I wrote this poem based on a real dream I had one night. My someone and I have not seen each other in ages, so I have kept these thoughts of him with me.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems

Sweet Dreams
Last night as I lay sleeping, love,
A vision came to me.
It was of you and I, my love,
A wondrous sight to see.

And in the dream I had, my love,
I reached and touched your face
I clasped your hand in mine, my love,
And felt your warm embrace.

I pressed my lips to yours, my love,
To taste your kiss so sweet
You held me for a minute, love,
In this moment that did fleet.

I wakened from the dream, my love,
With a thought of you that stayed
With me throughout the day, my love,
And never once did fade.
49 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
  • Patricia
    I loved the poem Sweet Dreams. I liked the way the poem expressed the dream. Also the way the poem flowed with ease. Very realistic to life. although was meant for a dream.
  • Casey
    I really loved this poem, it has touched me in a way no other has lately. My boyfriend is currently in Iraq fighting the war and we've been apart for far too long. I do dream of him and it's almost just like this poem. I think it flowed perfectly and had a great word choice, and it's not a cliche love poem. Thank you for sharing.
  • Jessica
    This poem was AMAZING! it reminds me soo much of my love. and wow. what else can i say besides it's truely AMAZING!
  • sherri
    very nice.
  • Stephanie
    I love this poem, it is wonderful! It can symbolize a love that is safe or one that has ended! On a scale from 1 to 10. I give it a 10!
  • Cristina
    I love this poem this make me remember of one of my crushes I had and how I dream every night.
  • jodi
    this poem really got to me,it was the best poem i have ever heard in my life.
  • Jennifer
    It was a wonderful poem that really mant something to me. Thanks!
  • em
    i love this poem it is soooo sweet that i sent it to my boy
  • delvon
    i like your poem elizabeth it touch me
  • kate
    i thought the poem was beautiful, it touched my heart kate
  • Wanda
    Wonderful poem, after reading I picked up the phone and called my special love for 16 years.
  • Kristina
    i really loved this poem it put in to words what i feel of my someone he is a someone i can not be with but always think of i love him dearly i sent him a copy of it he loves it also
  • Thomas
    rigth in my heart let us have some more of the same
  • Leslie
    I like it! And you are so sweet princess today. GOOD JOB!
  • susan
    it was good
  • portia
    i loved this poem, it was so touching, i could actually imagine that happening
  • Melissa
    I think your poem was really good
  • pam
    I thought the poem described exactly how someone in love feels. Kind of like the movies.
  • maria
    Nice Nice poem. perfect. Keem em coming
  • nekia
    I like this poem about sweet dreams and if sounded very good and I hope that she keeps up the work.
  • Lilly
    i luv this poem because it helps to set the feeling i have for my love in which i barely see because we live to far from each other. this is also a good poem because it can be interpreted in many way's. it could be death, breakup, long distance or even secret love type relationships. i give her an a+
  • Vesa
    This really touched me. I'm out of words. Sooo beautiful.
  • Dj
    I love this poem! :)
  • Mona
    love it was a touching and great poem
  • tanya
    that poem is just so beautiful! great job!
  • foggy
    i admire dis poem 100%!
  • Ebony
    Elizabeth this was one of the most beautiful poems I ever read kepp up the good work girl!
  • Alex
    Iloved this poem and in one way or another thats what is going on in my life
  • Stacy
    I just wanted to say that this was a really great poem.I know what it is like to not be with your love.My boyfriend is in the military in Afghanistan fighting.It really touched my heart.
  • Mohamed
    No comment ,, what can I say .. it's perfect .
  • Mary
    Excellent! Wanted a poem for my loved one, and this aid exactly what I wanted it to say!
  • hoap
    lovely,bu. keep dreaming. they do come tru.
  • robert
    this reminds me so much of me and catherine because it's what i say to her all the time each nite and as i write this she is in america and it's nice that i can send a poem to her about sweet dreams
  • Julie
    As many others that have commented about this poem I can also agree that the poem touches a spot in my heart. I have had a dream like that but was never able to put into words as you have. I am sending this to my fiance who is away in the army. Keep up the good work!
  • Jessica
    This is a wonderful poem! My love lives about 5 hours away from me and I miss him so much. This poems describes excately how I feel about him and how much I want to be together forever!
  • Liza
    Great poem..
  • Tara
    I loved this poem..as soon as i read it i sent it to my love.it was so touching..to be able to send him a little reminder of what its like to fill my mind at night with dreams,,,
  • troy
    a simple poem that ignites all the right moods. I really like this alot and it inspires me to continue to write. I am a novice of 3 months nows and this helps me keeps going. thank
  • Catalina
    Yo girl u got some talent . U can write nice poems just like me.Yo just keep up what ya doing .
  • Lori
    i think this poem really toches peoples hearts because it really touches mine. and i read it to my cousin and she loved it so much.
  • Aangel
    I write poems to and this one touched my heart. I loved it keep up the great work!!!!
  • Robert
    thank you for sharing you r dream i have had the same one and did not know how to write it down thank you so much again for sharing excellent job
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  • Munchkin
    Very good writin. Me and my boyfriend broke up a week ago today and I still have strong feelings for him and I sent it to him.
  • Shaylan
    My husband is away in the Army, and all I have of him right now is my dreams. This poem is beautiful!
  • Kathleen
    I really liked this poem. I have dreamed this dream many times.
  • Jan
    This is beautiful It's what I've been looking for to send to my special someone.
  • Jezebel
    This is a really sweet poem...very touching...my love..hehe

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