Promise Never To Untie by Hope

#78 Promise Never To Untie

Once the loving bond is made, two friends become so fond the attachments should never be broken. It's called a loving friendship bond.

This poem originally was published in Friendship Poems

Promise Never To Untie

by Hope

The tender words are spoken
Each body and soul bared
Told secrets over endless days
Often doing more than dared

New world beyond my door
With intrigued and intensity
Now we have shared our hearts
A bond now made it permanently

Facing our days made easier
Despite any type of weather
Each other's heart felt deeply
Both happy we stuck together

It took us little time and effort
The bonding as strong as glue
I now promise never to untie
The strings I have tied with you

The understanding of each other
Breaths to take, we breathe the air
As the relationship interchanges
Knowing our loving hearts are there

Now we are never left on the outside
Lovingly enter each others domain
Smiling. laughing and forever teasing
But forever friends we then became

25 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

janet

ay dat poem was off da chain. keep it poppin fool dats whats up.
Carole

I just LOVE this poem, it really touched me and I am sending it to my friend! :-)
Cheryl

This poem describes perfectly a longtime friendship I have with someone. Unfortunately, due to life circumstances she and I are not as close. I have thought of her a lot recently and this poem touched my heart enough that I will use it to reach out and hopefully reestablish this relationship that meant the world to me.
Hannah

i just loved the whole thing! It touched my heart
angel

this is the best poem i started crying cause if your like me your very emontial cant wait to read some more of your poems
Rich

Hi, Hope. Just want to let you know that i really like your poem. It's good and touching.
ivy

i love the poem thank you it talks about somenthing that happened to me before in life
gabriela

@};-- i love this poem oh this is a rose.
Ashley

I really liked this poem. It made me think of the realationship that i have with a certain someone!
Brittany

That is the best poems ever, thanks so much for writing it. THANKS A BUNCH
Shara

I loved your poem! I am going to give it to my BESTEST FRIEND Shara and i know she will love it and she knows I love her just as much if not more than she loves me!
Wyne

I was deeply touched by this poem, state-of-the-art piece!
BARBARA

I REALLY ENJOYED THIS POEM IT IS PERFECT FOR MY FRIEND BECAUSE HE LISTENS TO MY EVERY LITTLE SECRETS AND IS VERY UNDERSTANDING. IT IS A PERFECT POEM FOR A GREAT FRIEND.
moo

I love this poem sooo much!!:-)
micheLe

lovely poem. i really love it. it's what i was looking for.thanks for the great poem.
Brittain

I was looking for a poem to put in a dedication to a friend of mine that was killed in a car wreck last year. This poem was right on target for what I was looking for, and it had me in tears.
Debs

Wow. This poem really touched my heart. How true that once we are 'tied' to another person in close friendship, we should never untie. Thanks for that great submission to the site!! I loved it! Keep up the great work!
Marsha

I like this poem because I relates to me and my best friend. She is away in the Marinees and I'm trying to incoure her as much as possible and also make our friendship stronger.
max

wow the peom have captured the essence of my friendship
Dennise

this poem fit the person to whom i sent it to,just because of you Thank You Very Much.
tisa

It touched my heart...intense.
Salha

Hi! Hope, that was a very simple and nice poem u got there!
Crystal

i think this poem is great it means alot
GEO

BEAUTIFUL,
Janet

It certainly struck a chord. Excellent! Just what I was looking for. Thanks.

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