#20 Why Do I?
The feeling of obligation is something that is common in most relationships. I know that I've been through it and now that I look at it, it was because of that feeling that I was hurt the most. I gave so much that I can never get back and I regret that so much. I just didn't want to lose him. I still don't understand the feelings that I felt, as well as the reason why I did some of the things I did, but I guess some things are suppose to remain a mystery.
This poem originally was published in Sad Poems
Why Do I?
Why do I smile at the sound of your voice? Why do I let you take over me as if I had no choice? Why do I let you touch me in places never touched? Why do I like to have you around so much? Why do I melt at the tenderness of your kiss? Why do I feel like I could live forever like this? Why do I put my heart in your hands? Why do I answer to your every demand? Why do I tell you leaving me is not your wrong? Why do I let you know with out you I'm not quite as strong? Why do I take you back even though I know it's not right? Why do I feel like I should please you by not putting up a fight? Why do I care about you even though you hurt me? Why do I turn my head from what's plain reality? Why do I try to hide from what is true? Why do I still have these feelings for you? |
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1999
Liza Marie
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126 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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AshleyWOW! This might be the best poem I've read in a while. I mean. I couldn't love this poem anymore if I tried. Good job!
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JuniorIt does speak truth and very well written but remember u people who feels as if that special some1 has control still over U that: if u cannot find tranquility within urself, it is useless to seek it elsewhere. Truth!
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mariaI really like this poem. It hit me because I was in a relationship like the poem states. Why putting up wit it I don't know.
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karenthis poem is so touching it reminds me of this guy cuz this poem is so so true
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PORTIATHI IS THE SAME QUESTION THAT I`VE BEEN ASKING MYSELF BUT THE IS ONLY ONE ASNWER &IT IS SIMPLY BECAUSE OF LOVE THIS POEM REALLY ENCOURAGES ME A LOT &I REALLY REALLY LIKE IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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KKThanks so much for writing this poem it really expresses what a person does when they fall in love.
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ShaunaLiza, I really like your poem because I ask myself those questions everyday. -Shauna-
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Lesliei can relate to your poem like you wouldnt believe. There is this one guy that always comes back into my life when i am just getting happy again and he make me question why do i everytime. Thank you for writing what i couldnt put into my own words.
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KatePERFECT. my ALL TIME favorite. i feel exactly the same way . confused. i love it good job.
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MartyI absolutely love this poem it is exactly the feelings that I am going through right now. My head knows one thing would be best but my heart is still in control. How do you break this cycle. This is something I have never had to deal with before, how can anyone have that much of a hold on your emotions? Great work on capturing the pain of this situation. Keep writing!
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RachelI really loved this poem. I went thru the same thing. It took me half a yr to stop thinkin bout him. I can reli relate to what you're going/you went thru.
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Cassiewow this poem so describes how i feel. but for all u girls dont let ur man do thast.
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aileen0h yeah. its t00 fine. i L0ve it sweetie! it reminds me 0f my ex bf. i really like it! keep it up. (n_n)
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jessicahey that was a great poem
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angiethis is a very good poems it remind me of a friend that my class has lost he was supposed to be here but it's not worth it I miss him alot I'm sad and sometimes in depression.
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shaxshaxleyThis poem is realy true and I'm sure it'll touch poeples life.
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JamieThis poem has given me encouragement with the decision I made to leave the kind of lifestyle it was reguarding. I hope it will help other do the same.
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flakisi love this poem cuz is da same thing that is happening right now with my boyfriend is sad to be like that with someone and it hurt when they hurt you knowing that you love them alot and yoo would do anything for them, i love this poem cuz is something truth of my like, keep this poem up okay
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yudithi love this poem a lot, everything dat say's is really good, it remain's me of my boyfriend cuz i knoe he knoes dat he as control over me cuz like everything dat the poems say's das like me tellin him, is bad when sum 1 as u like dat cuz they hv me like dat allready n is sad cuz u get hurt 2 much, we need 2 b strong but when we get in love we r weak n we show them dat enywayz i just wanted 2 say this poem touch inside of me n i got sad but i di love this poem .
