This poem was a gentle thank you to my kind and loving mother, who's warmth and love guides me daily.
This poem originally was published in Poems on Life - Family Poems
My Treasure - For Mom
I look back on these years To see how far I've come and grown, I take a trip down memory lane, And what I see has shown ... That every step I've taken, You have been there by my side ... From infancy to adulthood, We've stood the test of time. You cradled me and nurtured me, Through all these many years; You held me and did comfort me, Through happiness and tears. You'd pick me up when I would fall, You'd dust me off and then, Encourage me to get back on That horse and ride again. Your constant care and loving, And your warm inviting heart, Has always been a treasure that I knew would n'er depart. If I could be "just half" the person You have been to me ... Then you have taught me well dear mom, For in my heart I see ... A woman whose most gentle soul, Embraces me each day ... A woman whom I dearly love, Much more than words can say. |
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Kit McCallum
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150 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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nataliei like this poem because i can relate to this poem, i especially like the way this poet used simple words but the way she placed them made it so powrful and meaning ful
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LitzaI like that some people can true expressed the love to the mothers from deeping of their heart and to be so luck to grown up with a wonder full mother,i was not so luck but today we sharing a bond and i wish i could writing a poem espressing my feelings but i cannot because i am scary to break this bond. You are very luck and hope youllcontinue sharing this love forever. Litza Great poem.
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chrisawesome! u're really love ur mom.
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XochilGreat tribute poem for a mom. I enjoyed it.
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shivaniexcellent
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KerrieMy mother is my hero and I love her more than words can express. She is blind for the most part, 82 years old and lives alone. I feel this poem says a little of what I feel for her. Thank You Kit McCallum for writing this beautiful poem.
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EliasThis is perfect. You know, at the present moment me and my mom are not in good talking terms and since my marriage, it seems as if i have distanced myself from her. This is some kinda inspiration which i want to use and send to her with my apologies for all the wrongs i've done ss she turns 50 this year
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lindseythat poem was really it shows how mum our mum means to us i no longer have my mum with me but i really enjoyed reading it
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BrookeThe Poem was Great but i can't relate because my mother was never there she left at the age of two and all that i want do is forget about all that pain she caused all of us how a mother can pick up and leave that way i will never have any idea not even to this day
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Kimberleythis poem deserves a 10 out of 10. It makes me relise how much my mum really means to me and how it makes me think better of her rather then the memories of the hard times of my childhood.
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SoumyaThis is a wonderful poem that toutched my heart as it is true that my mother is there with me in life and I cannot imagine a life without her. It's true words cannot express her
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endiathis was a really good poem thanks for sharing it with the world
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erinThis poem really touched my heart! My mother is in the final stages of cancer and reading this poem truely brought tears to my eyes. Be sure to tell your mothers out there how much you love them because you never know when they will be gone!
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britanii really like this poem. its so truthful and inspiring
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JustYour words toutched my heart. This poem is just great and so true for every mom. You are a very good poet !
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JodiI absoultly loved this poem. I cried when I read it.
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TabbethaThis poem was soooooooo awesome! I love my mom sooo much and this puts it into words.
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ChristaHey this poem is ver heart touching and is the best. Even if i did not have a real mother but this is what i think of this when i see my new mom i love her this is for all the mothers
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JessicaI really liked this poem. I read the first pargraph and was hooked and instantly wrote it down. Keep up the good work!
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Tanesiai love your poem it touches my soul when i read this poem i think of my second mother she is there thru thick and thin
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DEJAAWESUME SHE MUST B AS WONDERFUL AS MINE THANK GOD 4 OUR BLESSINGS (4 GIVING US MOMS)
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MykiaI think this sis a poem that will touch someones heart
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trishathank u . with tears in my eyes
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aleeshaI love this poem alot it made me have tears, beacause I love my mom alot and I handn't notice it that much before, now I feel like telling my mom how much I love her, thanx for creating this poem and please write more of these kins of poems.
