there too.
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kopjiThe poem is quite cool and educative. It has really touched some where in me
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AmandaThis poem is just like the way my kisses are with my boyfriend. its so heart touching. i love it!
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Jazzimenthis poem is a very good way of you expressing your feelings about love with one other.
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deandrai like dis poem because it touch me i rememder my first kiss with someone and i luv it when me an my boyfriend it was off the chain. like it
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Dianaaha Now this is a good poem Good job. who ever did it Its really Relly god.
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jessicaperfect poem.
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TabbyTHIS IS SUCH A WONDERFUL POEM
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AlexI loved this poem. Alot of people find it hard to describe those special kisses but this poem put that feels into words perfectly.
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lindawow thats how i fell about me and my boyfriend when we kiss
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TohoaThis is a great poem! I love it!
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monicaGIRL, u know what i'm talkin about, YEAH.
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MonicaI love this poem its a great piece of writting its brings out everything that at one point i wanted to say.
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jessicavery touching and very good
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Moon JohnWhat a great poem, I love this poem so nice expresion, so nice feeling, so nice moments, i can feel this in my life. I think such as this poem is made for me. I love u Martini so love u. How i tell u tht u are so near with me. Best of Luck near future. Now i say you please write agian about darkness. Where burning candle and you and me agian share our grief.
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Feather"A" all da way
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RiddhiIts an absolutely ausumn poem
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rachaelTHIS POEM THIS KISS IS SO SWEET
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joLoved it. I have been with my partner for 4 years and we got married just last sunday and i still feel this way when we kiss. I would give it a 10
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JonhThis poem really touched me because I'v had an experience like this and It brough back good memories.
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Laurentsweet. i love the flow!
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luannevery simple and to the point. very real too! Good poem
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princessloved it!
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MeganI loved this peom and if you have many more please email me! This peom touched me and made me remember all the good memeries I had. I love this peom. I'd buy it from you for and gu-trilloin-millon dollors! Love, Megan Dunn
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KenTouched me
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LupeI loved it. After 26 years of marriage, I still feel this way when we kiss. he can still make me flush.
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shafoneI really love this poem because while i was reading it i felt like it was happening to me. It was magical.
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JACKIEI THINK THIS POEM IS REALLY GOOD. HOW OLD R U HAVE YOU FALL IN LOVE WITH SOMEBODY. I THINK THIS POEM IS VERY GOOD SINCERELY, JACKIE REYES
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danielleThis is one of the best poems i've ever seen i love it it reminds me of me and my boyfriend :)
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cristalthis was so cool i cant belive you thought of it
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danielleThis makes me think of my boyfriend and how i miss him and long for another kiss from him
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BrittanyGreat poer! :) Trust me I KNOW HOW U FEEL There is nothing like sharing a great kiss with someone u love.
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zinnatsimply WOW!;-P
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venkatachalamThis is a beautiful expression of real, neat beautiful love
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angelGOOD WAY OF THINKING GIRL
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sarahey this poem is so sweet it shows the true first kiss from the one you love . it doesn't matter how much time you spend with him . its just about the true love , the feeling of passion in your soul that comes deep inside of you . your writting so touching that sounds like you really wrote it from your heart
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Janathat is a really cute poem. I love that feeling.
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MonicaI LOVED IT SO MUCH!1
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Amandavery sentecinal
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whitneyGreat!
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Ingait was a nice poem i hope it came from ur heart i loved it
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DIt captures the moment and you can imagine and feel the emotions that go along with this moment.
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brittniOMG that is me and my bf i love him so much and when i read that poem it took me back to the first time me and him kissed.
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ChelseaThis poem is a very nice i like it cause it remind of the special guy i like.
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DARLENEI think it was sweet.
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jure'yes i felt love. show by a kiss. im a poetic youngwoman too. and its because of my boyfriend.
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AmberI really like this poem because it shows how I felt when I got a kiss from my boy. I love this poem it's really good and it's really cute. Good Job to the writer!
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somikazithe poem is wonderfull and what i love about is that it so simple and it means a lot i really enjoyed it
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katthis poem really touched me coz it feel like the gurl was really telling us in detail about her getting ready for a kiss and really just appreciating it!