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KarenHiWhen I read your poem 95%of is how I feel!
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miriahwow i can almost relate!
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SpaineI really could reflect on your poem. it happened to me when i was still in first year. keep up the good work. God Speed
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jenniferThis is a really good poem, Keep up the good work !
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SarahWOOW!that was so so great,i just fell in love with it,i went threw the same thing,i write poems-alot-but there not as good as your if i may say. wow,i hope theres more of your poems,cause i would really REALLY love to read them,there probly as good as this one!well keep of you fantastic work,-love your poems
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StaceyI Must say that my hat goes off to the person who wrote this poem. this poem is basically my life in a nutshell. why can't i let him go? thats the question i always ask myself. i love him even more even though he'd doin me wrong
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MuzicI loved this poem. Those questions I ask myself every day. Keep up the excellant work!
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shylai think this poem was awsome i have had somethin similiar to this poem happen to me my x bf cheated on me yet i still have feeling for him i feel as if i cant love agian
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TeenaVery nice. too many people have been there. Including myself.
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leylaThis poems is soo great, I loved it and I hope others too, when I read it its like its about me.
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Destinythis poem is very touching and is one of the best that i have read because it describes what most girls go through when they find there first love.
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ernestinayou know why cuz love stinks! when you love someone you give alittle part of your soul to them and once they have that part you can never get it back. it is theirs forever. i know because i was supposed to get married recently and my fiance hurt me beyond words but no matter what even though we are not together i still love him because love stinks! any way this was a great poem and just hang in there! always smile tina
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Billyou ever real something that seems like just words. but when your done those words have so much meaning. i understand your feelings in this poem
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steffi love this poem to death. itssums up how i feel about this one guy that i tsill cant get over, he broke my heart but even still i'd take him back any day knowing he'd probably hurt me again.
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Alesthats the best poem Its really touching you should email me sum time Im still a young writer as my mom says but your poems so bueatifull it made me cry
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Luthat poem was nice. i really liked it
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deidreI loved your poem! and i feel the same way you are feeling. so keep up the good poems.
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hannahthis poem was very good it reminds me of a relationship im in right now
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starur poem my god your really good i no how you feel in it. The love of my life is the same way i have to do everything for him. Juat to let you no i have went through this for 8 years im 28 dont be as stupid as me get out be for its to late. Well good bye
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MonyaI think the poem is stunning! But the question is always "why" isn't is?
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VictoriaThis poem is a very well written and i liked it a lot.
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EricaThis poem touched me, because it's something we all go through time after time again.
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JessieI loved your poem! You hit the spot so hard I cried! Keep up the incredible work sweetie!
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KaeI really like this poem it says a lot about the way I feel.
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SHAROBINTHIS POEM IS VERY GOOD KEEP IT UP.
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DevanI loved this poem and i could relate so much it felt like i wrote it
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SamanthaI think this poem is so sweet, so cool, I really like it, since the moment I read it I remember my own life, cause there is a boy who makes me feel just like it, and I really don't know why I still love him, just like the poem says. The thing is that I really love the poem, I think its one of the most beautifull poems I have ever read
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ToriI liked your poem. I go though the samething with my man.
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Pamelai hope to read more poety from you in the future. you are extreamly talented and it would be nice to read your so elloquently written thoughts.
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kristyyour poem is fantastic. i guess you just didn't want to lose him. you afraid to do anything that can cause you to lose him.
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unknowni fell in love with your poem. it is EXACTLY how i feel for my ex-boyfriend. i think you have some talent in writing. dont ever give up on it! believe in yourself. it was very touching!
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MichaelaYour poem hit me like a brick. I wonder about those exact questions. I miss My ex boyfriend sooo much, but why? Why do I love him so? He hurt me, so why do I still care? I needed help and you gave it to me. Thank you.
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angel girlgirl you keep it real keep on writing *
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shellit raely realy good i like it lots
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leithis is a really sweet and touching poem! i like it.
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VerneThis poem is the best that I have read so far. I have been looking for poems that I can relate to. and this is the one! Thank You!
