#2 The Heat Of My Desire

• D
  i loved this poem. it was very sexy
• david
  this is exactly what i have been trying to express to a girl so special in my life. the poet that wrote this is forever in my prayers. thank you so much from me. crazy dave
• Rachel
  A truly amazing piece of work!
• Alison
  wow! that is a good poem. i cant tell you how good i think it is, that poem has just blown me away. well done, alison.
• Dametria
  that is so sweet
• Tijuana
  that poem is so very nice ur wife must love u!
• Danielle
  I love that peom! it is really good one. :)
• craig
  i like this poem very much because this is how i feel about my girlfriend(WIFE).
• Patty
  This is a great poem. It said exactly what I have been thinking. Way To Go!
• adrian
  My vote just means that I really like the poem
• kevin
  I am having a very passionate affair - right or wrong - this poem does it full justice. Love has no boundaries!
• Sheila
  This poem is very moving and it reminds me of my boyfriens Nick of four years and the love that we share for each other!
• kyra
  I really enjoyed it. It had so much passion into it. Im goind to give this to my man
• Dominique
  THIS POEM WAS OMG. NOW I HAVE TO GO FIND MY BOYFRIEND SO HER CAN BE THE HEAT OF MY DESIRE!
• Diane
  This poem moved me - thank you for sharing.
• SUSAN
  This describes me and my man. This is exactly how he feels! Thank you to the author!
• Salm
  Such a lovely poem, well written and it makes you love the one you love more dearly. I love this poem
• smitha
  its was wonderful.
• William
  Very poignant poem. thoroughly enjoyed it and the sentiments it expressed
• Danielle
  i love your poem it was awsome I would love to read more! Keep up the good work
• Shannon
  I can relate to this poem for I have man in my life who heats the blood that flows through my veins with the slightest touch or smile. Only sad thing is that I am not marrying him in six weeks. I LOVE THIS POEM!
• Dawn
  VERY EROTIC. A++++
• conrad
  I first read this poem about 2 years ago. It moves me today, as it did then. My girlfriend liked it too. Let's see if she remembers (no longer my girlfriend)
• nichole
  this poems brought tearts to my eyes and the that you say makes want to things if you feel me
• Lynette
  Its nice to see a man in touch with his inner feelings to display them in the words of this poem. WUN
• Martena
  The poem was so romantic and made my boyfriend feel so good. He was ready to cudle even more when he read the romantic poem.
• natasha
  this poem was so great im not even a man but I feel the same way
• Danielle
  This is a wonderful poem about how someone feels about the one they love. i wish i could write some things like that.
• wendy
  I really enjoyed this poem. I have always wanted a man to feel that way while making love to me.
• Yoshi
  AWESOME. JUST AWESOME
• Jeremy
  Beautiful
• monica
  i really like it i would give it to my boyfriend haha
• whitney
  this poem i so good i thank you so much for writing this! Im only 16 amd this touched me so much! Thanks again! ***whitney brannan***
• maria
  this is wonderful poem it was amazing it really shows what most passionate relationships go through.
• nico
  its touchin
• Estelle
  What an amazing poem. it's so full of passion.
• Dannielle
  I really like that poem. It touched me dearly. It reminded me of the love of me and my partner have for each other.
• hope
  this is very touching can relate to this u are awsome keep them comming
• makus
  a truly wonderful poem congratulations
• Amanda
  Now I think that this is the bomb. I really really like this one. I can really relate to it, it's really great!
• EBONY
  VERY INTENSE. VERY INSPIRING. LOVED IT!
• JESSICA
  I LOVE THIS POEM, I WOULD LOVE TO SEE SOME MORE OF YOU WORK. SOME MORE LOVE POEMS. WHEN YOU HAVE SOME EMAIL THEM TO ME.
• David
  David it was great thanks
• Lucy
  Very exotic. You have a great choice of words. Keep up the good work.
• lindsey
  WOW! when i first heard this poem i thought it was so moving but what i didnt no is that my boyfriend didnt write it for me like he sayed he did and i hope your reading this
• Arelis
  It is wonderful to know a men could express their passion so beautifully. I felt like I was there with him at that moment. Great Job. I loved it
• Christopher
  This poem has substance and really lets me feel what it says.
• mrs.taylor
  i love the poem. it was romantic a i would like to read more.
• Lori
  You are the man! I could imagine myself right there. You have a deep expession that can only come from passion. I would love to read more of your work.
• Janice
  This touched the depth of my soul, the very feelings that I could relate to in my current relationship.
• tabitha
  that was a truely a wonderful poem
• Lovely
  I would love to see more of your work. It's so real and it doesn't seem written. It seems more like you're sitting right beside me telling me a story.
• Courtney
  goodness gracious! i loved the poem! it was amazing. i began to reminsince and chills were sent down my back. keep up the good work!
• Narenzgal
  Very exotic!my guy luv diz poem!
• candy
  you go david! i love this poem. i am really feeling you with this. keep it real and good. for you have a talent that must go on. i really truely like this poem.