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suewell this is an amzing poem. it touch my lonely soul KEEP WRITING MORE SO I COULD READ!
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JulionaIt was an awesome poem, keep it listed. it touched me
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oscari really liked this poem. i think you have excellent talent for writing and it made me remember my first kiss that seemed to last for eternity
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AmandaThat was cute I loved it I feelt the same way when my man kissed me for the first time it was like magic and I will never forget it.
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SantoshThis is awesome, really wonderful and an xact feeling of the first kiss of the adored beloved. hats off.
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PioReally it's very nice. It brings the actual feeling of my first kiss when I read every time.
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heatherThis kiss poem is sweet
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AngelWOW! That's exactly how I feel.
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gigglesI liked this poem cuz it really touched me!
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shellyi liked this poem i think it was very sweet and a good way of expressing a kis!
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ZachI Love dis poem cos it reminds me of kissing
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martinI think this poem is good as it reminds me of a real kiss like the one i had last night
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KaylaI love it
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veronicaIts so sweeeeeeeeet.
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Altrinai really like this peom because it really touch me and i congraduate you.
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MarleneI really liked this poem cuz i can really relate to stuff like this your an inspiration!
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carimethis poem touched me alot allthough it never happend to me. this is my story i liked this guy he was nice he was cute i guess you can say he was the perfect one he would walk me to 3rd per. untill that one day he told me he was moving he wasnt my boyfriend he was just a friend but till today i cant stop thinking about him.
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maribelthis poem is the best poem I read it brings out imotions on alot of people
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AndreiGreat one. :
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JamilaI love this poem, it is the prefect scenarion of that special moment in every girls life.
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LoveYOUR AWESOME! THIS POEM WAS AWESOME MAJOR TO THE FOURTH POWER. KEEP DOIN WHAT YOU'RE DOIN.
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MELANIETHIS POEMS WAS NICE AND SWEET I LOVED IT CAUSE I READ IT CLEARLY BECAUSE IT WAS EASY TO READ NICE POEM.
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camilleyou'll gonna love it. keep it up. mwwaahh.
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shannondawnyou did a great job. i felt as if that was me
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fatimaSo romantic,full of sensation.
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marissai love this poem
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amandait was very sweet
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dustiei thoudht that this poem was very good. i feel that way alot. i love this one guy and i didn't know how to tell him and it's been 6 years since we have been togather and i still haven't told him just how i feel and this poem says everything i let him read it and he started crying and it was very sweet. thank you. you are a very wonderful writer.
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ShevonneTHAT POEM WAS GUD
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laurenthis is a very moveing poem xxx
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janayahthe poem was so sweet i really enjoyed every word that was in the poem. im really not a poem girl but this one was amazing ,so to end this ,it was GREAT!
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kiannai have felt like this before
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Nikkithis is a very sweet poem it reminds me of my boyfriend adam
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MARTIKAIT REMIND ME OF MY FIRST KISS THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM
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Cynthiai really like this poem alot because i been thruu that, and i know how it feels to be in that situation so. that's why i m gonna vote and rate it good :)
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brellgood poem
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amandaive felt that feelin b4 n i related to this poem it was perfect on describin exactly how i felt
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shbreathis is a poem that i can think about when i'am sad
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marythis poem is exactly what it feels like to kiss somebody that has your heart in the palm of their hand. the way it feels to kiss that one person that can make all your problems go away. the person you LOVE!
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cillathis poem was really sweet. i liked it alot, The words were really nice to read and i enjoyed reading this piece
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JudithI LOVE IT,IN SIMPLE WORDS--TERRIFIC,AWESOME. WHEN I READ THIS POEM IT REMAINDED ME OF MY SWEET PIE. ANYWAYS KEEP WRITTING.
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brendawow, i have never read such a great poem. i wished i could write beautiful stuff like that. it was great.
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Kaylathis poem reminds me of my first kiss. keep up the good work. !