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aleeshaThe poem gose with my feelings, and the poem was related to my mother or my sister and me. the poem sounds super liked it's greate. I think it's the best poem I ever heard. I don't see any wrongs in it.
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RosaThis poem touched my heart because everything it states is true. I lost my mother on December 23, 2005 and now I realize how much I need her.
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kathyi truly love this poem my mom is just like that she is my hero i love poems about family because that is what its all about. good job!
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ash..xxthis is a really touching poem i think its really sweet how people have created these and i will check out some other ones because all the one's i have read are amazing!
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nekoshait was a OUTSTANDING poem it feeled my heart with joy i can't wait to hear the next one maybe that will be even BETTER!
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ShellyI love this poem it touches the heart both as a mother and a daughter. My mother and I are distant with each other at this time but were always close before. Maybe I should send her this poem to see if it would help. Thanks again.
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NONATouched me heart
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LaRhondaThe reason i voted for it was because my mother passed away over a year ago and the poem reminded me of all the things she used to do for me and how much i miss her. It is a great poem.
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DebbieThis was so true about mothers as I reflected on my own mother against the words of this poem. Thank you for such a wonderful tribute to a person who does not get half the credit she deserves!
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caseyi think this is real nice my mom loved it and it is real good and i have to say that all of your poems are touching or nice but i love
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THEMBEKILEHI, I REALY LOVE THIS POEM I PERSONALY THINK IT IS THE BEST POEM TO WRITE FOR OUR DEAR MOTHERS WHO BROUGHT US TO THIS WORLD AND TOOK A GOOD CARE OF US. PEOPLE WHO STOOD BY OUR SIDES IN ALL THE TIMES. PEOPLE WHO ARE ALWAYS THERE TO LOVE AND GUIDE US NOT TO CRITISIZE US, THESE PEOPLE DESERVE TO BE LOVED. YO POEM IS NO ONE
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vanessaI LOVE THE POEM IT WAS WELL KNOW MEANIN REALLY GOOD U HAVE A PASSION
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AmandaDis poem is hot it shows alot of love to ur ma, and it also tells n encourages people that a mother is truly a special peron and no matta how much ur ma might get on ur nerves she'll always be 1#
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sherryI really loved your poem. Thank you so much for not wasting your talent. I am sure this poem warmed the hearts of many.
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elisai loved this poem
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LindaSuch a lovely poem this makes me cry as my dear Mum is no longer in this world mums should be treasured thank you
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deeThis poem touched me, because it is truly what a caring, loving mother is. Even though i dont have my mother hear with me anymore, i can remember all of those special things about her.
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ashi loved this poem. this poem is perfect to give to a special mother. like mine! I LOVED IT. it was the best poem i have ever read before. !
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karenI thought it said exactly what I wanted to say to my mom. Perfect poem!
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garythis poem has touched me very deeply whoever wrote it must make more this poem is the best i ever read and you are right cant explain the love toward a mother wiht words but this gets really close
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rachealI really liked the way it made me take a step back and relly look at all the wonderful things my mom has done for me.
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MariettaA beautiful poem1 I just lost Mom November 15, 2006. It brought tears to my eyes.
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AshleyIt is a really good and sweet poem It almost made me cry good job!
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kayleathis poem is beauy=tifull wen i first read it it made me cry and now i dedicate this poem for mah mum because she is the best
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sI love this poem because it is so true! I feel so sad for those girls (and boys) who don't have a good relationship with their mother (or father). I don't know what I would do without my mother. she is the best and can make anyone laugh. If I grew up to be just like her, that would be perfect.
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joeI really like it. it touched my inner fellings it made me want to call my mom and say that I loved her and that i always will.
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KayI think this poem shows how much this woman really thinks and feels about her mom. Her mom was a great woman and if she can be just 1/2 the woman that she was to her children then she feels she will be doing a pretty good job. I know how she feels. My mom was the best mom any girl could have asked for.
