Rapture by Karin Schaefer

#26 Rapture

A poem about the beauty and freedom in a single moment of intimacy between lovers.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Erotic Poems

Rapture

by Karin Schaefer

There is a place for us
that no one else can enter.
It is a place that holds no secrets,
only beauty, peace, understanding.

A place that we come to,
thinking we are one,
only to have our souls
fused together for a moment.

And in that moment, I know you;
every pore, every pulse,
every thought, every fear.
And I love you more.

I feel myself laid bare before you,
and I feel content . . .
joyous that you are with me,
loving me in my nakedness.

92 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Chameleon

i love it. it just plain bares my soul. my very thoughts. she's good
isidro

it means a lot to me you just take the word out off my mine thanks
Raquel

I loved this poem!
Alicia

its a heart breaking poem, it has capture my soul.
farid ahmad

it so wonderfull peots i love that ! my vote goes to u !
jess

this is a wonderful poem obviously written by someone who truly knows the meaning of loving to the edge and being loved back
Ellen

This was a very touching poem. I love the words and the way is written. I write poems also, but unfortunately they are more on the sad side than happy. Ellen
Jasmine

It was a beautiful poem.
Nihal

Really hot! I just felt a clutch in my heart after reading this poem. Its a poem that possess the power to change a dull mood to romantic one. It makes me miss my girlfriend more than ever.
Joyce

The words and thoughts in this poem express true intimacy. The same words apply, whether it be mental and emotional, or sexual. True intimacy encompasses all those areas -- whole person to whole person. I enjoyed it.
Robert

I really enjoyed this poem
charlene

I loved it! It's honest and easy to relate to. You really have a special talent for putting emosion into words!
April

That was wonderful.
tommy

this poem is great it sent chills up my spine it is a must read
Tannys

this is the most awsome poem i have ever read so far. dont ever stop writing because it will take you a long ways. great job
sandra

i find the poem heartwarming and it's exactly i felt and wanted to share with MY LOVE,JOSEPH the man in my life who made my life worth living.
Boku

I think its really nice it feels like something i would write right out of my life.
Tiffany

i thought this poems was one the best poems i have read in a long time i send it to my family and friends and even my boyfriend
adrian

I really love this poem. It's so warm and deep. This is a dream come true.
jodi

Beautiful.
Monica

Beautiful poem!
Muqaddasah

its a lovely poem with beutiful feelings of oneness,i going to send this to my hubby who is far from me and i'm mising him toooooo much
Kim

LOVED IT!Great job.
Cynthia

This is a wonderful love poem that describes the feeling of completeness and joy that love can bring
Dante

This is a very good poem; it touched my heart.
lolly

this poem is hot! it reminds me of me and my boyfriend and how much i miss him since he has moved.
Herbert

it was really inspiring it kept my girlfriends and my relationship going! thanks
jo ann

BEAUTIFUL just as the one that sent it to me. it just says it all
magregor

i am a poet my self amd the way you write tis captivates
Alexis

This poem was pretty good. i really liked it, it's one of those poems that inspire me to do what i feel is right. Thanks Alexis
Jake

Wonderfully elegant thoughts in these beautiful words. Thank you for sharing this.
Michelle

I really liked the poem. It actually expresses what I feel, and could never think of how to put into words. Great job, keep up the good work, would love to read more poems of this artist's.
marlene

very personal. and touching.
Larry

I have felt what you have written.
kelly

I love this poem!
KRISTEN

i like this poem very much! my complements to the author! i hope to see more of their poetry on this site!
kim

this is a very good poem you are very talented ans it'sgreat
Paul

Beautiful.
Steph

that is a beautiful poem. you expressed my exact emotions.
Baby

Keep it real gurl! I have nothing but love for you because you know what your talking about unlike 1/2 the people on these sites who read a poem, type it up, and put their name on it so they can take everyone elses credit. Keep up the hard work and let us know what's up every once in a while. Oh yeah, hit us up with a new poem every once in a while
Karen

This says so much in so few words. I love it.
lee

Beautiful conveyance of the most awesome feeling a person can experience.
Lora

This poem is so wonderfull in fully understanding the true imotion that goes through two people during the time that they make love. It is trully special.
Sammy

I thought this poem was wonderful. Short ,sweet and to the point. Was everything I was looking for to give to my new partner. Thank you.
ANGLE