• Sharla
  I love it
• Deandris
  this is a very special poem. i love every part of it. good work.
• Gary
  After reading this poem I had to send it to the person I thought of and love. It described exactly how I know I will feel the first time we make love. I couldn't have thought of the words myself.
• Sandra
  I Love This Poem! Its So Deep & Sexy! It Made Me Want To Go Home To My Boyfriend. David You Truly Have A Gift Keep It Up!
• nick
  wow, i don't know if that has ever been put like that before
• Liz
  That has to be the best poem I've ever read! I got completely lost in it. Keep up the great work!
• jaide
  excellence
• magda
  love it!
• Rebecca
  it was touching!
• Tameka
  I really love the peom it remind me of myslef i would rate this a ten
• alores
  this poem was great. it reminded me so much of how my boyfriend and i are every night. you did a very good job, and please keep up the good work
• DADDY
  I WAS REALLY FEELIN THAT. KEEP DOING WHAT U DO!
• Short
  hey babe i just found your poem and it made me fall in love with you all over again (if that's possible)! never ever stop writing these awesome poems because if you do i'll. well you know the rest! can't wait for more to be published.
• Chardonnay
  that poem was deep,very passionate, and sexy keep up the good work!
• Sara
  OMG! I absolutely love this poem. I'm so glad that there is a guy who can write a poem that has meaning but yet is still about guy things. I would love to read some more of your poems. You're a great poet.
• Erica
  I really love this poem this is how my fiance makes me feel
• saxon
  this poem was lovely and within each word i read, memories of my husband and i, just comes alive. your poem did that for me and i'm very greatful. keep up the good work this is the best poem yet
• Lish
  David, you are truly blessed with the ability to have words come alive. This poem is so pure and private that I do not even want to share it w/ someone. lol. please continue to write!
• Dik
  I always am astonished and surprised when I see how some people can find so easy words to tell so much. My deepest compliments and respect for this poet.
• will
  very well written
• debbie
  this was a very beautiful poem. i can really relate to it, because i am hopelessly in love righht now, and i can really feel it.
• dena
  I thought this was a really good poem. I hope to find more poems from David.
• Michael
  This is very descriptive and drips with passion
• donna
  i really love your poem. it is very sexual in all types of ways. it explains how a guy feels about a girl!
• TIA
  WOW, THAT WAS SO AMAZING. IM SO IMPRESSED. IM GLAD SOMEONE IN THE WORLD HAS/HAD THE FEELING I DO RIGHT NOW.
• Brittany
  I really don't know what to say about this poem. It was amazing. The words were so strong, passionate, and intimate. I think the poem was better that a perfect 10. Very beautiful. Great Job David!
• Irina
  Wow, you got skills! I wish a guy would write ME a poem like that.
• Jazmi
  This is a deep poem that seems to be true about love & lust!
• Kat
  Your poem sent shivers down my spine.
• med
  realy a fantastic poems i liked it.
• Manda
  HOT! This poem was sweet. a real turn-on. You go boy! :)
• Brittany
  I loved this poem so much!
• dana
  Thank you David this describes me to a tee.
• Zolee
  hey my friends! it's a top hit to my heart! my love is named Rosa.
• Yari
  he got talent he real it's how ladies out here feel it describe me it's the way me and my boo! feel 4-real thats the dazzle my nazzle.
• jean
  congrats! it's a great poem.
• Aweda
  I'll tell you how I felt about this poem when I start breathing again.
• liza
  Absolutely devine. i can taste it. very moving. well done
• Sarah
  Amazing, truly a beautiful piece of writing.
• Shea
  I really enjoyed reading your poem. You have a nice choice of words. They (words) say alot
• yamyam
  i love it.its ggrrreeeaatt
• Loretta
  Loved it, it was so emotional.
• stephanie
  this poem brought a tear to my eye when i read it. it makes me think of my one and only love and it totally expresses my feelings for him. it is very touching.
• Danielle
  You could just feel the emotion in this poem and im gonna read more by this person. Great job! Keep it up
• Green
  All I got to say is..WOW
• Megan
  David has true talent. Very well done.
• heather
  I think this poem was intimate and very sexy! I love it!
• Elizabeth
  I really liked your poem
• Becky
  This poem reminds me of my fiance. I love it.
• Trinity
  I love this poem.It has alot of meaning and is so sweet that he wrote this for her.
• Donnatella
  Oh, poet. I could most certainly feel your desire in this poem. She was a lucky lady. This poem was also very soft and gentle. Good job.
• gina
  it was soo amazing. It made you picture the love and intamacy being shared. to the one who wrote it you are unbelievably talented.
• Alteris
  your poem was very touching, and i love everything about, keep it up
• Clark
  wonderful,
• Kyra
  I think this poem is good, very good. His coice of words and positions are erotic.
• Christian
  Your poem was excellent man. You are really good. Keep it up.
• Seba
  EXCELLENT
• Kristie
  Okay I have 2 give you your props excellent towards the end of this poem all good got's 2 give ya a 10. Keep up the good work.