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stephaniethis poem has touched me in so many ways.
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KareneI like this poem because it reminds me of my Mom.
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Dianabeautiful as a mother very well written keep it up awesome.
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reneethis poem was great it really touched me and i love it
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KristanI like it becaue, it touched me because it's about mothers and teenagers
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AmberThis poem described exactly how I feel about my mom in every way possible. I loved it and I plan on reading to my mom.
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heatherThis poem was really touching and i am a poem lover and this one really cought my eye. I hope to see more peoms like this more often
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carmelathis poem was amazing it said all the things i could ever want to tell my mother
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chanteli think this is a brilliant poem i read it to my mum and she loved it
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Ellen LouiseHi I thought this poem was brillant and it touched me. I am only 16 years old but i like to read poems and i think that this poem is the best one yet. Thank you, you have made me realise how much my mum means to me because my mum nearly dies two years ago and that made a differnce to me i love her alot. THANK YOU FOR SUCH A NICE POEM (for letting me read your one) I have wrote a poem for my Grandad who passed way last year in July but i dont show any one alse them.
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nicoleThis poem really touched my heart and it definatly was me and my mom, this is truly a wonderful poem, awesome job
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RushaThis poem is one of the best poems Ive read in a very long time and Im a 100% sure my mother is gonna love it as much as I do.
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CarsonI loved this poem! It is really true, how your mom guides you through life. I don't know how I would go on without my mom! This poem touched me, I loved it!
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ChrisBeautiful poem. My parents are both deceased. Thank you for touching my heart.
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RORYTHE WORDS IN THE POEM MOVED ME SO MUCH IT BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES.
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SharonI was looking for a poem. my mum is 80 years young today! For a present I have put together a photo ablum from her childhood right through to the present day. Your poem just says it all for the opening page. Thanks Sharon Daughter of Sybil Mullis
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Lexii absolutly loved this poem and would reccomened this poem to anyone
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fatimai loved this poem so much i would love to have the words and the thoughts this person had to write it
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jodiethis poem touched me it reminded me of me and my mum!
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sheenit was awesome. you should write more often. you havea real talent miss kit
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Ashleyi was cryin wen i read this poem i luv it it is sooooooo good i am givin it to my mum for a chritmas poem thingy it is gr8
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elizabethi loved youre poem it was great it means alot to all that read it we all have gone through the love and care from all our mothers. to exspress it was great thank you for sharing with all
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soniaI was enthrilled to read this poem. Its a true contribution from a poet or poetess to his/her parents. My parents burst into tears and even I burst into tears when i sent them this poem. It was as if it was a true expression of my feelings or an expression of any genuine daughter or son to his or her Parents. Marvellous !
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loradis poem is dat best for a mom
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tonithis poem is awesome.
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Jamiei love that poem me and my mother has always been close no mater what, but she lives in oklahoma and i live here in illinios so its really hard on me to go through everyday without her. shes just not my mom shes also my best friend. when i get the chances i go and see her but other then that i miss her everyday.
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AshleyI realy like this poem because it reminds me what my mom and I did when I was small.
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TrevorGREAT POEM AUNT
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SandyI have printed your poem and plan to keep it as a memorial to my mother who passed away on memorial day. She was all you wrote and more and I miss her very much. Thank you.
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CARMENIt reminds me of mother that I lost 1 yr. ago she always there for me and my sister she always no matter what the problem was she always found a way to comfort us. Now that I'm a single mother of a 4 yr. old little boy. I'm trying to be like mother loving and trying to be half of the person she was to me and my sister.
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DawnDear Kit, I loved your poem. It came at a time when I needed to read it. My mother is a beautiful person who put up with me no matter what I did. Two days ago she had a mini stroke. I related to your poem very much. Thank you for bringing the sunshine back into my life.
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NicoleI really love this poem because the words described my MOM. She is everything to me.
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CyndieHow very lovely and insightful. It so fits my sweet 99 year old mother
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KiseI love it says everything that is true on moms!
