#10 Beautiful
This poem is about my feelings toward my best friend. To me he is truly beautiful, although the word beautiful is not commonly applied to a man. The emotions which rage within him, his past which struggles to beat him, show me a strength which I have never seen in anyone else. He gives me the truth that I need in this crazy world. Although he is now out of my life, due to many mistakes on both our parts, the memory of him will always remind me to be who I am. And in my heart, he will always be just a little bit more than my best friend.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Love and Friendship Poems
Beautiful
He is beautiful, so very beautiful Just like a winter's shining landscape, As delicate as the petals of a daisy, And as freely as the eagle soaring against the blue His eyes are as mysterious as the calm sea Everything about him is so very precious, More precious than all the gems in the world His soul is the essence of the sky and earth, His feelings are a volcano that is yet to explode His smile is the smile of lost innocence. Pain vibrates deep inside of his gentle heart. A lock shuts in the disturbed thoughts of his mind, A mind with as many roads as the world has. I look at him and I see a pure truth, Like looking at a clear night sky, Millions of stars twinkle within him. He is beauty as I defined it, He is perfect, his imperfections make him so. He is my best friend, and I love him, I love him although, not because. And I would give up all the things which I think are pretty If only I can hold his beauty within me, For he is everything in this world, And I have found a world in him. |
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Magic
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142 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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Daisyvery good \
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RebekahI really liked this poem because,well, i know how the author feels for i too care a little more for my best friend. KEEP WRITING GUYS:)
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rhiannonthis is a great poem. Its perfect enough to use it my valentines day
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stephanieethis pome toched me in so memy ways i was beautiful i like some one alot and t=i can never get close to him
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stephanieThis poem really touched me. It tells exactly how I feel about my husband to be. He is so very beautiful to me!
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rickwow this was like finding the holy grail itself i know who you are "magic" and i hope you read this my heart burns there too theres still traces of (me/you) in (your/my) veins "you braught me closer to god"
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LeanneThis poem is BEAUTIFUL, it touches something. somewhere deep within the soul.
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Maireadwow,just wow,i hope d poet realises his/her own beauty,for it takes love to know it
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mervynI just had a friend of mine go his seperate way and I miss him. I know the word beautiful is not commonly applied to a man like you said but this is just right to apply to anyone. I just started crying as soon as I read it. It just described my friend so accurately it scared me!
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Ranibeautiful is a very gooooooooooooooooooooooooood poem.
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jessicathank you so very much for making a poem that speaks to me and talks about my boyfriend i love randy soooooo much and i want everyone to know it.
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LuckyAn amazing poem!
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sabelleawesome! i can relate to it. it's very touching.
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susanThis poem is how alot of woman see there man I am glad someone finally put into words on paper I LOVE IT very beautiful
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nadinethat was outstanding
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Clairewell i was just going to read these poems and not write anything as it would be a waste of time,but when i read this i had to tell you. this is one of the best things i have ever read, it brought a tear to my eye. 10 out of 10
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MelissaThis is an awesome poem.
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willybeautiful
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JennikaThis is exactly it, my best friend in the whole world, the most beautiful man with the eyes of a clear, cloudless summer sky. I love him, too. you who wrote this, thank you. this is far better than I ever could write, and I call my friend Beautiful all the time.
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TsumeI really liked your poem. Though I'm not so sure which role I fall into. The one who looks back fondly or the one who feels cast aside. Still I have to admit when I read the poem, my emotions flowed through the levys I have built around them. All in all. a great poem. I applaud you.
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RomyBeautiful, beautiful, beautiful. ! I gave it to my friend. Beautiful.
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JAYi just changed it a bit & send to my girl , it was beautifull !i used instead her, intead of him . sorry
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krisnaI have always loved this poem and get heart flutters everytime I read it even though I have read it hundreds of time!
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VashHey thanks for the poem for my bday i loved it and i really understood it but if there is more to tell me let me kno ok i will always be here for u.
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ddyes
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lay*cyour poem was amazing and touched me, my best friend is a guy and it decribed him so well GOOD JOB!
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donellEasily able to relate into anyones life who has love in it
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doriswell i really love this one u can really feel what she is trying to say
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kaaveryputhraThis is a beautiful poem. I am still in tears after reading it.
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RobinThis is beautiful. so heartfelt. Thanks for sharing it.
