Heart Thoughts by Jfreak

#69 Heart Thoughts

I knew this girl all through high school. We were buds, chums, but then one day she caught my eye in a totally different way than ever before. I began to care far more than I ever did. That is where this poem came from. Sad thing is she never read it. I never got a chance to give it to her. We had a falling out just days before I was planning to give it to her. I always wondered what would have happened if I would have given her the poem sooner. I guess I will never know.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Love and Friendship Poems

Heart Thoughts

by Jfreak

Sitting here remembering when
I saw the beauty rush out like a might wind
I never saw it before or bothered to notice
But now I see it and on it I am focused.
The gentleness of your voice
The way you make me feel
when I see your lovely smile.
The way you laugh and care for others
Even go beyond the extra mile.
I am focused on that
whether you believe me or not
My heart aches for you
And my stomach is in knots.
Now I had to declare,
The thoughts of my heart.
In hopes that you'd give me,
A place in your heart

53 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

megha

this thoyght was lovely
Amit

well this is very good poem which can inspires the younger ones
nasima

it was really nice
Tan

wonderful poem which warm my heart.
java

No one is poet but love make them to be one. This poem shows everything this guy has in his heart. Way to go man.
mariam

amazing
Natasha

It was good.
Randi

Hey. I loved your poem i have the same feelings for one of my best friends but im afraid of what might happen to us. I may be a sophomore in High School but i have never felt this way for a guy before. Maybe and if i do tell him the way i feel im afraid i might lose a friendship in the end.
Kali

WOW,that is seriously the best one i have read through out all the sites i have been through. you have talent. That is a kicking poem.
graham

i used this in my girlfriends birthday card,very good .
Sabir Tanha

i love this kind of love story that is why i deep in love ok who worte this love story i apperitcat the i love you if she or he is not different for me ok thanks for your show stroy to love bye
anunay

hi this is very nice poem. i thought that is amazing! that was just- touching. that had so much emotion and you are a great poet.
Crista

this is a really beautiful poem it really touches my heart, and i didn't know that there was actually someone out there that has the same problem/situation as i do it's way way awesome.
Evelyn

A simply touching poem. While I was reading it some of the words in it reminded me that I possess some of those qualities in myself. I give this poem four****. A good poem, not too long and easy to understand.
Peggy

I really like it. My best friend saw an x of hers last night who said all of that. I showed her your poem. She also likes it. (keep up the good work!)
umesh

very nice
karishma

it's a great poem i'll appreacite it!
Tiffany

I think you should still give her the poem. it might save what you had. What can you lose? Its worth the try! I know how hard it is. im going through it right now.
rachel

wow this is a great poem and i once had the same feelings for a friend and the same thing happend to me if the feelings are still there then you should give it to her so she knows and you won't have the regret of her not knowing.
christy

i can relate to what hes poem means. i liked it.
tracy

captures my exact feelings. such as when you just cant get someone out of your head. brilliant!
stormy

i love this poem it was just great!it makes me think of my boyfriend now for 31/2yrs jay-t
issa

wow. nicely written. i can relate to this poem especially because i've had feelings for a friend for almost 2 yrs now. this poem really summarized my thoughts. ^_^
Allysson

aww. that was so sweet! show it to her! im sure she'll love it!
shona

this was a very wonderful poem
Salaam

This is one of the best friendship to lovers poems I have ever read.
jennifer

Hey i read this poem and i loved it!. i think you should give this poem to the girl you adore! maybe she will give you a chance and give you a place in here heart. good luck!
Tyrone

I just want to say that there has been many times where I have also felt the same way, and I just did not know how to write them down. Thanks Alot for expressing my thoughts as well!
ShaKaren

I realy like the poem!
Peter

Of all the poems in this catergory i think that this one tops the lot. Great work!
abdw

wow wow wow verey nice
Stephanie

I know that feeling of hope for something greater than a friendship, and fear of losing what was there before. Don't ever give up. It's not too late. No matter what happned in the past, all you can do is accept it as something of old.
baby

You are a good poem writer keep up the good work
anji

nice ,word context, stronge feelings of the heart,sweet and careing,i would read it again
nigel

This poem is dedicated to this girl I like - Lisa. I haven't told her yet, but I can relate to the poet, madd tight. one love
asha

i found this to be a very nice and a captivating poem. i want the author to write more poems like this.
Tandr

Wow. this is a very good poem. it reminded me the way i felt about this guy months ago. Good job! :)
ARI

THIS POEM REMINDS ME OF MY BEST FRIEND. I NOTICED THAT HE STARTED ACTING DIFFERENT TOWARDS ME AND LOOKING AT ME DIFFERENTLY. WHY HE DIDN'T TELL HOW HE FELT IS BEYOND ME, BECAUSE I FELT THE SAME WAY AND STILL DO.
Jess

Great work!
Dean

This is a great poem it has true meaning to me. This girl that i have known for a while about 3 weeks ago i started to look at her in a new way i got to know the real her. I love the way she is warm and caring and this poem really desrcibes her in everyway. I think i will read her this poem to show her how i really feel and she if she feels the same about me.wish me luck!
Christine

I totaly adored this poem. Keep up the good work!
Christine

I just love this poem, it made me feel...i don't quite know...in love...? Anyway, it was a great poem!
princess

This poem explains how I feel about my ex's best friend..He likes me, but I can't seem to get my ex out of my mind..
Matt

Awesome
Stephanie

I loved the poem, it is so unlikely to be lucky to find that special someone and to know that they are such a great person and would be a great lover. I have been dating a friend for 3 months now and I think that he is my true love...GOOD LUCK!She will come back. The poem is so true, you could not have said it any better
kat

it reminded me of two of my friends. One of them likes the other but doesn't dare say how she feels. I've sent her this poem to show her i care.
eves

i really like this poems...how i wish that there would be a guy for me....same as what the author felt
Andrea

Do you know where she is now? It's never too late...
Ryan

everything that im thinking but was unable to say!
NN

This was a very nice and cute poem! I loved it!
salman

this poem is the best poem in the world about love!! i use it on everyone and thots how i get gurlz
Dr.

Well Put!
rick

i think this poem is really good. its the best one i read yet. i feel the same way about a girl i went to school with. we've been friends for all most 5 years now. and just at the beginning of this summer i started to have feelings for her. i could never tell her how i felt cuz i didn't want to lose her as a friend. and just about a week ago i told her how i felt and she told me how she felt. now we're starting everything out slow. now that i found this poem, i'm going to have her read it. so thanks for writeing this poem its very good.

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