#8 Friends
I have a long time friend that occasionally brings out the worst in me and yet, she loves me as unfinished and sometimes broken as I am. While I have yet to learn how to comfort myself, somehow she can. And for that I am truly grateful.
This poem originally was published in Friendship Poems
Friends
Growing pains Broken chains A sad melody Falling tears Listening ears A friend just for me Reaching out Sharing doubt When life gets me down Hands to clutch Gentle touch Can turn me around Spoken words Softly heard Cognitivity Holding tight Loving light Calm serenity |
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1999
HM3
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139 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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VincentI Love this poem. As I read it I remembered a lot of things that happened from me, as well as my friends. Please Continue writing Poems to encourage better those friendship had already lost and disappeared.
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rebecai like the poem nice thinking and friends
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Anneok. this poem has alot of meaning to it, it means to always love ur friends and to be greatful for them always being there for u! its awesome
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AshleyI love this poem.
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TeresaSimplicity is the first word that comes to mind.
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ChelseaI loved this poem so much! It was a perfect poem to write for my friend. I hope she likes it as much as I did!
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louisei liked this poem because it rihymed and because it realy touched me.
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beverleyhi there way do we have but wen we have fun to post e cards. it is soooooooooooooooooooo fun too nice website and work
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amandai luv this poem it is really cute it can make you cry it was really touchy. but yea i luved it alot. !
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Farzanehthis poem rockys!
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KathieALL I GOT TO SAY IS THE IS TIGHT!
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Bradleyi think the poem was brilliant. because my cousin and granda has passed away,and they were my friends and it makes me feel v. sad, but either ways it was brilliant ! well done :)
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MaryVery thoughtfull! You are a very special person.
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shekemmait can make a person want 2 cry
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JenniferGREAT POEM! I LOVED IT!
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Brittanyi like this poem its good keep up the good work!
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DesareaThis poem was wonderful very good :)
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morgani thought that this poem was very good. it touched my heart! awesome job.
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jIt really made me feel something inside. It was truly fantastic!
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sarahi think this poem is great. you should have more poems about friendship!
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aishait's a really nice poem it brings tears in my eyes.
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ashlynthis one is soo cute
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sherryi love u
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shivaniheyy who eva wrote diz its great . and it nearly made me cry . lol keep it up and i hpe u win xxxx gd luck xx
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Surbhiit touched my heart
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Sudiptoi like it. simple & good.
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ANNAthis poem is beautiful makes me think alot!1
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Nvery very nice
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BriannaThats a really good poem!
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Terrilynwow this poem really summons all the feeling you could have about your friends all in a short quote like poem. It was very nice and well-stated. GOOD JOB!
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DamianThis poem really touched me because it relates to stuff I've been through.
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mellissaYou, did a great job! hope you win!
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AngelaI love this poem is the best. I wish I have friends to send this too!
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yoI think it was very good and out of 10, (10 being the best)I think your poem was about a 81/2
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LalitWow it's realy nice poem. I like it too much
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maiSimple and deep. ^^
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MThis poem is ace.
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vanessai love your poem freinds i makes me sad sometimes because i have alot of friends and they are all nice to me like the poem saids that u love that best freind and wouldn't let her out of ur mind or heart because that means you are a true friend to your friend to all your friend and your will keep them forever and will never forgot aboyt them in your life till you die or well that poem was so insteading and it shows the feelin and how the author feels about the poem
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robini really like this poem a lot
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AmberThis is a very true and sad peom when i was down my best friend for 8 yrs. cheered me up.
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katiei really liked this poem
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brittanyit is a good poem
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Roselandei love you you made me cry i love this poem
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AshleeInteresting
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TiffanyI love the way express your feelings toward your friends!
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JenniferI really liked this peom it was really good. I wish you only had a few more like this!. GREAT JOB!
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DevinOMG that is one of the best poems i've ever read
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angiethis poem i realy like keep the good work
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DRThis poem was crazzy good. it inspired me to make a beat for my new rap song comin out. Called Friends wit other friends and JEa. anyway its a really good poem. i enjoyed ur ryhmes and freestylin anyway peace
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Tiffanyi like your poem. it was/ is very good.
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mikylathis explains my friendship with a friend i have had all my life. it maid my cry when i heard that because my friend and i have had hard hard times and we have always been with eachother and it reminded me of them speacial and some heart breaking times
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JessicaThis poem touched my heart Jessica
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AshleyI think that this poem is very motivational and inspiring. I think this was a wonderful poem. Thank you, Ashley
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crystalhey! loved it,'cause for me it's hard making friends 'cause i'm always movung but i do have a friend that this poem explains all the feeling that we share, so i can really relate to it 'cause that's me, but just loved the poem
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AleeshaI think this was simply beautiful!
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SaraI loved your poem it really touched me. I hope you will win Good Luck!
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Rohitvery good job
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chelseaThis a great poem. I love it so much. I wish I could send it to all of my friends
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Kristinai love poems cause i feel like i can that me that's writing but really isn't that's why i love them.
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smithaIt's grat!. I like it very much.
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TiffanyI like the pome it is very nice
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FELICITASTHIS POEM WAS SO SWEET AND VERY GOOD FOR THE TIME I NEED TO HEAR SOMTHING LIKE THIS.
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sarahi never thought of friendship like this but it has changed my views towards friends thanks
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ratrutheyy ! i love ur poems! mmm and i don't have nbow a best friend
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Rachelthat is the best poem ever!