• liz
  This poem is beauitful. I can completly relate to what youwrote. I printed it out and gave it to my fiancee for V-day..He loved it..The best thing about your poem is that you can feel everything that you wrote, which is awsome.
• Mayra
  I love this poem.It explains everything me and my sweet boyfriend feel! This poem is real touching
• Kelly
  This poem was truly touching and very passionate. You could feel the authors memories and love that he once had for Rosa.
• amanda
  excellent poem very well written!
• Lissa
  That was so wonderful it made me feel so warm inside.
• Larissa
  It sent chills down my spine. I wish my boyfriend would write stuff like this for me.
• Jackie
  Lust and hungry between two lovers.
• Barbie
  *that's very romantic*
• Tyrico
  It's all good and I can definately relate to this! Keep up the excellent imagery!
• Heather
  Totally captivating!
• melissa
  i felt the passion in this poem, and it gave me chills.
• Teri
  I thought this poem was wonderful. I could picture every detail. Being in a long distance realtionship is hard, but when I send this to my boyfriend hopefully it will give him ideas for when we meet again.
• Naren
  This be a heartwellming poem
• Rob
  Very sensual, very mood inspiring... A powerful poem!
• JB
  arghh
• Ranea
  Wonderfully written and very passionate....bstgirl
• russell
  great poem says exactly what i was feeling.
• GEORGIA
  LOVE IT,
• Heart_of_Jazz
  It is a very lovely poem that flowed nicely... it was good...
• Kim
  I love this poem this is the best one.
• Peanut
  It's good to know that there are still people out there who like to have sex.
• Brown
  WoW! That was a VERY nice Poem! I Loved it!!!
• Starr
  Boy this poem has prominate tender heat. I loved it!!!!
• Larry
  He's up to it again. This guy is tops. More please.
• Danny
  This poem is so hot! This is how I like it.
• EVELYN
  I FELT ALL THE PASSION TO THE POINT IT WAS ME WHO WAS ROSA!! WONDERFUL FEELING
• Istvan
  Kickass!
• Mary
  Love this poem,Would love to have my lover send me a poem like this one.
• MELISSA
  DAVID THAT WAS A VERRY NICE POEM I LOVED IT. HOPE YOU HAVE A LOT MORE LIKE THAT ONE.
• Lawry
  He is super and should write more
• Alexandra
  A Beautiful poem of sexual love...and much more.
• David
  This was a fantastic and well written poem!
• Hans
  Love and lust, i can't resist the feeling, and this poem is filled of it. Gentle but hot. You simply have to read it!
• Jessie
  Great!
• Christine
  I really liked your poem. It was great, it was so real.
• Charolette
  Bravo! This poem was written with excellent taste. I would like to see more of David's work.
• Stephaine
  LUV IT.Describes me and the luv of my life.
• tiffany
  I think this is a good poem . I really Know what your talking about .
• JAMONICA
  THIS IS A VERY LOVING POEM AND I REALLY DIG WHAT YOU ARE SAYING.
• sugar
  i love that poem it's very deep and full of feelings keep writing poems
• Beverly
  That was a GREAT poem...in a way it describes how I feel for the love of my life when he is near me!
• Robert
  This poem is exactly what I and My love feel when we are near or apart. But never apart for long. Thank You
• tll
  excellent.. food for thought. i have a long distance love that is coming in 10 days and this was insight to their visit.. thank you
• lorraine
  I always wished for this kind of romance. I had it once but it vanished into the night. It is comforting to know that there is men out there who feel things like romance. great job!
• Clifford
  The poem is very powerful. It really caught my attention.
• Gabriel
  This poem is fantastic
• Donna
  I absolutely loved it. Strangely gentle yet simply erotic.
• Johnna
  Words such as this cannot even begin to utter from a pperson who has not experienced true love. This was so beautiful and heartfelt. I could just feel the words as i read them
• Rachel
  Your poem "The heat of my desire" was one of the most endulging poems i've read in a long time.
• Gina
  I do believe this poem was VERY well done. Thank you.
• april
  I really liked that poem
• Karebear
  I really love his poem "The Heat Of My Desire", because it is the bomb,it really blew me away.
• surfrun
  good stuff
• Jose
  this is a great poem and it relates to me in every way
• Farah
  This is so beautiful, so vivid, it makes you feel what he was thinking when he wrote the poem
• lani-gurhl
  touchy!
• Robbie
  Its very touching and in dept. It gets you into the feeling of actually having that special some one right next to you feeling there sweet caress.
• Lindsay
  So sexy yet he brings in the hint of love they shared as well! Awesome!
• sandi
  THis is a well exicuted poem with the proper choice of wording , dedicated to a lucky woman, describing his love for her clear down to her very soul.
• teah
  I think this is a really deep poem I liked it a lot.
• Sarah
  This poet is very talented,and so are many others but i really like his work the best!!
• shanaya
  now THAT is a love poem!
• norm
  EXCELLENT
• GalaxyHunter1
  This is a great poem,capturing some heart felt passion....good stuff..reminds me of Yeats....too cool