#10 If These Walls Could Talk

• montse
  this rocks
• eela
  this poem is really touching and inspires you to keep going and keep believing if you are really going through hell
• mandy z
  (CLAP,CLAP,CLAP,CLAP)Beautifull. I must say you are talented and bleesed. i've been there. i just hope you knew how to let it go,and move on. i wish you a life of sweet pleasure,kindness. and love much success in all you do. for some women . one hit is to many & for others . too many is never enough. its crazy . right
• Lamis
  I absolutely loved your poem. Maybe it's because emotions are so true and sincere. I loved the poem very much especially,the second stanza. I find the sequence of emotions in it,so powerful and absolutely true. First, loneliness,fear,screaming for help,tearful cries. This logic sequence generates a sense of reality in the reader. As a whole,the poem is very beautiful and very expressive and that is the reason I find it amazing,and so will everybody who reads it. Well done:)
• hayley
  it sounds just exactly what happen to me when i went through depressionand now i just want to say it was really good
• maria
  really good
• jho
  The poem really touched the innermost part of me. It was like reading my own story. Each line has an impact to me that I almost burst into tears. Somehow, the author and I have felt the same emotion. Congratz! The poem was great!
• marcie
  wow that was really touching that was really good Chriselle keep up the good work i hope to see more of your poems
• Dener
  I loved it Sounds like my life.
• Hannah
  Yay!Im so glad Im not the only one who realizes that even after being beaten and cursed, we are not alone. ^_^ Ur poem really made me happy.
• Emily
  This is a gorgeous poem and sincerely touched me. Thank you very much for writing such a profound piece.
• Lucy
  OMG I LOVE IT! it just inspired me to write a poem =]
• J
  The peom was very good -- Made me think keep up the good work
• Ellie
  Wow. All I can say is wow. You are truly gifted. I loved it, I connected to it. It made me think of my dead cousin. I started crying. Thank you, for saying what so many of us cannot.
• Amber
  Thus poems awsume but sad
• verity
  christelle this poem u wrote just describes everything im going through right now in my life. the pressure my family is putting on me. and i have just sent this to someone i my family who was close to me but now does not want to hear a word from me!thank u. love ya verity
• suzanna
  its a lovely poem n so touchy. good!
• Christina
  Loved your poem!
• Jessica
  i just loved this poem it was like you were writing it to me!
• mustafa
  thanks for this poem, it was song of my heart
• CRYSTAL
  I THINK THIS POEM IS HELPFUL TO THOSE WHO ARE HAVING TROUBLE AT HOME
• jenny
  thhis poem is so nice i like its meaning ii wish hat walls could talk to cause sometimes ppl dont even understand y i do things and man i just wish therer was an antidote
• Sylver
  This Poem is soo great. It is sooo true. i really loved it
• tammy
  after fighting depression and anxiety for years, I've finally been diagnosed with bipolar. this poem was awesome! it brought tears to my eyes. it expressed how i feel much of the time but can't explain to others. so i'm sending it to my family in hopes they will understand my Darkness and pain at times. thank you so much for those words.
• Bay
  wow. U have talent my friend. This made me realize that everyone has molments of sadness and lonleiness. Good job.
• Maurice
  This poem really touched me, I'm not going to lie and say I ALMOST cried when I know that I DID cry because it reflected my life perfectly and made me realize some things I never realized before about myself.
• hannah
  this poem touched me a lot
• mel
  this poem was great. i feel so alike in so many ways but as your poem says i found god and he helped me god bless it was great! i loved it love to read more god bless and all that wat
• jasmine
  I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM,MY MOM IS GOING THRU SOMETHUNG RIGHT NOW,IF SOMETHING HAPPEN TO HER I HOPE SHE WILL WATCH OVER ME
• Beth
  This poem really touched me. I cryed while i was reading it. Now, it may sound crazy but it really have meaning to me about what i'm going throuth right now. Even thought i have a lot of freinds i never tell them how i really feel about things i just don't think they will ever understand me. So everytime i'm sad i write a peom or read some from the internet and i never found a poem like this that ever fit me like this before. I love it!
• kera
  i love this poem it kinda makes me think only if only.
• Sammie
  Hey I thought this poem was very beautiful. It went straight to my heart. Well thanks for letting me read it. !
• sadie
  If you only knew how much this poem means to me even know i dont know you sometimes its nice to know im not the only one who happens to feel like that!
• Karen
  This poem made me cry. I am going through a very difficult break up, and the poem sums up exactly how I'm feeling right now.