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melissaI LIKED THIS BECAUSE ITS SEEMS SO TRUE AND IT MAY HAPPEN TO ONE OF US THAT READ IT WELL IT WAS A REALY NICE POEM AND I REALLY LIKED IT WELL IT WAS NICE WRITING DONT HAVE MUCH TIME SO SEE U LATER
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JackyOh my god, when i read this poem i just fell in deep love with it, makes me feel like someone has actually found me feelings toward the gut i love with my entire life THANX 4 THAT*
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teganlove it love it good job just absoulutly love it
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tracii think that this poem is one of the best that i have ever read in my life as 14 years old on a scale of 1-10 1 being the worst and 10 being the best i would give it a 8. Traci
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NatalieOMG I LOVE THIS. this is just how i feel somtimes. lol GREAT JOB!
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tiffanyit was good i lyke it vry much
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AdrianThat was a beautiful poem.
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EllezaI really really love this poem. It touches me deeply inside. Very nice poem. I love it.
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Allyi really loved this poem. it really sumed up my feelings after my first kiss with my boyfriend. BEAUTIFUL!
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MarsatieI like this poem because its ture when you kiss your boyfriend it makes you feel happy and it feels good with the time rushing by and his hands or you waste. This poem is very true.
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tinaim only 14 and i love this poem so much. it expresess ho you feel abou your first kiss, and what was running through your mind. you have inspired me to want to read and write poems now. thank you so much. even though this poem was meant for everyonee, it was a great poem for me. so thankyou!
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LaceyThis is an amazing poem and truly the truth about a person's first kiss
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TaraI loved this poem because it sounds like mine and my boyfriends first kiss!
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juani liked yur poem alot nice job
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ChanelI love that poem very sweet
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janetthis poem is really good ! :)
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kaylathis poem makes me feel like i'm with the one i like and it feels like a dream cause the one i like ingores me and don't know either.
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Grethelthis poem is so nice. i love it!
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AMBERHAPPENS TO ME ALLWAYS
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AllieThis poems reminds me on a great kiss I shared with my love. I really think it does send the feeling of teh actual kiss just reading it. it makes it feel like it is happening again.
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runaway247a kiss is almost impossible to put into words, but this poem captured all the wonderful feelings a kiss can give
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PAULAI CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MY SWEETBABY TONITE, TO KISS HIS BEAUTIFUL LIPS! I LOVE THIS POEM!THIS IS ONE OF THOSE THINGS THAT MAKE YA! I SURLEY CAN RELATE TO THIS! :) THANKS TO OUR GOD IN HEAVEN THAT WE CAN HAVE THIS GREAT EXPERENCE! LOVE IS THE GREATEST OF ALL THINGS! PAULA
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samanthathis is sucjh a deep peom. but i loved it. good job on writting it!
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KatLove the poem. It makes me think of when I first kissed my boyfriend, a long time ago. Very good poem.
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KianiTHIS POEM IS BEAUTIFUL. THIS POEM CAN REMIND ANY PERSON OF THEIR FIRST KISS.
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ebonyi think this is a honest poem. that's how my first kiss felt like
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kelseyThis poem touched me because when i write i can feel it and usually reading others its hard to feel the same that is being shared but, when i read yours it takes me to a place where ive been before familiar. Thanks
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MarciaIt's great poem!
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KassieI Love the poem i could feel the love and the feeling of the girls
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RebeccaThat's tha nice poem i ever heard in my life time it is tha sweetest thing
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akemai really love this pome
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AliciaThis poem is so sweet n it reminds me of how I feel when I'm with my boyfriend. It also expresses how this girl shows her true feelings for her and how all girls long for that one special kiss that they'll never forget.
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kaylahey omg i love this poem. i guess because it sorta discribes me and my boyfriend! i mean i read it and jus totally thought about me and him the first time he had kissed me!
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natashathis poem is amazing you are a beautiful writer
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carmenI loved your poem :)keep Writting
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Laureni love this poem, it describes how i felt when i kissed my boyfriend.
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emilythis is the best poem i have ever read!
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tiarathat is a realy cool love poem
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olgaI like this poem cause it really means alot to me cause just yesturday me and my love (mark cruz) kissed and it was such a passionate kiss I will never forget. I love this peom!
