#30 If I Could Make A Wish

• Heather
  wow. thats very beautiful. i LOVE it!
• grace
  its kinda, uh, related to me. i like your poem
• Desmond
  this poem is so true because i have the same feel for someone i met on the net,it like the only way i could focus on. nice poem i love it alot
• Nikki
  It was so beautiful it touched my heart and i am sending it to my boy friend it really makes me feel relived that i could read something so beautiful that seems to touch my and my boyfriends heart
• Donna
  loved it its very touching
• Elmo
  I REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS POEM. Its awsome. I am also in love with someone who lives on the other side of the world. He has really touched my heart and i know his my soul mate. Your poem is the perfect discription of everything i feel. Thank You for sharing it with us (,")
• shanna
  I would just like to say i really like your poem. I sent in to my boyfriend i met online. We started talking before he was stationed over in Iraq, now we talk everyday. my days don't seem to be complete without him. We are finally going to meet in person in November if nothing happens. Your words are true & it is a great poem for any long distance realationship, wheter its online or not. Keep up the great work!
• Christa
  wow . have we met?? you seem to know exactly what i'm tryin' to say.
• David
  I'm really impress. Keep it up.
• nEeDiNg My MaN
  One single tear. i was very touched by this. you are an amazing person because putting the feeling you felt and in turn i felt in words must have been a very difficult thing. you words meant alot! xx
• lauren
  omg i love this poem i read it twice in a row it make sme htink of my ex in ohio ( i live in tx) i love him still ad always will i feel so stiff with ut his kiss
• Wendy
  HI, I just read this poem and I loved it! I met someone on the internet almost 3 years ago and we are so much in love and still waiting to meet, we have been so patient and when i read poems like this I just break down. I t touched every peice of my heart and I think it is a wonderful poem
• Denise
  THIS ONE HIT SO CLOSE TO HOME WITH ME AND HOW I FELT. LOVE IT.
• diana
  This poem really touched my heart i fell madly in love with a guy who live's in a different country in Canada. Everyday i ache for him to be with him and all my wisher's are in this poem he's my soul mate my best friend my heart and i know i will never rest till we are together. So thank for your poem you touched a special part of my heart.
• jess
  WOW - i read these poems over and over again but your one GOT me, i never ever vote or make comments but the brillance of yours made me make an exception, this is a great poem. thank you for sharing it with all of us!
• diana
  I think your poem was really great. People think internet love is not real but i know it is. I fell in love with a wonderful guy but we are a ocean apart i love him so much and i know what i feel is real
• Carlotta
  This is an awesome poem. I'm only a teenager. but it was still touching!
• Maria
  I really liked this poem, i can actually relate to it, i loved it!
• BaByJ
  this poem is by far one of the most amazing poems i've ever read it's very expressive and i like that God Bless you BaByJ
• Jeremy
  Very wonderful poem, It describes exactly how I feel.
• Cassie
  I really like this poem it reminds me of the guy i know and me
• cande
  I really like the rhyming in your poem. I think you did a great job in your writing it's agood poem.
• annon.
  this is a great poem you really know how to get someone thinking
• ingrid
  this poem is beautiful and i love it
• Kim
  nice poem. i loved it so much i memorized it lol. and it is long. nicely done. i wish to see more by you Pamela. your a wonderful poet. i told some friends and they were like WOW. they thought it was awsome. i gave them all copys. and told them where i got the poem. lot of people know about you. keep up the good work!
• Woody
  I like the things that the person told on this Poem.
• anonymous
  OMG! i love this poem. its totally DA BOMB! i swear. it really describes me (even tho im too embarassed to admit it) Thanx this is soooo GREAT! keep you the good work (ok is it just me or do i sound like a teacher???) lol
• netima
  i love your poem, it makes me think of my sweety who live so far away. even we just know. but he such a nice guy sand i'm falling in love with him now
• CountryGal
  Great poem. I know this feeling very well. Thanks for putting feelings into words.
• Tonya
  OMG! I almost cried when I read this poem. It brings out all the emotion & feelings I have for someone that I met over the Internet. Great,great poem!
• luke
  great poem it truly describes how i feel about jena i love her so much i wish she would understand y i get the way i do
• Gina
  Omg! I Have Finally Ben Able To Spit Out What Ive Ben Trying To Say To "That Sumwun" Thank You Soooo Much Your So Great
• ruben18us
  Wow that was one of the best pomes I'v read and I read a lot of pomes thank you for this pome your friend
• Elaina
  Very well done! You're a very talented poet. Your words has touched so many people; count me in on that too.
• Mary
  Very well written,beautiful.
• Stephanie
  i absolutely loved this poem, it reflects everything that i feel for my cyber lover, thankyou for writing this poem, u r a true inspiration!
• deege
  one of the most beautiful poems i have ever seen. it puts everything i feel into words thank you.
• Marlene
  This is a great poem! Thank you! The man I love is 2,000 miles away and circumstances keep us apart. We have met once in person and long for the day when we can be together freely again. I love him very much.
• Alysia
  When I read this poem it was like you took all of my thoughts and put them to music. You are truley gifted.
• CHRISTINA
  I REAALY ADMIRE THE POEM BECAUSE IT REMINDS ME OF ME AND MY BABY WE NEVER MET AND I REALLY DO CARE ABOUT HIM AND YOU SAID EVERYTHING I THINK ABOUT.
• missy
  i love your poem it is very pretty.
• Krystle
  I loved this poem your good keep doing poems!
• Shane
  Thank you Pamela ,i needed to express to my beloved how strongly i felt for her .Now we know it's true love so thank you
• Tawne
  I love this poem it means everthing to me and my baby! Thanks for writing it.