• angel
  i think that is true because god is always with you
• gabrielle
  This was a very out spoke poem to me because it came from the heart. I feel that way because when i read this poem I COULD RELATE TO IT ALOT AT MY POINT OF LIFE NOW
• helena
  This is a great poem that probably everyone has felt this way at least once in their life!
• sina
  i loved the way that you put the reality of life in this poem.
• Anne
  This poem is truly amazing! The words are beautifully spoken! But I am so glad that my walls couldnt talk, for the world wouldnt possibly be able to comprehend the things that my "mother" did to me.
• Adriana
  This poem is really beautiful. I really like it, and I'm not such a big fan of poetry. :)
• avianca
  that was perfect thats what ive been trying to say for a long time
• Yvette
  this poem really touched me. i mean its like it was written for me. so i could see it and know that other feel the same way i do and that im not alone. i like writting poems and this one is going to keep me going through me poems. so to the author i would like to say great job. this is something to cherish and hold dear to your heart and be proud of.
• Elizabeth
  This poems feels like my life and lets me know that I am not alone. Thanks for the encouragement! Elizabeth
• Felicia
  Thank you so much. I do alot of poetry myself but this poem hit it right on the dot. I have been having alot of hard times lately and no one seems to care or beleave how hard it has been for me. This poem says it all.
• Cindy
  I really think that the poem was just so moving. It was like it read my mind!
• michelle
  I love this pome so much and it touch me and it makes me think how my ex-boyfrined did me wrong and well it makes me sad
• SUM
  This poem was very well written and is very true. I just think you should be told, even though its a very not to say odd but different topic and I'd just like to say BRAVO!
• allison
  i loved this poem i just got saved last weekend and your poem relly tuched me i even printed it out. this is one of the best poems i have eveer heard it kinda goes with my life right now well g2g allison
• Amanda
  i can also relate to this poem and it makes you want to get up and say something.
• angel
  this is a great poem. i write a lot too and i hope to see more like this one!
• jake
  yo yo, this poem was just yo cool
• elva
  omg i loved this poem so much! its so true!
• Marie
  this poem is so touching! i love the style it is written in and how you can tell the author really got into writing her poem with the amazing details!
• lynette
  i loved your poem it is so good it reminds me alot about my life.
• Amy
  I love this poem. It akwardly explains how I've felt lately even though I don't even know why. I LOVE YOUR POEM!
• Deanna
  this is 1 of the best poems ive heard so far! thats because cause i can relate to it, probably as much as u. except for the last part.
• Kai
  Yes there is one! I was very touched by this poem cause it descirbes me and how I feel! Then It got me thnking what if the walls could talk??? Then if they did. they will tell everybody the same thing described in your poem! You are a really great poet and should be recognized by the world! not on the computer!
• manda
  wow! this poem was great. it really touched me.
• Pinka
  Thank You. You have spoken what my mind,heart,and words can't say. ^-^ Thanks.
• Nicole
  This poem was truly touching, keep up the good work!
• octavia
  the poem was very touchin. and sad but at least it made it made a point.
• faiza
  It's a perfect poem
• T.J.
  we are one in the same man. i feel ya. Try getting outside and just look at nature and think about it,thats what i do. Great poem.
• pauline
  This is the greatest in the world. Something inside me just blossomed like a beutiful saint of the great god. my excperiences were so the same as the masterpiece. i cried so hard when i read it because it related sooo deeply. the children at school bully but the poem evapourates my problems. BLESS YOU THANK YOU LOVE YOU
• Tiffany
  I loved this poem. I know how it feels to think your alone,but you've got to remember God is always with you & is not going to make you go through life on your own.
• Felicia
  I LOVE IT! IAM JUST NOW REALLY GETTIN INTO THE LORD AND I THINK IT WAS GREAT THANK YOU, I HAVE COME FROM MY DARKER DAYS NOW TOO !
• bri
  I love this poem it was really good! I hope there are more like this 1
• Sasha
  Beautiful
• EDMEE
  THIS IS ALL ME IT'S JSUT HOW I FEEL THIS WAS SO BEAUITFUL WODERFUL AND GOD GIVE YOU THIS TO SHARE YOU GIFT WITH OTHERS I LOVE IT I WLL GIVE IT A 20
• silla
  wow i relate to this poem so much. this poem helps me to realize im not the only one who feels alone. its great!
• Irsis
  Its a very inspiring poem.
• Middleton
  I loved the poem. My mother passed away in April and the poem described exactly how i feel. I want to tell the writer to keep up the good work and Thanks for writing the peom.