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saruhey!the poem is awesome!
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sandieI REALLY LIKE THIS POEM. IT WAS VERY NICE
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yvettethis is a good poem
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brandyi love this poem it is good and it remines me of me and my best friend
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chelseythis is a verygood poem for teenage friends thanks for this poems being writting
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ELENA SOFIAthis a poem is very beautiful, i liked.
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meghappens to be an short but amazing poem . it is great!
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ashleythis is a really good and touching poem really
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sitithis poem is a very sentimental for friendship and it is really touches my heart,i think this poem is mean for best friends
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Patmaeyour good. keep up the good work.
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natit was really touching and i nearly cried. my friend sam thought it was very calming because when i read it 2 her she calmed down cause she was having a spas attack.
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Rachaelso short but it really gets the point across. I loved it. keep writing poems just like these.
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MaryIt is a very good poem.
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kati luv da poem i recon it was great , keep up the good effort :)
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DuanShae'this poem is really touching and is meant to be for a really good person.
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Andreathis one was way good thank you hand keep up the good work.
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NicoleI loved the poem
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jayathis poem is really great, one of the best eva!
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babyit was fantasticly wonderful keep up the good work. never let someone tell you that you have no gift in poetry,because you do have a gift what most people dont have. !
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SabrinaI loved this poem it reminded me of my best friend of so far 13 years. I loved it keep writing them. Thank You
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danathis poem completly touched my heart. it reminds me of all of my other friends at my old school in munford. it is soooo passionate
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priyanthiHeart felt thought about a loving friend.
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CaseyThis poem is great because it short and sweet!
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JoshuaI totaly love this poem
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SheronicaGreat poem
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AmandaI really liked this poem. It really reminded me of my friends from where i used to live. They are all still my friends, but they are there for me more than ever.
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kimit was excellent!
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jade&leahwow thats cool
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melissai love thaat peom a lot my friend too.
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RonniI like this poem actually. its pretty good.
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jayavery unqiue poem
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somehey good poem bye
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natashai like it
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MariaI just wanted to say that I thought the poem was very nice!
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AngieI think this poem is so wondeful, it is really simple, yet very effective. I love it!
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DawnIt was cute, and simple. It showned described everything about friendship in a just a page.
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JoseI really like your poem is verry nice.
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Amyyour poem really toched my heart ive never heard a poem as good as your congratulations
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lindseyit was a really cute poem, i liked it.
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C.J.good
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RobertIt was nice it some what dells with me.
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DavidVery good.
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DaveVery good, says it all without complexity.
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TrustineThe Sound Really Good
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lindseythis peom was way cute!
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beckyA very right and awesome poem.
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marieI really enjoyed this poem. HM3 are u a writer? if u aren't you should be
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KYNAThis is a pretty good poem. You did a great job makeing this poem.
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AimeeI am in love with this poem. It is one that I would love to send to a friend, but just can't yet.
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AimeeThis is amazing. I am in awe beacause it is what I feel too.
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RubWow it is really a very nice poem.
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MonicI can truly relate to this poem. I have a best friend who comforts me through my ups and downs. Who cries with me, holds me and comforts me when I can't take the anxiety and stress of what life brings me. Then she carefully brings me back to reality so that I can plant my feet on the ground. I am always looking for ways to tell her how much I appreciate her love and friendship so I sent her this poem. Thank you
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TamiI loved this poem!
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tawniI like your poem. Is so neat.
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Nichoi really like this poem. it is like me and my best friend.
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HannaWow! I thought that was great! You are such a great poet! I almost cried!
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DianaThis was the perfect poem for my best friend & I because we have been through a lot of stuff in the 4 years. This is the perfect poem for really good friends.
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JASHANKi loved this poem more than myself
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neshaI understand.
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lilywow that moved me man!
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NishaIts a great poem. Very touching and amazing;keep up the good work.
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PaigeLoved thee poem!
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METTAI REALLY ENJOYED THIS POEM AND I LOOK FORWARD TO READING AND SHARING SOME OF MY POETRY ON THIS WEBSITE. THIS POEM IS DA BOMB AND I MUST GIVE HM3 HIS OR HER PROPS ON THIS POEM BECAUSE I GOT SO CAUGHT UP IN IT THAT I READ IT ABOUT 3 OR 4 TIMES JUST TO MAKE SURE THAT IT WAS ALL THAT I THOUGHT IT TO BE AND IT IS.
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JanhaviThis is a very sweet poem and I feel very nice to send it to a friend.
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nimekai just love u'r sweet and short poem.It's very nice to send to a friend.i hope u will write more poems like this one
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secretI REALLY ENJOYED IT SHORT AND WITH ALOT OF MEANING.
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kiddoeven though i'm not very emotional all these poems make me wanna cry sumtimes
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TinaI Like this poem because this decides my great friend he is such a sweet guy.
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KandiI just want to say that being simple is better especially for airheads like me. So, keep on writing. You're an excellent writer!
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debbiei really love this poem it sould really be #1.
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MegI enjoyed the cadence the brevity of an all encompassing message
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NormaI think this poems should win becaues it is so sweet to send a friend.... bye norma
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Gerrii love this poem will ypou please send it to me thanks for your time. Yours truly gerri jane
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serendipitySimplicity is always best.
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