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Melodyhey you are a great person and your good at it can you please write me one that i oculd ddicate to my boy friend for our 2 month relationship
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Marissathis is a great poem. have you written anymore? if you have i would like to read them.
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JordanThis poem really touched me. The first time i kissed my g/f which was 3 years ago still with her :) Its excellent the author needs to keep writing.
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Vallenciathis poem is nice
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rebecathats just how I felt when I had my first kiss too its awesome
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Leahbeautiful
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JosphineI can't tell you how much this poem reminds me of me, the only scary part is i was scared the first time but now i just gets better and better. I love this poem as much as i love my boyfriend. This poem is lovely.
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Zamothis poem was it for me. it raised emotions
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Anjumtrue sublime feelings
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TuesdayThis poem touched me so much when i read it. i really liked the pashion in t and it made me think so much about my boyfriend. Its a really good poem!
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WhitneyI really liked the poem and I just wanna encourage you to keep up the good work and you'll go along way in life, because you have an awesome talent.
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AmyI sent this poem to my husband of almost 4 years on an e card. Good Job. Keep up the good work. Don't ever take the gift of words God has given you for granted, use them to glorify Him, his ways, & all of the goodness we can still find in the simple things (a kiss) in this world. From: A greatful reader.
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deniseI loved the poem thats exactly how I felt when I had the best kiss from my boyfriend!
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ChelsyI loved your peom! Reminds me of my relationship with my boyfreind.
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BarbieIt was sweet and i loved it alot that s how i felt on my first kiss too
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shavonai felt where martini was coming from and once you get that kiss it should feel special just like that.
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StarThat is soooooooooo sweet. It makes it sound like it is like floating on a cloud.
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JaseI really did like this. I have been writing poems for a while, and have tried to submit them. But This is better than mine, I give it an 11/10!
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erikaHey, my friends writes real good poems! these poems are really good and i love them keep writing!~ the friendship ones are just like me and vivian I LOVE U !~
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heatherthis poem touched me in so many ways. this poem is true for a lot of young females. we have all been there.
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GeyshaThis poem was the sweetest thing once i read this it touched my heart.
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LindsayThis poem was very insperational. I loved it.
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JodieI thought this poem was really sweet and the word tell me how the poet is realting to her life and that special moment she spent one night with that special peson.
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Cutie3000i really liked dis poem. i could really relate to alot of poems on here but thid one was really good it touched my heart
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ashleighthat poem was lovely send more its great i just love it ! mwah
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tayhey i thought this poem was really really good it reminded me of my kiss with my very special someone
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SheldyYou rock gurl
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nicolei really liked this poem it really touched meeh. i know that we can all relate to this one peom!
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mistyBEUTIFUL!
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JASMINEOH MY GOSH I THINK THAT THIS POEM IS THE CUTEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ. READING THIS POEM MADE ME GET SO INTO IT. YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED PERSON. KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO BEST, WRITE THOSE POEMS USING NOT ONLY YOUR MIND, BUT YOUR HEART TO.
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LaurenI really really loved this poem its like the one I wrote but it was called Kssing in the Rain, its one of the best poems Ive ever wrote!*!*!*
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manojgood poum. i like this
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shaniceI LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH
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Kaylathanz ur poem really touched me it took me back to when i had my first kiss
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JanetMarieI REALLY LOVED YOUR POEM YES IT REALLY GOT TO ME BECAUSE IT TAKES ALOT OF HEART TO SHOW EVERYONE HOW YOU REALLY FEEL
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Stacyit is realy really good it touches me in away i have never felt befor WELLDONE!
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lilmickeyit touched my heart better yet my soul and it's the exact way i felt with my boo mike i luv u boo!
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AlissaI love this poem because it reminds me of when my boyfriend and I had our first kiss!
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stevey-lynni think that was a good way to look back on that kiss and say omg lol
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Kerlyit was really sweet and nice poem!
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DachelineI really liked that poem. It reminded me of the first time me and my boyfriend kissed. It really touched my heart.
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BlandThis is a very nice poem. The author is definately a passionate person. She should keep doing what she does.
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DoreenI read your poem and I found it very emotional. franckly it really touched my heart as I went through it.
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sylvestertha of all poems i've ever come across.