• kimberley
  that was realy cool i feel exactly the same as this poem has said if only walls could talk then wed noone would eva b lonly good poem keep it up.
• Lern
  been der before and I knew the feeling
• Sheila
  OMG! where should i beging this poem was amasing and incredibly well written. i have no words to express how wonderful this was!
• ciara
  I love this poem , it touch me in differents ways.
• katie
  this is exactly how i feel. i loved it. this poem reminds me alot about my self. you did so good writing this
• lea
  It is a very good poem thank so much for a nice poem. keep it up.
• Ivy
  This is one of the best poems I've heard in a long time. I felt like I had written the poem, like it was about me. Exactly, there wasn't one thing different than what I'm going through. Great job! I am going to paste this in my notebook.
• Laura
  I really liked that poem because of the reference to the demons haunting at night. I can relate to that. P. S. a reference to God is always awesome when its a positive one.
• shahbaz
  Its really nice poem, impressive
• Demishea
  thats was a great poem and if my walls could talk they would say the same thing.
• Silent
  Great poem! it reminds me of how i feel at certain times in my life.
• tiffany
  i appsolutly loved that i can trully relate 2 that it sounds like something that i've been going through recently i've been going through madd stuff so im slowing coming out of depression. and about the part with demons nice touch we've all gone through stuff we dont like or done something we regret and i opened the door 2 something really demonic but i am also slowing coming out of that and what i wanna say with all of this is that your poem really touched me and keep up the good work
• Cheyne
  this is truer than most people know. and it really takes apart in me.
• jenny
  i loved your poem it was so cool i printed it out and gave it to a firend and she loved the poem alot so thank you for writing this poem and it was awsome so keeep up the goood work ok bye
• sherry
  this poem is wonderful it spoke the words i always wanted to say , but could never find ,, i really enjoy this very much thank you
• amra
  i just really liked the poem.
• Amanda
  I love this poem I can so relate to this poem i just became a christian and before i became a christian there were demons around i could feel there presence but now there gone cause i believe in God and I scared them away.
• Angelica
  Ha!I really liked your poem.
• Kameron
  Your poem really touched me and related to a lot i was going through. I'm happy to know there's someone out there like me who knows and understands what I'm going through.
• Leanora
  I really liked this poem because i can relate to it alot
• Tiffany
  Hey i just wanted to let you know this is a poem that i feel on the real
• Angel
  this is a very good poem.
• jessica
  that was very good it relates to me in so many ways that one
• Staci
  I never vote and your written word touched my life. First time for me. Keep it up and continue touching lives. You DO make a difference.
• Jennifer
  i really love your poem I can see myself in it
• Amanda
  your poem gets five starz from me. i think this is a really great poem because it realtes to me and the things in my life. it deserves five gold starz
• ashley
  the first word that comes to mind is wow. this author should be totally proud of themselves. i love this poem! it describes a position i've found myslef i time in and time out.
• anna
  great poem keep writing
• Brianna
  hey this is such a great poem. it means heaps to me right now because of everything i'm going through in my life. you have a great gift with words, and know how to relate, thanx.
• Aja
  this poem is really good, even thoughit's a sad poem its ends with hope.
• MARY
  good job i like that poem alot
• sydney
  your poem as the most amazing thing i'v ever read it touched me like nothing had before
• phathizwe
  i really enjoy this poem i feel like i can read it again & again it really touches me i want to encourage the author to cotinue and do the good job
• frances
  I can relate to this poem, because i am going through aseperation and most likely a divorce.
• erum
  amazing poem. good job
• Khristiana
  Wow! that was excellent. I feel that way at times, and I even wrote a poem about my demons, and I sent it to a publisher. Anyways, all I wanted to say is God bless you, and hope the feelings stop.
• suzynarita
  Your poem has really touched my heart. It depicts my very own experience. The mixed emotions of anger, afraid and scared had been swirling in me for quite some time when someone I treasure most ditched me. On the other hand, as I read your poem I realized that somehow, somewhere God is watching and has indeed send me an angel to look after me in order to make me a better person. And I thank Him too for giving me this chance to "accidentally" surf this website and found your beautiful poem. My gratitude goes to you too. Your poem has opened my solemn eyes and has enlightened my melancholy heart. Keep up the good work
• olivia
  I really liked this poem because it reeally explains how i feel when i'm without one.
• Kevin
  Awsome Awsome poem. I feel exactly the same way about my life.