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rowThis is such a Beautiful poem. It has made me want to write a poem about a friend this one has made me think of. thankyou for the insperation
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KaylaHey Magic, Well Your Poem Worked It's Magic for sure! It's Just An Amazingly Good Poem And You Can Tell It Came From The Bottom Of Your Heart. Well Done!
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FarahI think it's really amazing and beautiful. Great poem and great title! It makes me think of my best friend. I would always love her. Always.
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LupeThis is the greatest poem to dedicate to a friend! I love it I love it. It said everything to my friend that I've always felt about him. WOW!
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DeeDeeThis poem has so much beauty and depth to it. The poet of "BEAUTY" is truely blessed with talent. Not everyone can truly capture the depth of a person, like this poet did. Most people never take the time to really search into the heart and soul of another person. This poet is very fortunate to reach that level of love.
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AntonioExcellent poem. I truly enjoyed every verse. Continue using this special gift of yours.
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AvaI feel the same way
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jennyi like your poem. good job
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BriThank you so much for this poem, its awesome, it explains my feelings and the way i see him, him, my world. thank you once again
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GilI usually don't vote but on this one I have too. If I could get this poem a number vote 1 to 10. It would be a 10 + 10
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AnieliaThis is a heart touching poem. One of sadness but also of joy and love. This so clearly describes the feeling of wanting to give love to someone that doesn't even see you. Keep up the excellent poerty
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GwennekeWOW! so beautifull! Love it :)
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PatriciaI have been scrolling through these poems looking for one to send to a very dear person, someone that means so much to me, not any poem could describe how i felt, but this poem, couldnt have fit more perfect, this poem brought me to tears, and brought out a realization of what beautywe see in people and do not always realize, Thank you to this poet for the beautiful words you have spoken that have touched my heart so.
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AshleyI can't believe i just read this poem! i literally started crying from the second to last stanza to the end. This poem gave me strength, butterflies,and confindence!i'm printing it off and bringing it over to my "best friends" house to read it to him! thankk you soooo much for writing something so beautiful!You wrote what i've been trying to write for the past few months. I'm sure you know (and everyone else who will read this) how it feels to have so many thoughts inside your head and now finallly feel releaved when you discover it already written by someone else! Really. THANK YOU!
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SeadogOMIGOD! The perfect words for someone who grows more special with each passing day!
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Alyssait was very touching it reminds me a poem i wrote about 5 years ago about my best friend
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MaatjieExcellent and beautiful
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lakendrathis poem was well put and the author has a lot of skills
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AparnaA very touching poem. I can relate to it.
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PreciousI love this poem it really can help me explain to my best friend how I feel about him. I also like this poem because it has my name in it but other than that this poem would get a A+ if we were in school.
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BeccaI really liked this poem because it shows that guys have true beauty too!
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ShyloI had a lump in my throat while reading this. This was one of the best poems I have ever read! Thank you.
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candacei loved it. It was beautiful.
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TraceyTo find words to describe those who have seen too much, hurt too much, and yet still keep an open heart about them is a wonderful gift. I am amazed to find a simple poem to express it all. Thank you.
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RachelWOW! That poem is great. Beautiful is the perfect name for it.
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TitaI really love this poem! It is exactly how I feel for the person I love!
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JenniferIf i had to vote this poem it would be a 10 +
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corryYES,it did touch me it made me cry because it reminded me of my ex-boifriend Josh
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Stacythis poem really reminds me of me and my best friends it really touched me and was one of the best poems i read
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Normaexcellent
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adrianait was great i was in a total like need of help 2 get back 2 realiy
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GloriaBeautiful is just that Beautiful. It perfectly describes my best friend.
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TamaraO my god. This poem was so very b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l. The way you decribed this person touched me soo. I loved the way you compared him with the most beautiful thing. The world. I give this poem all the thumbs in the world.
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REGINAYOU CERTAINLY GAVE THIS POEM THE PERFECT TITLE . IT IS BEAUTIFUL
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CindyI love this poem! I think it is so very awesome!
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LoriThis poem says so much about what I feel about one of my best and dearest friends in this world. I have tried to make him understand how strongly I love him and believe in him. You have captured my thoughts. Thank you.
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DunjaAbsolutely beautiful poem of heartwrenching beauty.