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Emilythis was a very touching poem
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MikkylaI like this poem because i can relate to it and it makes me feel as if i'm in the author's position.
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JuliaDear Martini, thia Peom was so touching. You have a great writing style. I am going to share this peom with my friends. I feel that way when ever i am given a kiss. Nice work. Keep writing Marie
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timThat was an awesome and it touched me. It gets a nine from me. Thanks for writting it!
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LeahGreat Poem. This poem touched me because it reminded of me and my 1st kiss with the person I am in love with. Even being together with someone for three years (as I am) I still get those moments.
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AngelaI really enjoyed this poem. It reminds me a lot of my first kiss with my boyfriend. I still feel that way when he kisses me. I just want to up and fly away!
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agnesi like it
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VICTORit touched me deeply in my heart. i never been hit with the kind of words i just read. beautiful!
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devvonthis is the best kiss poem 2 me it makes me remember my 1st kiss.
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lORITHIS IS A VERY WELL WRITTEN POEM EVERYONE SHOULD EXPERIENCE THE FEELING IN THIS POEM
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Mistyi thought that it was an excellently written poem.
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Tabbythis poem was probably one of the best poems. it means a lot for me because it reminded me of the relationship that i want to have with a guy kenji. i love your work!
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ShamekaThis poem is very nice I do poems my self
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StephanieIT WAS A VERY GOOD POEM TO ME.
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lover gurlhey i really like this poem because that is the way i feel too when i have kiss my ex boyfriend for 10 months
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sarathis really touched me i really thank u for putting it on here
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MandyThis poem was awesome. I'm more into depressing, suicide poems but this is one poem that i really liked.
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MARYYOU DONE A GOOD JOB
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RubyI FEEL THIS POEM SHOUILD BE AT THE TOP OF THE LIST BECAUSE IT RELATES TO THIS SITUATION I AM HAVING WITH THIS GUY. IT DESCRIBING WHEN ME AND THIS GUY FIRST MET INSTEAD OF THE DOORWAY IT WAS IN THE HALLWAY.
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Doggynice poem. love it so much keep writn! ur great!
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almathis poem was good it made me think keep it up
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VickyI relly like your poem.
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Tynisai really like your poem
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Andreawow. i love it so much it was way beautiful and i just want to say the way you dicribed it was so eligant and perfect thats how i fell about the love of my life keep up the good work
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lavinathis poems is so touching!
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ShirleyI really enjoyed this poem and it truly touched my heart.
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SoniaI really loved your poem it made me think about the first time i kissed my boyfriend its like a fairy tale that came to life
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Amandathis poem touched me alot. it reminds me of my 1st kiss with the boy im in love with. thanks kyle for that special moment u gave me.
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JavedI really liked this poem being touched to my thoughts and i will keep in my memory and to send it to my girlfriend.
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AnaGREAT POEM
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samanthaThis poem really describes when u 1st kiss sum1 !
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lizomg! that is the most romantic thing i have ever heard! i love it! keep on writing girl!
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christinai love this poem reminds me of my bf justin. now im just scared to lose him
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jamieThis is a really good poem
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TheresaHey! I love this poem so much. It reminds me of me and my b/f! Great Job
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minervai liked this poem alot because it describes how i feel when im with my boy
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HSantenayYour Poem was fantastic, I can actually relate to what you siad.
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mirandai liked this poem so much i think she could get a lot of money for that poem.
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MistyThis poem reminded me a lot about my first boyfriend. I remember feeling like I could fly and I still do when he kisses me. We've known each other for 13 years and we are best friends to this day. I know that he is my soul mate and we will always have each other.
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SarahI really liked this poem because it is like me and my boyfriend.
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JennThis Is a great Poem! I love it!
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AshleyI can totaly relate to this poem, I'm glad someone wrote about it.
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ShereceThis poem reminds me when I first kissed a boy. He was a rally good friend, and my crush. He liked me too, a lot. He told me and 2 days after that we kissed.
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TERRYi love this poem, as it reminds me how i felt the first time i kissed my girlfriend and how i feel every time we kiss.