• same
  i loved your poem. you really spoke from your heart. I know how you feel just stick through it and you'll make it. you'll feel really good once you won the fight against life. it just takes a little bit of time.
• Christine
  I love this poem because I can relate to it in so many ways.
• Mindy
  I love this poem! That's how I feel. This poem shows how we express feelings, from a different light.
• shannon
  GREAT work
• Katie
  ohh my god! i luv this poem. it resembles me too! i luv it! great job. it's so sad
• arus
  that's how i sometimes feel. i really liked it. sometimes God is really my only hope and strenght, and i wish the walls could really talk cause i always find it hard to describe how i feel inside.
• Annem
  After reading this poem, it has made me realise that I am not the only one with these thoughts. Thankyou for expressing these feelings.
• julia
  this peom means a lot to me it makes me feel better about my self. it also tells me that i am not alone and not the only one going through that
• Val
  I could really relate to this poem and I just want to say that I hope you don't feel like you have to ba trapped anymore because Jesus has, and always will LOVE you!
• uzma
  i just love this poem a lot , as i have been through just like this and i write poems and i read it so many times and the more i read the more i feel i wanted to write this myself too, it is true reflection of what i went through as agoraphobic , i am in love with this poem
• Tamie
  Great poem it was very deep and moving and insiteful.
• meg
  I loved this poem very much. I write my own poems, and this tops them all. I can relate to this poem very much, and it is kind of scary. One of these days maybe you will see one of my own poems on this web site.
• Robyn
  This poem helped me to remember that I am not alone. Thank you for reminding me that I can always depend on God!
• lacey
  i thought it was great, keep up the good work
• VICKY
  when i read this poem it was like someone was telling me how i was feeling. i love this poem. its brill.
• Zoe
  i read your poem a while back and printed it out, i came across it the other day and it brought me to tears again. and i am on here now, i have read it and it has made my eyes bleed. i love it but because it describes my whole life in just 3 paragraphs. thankyou for letting me know there are others. god bless x
• Brianna
  wow this is a great poem and i love how you turn the sadness into happiness at the end by talking about god and how he heled you i have been depresed before and it is great to hear that im not alone thank you
• Jewel
  this waz great i can really relate to it i will show everyone this
• suzzy
  great poem its deep.
• Angel
  Great poem thar makes you think.
• Charoula
  this poem described my life in a few emotional lines,its comforting to know that out there i m not alone ,someone can put words on paper about all the pain and suffering a person goes through .put through by others.thank you for giving my pain words that would never come out
• Jasmin
  This is a beautiful poem, it really touched me, and let me know that there are others who feel the same way
• Clarice
  I really like your poem it has a lot of stlye. You have a lot of great talent. I loved this poem. Keep on doing what you do.
• natasha
  I really like this poem because it remines me that some times I feel the same way that this person was feeling.
• Diana
  So very close to the heart,can relate ,would love to share .
• Elaine
  This poem really touched me, it explains real emotions that all people feel at times.
• Kacie
  Hey I really like your pome. I can relate to this pome. It sounds like me I dont ever talk about anything and act like nothing is ever wrong.
• Briana
  This poem is wonderfully written. There is definately a lot of feeling and emotion here, a lot of hurt.
• ShebaBaby
  This is a very deep poem!
• kathy
  Very touching,real feeling poem
• love
  even though it is depresing i feel it is a good poem
• Regina
  My Mother remarried when I was 13, to an alcoholic. My Mother had always been physically abusive, but now I also had verbal abuse. Thank you for putting my feelings into words.
• robin
  Your poem was so uplifting. I loved it so much especially the ending of it when you wrote about that God is watching over us, so we're really not alone after all. Thank you for your wonderful poem...
• Kristi
  I know exactly what the author is talking about. It really touched my heart and put all my feelings into words
• Ali
  this poem is so sad. but very meaningful. trust me i know u feel.
• Kary
  Exactly how I feel. Is like the author is seeing through my eyes.
• Julie
  Deep, a lot of emotion, I could almost hear the pain crying out. Wonderful writing.
• keali
  I can feel the feeling in this wonderful poem......I understand. I've been there .......
• Amanda
  This is a very beautiful poem. I can relate to it in my own way and that makes it very good. It's just a very cool poem
• Stephanie
  It was a beautiful poem. It's hard to believe that someone feels the same thing that i feel.
• keith
  this poem is ever so true
• wawaskones
  after reading your poem, i don't feel so alone, now i know that some one else out there understands,thank you so much for that poem