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unknowni love my best friend i love him although not because , i hope we stay best friends i dont wanna lose him
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elijah's loverI'm a french girl, I find your poem wonderful, I haven't any other word to say that it's a very beautiful poem.
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BeverlyI have read love poems in my past but none are as beautiful as this one is. The title matches the poem perfectly. It is a perfect masterpiece.
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EricaYour words bring tears to my eyes. I too would give up forever, to hold the beauty of another inside of me.
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KathleenI am not very good at coming up with the words to express my feelings for a certain person in my life. Your poem, Beautiful, is so very perfect. And even part of what you wrote "about the poem". "The emotions which rage within him, his past which struggles to beat him, show me a strength wich I have never seen in anyone else. He gives me the truth that I need in this crazy world. ". it all describes him as if he were the one you were writing about. I must thank you!
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DAMONIQUEthis is a nice poem, i give it a 10
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SunshineWOW. This poem left me in complete awe. Im still recovering:)Very nice. simple and easy to understand but says everything that a good poem should. GREAT!
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DanaI love this poem! I'm currently writing a book and this would go perfectly at the beginning!
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NikkiThis poem speaks of how I feel for my best friend. To me he is perfection to no end and your poem tells of all I feel in my heart.
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LoriThis is a wonderful poem. I could feel the emotion as I read it. Great job!
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Elizabethwow this is a very deep description of pure and sincere love, I found this poem very pasionate
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baltitmoreThis poem you wrote has so much thought and feelings! This poem you wrote is just like me and my Best friend chris and we are really close( but not dating) we want to be with each other. But this poem just reminds me of Us! It Touched my Heart and Fulled with Joy! Keep Writing cause your great! send me come!
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AmieThis poem is just so beautiful! I read this to my best friend, because it was what i was looking for, and he was so touched by this! I just want to say thankyou to Magic for creating something so special to me. It means so much. All my love
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REGINAVERY NICE, I LOVED IT!
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AriannaThis is a wonderful peoms; I can totally relate to what the peoms is expressing. When I read this peom it made me think about my guy best friend and the feels I have for him. Great peom!
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mThat is so beautiful. It touches you to the core. It opens your heart to the real beauty of this world.
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NicoleThis poem is absolutly. beautiful. That is all I can say. beautiful.
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steveyo this poem is off the hook keep em commin!
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kanithis poem is wonderfull. I LOVE THIS POEMS. please remember me.
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ChelsJust like the title of the poem, I think it's Beautiful.
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TonaOnly words this beautiful can brings tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing this poem.
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Jamii absolutely love the poem Beautiful by Magic. i'm feeling these same things for my best friend. it was nice to relate to someone who is feeling the same way.
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IanWhile reading your poem I was truly captured in the depth of what real love means. Continue writing from the heart and alway remember that someone, somewhere is feeling the same thing you are and it may change their life to know it.
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MicheI am speechless. It is completely wonderful. Brought tears to my eyes! Thank you for writing it, I trly enjoyed having the honor to read it. Thank you!
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Mark JayThat is the most beautiful poem I have evr heard, I was just flicking through the pages, looking for a poem for a friend and I started reading and saw this wouldn't work but kept going anyway, I am so glad I did. That is absolutely amazing, that is the nicest thing you could ever say to a man, trust me. I will never forget that poem, Pure excellence!
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adrianathis poem is..(speechless):) you got good talent.
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BarbaraThis is a wonderful poem you have sumed up the feeling's that i have for a very good friend and a long time lover. i truly want to thank you for writing about your experinece and i hope that he and i will remain friends and lovers untill the end of our time.I wish things could have been different for you and your "beautiful".
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Absarvery good.. nice one
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THERESAthis poem is awsome. i have tried to find the right one for my friend for a long time and this is definatly the one that fits him perfectly. thank you!
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GentleThis piece holds deep and peaceful feelings of purity. When I read this peace it was as though your heart was resting in the palm of my hand and I felt every beautiful beat! Thank you so much for sharing.
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meschellethis poem describes perfectly how i feel for my friend. i don't think i could live without him in my life. this is a perfect way to show someone how you really feel! great work Magic! you really touched something inside of me
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amewonderful. i had an argument just today about whether or not guys can be beautiful. the guy i was arguing with happend to be my best friend, whom i love very much, and think is completely beautiful. inside and out.
