This was a poem written in a letter to my lost love. I wanted her to see the truth that the smoke and the tears had been hiding for too long. I wanted her to see what I had been holding back for so long.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems
The Last Letter To Be
I exist now dreaming in reality, shades of deep reds and grays, Evolving at the speed of light As my third eye sees all, I bring my fingers to my lips and time stops I taste you. I ponder you and wallow in the memory of your scent and way. How you called me baby The way you made me laugh The way you touched my heart and made me believe Unable to stop, it seems too wonderful, but in the end there is not much but pain. I allow this for some time, then I awake and know that I am alive and the possibilities are endless. Wanting you to taste my soul and undeniably know that I am the one and we are one to conquer happiness together, unimaginably, the way you knew that we could and will if you say one word, Yes! Your fear. Your ego. Your pride. They protect and also hurt you, keeping you from what is rightfully yours, Love. If I had your heart again? Oh, the way I would touch it, nurture it and protect it My most sacred gift God wants what I want, he trusts me and knows my light is pure as he does you. Say the word once. The heavens will open up and the angels will sing in our praise Because we chose. Please don't be afraid, I am always here for you. I Love You. |
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40 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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JennaThis poem is amazing Truely a work of art
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valenciavery good
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joeyi really appreciate the poem its very meaningful.
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LILIATHIS PEOM REMINDA ME OF MY EX-BOYFRIEND HIS NAME WAS RAUL MAN I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM SO IT REALLY TOUCH ME OF MY HEART LIKE I KEEP SENDING HIM LETTERS SO I REALLY MISS HIM A LOT AND I REALLY WANTED TO TELL HIM HOW I FEEL ABOUT SO I REALLY LIKE THIS POEMS A LOT LIKE SAYING THE LAST LETTER.
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TashaThis is a lovely poem, it came straight from the heart, and it means something.
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MaryThis poem is really touching. It makes me think about my lover!
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BrandyWOW, what a tear jerker. This touched my heart in so many ways, I have been in love with a man for ten years but his ego, pride and everything else prevents us from being together
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valentinai voted it because it reminded me about my first love it is a beautifull poem if i could i would huge u and say thatnks for what u haelped me to remind. and every single thing i past trugh poped in my mind thanks
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silly goosethe last line says it all, always!
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KellyI really like this poem! Great Job!
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VANESSAMAN THIS IS ONE GOOD PEOM FOR UR LOVERS CAUSE I LOVE IT SO YAH I LIKE
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mirandathat poem was awsome!
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StephanieBeautiful! I loved this poem. It came completely from within. Thank you for the feeling.
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SandraThis poem is ever so beautiful. I still have goose bumps. Keep up the great work
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AngelaBeautiful
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PalmerThis moved me. I am going through a divorce that I truly don't want to happen, but am doing for her sake. This sums up many of my deep feelings and regrets without a cast of blame or anger. An outstanding work.
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palomitawell, i loved it when i read it. thats the same way i feel.
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nellythe poem was really nice! 1 to 5 . 5 being great!
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SharonFor me, it was the perfect poem for my "occasion". I liked the flow.
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nickthis is cool
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JenThis poem is great. It tells about my boyfriend and I alot. Im only 16 and hes 19 and we have been together for 4 yrs now. Off and on and we still keep breaking up but keep going back to each other. Hes the only love of my life. I dont know if he wants to move on or whatever but hopefully he will soon enough know that he will be missing alot if he leaves me for good. This poem is a wonderful poem!
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ShenandoahThat poem was really good. It reminds me of my fiancee Tom.
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AmintaLOVED IT!
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LynaeThis poem is beautiful..There was this guy in my life that I was madly in love with, and we ended up having to go our own way. But I would take him back if he would just say the words in a heartbeat..
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DionnaWow, does this poem speak to me. Just very recently, my boyfriend and I broke up. And like a previous person stated, we somehow keep going back to each other because we are unable to fully let go of the deep feelings we have for each other. Fear keeps him from staying but love keeps him coming back. If he would only say Yes! Thank you for saying what I've been trying to find the words to say!
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SHARITHIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. IT MAKE ME THINK OF A LOVE LOT.THAT I'D TAKE BACK IT A MINUTE.ALL HE HAD TO DA IS SAY THE WORD! I LOVE IT!
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SaraMy boyfriend of two years recently broke up with me and he sent me this poem about a week later to reassure that he still cared for me. The words fit our love for each other perfectly
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AlexisThis is the best poem i have read all year!
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annetteI was looking at all the poems and yours caught my eye. I thought it was very good. I have been in a relationship where the guy is scared because he went through a ugly divorce. We have been together for a year and a half. We have broke up 3 times, but we keep going back to each other. I have tried to start a new relationship and I thought it was going to be right. I keep thinking of this guy. I want to be with him always that is why your poem caught my eye. Thanks for your time das
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lisaone of the prettiest poems i have ever read
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LauraWonderful
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