#56 Losing Yet Again

• GRACE
  Katie,your poem is simple,short but very skilly written. I liked every bit of it!
• azu
  This is so me. So much like what I'm feeling right now. Sometimes, I think of why it's too hard for me to find the love of my life, why do I always have to end up broken-hearted? Why do I have to endure this pain?
• Kesha E.
  I loved your poem it was very good it I go through the same thing getting and losing everytime
• Missy
  as confusing as the poem is , i understand it & love it !
• lubna
  although it is very short,but it has deep meanings. i can feel it quite well
• talia
  . I'm sorry
• Jessica
  OH IM LOVING THIS POEM. THIS REMINDS ME OF MY RELATIONSHIPS.
• janelle
  so short but yet the poem is very true.
• requel
  Wow. Amazing. I love it. It's perfect. I can invision it and it is so true.
• THELICIA
  The story of my life!
• Jordann
  i think this is an awesome poem. its so short yet its screaming out many different words. GREAT JOB on expressing your feelings through yet so little words. i think its very touching and its worth a thousand meanings. its wonderful
• lauren
  this was a wonderful poem. it describes just how i feel. at my graduation i saw a guy that i havent seen in 5 years and yet, i talked to him for about 10 minutes and then he left again. i long to see him again, i cant get him off my mind and this poem says it all, once i love a guy, he's gone in a split second.
• jc
  nice poem. one of the best 4 me
• kelly
  i really like this pome it is so me.
• schy
  even though it was short it was very very meangingful, at least to me. great job!
• Kristen
  I like it. It is right to the point!
• Prakruti
  Exactly my feelings right now.
• CECILIA
  i thought the poem was very good, it tells all lot about how love relly is,all though it was short i enjoyed it very muck and i will share it with my friends.
• sillysilla
  i love it it shourt and to the point iv been there a lot
• Lydz
  I thought this poem was awesome! It's short but each word is so deatiled it's like it has 1000 words! And i can definatly can see where you are coming from with the whole sand thing :)
• DJ
  Awsome analegy with the sand. Cuz really, thats how it felt like. She was there, so perfect then all of a sudden lost and i could never bring it back.
• Shane
  A great poem. short but poignant
• vivek
  awesome, awesome, awesome and awesome !
• ronnie
  one strong feeling came inside me when i read this poem i dunno what kind of feeling it is but something is happened so finally!
• devona
  This reminded me of the one that slipped through my hands, but truely never had.
• LaShanda
  This poem explains what I have been trying to understand all of my life. Thanks for putting into words for me. I really appreciate this poem.
• james
  it is a great poem
• Ash
  This poem, even though quite short but gives a very powerful meaning of lost love. It's very good
• Pam
  Sounds like my life!
• chris
  this poem is one of the shortest but its definetely one of the greatest keep up the good work i know what your going through. maybe i should post up some of my work here. again great job and keep it up your doing hells good
• ekta
  hey. jus found d right words. wat my life iz all about. jus broke up vid my best frnd. n its jus killin me softly. AMAZIN POEM.
• K.
  i absolutely loved this poem. i felt it deep down. i would have to lie if i didn't say it brought a tear to my eye. this is exactly how i feel, ur poem related to me so much and yet said so little. awesome poem!
• Mare
  This poem is really good. It's really descriptive and I can feel what you're saying. It's hard to write short poems that mean a lot and this poem really does it.
• lizzi
  wow this poem is amazing i jus split up wid mi bf who i truely love and ur poem explains how im feelin! its gr8 i had to hold bak the tears , thank u x
• Ed
  is my life
• mimi
  it's simply speaks the truth. =)
• ash
  Even though it is short, these words express feelings very deep. i think it is a very good poem!
• Diana
  i really liked this poem because it reminded me of another love that i lost and i just keep falling in love with the wrong people
• Kayla
  I loved your poem, it had a lot of felling in it! Good job! Keep on Keepen' on!
• Megz
  I love it, sweet and short. details just clutter it up. u explained ecxactly wat i was feeling in a few words.
• Sheena
  i find this poem very nice and love is often like sand as u said very nice.
• LORRI
  EXCELLENT! RIGHT TO THE POINT!
• Courtney
  This poem is great! It is the story of my life.
• Vantrell
  i loved it!
• Karen
  i love it
• amanda
  i have been wheer u are so many times. this was the best poem i have ever read. its simple and to the point. you were hurt and u didnt need to write a book about it. u put it simple and to the point! i loved it!
• Hiral
  Excellent poem, explains everything in just a few words, I know how it is, cuz i felt it too, the same way, Lost it again.
• ayda
  so soft as sand really. choosing words in right way. short but give the meaning.
• Mini
  I love it. Period
• rae
  This sounds just like me and my X. I wish that it weren't so true but you summed it up so well. Thank you
• Becca
  I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM. THANK YOU FOR HELPING ME EXPLAIN HOW I FEEL
• Chaz
  I think that this poem would mean alot to the poet because it sounds like it came from the heart
• Teresa
  i love this poem.
• Rich
  This is sooo right ! Beautiful ! x
• Megan
  This poem is me. And to who wrote this I know how you feel.
• Nate
  This is too true in my life. This always happens to me and im so glad someone could put it into such beautiful words.
• PATTY
  YOUR POEM ROCKS IT'S DESCRIBING MY LOVE LIFE IN 4 SHORT LINES
• suzi
  first love is the purest and lasts the longest in your heart
• kIM
  A short poem that couldn't be any closer to the truth.
• Barb
  This was the poem I needed to express myself. I am not a poet and never will be- thank-you for your words!
• Ashley
  the poem was short sweet and simply, yet it held a lot of meaning. beautiful poem.
• parul
  very true..love is like a shifting dune played upon by the winds of our separate destinies!
• elaine
  Perfect. Exact. It's my life in 4 sentences. Thank you.
• Joel
  This poem is as a song often sang by so many.... So true
• CARLA
  I LOVE THIS POEM, FOUR SHORT LINES TELL MY WHOLE LIFE.
• AMANDA
  sand always runs through my hands too. it is rough andgrainy from love
• Chelsea
  I think it was a great peom
• Jaman
  This poem is sad.... and it is like me and my girl friend...
• amit
  A VERY NICE SHORT AND GOOD POEM
• Peter
  This was a really beautifull poem. Not many words are needed to say what you fell but still cover all your thoughts.
• Mandy
  you are so right!!
• Paul
  It makes you think what is LOVE
• chris
  I know exactly what your talking about. Thats happened to me more times than I care to remember. The poem is simple yet truthful.
• kylie
  it is the most truthfull and sweet poem i have every read