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qarkthanks for the poem, it just hurts to know that sometimes we miss love that is "although not because"
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Phoebei love the way this poem is written!
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bugAnother to add to the 2000th list. I love this poem it shows my feelings to my best friend that I dont see any more and it also reminds me of the boy I was going out with but he dumped me. This POEM IS GREAT
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KateThis poem is perfect. It is eloquent. It is exactly describing my feelings toward my dear friend, whom I've been in love with since the day I interact with him. Thank you for sharing such creative writing!
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DaisyThis poem is absolutely beautiful..I know the heart was inspired with such beauty..it is written in each word. I hope everybody can find this same beauty in a friend.
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lynnieI wrote this poem out in a card to the father of my baby. It was everything i ever wanted to say to him. He is my best friend, and although we will never be a couple, it has brought us closer together in our bonds of parenthood. Thankyou to the author for such a lovely gift of words
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RachelIt's exactly what I was looking for to send to my boyfriend to show him how I feel when he is near.
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MelissaAmazing poem. I'm speechless. Great work!
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VirginiaThis poem is what the titile saya beautiful.
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SteveThis poem is wonderful. It reminds me of a wonderful girl who I knew for only 3 months. That was six years ago and now I only think of her ten or so times a day. Magic, if you are Jaine, please tell me.
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TimI'm not a very poetic person but it was amazing.
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CRISTINAthank you so much to help me express my feelings using this beautiful poem kises from BRAZIL Cristina
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Edickai love this poem
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BrandyI love this poem! I have a best friend who I love dearly! I sent this to him hoping he'll enjoy it as I did! He knows I love him and I hope that one he can return the love!
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benedetibeautiful poem...beautiful !
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GwenA truley beautiful poem. One that I can identify with.
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TiniThis poem describes exactly how I feel about a special someone.
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BobbiBeautiful, Makes me cry for I relate to this so much. Ican't have the one that I want as mine.He's been hurt so badly that he won't commit himself completely, yet I love him so.
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JillThis poem is one of the best I've seen on this site. It captures what I've wanted to say to my bestfriend, who actually happens to be my boyfriend. We just got into this huge argument tonite and this made me feel lots better.
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beckythis is one of the most 'beautiful' poems i have read in a while . I am so very glad i found it because i am in a situation were i believe that i have foound my soul mate and he is so very beautiful in so many ways.
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WendyThis poem touched me as no other ever has. I never thought I would ever find the words to describe my best friend, but here they are. I sent it to him immediately. Thank you so very much for helping voice the feelings in my heart. You are so very talented.
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Angelwow! this poem moved me to tears. i plan to share it with my bestfriend, he is "beautiful" to me :) god bless you ><>
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NickiThis poem is wonderful, it expresses exactly how I feel about my best friend.
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reemI read your poem and all I have to say is that the poem is very beautiful, please keep writing.. thank you
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NicoletteUNBELIEVABLE
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ConnieI love this poem it takes a real special person to put feelings into words this well.
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ErinThis is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read! It shows me that I am not the only person who feels that way about the men in our lifes.
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JulienaI like this poem so much because I like a boy in the same way as Magic does. If only I could get him to read this to himself.
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CandiIt touched me so very deeply. It was as though the poet was reading my mind about me and one of my "friends" or ex boyfriend. It was great.
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AmandaI also write poetry... but this poem summed up every thing about my best friend. I couldn't believe it when I read... thank you!
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ReginaBeautifully written.I could feel the emotion in her writing.
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JoAnnA wonerful poem
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DebbieI enjoyed this poem very much. It as very nicely written
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jessi think this poem expresses what so many men are or can be, but that hasn't been touched on so eloquently as this poem does so well.
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NaomiGreat Poetry
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LisaI asolutely love this poem! It captures everything I feel about my best friend whom I will never see again. thankyou
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danabeautifully written!
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BrinThis poem is the perfect way that I would describe my buddy Kevin- but if I told him anything like it, he would think that I like him more than I really do. I'll just keep it at that.
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PattyThis is so my best friend, my husband, my life
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katiethis made me cry......WOW! you are amazing,for lack of a better word.
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Puccinijust beautiful
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carrolwhat a beautiful poem. Eventhough this poem was written for someone else - it expressed my feelings for someone also.
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LaureenA "beautiful" poem.Wonderful reading.
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