• Katrina
  Pamela, this is a wonderful poem that really touched my heart. It also inspired me to write more poetry. Thanks, and again I love the poem. Keep writing!
• angela
  I think this poem is so beautiful. I met someone on line just about a few months ago and when i read this.i thought of them.
• Tamara
  That was the sweetest and best poem I've ever read since I was born..and I just wanted to say.. Marc I love you , plz come back to me
• Chrissie
  I dedicate this beautiful poem to Ken. I will never forget him, thank you Pamela for publishing this
• Jessica
  This is the sweetest poem. I met this great guy online, and this poem fits him so well. Jeremy your the best sweetie :)
• Tracie
  This is the most beautiful poem I've ever read. It reminds me of my special someone!
• PALMA
  PAMELA, I AM ALSO A POET FOR MANY YEARS...BUT I HAVE FOUND THE EXACT RIGHT WORDS RIGHT HERE IN THIS POEM...THANK YOU...YOU ARE AN INSPIRATION!!!
• zaxxon
  i was looking 4 a poem to send my online love 4 her b-day.... and this was the best love poem i ever read...i really liked this poem...and i think u r a great poet
• Kalie
  This poem is so amazingly beautiful. I fell in love online before and this just brought back everything I had ever felt. It is a wondeful feeling getting online every night hoping your special one will be there to brighten your day and i feel that this poem says exactly what i have always tried to say, but haven't...
• Krissie
  Your poem reminds me of my online love and lover ... one day in time
• Kate
  This poem really touched my heart. I can relate to this in every way...I too, have a on line love, we have never met, this poem says it all.
• Ron
  Your words are so true,for i have had this in my life too. Thank's for a great poem.
• judy
  these are the words I felt just could not put them on paper the way they appear here.And my love will know in his heart how I feel now.
• Dean
  WOW .. pamela .. that one hit a spot i didnt think i had it made me think more clearly about my sweety on the net and it fits to a T with my feelings towards her . FANTASTIC POEM . HUGZZ
• Lynn
  This poem expresses exactly what I've been feeling. Thank you. I love it.
• barry
  a lovely poem that i could relate to. i know a girl and we know we will never be together but like you say,maybe in another town or place
• Lexie
  that poem was awesome its just how i feel. I couldn't find the right words to tell my special some one just how i feel and your poem did just that.
• Thomas
  Whoever wrote this poem? I know it's the perfect one. If you have a cyberlove, read this one immediatly.
• Lesley
  I loved this..it perfectly describes a relationship that I have online with someone very special..you have such talent..please, please write some more soon.
• Ryane
  This is such a beautiful poem. I know *exactly* how she feels.
• Teresa
  Great poem!
• Mandy
  I love this poem, it rings so true to my heart. I'd love to know who Mike is that made a comment also, I think he has a few internet sweethearts and breaks a few hearts along his journey!!
• Tracey
  Oh how true your words can be what i am feeling somehow pamela put into words that i could not do thanks for such a heart feeling poem
• amanda
  This poem left me in tears.... its a very emotional poem, this girl sure knows how to write poetry. I love it.. its so perfect that i found it actually relates to my situation.
• Dan
  That poem is absolutely awsome. I here what your saying Pamela.
• ray
  Pamela the words of beauty that you have expressed are true to my heart. I have dreamn't the dream that you speak of here,love fills my heart. Beautiful beautiful words of loves expressions
• Darcy
  this poem is awsome, i can and am related to this poem. I just wanted to say this is the most awsome poem!
• Keith
  Very nice. Keep up the good work.
• zoebooth
  A truly beautiful poem.
• Lyssa
  I thought this poem explained what goes through the mind of a person in love PERFECTLY.....
• Lyda
  I love the poem that u wrote..its really touches me and i can really relate to it..
• Kim
  I thought this poem was great
• sky
  that would be my wish too only if she knew
• APRILL
  I NEVER COULD FIND THE RIGHT WORDS TO TELL MY INTERNET LOVE HOW I REALLY FEEL,UNTIL TODAY.YOU HAVE TOUCHED MY HEART,AND I HOPE I CAN TOUCH MY LOVE'S HEART.THIS WAS A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
• keith
  this poem describes exactly how i feel about the woman that i met almost down to a tee. I loved it
• Jason
  When I read this I thought of my girlfriend and started to cry.and still am. Give my thamks to Pamela
• Linda
  I feel this same feelings, However I am not blessed with the ways of words. I must thank you for now I can send this poem to the one I love, and he may now understand what I have been trying to say, and Pamela so wonderfully wrote...Thank you so very much...
• Holly
  I loved this poem. You have a wonderful writing skill. Please keep it up!
• Pat
  This poem is wonderful.
• Traci
  What a beautiful and rich poem.
• Dalia
  wonderful pooems that rimes and its beautiful
• Beachman3
  I'm in a similiar situation! :-( One of us is free and the other isn't but the one that isn't free is very unhappy. Very difficult emotional situation!! I understand your dielemma! Keep your wishes and dreams alive, all we have! :-)
• Berghmans
  This is certainly one of the greatest poems that I ever read , I love to read more of your poems , keep up the good work .
• mike
  just love the poem, it puts the true feelings of the author.. i just had to send it to my internet love.... good job and thanks... going to look for some more of your poems
• Rebecka
  I was looking for someting that would tell some one how i feel and when i read this i know that how i feel
• Jen
  This is a very, very inspiring poem of love and the internet. I myself have fallen in love over the internet, and your words described everything, I couldn't explain myself. And I thank you so very much for that. You have a true talent. Many more poems would be appreciated. And once again, thankyou
• alice
  i think this poem is lovely and heart warming almost made me cry it was so lovely anyways i loved it it was wonderfull
• skyblazer
  Beautiful. If we could all have wishes, i think this would be the one i would want to have.
• casey
  great poem