#3 My Dream
I wrote this poem after thinking about what things in this world were most important to me and what I wanted to tell my 3 nieces and 1 nephew were most important to me in this life.
It’s a poem about hope and vision of a future where people are judged, as Martin Luther King Jr. Said "Not by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character." So it was inspired by the "I have a Dream" speech, but also by John Lennon's song "Imagine."
This book will be a complete Illustrated book for Children, due out in June of the year 2000.
This poem originally was published in Poems on Life
My Dream
Where the mountains touch the sky Where poets DREAM, where eagles fly A secret place above the crowds Just beneath marshmallow clouds Lift your eyes to a snowy peak And see the soon- to- be we seek Whisper DREAMS and let them rise To the mountains old and wise Climbers climb, it's time to try Where the mountains touch the sky Take me there. Oh take me now Someway, Someday, Somewhere, Somehow Where the ocean meets the sky Where mermaid dance and seagulls fly A place in DREAMS I know so well The sea inside a single shell Far across the living sea A pale blue possibility Beyond the castles made of sand Tomorrow in a small child's hand Only DREAMERS need apply Where the ocean meets the sky Take me there. Oh take me now Someway, Someday, Somewhere, Somehow Where the forests reach the sky Men are equal and doves still fly No thorns of war, a perfect rose This is where the green grass grows Out beyond the crystal stream Like Dr. King I have a DREAM Imagine such a goal in sight For red and yellow, black and white Whisper now, let the DREAM begin It's time to trust the truth within This is where we seek and find A gift in being colorblind Dream on Dreamers, hopes are high Where the forests reach the sky Take me there. Oh take me now Someway, Someday, Somewhere, Somehow Now, listen close, the future calls "Build your bridges and tear down walls! " For time has taught and so it seems Realities are born of DREAMS |
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1999
Todd-Michael St. Pierre
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106 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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catherineI love it its a wonderful poem with a good meaning to it and has lots of examples that goes good with the flow love it GREAT JOB!
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samthis is 1 of the most beautiful poems I have ever read,I really enjoyed it & pray you keep writing. You are a true writer & a inspiration to all I am sure!
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MikeI'm writing to tell you that this is a very inspiring and heartful poem. I would like to use this poem in a project of mine, and I will guarantee that I the teacher would love this poem by you. I am writing to tell you that I am inspired. Keep up the good work.
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juliewhat a wonderful dream, a very inspiring poem to read,keep up the good work hope to read more of your poems.
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ShannonThis poem is one of the most inspiring poems I have ever read. Each and every time I read it, it touches me. That is a truly amazing thing. This author has a gift, thank you for sharing it with so many.
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MajaThis poem touched my soul. Thank You from the bottom of my heart!
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ThidaYour beautiful words make me to love it so much. =^_________^=
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Tessaoh words cant describ how truthful this pom is I would love to meet this poet someday
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doreenit is good finding a poem as refreshing as this
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BrittanyWow, this poem really touched me, you have an excellent way of well wording your words. You have inspired me to right through the heart, something that seems like you did. Great poem, you did a great job.
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melissai love this one it has many meanings to it can and will mean diffrent things to diffrent people. it's great
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EthelynI found this lovely and I know we learn from what we read.
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DivagurlThat was such a cool poem about DREAMS it was a very good piece of work!
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Elizabethi love this poem. it's absolutely great!
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TomThis poem is the work of a genius. It is magnificent.
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MeganI think this poem is a great poem, its very inspirational and it gave me chills when i read it, you did a great job.
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elyThis poem will inspire anyone! It's wonderful!
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Cinthyour poem really inspires those who want to try to make dreams come true.
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crystalthis poem was really how i dream and it truly is how real life is
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katiewell done
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joshthis is one of the best poems i have read in a long time and i really dont like poetry
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donnaonly a beautifal heart could write a beautifal poem and that is one of that most beautifal there is.
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MarieThis is a truly inspirational poem, one of the best i think ive ever read! Absolutely amazing Todd
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BMGreat Poem! I used it 4 school and don't worry, i gave Todd-Michael Phillips the credit!
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AngelaYOU GO BEYOND EXCELENT, SUPERB ANYTHING THAT MATCHES THE QUALITY OF EXCELLENT.
