I Want To Fly by Jasperflower

#43 I Want To Fly

This poem is about a woman and a man who have shared so much in thought and mind, and hope one day to make it real. It doesn't matter how long they wait, they know their dreams will come true.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Cyber Romance Poems

I Want To Fly

by Jasperflower

The night I met you
in words only on a screen
I knew I had to have you
not only in my dreams!
The words that we have shared
have caused my heart to care
At first I was a little frightened
to share myself with you
but you showed me ways to
make my nights brighten
You loved my body over and over again
you took me to heaven and made me live again!
I have come to want to devour you
not just on this place
but I want to touch your body
and feel you near
I want to hold you tightly
not just in words
but face to face:
I want to pleasure you in all the ways we shared,
I want to do things to you that
others would only dare:
I want to make our fantasies
all come true
for, babe, I want to fly with you.

76 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

cherry

this poem not only shows passionate love but the little verse "to make a heart care" well it shows the the right love can make a cold soul love again. ON a scale from 1 to 10 its off the charts
mike

i like this poem it has realy potrayed how we the internet users talk, and how we feel down deep our haetr notably,whenever we meet someone to care for. thanks mike
justine

wow! perfect words.
Kala C

that was so sweet and nice i loved that peoms becuse i was true and i felt it to can you fill it think had what is it like when some so sweet wants you to hold and love forever over andover again i love it
Joseph

Dear Jasperflower You'r really touched my feeling ;these days I live new love life I'v never lived these love moment before & your lovely poeam talk about these lovely moment Thanks . Joseph
gyh

this poem touched my soul and speaks what i cannot say for the feelings it convey are very much what i feel
deni

way touching.
aka pella

this is awlsome~ (speeling mistakes) but, I like it~
Kim

This poem is great. It's really helped me to express my feelings to an internet lover. Now he should understand how I feel because I've found it hard to find the right words. Bring on more poems!
Carmen

Jasperflower, A beautiful way to express the most intimate thoughts, of someone in love.
kayla

omg that poem was great!i read it over and over.
zoe

its the best poen ever
Lindsey

Wow. your words touched me so much. because i feel this exact way about a guy. who i wish that one day i can meet! Distance may seperate us but in my heart i know that the way we feel will one day bring us together. this poem is amazing. x
Kate

You may not believe im sitting here close to tears, I have an internet love. I tell him I love him every day and its so true, but we can not see each other for different reasons. Your poem touched me!
Graham

Yes! It is exactly like this!
Tasha

This poem really touched me. i'm just 14 going on 15 but there's this guy who i love and he loves my back. the only problem is that we are to far apart to meet! he's on the other part of the world and couse i'm only 14 we cant meet couse of family problems. i may seem young and still begining the world but love hasnt got to do with age! when love is strong you cant hold back but you can only express with words when distance is in the way! keep up the good work!
Holly

My husband and I met online a little over 2 years ago. Right now, we are in different states, and it's hard. He sent me this poem last night, and I had to find the site it came from. This poem really says what alot of internet couples feel, and have felt. Great poem, Jasperflower
nikki

i liked the poem very very much. it's sweet and cute.
Lisa

Wow! Just want I want to say to my special friend. Thanks.
molly

thanks for a great poem. i can really relate to it. keep on writting.
sakura-chan

this poem is sooo nice,it makes people explain wat dey cant explain
Roxanne

I received this poem today and i think thats its great . It expressed everything that i want to say to Bob. Thanks for inlightening me
Lauren

i fell in love with this poem, i loved it so much i sent it to the one i cant have, hes out there in the cyber world meeting new people everyday, and yet he tells me all of these things that he wants us to do together, i really need him and i cant begin to tell him how much i love him.
ashlee

omg ! that is just how i feel about my internet love ! u have great talent . id like to hear more in the future !
Natalie

I love this poem! It describes exactly how I feel! I met this one GREAT guy online about a year ago, and now we are in a relationship. Next year, he and I plan on meeting somewhere. To everyone out there who is in the same position, or if you are in love with someone online, don't get discouraged! You'll meet that person someday! I certainly am meeting the one guy for me
hailey

it was great and romantic!
Katarina

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was so beautiful, it explains a persons feelings so well.
isabel

i think this a verry well expressed poem i really liked it the auther has alot of talent .
Georgetta