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GintyKit, ur poem was really amazing, brought tears to my eyes. I do hope you have written plenty more
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WhitneyI would give you a 10! If I were a judge. But I just had to share that, so, bye.
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LaWandaI think your mom should be really proud of this poem because when I read this I brought tears to my eyes. No im not a cry baby, it just reminds me so much of how my mother is.
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Carrie-AnnThis poem really touched me,it brought tears to my eyes. I had to pass it on to my mother.
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idathis should get an award. children sometimes forget the sacrifices parents make
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LizzyI wish I could write this well. Keep up the good work!
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LeeFANTASTIC, REALLY A GREAT POEM THANKS
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LeeanI loved this poem it really touched me it shows the relasionship a girl has with her mom it is great.
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miloi loved this poem and it touched me dearly
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MichelleThis poem gets my vote because I have been seperated from my mother after 30 years of her being so close to my life. Mom and I have been through abuse and we have seen through the other side. 2 years ago I found myself having to move to Canada to be closer to my husbands family. In order to do that I had to leave mine behind and though I miss all of my family and I miss all the babies I have never met it is my mom I miss the most, who through it all gave me the strength I needed to be the woman and mother I am today. I love her I miss her and I feel this poem touches that sentiment so greatly. Thank you
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tinaBeautiful tribute to all Mom's!
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ElizabethThis makes me see, that as much as I despise my mom for not letting me do the things teens should do, I see how good she has always been to me, and it showed me how much I really do love her. Thank you so much.
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LilianaI thought your poem was really fantastic,it really touched me because thats how I feel about my mother.
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Jodii really like this poem cause it mad me think of my mom and everything shes done for me it was really good
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crystali can relate to this poem i loved it
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BrittneyI really like this poem and it has a special meaning and a loving touch to it. It was great! I loved it.
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Margothis is a beautiful poems. I don't quite get along with my mother since I was 13 yrs old. But Since I found out I was pregnant with my little girl, she was there with me in the hospital. I guess that shows she still care about me, I love my mother. I wish we can get along more. She hasn't spoke to me for 2 months after she foudn out- but now I'm trying to get along with her, because I need my parents to help me, and show me how to gtow my child. Um I love this poem.
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Karenthis is a really touching poem that can really relate to some people.
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AubreyI made this vote because this has really mad me think about how much my mother was here for me these 14 years of my life. My dad left me when I was 2, this poem is truely means alot to me. Thanks alot ps. keep writing, you never know how many people you touch each day!.
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gracethanx soooo much for writin' this poem, my mum absolutely loved it.
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priyaThe poem is good and it rewinded my past experiences. Good!
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MarilynOur mother's 90th birthday will be celebrated this weekend. We will post your lovely poem at our mother's party. Thank you for decribing our dear mother.
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Bettyoh i loved this poem, and i am here to vote . but to also ask for details about the author
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Shaylatears came rolling out of my eyes
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SharonThis poem is beautiful and it says it all. GOOD JOB. I rate you a 10
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MohammadAn excellent piece of poetry. Motherhood is universal regardless of time and space. In my opinion it is the single instance of eternal compassion that touches all creations on earth. It is Love of mother that remains a home truth at the spectrum of life to mankind since inception. I do share the great passion of love for Mom of the poet. The poem is representative of Love for Mother all across the barrier of time,culture,geography and space. Thanks NIPPON
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AmberYour Poem Touched Me So Much!
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KaleighThis poem was wonderful. I read it and I thought so much about it that I printed it our and framed it in a nice frame and gave it to my mother for her birthday! She loved it! and so did I!
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BEEVery Nice!
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anissai needed something to help my mother lift her spirits while in the hospital. although it made her cry at first she was so happy to het such a lovely poem. thank you for helping me to make my mother feel better
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KalynI LOVE this poem! You've done a wonderful job! This poem means alot to me! KEEP WRITING!