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LatoyaI think this is very vey good. Keep on writting plams like that. You make the reader feels like she is there and the poem is really good.
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HopieI can really relate to this poem. I think it was great.
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susanI Really Liked your poem.
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wilnathis poem describes my first kiss perfectly. I thought i was in heaven
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poohdat was a goooooood poem
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HeatherYour poem was awesome! It really got to me.
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BrittanyThis reims me of me and my boyfriend when he kiss me there is nothing tha could ever hurt me
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lindsayi thought the poem was a good one. it takes you into there shoes and makes you feel what they are feeling.
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bryaThis poem reminds me of everytime i kiss my boyfriend. Because i do feel like i want to fly and spend the rest of my life with him.
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michelleit was a good poem i like it it was cool
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tabbythis poem tells i felt when i kiss my boyfriend
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heatherthis is the best poem EVA! it describes exactly wot heppened wiv me a week ago. I had been lookin at sum1 4 ages n i knew he liked me. I was stood in a doorway n he came up 2 me placed his hands aroung my waist n kissed me! It was the best kiss eva n it was definitely worth the wait. I will neva 4get it! Thmx 4 such a gr8 poem! xXx
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charmainei think it was a really sweet poem and i think thats just how a perfect kiss should be.
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torresthis poem is so sweet and i bet that alot of people like it.
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MelanieHey martini that was a good poem/ It made me feel good even my boyfriend who is right next to me said that it was good. Keep up the good work girl
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twilaI really like this poem. I write poems myself. this reminds me of a kiss I once had
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amandaThis actually happened to me and it reminds me of it so much. I am still in love with the guy i kissed in the hall. That was forever ago too. I love your poem
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brandithis poems is how i feel when me and my boyfriend kiss!
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Amberhey i loved it! my b/f and i have been going out for 3 months and we have never kissed or said i love you which is fine with me for i think it is very important to build the relastion ship on trust and other things but not how some one kisses but anyways i hope i will feel like that when we finale kiss! thanks
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katei like the poem. so romantic
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MarisolI really liked this poem it really has meaning & i really felt like that once
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Jacquelynthis poem was awesome!its so true because once you find the right guy and have that passionate kiss you'll never forget it. It's happened to me.
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DanishTHAT POEM IS SIMPLY AMAZING!. simply put.
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AshleyI realy loved your pome i think it is realy good
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TabbethieI really liked your poem it was really sweet. Writing this poem would be a great way to remember the kiss that you and your boyfriend had shared. You need to keep writing poems because you are very good at writing poems.
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amandai think this is a good poem its sweet
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AmberMartini, This poem was quite good. You described the kiss so well, and as in depth as you could. Great job! For a moment there I could swear I could see it happening in my mind. . . Keep up the good writing!
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miracleYou caught the real picture of the feelings we have about a kiss. The poem was all the way every word true. It was a very good poem, keep it up.
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ericai love how it makes u feel what the writer was feeling at the time
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TinaIve felt this way many times before. It relates to me so well, I like the way you put your past experiences into this poem.
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KariI love this poem. I feel the exactly way when I'm with my closest guy friend. Thank you for sharing it with me. It touched me deeply. Good luck with other poems.
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sandraI really liked this poem because that's what it really feels like.
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billyI might be a boy but thanks for the poem it was like a tip of what i should do.
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BrittanyI enjoyed this poem every much. It reminds me of a kiss that I got from my 1st love. It was a magically moment, and I loved every bit of it!
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SarahThat was a wonderful poem. you have TALENT!
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Gabegrrreat poem! when i read this poem i had to ball up my feet like fists, because that knocked my socks off.
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JeniaI really did like this poem, and it describes how a kiss is, when you are with that special person. or a person that you like. KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB!
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tankai really loved it! I have never been kissed so at least i know what im going to be looking forward 2!
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brehey i think your poem is so true b/c like the last past friday i was at school me and boyfriend we have been together now for 3 months we never once kissed which it was okay with me then this one day he tills me to meet him in the hall way at 1:00 so i did he pulled me over by the water fountian and kissed me i was so happy it wasn't nothing in this world made me or happier than that! and your poem just makes me fill even happy knowing the same happened to some one else!