Your poem ROCKS!
Whitney

thats so true, me and my internet lover feel the sameway!
Amanda

OHHH that was nice. I am in love with a man online and well that just says it all! I'm glad SOMEONE managed to put it into words
Tonya

I love this poem. I feel all the same things mentioned in the poem with someone I met on the Internet. It's a really great poem!
Dee

Very real ! Touched me !
SV

i loved your poem, it reminded me so much of me and the guy I been with over the net for almost a whole year now
Tina

I really liked you pome! It was realy nice and ment a lot to me case the same thing is going on in my life! so thank you for puting this lovey pome on the net.
Joannah

i can relate. jasper ur such a poet
ron

good poem. i can really relate to it.
Bob

I sent the poem to my web friend and she loved it! It says all the things that I have difficulty saying but want to.
Valentino

Sounds like my love affair with my butterfly.. KC!
JULIO

REALLY GREAT POEM, I STAR TO CRY WHEN I READ IT. BYE.
Sam

That poem is smooth, I enjoyed it
scott

i sat here most of the day reading this one poem.. i couldnt find the perfect words to describe this poem. it is just perfect the way it is .speechless is all i can say! i really want to find the right words to describe it.perfect!
kelly

this is a buetiful poem and I to have shared this author's feelings.
Jadie

Exactly how I feel about my cyber love, he took me where no other has ever been.Although we have yet to touch , I feel as though we have made love over 1000 times.
Janette

This poem expresses exactly how I feel. I have found love on the internet It says it all!
christine

absolutely amazing poem
Kandy

OMG! I loved this poem, you are an excellent poet and I REALLY hope to see more poems by you!
Holly

This poem is great and the feelings are so real
Christina

Awwwwwwww! This is so sweet, I'm going to send it to my "online love" right now!
Chrissie

I have sent this to Ken. for we have met and felt the same and cannot settle because of these same feelings. Thank you Jasper for putting it into words
Charlie

Pure PASSIONS from the heart.
Jan

I can't believe how much this poem fits the relationship i am in right now.it is perfect! Thank you for helping me explain to my man how much i love him!
Alan

I enjoyed the honesty of these words.
sally

word for word, is exactly how i feel
Lisa

Beautiful poem! I to have meet someone on the net, we are engaged to be married in Sept. 2001
lynn

I love it. It speakes about my love life.
Maria

This Poeam I luv so much its just how i feel i want to fly with him and be with him forever this poem is totally me and him thats why i voted for this poem its one of the best
suzi

i am inlove with a man i met on the net& yr poem exactly reflects what we feel for eachother...every word stands for the truth...the true love...and our dreams will come true..we know...i loved yr poem
Pat

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
frances

An excellent poem that expresses what a person truly feels when they meet that one special internet romance.
dan

perfect 10
Barbara

Wonderfully written poem! I am sending it to a man that I met on the internet. I am meeting him for the first time tomorrow.
Juicy

Luv It!!!!
jadrian

i am feelin dis poem forreal...and its a great openin to one of my songs
MANDY

A GREAT ONE!!! LOVE IT AND IT'S ALSO RELATED TO MY INTERNET LOVE.
DORIE

I THOUHT UR POEM WAS VERY BEAUTIFUL AND I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH.. I ALSO SENT IT TO MY SWEETIE THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT....
Irene

The words were spoken of true feelings from the heart....Thoughts that are often ours.... I too often want to fly!
deje

Oh sooo true ! Those feelings are real
Atomik

This poem is very nice I like it
Lenna

thanks to help me tell my cyber partner what i really feel
Judy

This is a wonderful poem and I'm sure others will enjoy it as much as I have.
Vicki

Says it all I think, well done Jasperflower
Jacqueline

I just wanted you to know, that i think you write beautifully. I know what you feel in each word, for i as well Have a wonderful man i love who is online. THank you for helping me to express what i feel for him
Janie

This is absolutly beautiful..
Natalie

yes...yes...yes...this is really the one. If I could have written one...this would have been it. We are 16,000 miles away from each other...if only I could fly...like my heart does every night. Someday with luck...Thanks
Teri

Very beautiful poem and describes my feelings for a wonderful man i met over the net and hope to someday spend the rest of my life with.

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