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Debbiethanx heaps! thank you for taking the time to lift up others on the net. 'GOD LOVES YOU' thanx again ps: i hope to uplift my mum with your poem.
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KelseyI loved the poem you wrote. It really touched me. Thank You!
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jessicaThat was such a nice poem! i mean sure sometimes i like hate my mom but when reading that i feel soo bad cuz she has always been there when my dad wasnt
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StacyO wow! This poem really touched me, and poems usually don't do that. Thanks for sharing your amazing talent with the rest of us! Keep up the good work!
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ANNIEBEAUTIFUL POEM
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lindseyi loved your poem and sent it to my mom!
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eggielove you soooooooo much mum. This poem has made me realise this! thank's so much for your inspiration!
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LoYour poem has brought tears to my eyes, because I have Sickle Cell Anemia and it has been very hard and difficult for me to get my college education. But with my mothers help I have made it and I will be graduating on May 18,'02
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amandait was very beautiful and inspiring
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ErikaI was mad at my mom before i read this and now I am about to go apoligize to her. This poem really touches your heart and makes you think of the important things in life. ( like your mom) I really liked it alot!
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SamI wish I would have wrote this poem for it is how I feel about my mother and the last lines touches me the most: "A woman whose most gentle soul, Embraces me each day. A woman whom I dearly love, Much more than words can say. "
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kristieVery nice .Your mom would be proud. After all,it would be a mothers dream to have thier childern look up at them so sweet!
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DanielleThis poem is really wonderful. It has touched my heart and soul. It made tears come to my eyes because it reminds me of a wonderful mother I have. You are a wonderful writer and never give up.
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TashaI really love this poem.I couldn't of put it in better words of how I feel about my mom..It is a great poem!You need to write more!
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KaliFOUR STARS AND THEM SOME.
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ReneYou completely described everything that I have wanted to tell my mom and just couldn't find the words to say. Thanks for the help.
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Starrflowing easy to read and says lots about how I feel too. Thankyou
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Vickithis brought back wonderful memories of my mother..i just love this poem and i hope you keep up the excellent talent that you have..thanks for sharing it with us.
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MsVThis really touched my heart in so many ways thank you for typing this.
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cassiethis poem was very good and shows how much they love there parents.
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TammyI loved this poem.its fits right in my moms heart!
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NaomiHello, I just wanted to let you that the poem you wrote in dedication to your mother was so beautiful. You are a wonderful writer keep up the good work.
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RebeccaI love it :)
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CrysABSOLUTLY BEAUTIFUL!
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mistythis is a great poem, i read ut and instantly sent it to my mom
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VikkiMy Treasure-For Mom~ has got to be one of the most fitting poems I have read in a long time. If I had wrote a poem for my Mom (and I wish that this was my poem)I would have wanted it to be this one. It was a joy to have read it. Thanks so much for sharing it with the world. Vikki
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MaureenWe don't tell our mothers often enough just how much we appreciate and love them.
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PatEXCELLENT!!!!!
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Renethis is like the best poem my mom is the same way she made me get back on that horse of mine and ride him not only that it is really a great poem
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lizI feel the love and appreation she has for her mom, a very special gift that I'm sure she will forever cherish.
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HaileyThis poem is very inviting and reminds me of my mother. I have emailed a copy of it to her. You did a wonderful job & surely your mother is proud of herself as much as she is you.
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AlishaThis Poem is wonderful. I sit down to write poetry to my mother and not in the exact words but pretty close.this poem touched my heart and is exactly what I would say to my mom
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MichelleTo me, this poem says everything about a mother in a most beautiful way, with words. (I LOVE THIS)
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DianeI really feel this has come from the heart. This mother and daughter has such a great relationship. It reminds me of mine 3 daughters and myself. We are all so very close and we love each other so very much. And that is what I see in this poem. I really enjoyed this poem and I think it is a great poem for a child or grown-up child to send to their mother. Thank-you for sharing your talent with all of us.
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