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Beckyi love your poem so much when i read i could totally relate to what you were sayin. i mean you wrote a really good that i think will touch a lot of peole!
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Pamwow. this poem is soooo much how i feel. i mean. i cry when i think about how true this is. i have a person i feel the same way about and i dont know why i let him do this to me. you know who you are.
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Lorithis poem is so me it is how i feel most of the time it was a great poem.
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bobReally it touched my heart. Its everyones feelings who are in love but cant be expressed as u did in the poem.
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Ashleythis is one of the best poems of all times. i copyed it and put it on my wall. i can't wait to read more of your poems.
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Ashleythis is the best poem ever
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nikkigood poem it reminds me of someone
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jennyvery very good
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NieYour poem touched my heart, it was like being me. i ask the same questions, I was hurt and now lost in life. I just can not find a way to forget it all Your poem is beautiful.
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Sarahi really liked this poem its so true
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minazu have written a truly wonderful poem, yr poem has so much of pain in it. keep up the good work.
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ChrisThis poem is the most Beautiful poem i ever read!
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rabbiliza marie, do you know me? have you been spying on me? 'cause you took the words right out of my heart. i should have told someone this a long time ago but i didn't and things got messy. it's beautiful.
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Darcyi reallly felt where she was coming from in this poem.
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chuinthis is a beautiful poem.. maybe it's true that maybe somethings are suppose to remain in mystery ..
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KellyOne of the best poems I have read!
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StaceyI have been reading a lot of peoms, and alls I have to say, is I love the way you rhyme, and a lot of people can relate to that poem. Keep up the great work!
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serenaThis poem is unbelievable! i can relate to it so well! you put into words EXACTLY what i am going through!
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JanetI love your poem because i was jut dumped like a week ago and i still love huim i still listen to him i still do what he tell me to and i should stop ringing him up but i still love him lots and the poem is like my life and that is why i love it!
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puseis a really a good poem !
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SherinaThat was " d bomb ". You really blowed me away this time. That was a really,really good poem and it is also true. Words can't describe how that poem affected me when i first read it. Good luck in more writing and maybe u can give me some pointers, someday.
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meyup.this one is amazing! this is just how i feel.:o)
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KwankamonI THINK IT'S SUCH A COOL POEM! AND NOW I HAVE TO STUDY ABOUT THE LITERATURE AND OF COURSE "ABOUT POEM" I THINK THAT YOU CAN USE A LOT OF ELEMENTS IN POEM ESP. END-RHYME AND REPETITION, I LOVE IT!
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kellyi really liked this poem, it relates to me in soo many ways,i have been with this guy for 2 and half years on and off and i would do anything for him, if he cheats on me i would get upset but i would eventally take him back he is my first love
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TIN2XWow, this poem really got to me! If only he could read it... Great poem!
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jenniferthis is realy good
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AnonymousOh my gosh I love this poem sooooooooooooo much!
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Cassyit does not always seem that way this kind of break up is in movies not in life its over rated by friends......sorry i wish i had the same point of veiw
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BreeOmg! this poem describes what I am feeling in every way.. Your words are in my mind..
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ArodI really liked your poem, it was very well written. It's one of those poems that i could relate to.
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katiewow that poem was excellent it definietly had some feelings that went into it. that was a great poem that is so true in so many ways and i am sure alot of people can indentify with a situation similar to the one in your poem. good job it was an excellant poem i loved it
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cynthiathis is a great poem!
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stephi loved it
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crystallynni really can relate to that poem. i am engaged to a man who's mother always disrespects me and he usually let's her do it cause she is deaf. this is a poem i will definitly make my fiance' read. thanks..
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aleenthis poem is so true and i loed it so much it tells me feelings right on the dot and i dont no y i do those thing either but i just to and your poem has put my feelings in to word so good and i jus had to vote for your poem it was really good and i hope that you keep on writing you are going to make some really good poems this was was really every good keep on writing and i hope to see more of your poems i write poems to and yours was grate keep on wrinting good job
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JENNIFERI LOVE YOUR POEM IT IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER HEARD. YOUR POEM MAKES YOU THINK A LOT ABOUT YOUR RELATIONSHIP
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NurrashidahIt's totally related to me. I feel like crying.