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4RealThat poem waz too much,way to go!
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shellThis is an absolutley wonderful poem. I can really realte to it! It perfectly describes the feeling I get after a passioante kiss! Thanks
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WAwsome poem, makes you remember that speical someone. Tahnk you!
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HELENBrilliant poem captured the true feelings lingering in her heart at that moment in time very well done I will remember that poem forever exception work
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LULU-Girl- That was a tight poem. thats amost the same thing that happen to me.
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angeli like this poem it's real. and it is so true. everyone at least tries to see love one way but not all. i love my x with all my heart and he loves me with all his.
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amberI know that feeling when you want that kiss to last forever when all that is there is you and him. Good poem!
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JamieI liked this pom alot after reading this i stoped to think could there really be a thing called love?
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Chrisi loved this poem it rings so to true to the way that i feel
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AlanThis poem made my heart fell like it was 10 times bigger than it was. The feeling the author had sounds like a wonderful experience.
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Nikkithat was a very nice poem i really liked it!
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carrioh how i remember the first kiss. so sweet and wonderful. your poems explains it very well. keep up the good work !
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kellyI love this poem! It expresses something in you that you want to let out, you chose a wonderful way to tell about that amazing,im sure, kiss!
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jessythat poem was so sweet it reminds me of me and my boyfriend when we kiss it gives me a great sensation to know that others know how i feel
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Ginamy Favorite!
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AngelThis is a very sweet poem
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jessiethat poem was so nice i luved it so much. you have the talent to write more i would luv to here more from were ever that come from :)
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ShentieghnGreat poem.And you had made everyone remember their 1st kiss.
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nikkii thought this poem was great. it was just right for me and my boyfriend.
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kBxxxdarn good
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JinetThis poem was poppin you should make more like this. The stuff that was there were true is like it came from my thoughtS!
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ArmandeeI think is childishly cute. It reminds me of the beautiful feeling that lingers in our being even after the days have past. Time seems to stay still for an eternity in our minds.
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aprilthis is a really great poem. my boyfriend and i have been together for almost 3 years and one night i read this poem to him and he thought it was so sweet. not even three hours later, we got engaged. so thank you soooo much for your inspuration.
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JoannaI love your poem It really reminds me of my first I love writing poems and one day I want to write one as sweet as yours
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LaurenThis Poem is wonderful, it reminds me when I met the love of my life,(who is still my boyfrined for almost 2 years now)
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TonyaOmg! this was the sweetest thing i have ever read in like forever! your words are exactly how it is. the whole world disappears and you get all sweaty and after, you feel like you can fly. this is so true. i love your poem
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ashleyhey that was a really nice poem. I never really thought about all the good kisses i have had and the way i felt after.
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NiraliI really felt one with this poem because I know exactly how it feels after a very special kiss and how it feels during the moments leading up to the kiss. I had the same feelings when my boyfriend and I kissed in the movies 2 days after we got together. Thanks for the poem.
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dustinthat was a great poem! you are very good!
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AmyI love this poem it is so beautiful. The funny thing is it's the same way I kissed my boyfriend the first time, he's my frst love. Thank you for writing this poem. It's one of the best I've ever read.
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jeneenGreattttttt Poem It says what I feel in my heart. I would like to copy it and give it to my husband.
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Feliciait was a great poem.
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Cynthiathis is a great poem! it reminds me of my first..and i hope you do great in your other poems!
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LucyThis poem was absolutely awesome i really liked it, altough i have never been kissed. i'm just waiting for the perfect guy to come my way. :)
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poohi love this pome and i think you have a relly loveing boyfrind if he made you fill like that
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Melanievery pretty poem, keep up on the writing abilities that you have . you can go far with this
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JackieAfter i had finished reading this poem, suddenly my boyfriend's face came flooding into my mind with an over-bearing force. This poem describes how i feel everytime that i kiss him. It reminds me of our first official "kiss"!
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MirellaThat poem war REALY,REALY good remindes me of my first kiss
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lakesiaIt was great poem. I could never have guts enough to put my poetry online. I'm too scared someone will take it and put there name to it. Keep up the good work. You have a true gift!