I like this poem this is the way i feel about my chick
Carol

Beautiful!
mikie

thank you, my wife and I now know the name of "our place". RAPTURE,We visit there as often as possible, we hope to move there someday, forever. Money will not buy you a ticket there, only truth,honesty, trust and love for another. You pay nothing for truth,nothing for honesty,nothing for trust, if these cost you anything at all, then true love was never there. As Karin knows with those KEYS you may enter RAPTURE at your own free will. Karin thank you for your words of love.
MICHAEL

LOVELY POEM.IT SUMS UP HOW LOVERS FEEL KEEP IT UP
linda

brillant.i wish i could express myself like that
Rohit

Excellent Poem. I have been searching for a poem like this for a long time. Very well written, right to the heart.
Jim

The wonderful JOY it must be.to be able to express feelings so true and meaningful.Poets keep my soul alive.thank you,seems sooo inadaquite.but."Thank-You.
nicole

i really liked the poem becauseit gives meaning to sex.other people think of sex as nothing but something to go aroung givng it to people you just met, sort of like abusing the privilage. so i vote for this poem.
Johanna

This poem is beautiful. I wish I could put into words the way I feel as you did. Thank you and I hope it's alright to send this to my friend.
Bobbi

It was the most amazing poem I have read In a long while keep up the good work!
Melanie

this really touched me and i sent it to my soulmate to let it touch him too
Quixotik

I have not the talet that you so easily display. Suffice it to say that I was moved to tears.
Linda

great poem
Mun'eka

RIP YOUR HEART OUT.SERVE IT ON A PLATTER… COULD'NT EXPRESS WHAT THEY BRING OUT IN YOU ANY BETTER THAN YOUR POWERFUL WORDS
Michele

This was exciting to me. My boyfriend and I dwelled and swelled in it.
Camelia

It was very very very deep and beautifull :)
kristen

that was really deep and VERY SEXY!
christine

You can touch many people in many ways but this is the best!
Rani

So very beautiful and intimate..I sent it to my husband in Pakistan right away..thank you.
Wolfgang

I considered your poem one of the best pieces of blank verse I've ever read
trish

i love this poem.its very moving
Oscar

Nice job Karin. If you have another - maybe a continuation, I'd sure like to read it.
andrea

i like this poem alot . i really touched my heart
Raven

Wow! What a beautiful poem. How deeply sensual and true. I am not sure what i am voting for, but I know this poem is HOT!
Lana

Such beauty and depth. The words inspire a longing within me for my love.
Hank

Very nice-you should consider writting a book on your poems
michael

it was a great poem with alot of meaning.
antwanette

THIS POEM IS LOVELY. I LIKE TO HEAR POETRY ABOUT TWO BECOMING ONE.
brenda

I think this is a wonderful poem. I sent it to my husband
Ken

Hey yall, I really enjoyed this poem. I highly recomend it to anyone who like this Genre of poetry.
Cheyenne

I really liked your poem. It is very touching. I will give it to my lover tonight.
nikki

A VERY INTIMITE PIECE..SO WONDERFUL AND TRUE FOR TWO PEOPLE IN LOVE..SO TRUE FOR THE WAY I FEEL WITH MY GIRL..A***
Theresa

I could read this poem as if it were me doing, feeling, saying everything that has been written..
Carole

WOW!
retna

is very very sweet and beautiful, it tells about my feeling, true feeling, that my love for him is selfish.
Jeff

Yes.....that's what I want to say to her. Thank you.
Bosco

Wow, if only ALL poetry were like this !!!
Veronica

Oh! it's a lovely poem, so true.
Read

Often it is difficult to express our feelings for another person. It seems that we end up repeating the same words endlessly. It was a very pleasant surprise to find your poem> it expresses what I have wanted to share with another. Thank you for letting me use your words.
jennifer

Thanks Karen! Keep writing!
Shane

This was a very good peom. I enjoyed reading it tom my wife. Todah (Thank You)!
Amanda

Thank you for understanding that poetry doesn't have to rhyme to mean something...
Linda

very nice I can relate
Alison

Exellent, it's deep
Roos

very,very,nice,keep going on Karin I wish you all the best,en a lots of inspiration Roos - Belgium
Don

This poem has great feelings.
cinderella

thank you!you captured my feelings exactly!your poem inspired me!
CHARLES

short sweet and to the point.a vision saet to paper,thank you

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