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swe-angelI Love thiz poem~!
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Amandaextremely touching..i'm speechless!
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nikaIf everybody looked at the world like he does, there would not be anymore wars and hate
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KelvinA fine poem I might say! You really capture the idea of a dream, and how it is being told to a perfect world.
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Annato the poet who wrote the poem ,which makes so much sense and yet makes me wonder as to why life can't be as easy as the words we say.i enjoyed the words u used to express so well ,the feelings all of us feel but are unable to find the right words for ,thank u for writing it dowm .
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poohbearVery good poem!
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beckyI love this poem!
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HalaThis poem is great .. & every one has a right to dream.. so make your dreams true..
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NdukweThrough your dream youv'e touched a life, This life will touch another. You're a gifted preciouse life, And crafted like no other.
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ShannonI had read you poem many times before but lost the address to this site... But I found it again and I am grateful! Hope your having a wonderful day! I like you poems very much they have soo much heart!
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susanMartian Luther King is my role model i have always looked up and loved him. He has taught us everything i have ever believed in. No one is better than anyone and everyone is beautiful. I love this poem it was beautifully written and also expresses everything i believe. Thank you!
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RosemaryHa,if you really want my comment,then i'm gonna just say'Good!'.
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DEBBIEEXCELLENT!!!!!!
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RaneaIt's to bad we could not post this on a billboard for the whole world to read....It is truly inspiring. Ranea
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clairebeautiful and inspiring
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joeywicked poem todd
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MichelleThis poem is excellent. It reminds me of a song about peace that one of my friends wrote. It's time to tear down the barriers and love/hate people for who they are inside, not their race/religion. This is now my inspiration!
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AmandaI loved this poem!! Truly you have been doing this for a while to show such great talent!! I'm glad I read it.
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BridgetThis is beautiful.
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beththis poem was very detailed and gave me images in my mind.. it was very thought out and i enjoyed it tremendously.
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shannonthis is a beautiful inspiring poem, i hope we all achieve this dream
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sk_abeautiful
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arieli think that is most bueatiful poem i have read. the words really hit me in the heart.
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shariI really like this poem, because for one thing, everyone including me, we all have our dreams for the future and otherwise. I somedayhope to be a writer and get something ppublished. thats my dream for now. someday I alsways wanted to be a musician too.
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christineI love the way you used your words to tell the world that all mankind should be equal not colorful.
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Brendawhat a beautiful poem. It says so much. Hopefully, one day, there will be no barriers and all people, everwhere, will think alike. Thank you for sharing!
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crispinincredible stuff
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MaryI love the poem. Someone wrote well enough for me see through their eyes. It flowed beautifully. I read it a couple times, it soothed my soul and made me smile. Thanks for the wonderful poem you brought to words.
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AngelaDream until your dreams come true!
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DerrickWell Crafted Poem.
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DeniseGreat Job!
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NancyI am an Elementary Teacher & I have shared this with my class, they adore it. Thanks.
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RickI want to know where I can buy copies of the illustrated version of this poem. it is cool.
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CalvinThis poem just flows and the message it complete TRUTH.
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SylviaI had a Fourth of July Party and about 20 of my friends were here, I showed them this site & your poem and we all decided to vote for you because it is a FABULOUS poem! They all took down the address and will be voting... Bravo!!!
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ChanningNice one man!
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MeredithFrom your mouth to God's ears! Or in this case from your pen. :-)
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RobertHey Todd... My name is Robert, I´m 22 years old and live in Sweden where I study at Vaxjo University... I tumbled into this page by mistake actually, but as I enjoy reading poems, I kept on looking.... After a while I read your poem "My Dream" and I think its one of the most beautiful poems I´ve ever read. I really think you´ve captured what its all about. The world right now really hasn´t come that far since Dr. King made his famous speech. I want to thank you for sharing your thoughts and giving me something to think about. The world needs more people who really see where this world is heading, so that one day we maybe can change it and open peoples eyes. Where would we be without love and understanding in this cruel world. So I salute you and continue hoping for the "colorblind world" that one day maybe dare to look beyond the shell that the color of our skin provides and in to the temple which lies beyond and inside
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EdieYour poem "My Dream' was a very beautiful poem. I think it is a great gift to your nieces and nephew. I wonder how it would be if set to music and made into a song.