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ZelaI have read a lot of poem but this one is so different from the one I read. I like this poem.
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shalinithis poem is simply wonderful ! i very much liked it.
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KendalI LOVE THIS !
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AshokHey, that was a good one. I was really touched. It brought my mmories back. Do write more poems like this.
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NatashaThis was a breath taking poem, you could almost feel as though you were acting out the lines! Thank you for such poetry
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NicaIt was a very CUTE poem/story, and was well put together!
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CASSANDRATHIS POEM IS SO GOOD U HAVE A NICE GIFT. KEEP IT UP
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BillThis is exactly how it feels!
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AshleyI really loved your poem. I want to be a poet and you've just gave me all the hope in the world!
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NaneHi Martini, I felt wonderful after finding your poem it described exactly what I had in my heart but didn't have the words to say it.Last night I had a wonderful and memorable experience;Guess what? It made me feel alive,gratified,it made me remember.I had to thank this person in some form and express how I felt and what better way could I find to achieve what I wanted it than to send him your poem. Thank you kindly and stay in sync. YOU ARE TRES TALENTED!
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sallythank you for sharing your poem.. my lover just moved away and i was searching for a poem to capture some of the emotions i'm feeling.. you poem describes this morning when we said good-bye.. thank you for reminding me of how sweet it was.
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paulai really loved your pomes
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HeatherThis poem was really good!
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SherryI really like that poem
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majidHi, how are you martini ? I saw your poetry & like it so much. I think you have very romantic life, so me. i was look for some love poetry for my love (I want to display all my love sense againts to her & I think she will know now how much I love her by your poetry.
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deborahThat is the best poem i have read on this site it realy moved me it inspired me to get up and go kiss me loving husband
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keishao this poem is great it reminded me bout my boyfriend & i, we shared a moment in time exactly like that, gurl it was a wonderful wonderful poem, & i loved it
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AngelIt reminded me of my first kiss with my boyfriend..
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ShannonThis poem rocks the universe!
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PegI love this poem! I know exactly how it feels! Well done i love it sooooo much!
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darkchild673i think that this poem is really good because i remember when i had my very first kiss when i was in 6th grade and it will be something i will never forget.
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ChristineOne of the best poems I have ever read! Excellent Job!
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MigitThis was such a nice poem. It was very touching as if I was there watching them kiss.
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sciferI really love your poem. You put a lot meaning into your poems.
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iferendonUgly, highschool poetry.
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LinaI like this poem alot. It is something that everyone can realate to!!
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nikkiVery nice. i can relate to this poem. Keep up the good ora. one.
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amberWOW!!! From poet to poet I love that poem. It captures everything just right. Thanks
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SusanHow beautiful. I felt like i had just been kissed...that special way. Your words melt...and become feelings.
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LISAI REALLY LIKE THIS POEM IT WAS REALLY GOOD I WISH I COULD RIGHT LIK THAT.
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ElisaThis really touched me & reminded me of when my fiance and I first met. Thank you for the wonderful poem.
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AmandaHey, Your poem was great.And it expressed alot of emotions....
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PamelaI was quite moved bye the poem since it brought back a mamory of one man that I so desperaltey wanted to kiss me
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Anniehey this is a good poem good luck with ur others one i hope u would rite more poems bye best of luck
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SylviaI really like this poem it was so sweet Iam for real
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gloriai can relate to this poem to my ex boyfriend kiss and i still remember it its like it was yesterday
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MudduckThis poem is fabulous. This is how I feel everytime I leave my boyfriends house.
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RaquelI love it, is just fantastic work
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NicoleI loved it I thought it was cute!
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testhas a real cute poem. i like it!
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jordanThis Poem Is Perfect To E-mail To My Gal, Thanx Martini
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KenWhen your trying to think of what to say this poem does it for you.
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KenikaAww it reminded me of my fisrt kiss. It was a wonderful poem
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Martinathis is a lovely poem it reminds me of myself.
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alexThis poem is the bomb!! She was really into that kiss. That was probably a damn good kiss.
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ShawnnaThis poem says it all. I had the same experince and could never find the right words to express how I felt about it, this pooem says it all.
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