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KAKThis Poem was really good. I can really relate to it. I have this friend that I really like and it is like he is always doing something to hurt me. But everytime he hurts me he always knows what to do to make everything back to normal. I have no clue why I do it, I don't think I could leave with out him tho! VERY GOOD POEM!
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Ottothis is a very beautiful poem and so true, it is a question we should all ask ourselves when heartbroke, even if we find no answer.
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enderthis poem echos all the questions i have so recently asked myself
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NALIYAi waslistening to the music of SORRY SEAMS TO BE THE HARDEST WORD..this poem made me feel this nice pain in my heart..it is true but i still ask WHY? this poem is true
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NicoleThis poem is so true, each and every word of it.
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crystali really like this poem because i can relate to what the author is saying. i have been in the exacy same spot.
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sanjayIt's a mirror, I can see myself through it.
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Abyit moved me..it's so true in may ways...
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Beccawow.
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CherylThis poem was wounderful. I have someone that I love and I was looking for a poem so send him that said exactly what I wanted to say to him and this poem is exactly what I was looking for. Thank you!
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KristineWoohoo... Two thumbs up!!!
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RaindropsWOw, I loved the way that was put together! excellent stuff! keep it coming!
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aliciaI really thought that this poem was a true and toughing thing. This has happened to me before and i just wanted to say keep it up you are a good writer.
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sharynit touche my heart.
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JohannaI really loved your poem! It describes every feeling I have for my boyfriend! I was so amazed how the poem seemed to read my mind.It said everything that I wanted to say but didn't know how! keep up with the beautiful writing!
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DiamondnetteIt is a wonderful poem that really hits the people in the heart.
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NatashaThat poem was soooo great! And it was true! You did a good job at expressing those feelings that so many of us feel or have gone through.
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kiaI love the poem and I understand completely
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minkaHEY DARL!!! I THINK MANY OF US CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM INCLUDING ME. LOVE IS JUST A GAME TO SOME AND LOVE IS EVERYTHING TO OTHERS, WE ALL HAVE TO LEARN TO DO WHAT IS GOING TO MAKE US HAPPY AND SAFE. THIS POEM IS AMAZING AND WELL DONE. lOVE ALWAYS AND FOREVER.
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RosaI loved this poem. It says it all.I would give this poem an easy 10. Thanks for sharing.
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krystalI love this pome so much!!!!
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TaraPlease vote this high! Its soo good! It also happened to me. Please give it the best you can to let this poem win
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JennaYour poem was great. Me and my husbend are having a hard time now. And I loved your poem
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c.i like your poem. it is very touching. its so real.
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EmilyI think that this poem is so totally true about relationships in general, also it could be about someone that you like a lot and they don't like you, they're basically using you. I really enjoy this poem and i can relate to it very much.
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AdamThis poem is just like the feelings I have for my current girlfriend. She tends to have me head over heels for her and she realizes this. She takes advantage of it and treats me wrong yet I still love her. I cant help the feeling and I believe this poem with credit to Liza Marie will be sent to my girlfriend! Thanks!
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LaRindaI really enjoyed reading this poem.
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Aprilsuch breath taking poetry.i love how emotions are expressed.full fledged feelings were put into this.gosh, what love am i with such work as this!
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RyanIf anyone has ever been in love with someone who toyed with there emotions this is the perfect poem
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DionaThis is a really good poem
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CandiceOMGOSH! this is a very very cool poem!
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Shaunathis poem was magnificent! To someone who has also been in a similar situation this touched the heart! Thanks for sharing it!
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Angelthis is sooo sad. you know, the answer is: because we love to be loved. that's why, cause we're human, and we have the need to be loved, that's why sometimes we do things we wouldn't just to hold on to that love. you're talented, i wish i had your talent! keep up the good work, and I'M SO USING THIS POEM. it's just perfect!
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jennieI love this poem i can really understand you
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