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DianeWonderful. so descriptive and filled with emotion. Just thought I would tell you,
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NadineDear Todd, I think that I have read all of your work that has been posted and I must say that your poetry is amazing,breath taking, and astounding. You express yourself so beautifully and gracefully. I just wanted to tell you so, and to say thank you for sharing! :O)
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MelanieVery Well Written! Keep up the good work!
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EdieVery beautiful poem. Should be made into a song.
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TanyaGreat Job. What a great way to put what everyone thinks ands feels into words. WELL DONE
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JOSEEXCELLENT PIECE OF ART,WITH MAGIG TOUCH OF SOUL AND SPIRIT. AWSOME!
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Alfredi think this is a real good poem for dreams should be in everyone
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AmandaThis poem is really moving. It was a strong subject, and it made sense, unlike most poems which are just a jumbled mess on a page. The writer of this poem must be really talented. I hope he posts more of his poems. I can't wait to read them.
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JesseAye I like this poem very much. The flow is amazing and my eyes floated down the page like magic.
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ChrisWooh, now thats a poem. Todd you have a gift, that peom is unbelieveable.
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SharonLovely, so lovely, I too have that dream. Beautiful words leading up to the dream, dream on and keep writing. Thank you
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KendraBeautiful.
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StuartHeaven...that place we dream of! A place...a place within us.
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tjGreat poem. People could learn from it. A good way to look at life.
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timi have read many poems from this sight but this is an outstanding peice of writing.
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SandiThe beauty of this poem is beyond compare, the only thing more beautiful is the dreams you must have!
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YvonneThis was really good
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Bonniethis is just an awesome poem!=)
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danai am a poet myself and i really enjoyed this poem.
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brianyour poem is the greatest i have very read! "my dream" i'm a dreamer & u touched my heart! it's very real poem from the heart! god bless u & keep up the great work!
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KimI thought that your poem about Dreams was great . It really reached me and I now know what life and everyting around us means
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BobTis poem is terrific
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Deniseyour poem was wnoderful...so beautiful...i have had writers block for awhile. After having read your poem it inspired me to to sit and think of the feelings around me!
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TasInspiring poem. Ah!
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ChristieIt was a great and inspiring poem. It will be of great use. Thanks, your #1 fan, Pookie
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TONYI'M NOT A CRITIC BUT I KNOW A VERY GOOD POEM WHEN I READ ONE AND THIS IS IN MY OPINION FOR WHAT ITS WORTH IS A VERY VERY GOD POEM,FROM ONE TO TEN,TEN+ONE
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JoshI realy enjoyed your poem. Being a poem writer myself I know how hard it is to do what you did in your poem. You did a great job and keep writing these great poems!
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SteveA beautiful insight into the heart of a poet and a poem that reaches out to anyone who has ever had a dream.
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MarkGives hopes to dreams again
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matthewwow thats sooooo amazing i love how you put every word it was amazing
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FrancesIt is great
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NayNaythe poem was the most beatiful thing anyone could ever wright and know you have tallent keep up the good work coming from one auther to anuther hold on to your dreams and never let go
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PretenderVery nice poem! if only we could all HEED the words (smile)
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MarilynEXCELENT!
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LisaYour poetry was so beautiful. It is time to tear down walls of fear of color and to see the things that only matter through God. Thanks.
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MahendraI like to dream. I know its not much to write, but that is have i feel.
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LauraI am touched by the reality of the words. They hit so close to my heart, to someone very dear and special. I to am a dreamer and somewhat a writer although I keep my writings to myself I enjoy the readings of these fine writers. Mr. Todd you have a talent for not only words you seem to have a true heart filled with hope and faith as well. Don't ever let go of either on.
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Thomassuper! form-rhyme content-hopeful yellow star
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sharlMy Dream is a wonderful poem. I particularly like the phrase "soon-to-be we seek" Great sensitivity to the deepest thoughts in all of us translated to the real world. Brillant.
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AriannaThis poem was indeed extremely touching. You're a great poet!
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deeptibest,bestest
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melanieAfter i was done reading this poem, i read it again, and then again, the message is so amazing and is delievered in such a profound way.
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